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My CRAZY GIRL (ts on RAGLAK) .shot-1 (alert-extra part added)

ALERT-EXTRA PART ADDED!!!
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Hi..I know I am posting it 2nd time..bcz I posted it long before but couldn’t complete it..will post next part today itself…plz read it once more so that u guys will remember my story

Valentine’s day special…
# MY_CRAZY_GIRL.❤..-raglak
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1:30am.
It was raining…??☔
thunder and lightning made the night so curious….
He was driving his car roughly.. Totally frustrated …he really wished to break that idiot’s head this time… This is the 7th time,because of him his poor girl was crying… It was too much for him now…he was determined… “U r gone today man…” Laksh whispered….!!!
He saw someone waving a hand for lift…it was a girl’s…. Her red dupatta was flying in the strong wind,which didn’t allow him to see her face….a girl in this time in this lonely and scary place that too alone…made him curious… His heart wanted to help her…but his mind was not in a mood…he brushed out his thoughts and decided to drive avoiding her…he speed up the car…

⚡⚡⚡but ….!!!!!!!!!!!⚡⚡⚡
He put the break with his full strength.. His head banged on the driving wheel…he blinked his eyes..
wt just happened???…did She literally jumped in front of my car….!!! He questioned himself.
He came out of the car while shouting….

Wt the hell???…r u mad…??didn’t u get any other car to do suicide???
He literally behaved like a pressure cooker which was whistling non stop…

She removed her dupatta from her face…and adjusted it in her shoulders correctly… And looked at the volcano which was standing in front of her all ready to irrupt right now?… She gave a 1000watt smile to cool him down…
He stud numb… Her beautiful big brown eyes covered with thick long eyelashes made him froze there…she was beautiful… In fact the most beautiful girl he ever met…he couldn’t utter a word…
She looked at him…then took her hand bag and put it in his hand…and took a deep breath of relief…

“OK..now let’s go…come na…”

She dragged him to his car…just like the Bose..and opened the door and was going to enter…

Reality stroke…!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO……..
He screamed out…laksh ran to his car and closed the door in a sudden…and took a sigh of relief… And looked at her….

Don’t u dare…..!!!!…I am not such a man OK….I don’t want to spend my night with u…I agree as u think,I am rich..some what spoil too…but not that too much as u think…I am already committed to someone..my marriage is on next week.. And I won’t deceive her at any cost …

He said everything in a single breath….and looked at her…

She rolled her big eyes with disbelief and shock…. She looked at him from top to bottom just like she newly found an alien…

Girl-r u serious??? Did u think me as a c*ll girl??? She tagged her question with her fingers in air…

Laksh felt her every actions were breathtaking….he really wished to take her into an embrace… And wanted to kiss her beautiful eyes infinite times which made his brain non-functional…

He came out of his thoughts hearing her screaming on top of her lungs…

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh………How dare u ….. Hw dare u think abt me like that???u idiotic one woman committed man….wt made u think in such extreme end???u stupid…

He was in shock…he cursed himself for thinking like that…but if she was a pure soul..then wt the hell is she doing here at this time??? Is she acting like good person for avoiding the embarrassment..???.. He was confused….he looked at her eyes for an answer… But this time he felt her like a pressure cooker…

I am sorry….I thought…-laksh tried to convey his disinterested apology

U thought???oh plz…next time …for god sake don’t even think with ur tiny brain for others betterment…-she wasn’t in a mood to forgive him

I said I am sorry…-he sounded frustrated

Sorry my foot…first of all Hw can u neglect a girl who is standing on road alone that too this time for a lift????-she screamed at him.
Laksh’s face lighted up just like he got a counter point to argue..

Exactly…U r a girl…Hw can u go out at this time ha???And when I stopped my car.. instead of asking for a lift….u gave me ur bag and said “LET’S GO”…and the highlighting part,u r wearing a red outfit.. So in total I thought…

She gave him a death glare…

Ufff…why…girls can’t go out at night???and wt is the connection between hand and mouth ha??? I gave u my bag so that I can open the car door,I didn’t plaster ur mouth…u could have kindly denied me…and abt asking for a lift…I was in tension to reach home , and u were busy in staring
Me with a smile.. So I thought u r OK with it…and u idiot we got freedom.. So I can wear my favorite color dress… A dress never indicate someone’s character… Its their behavior that which indicate… Now tell me wt I did that u thought abt me like that ha??? -she fumed in anger..

Wo…wo… I am sorry OK…wt can I do now to get ur forgiveness…-he asked politely… he was feeling guilty…

OK fine.. I will accept ur sorry at one condition.u have to drop me at home.-she replied to him with full on attitude.
He took a sigh…

OK fine… Get in to car…-laksh

She smiled victoriously….

They entered into car…laksh started to drive…he looked at her cute antics..she was driving him crazy…this feeling was new to him…but he enjoyed every bit of it..
She started humming a song..

By the way I am laksh.-he initiated the conversation..
I am rags..-she replied to him with her sweet chirpy voice..

Laksh- if u don’t mind can I ask a question???
Yep….she replied without turning to him…just like concentrating on her song more…
Her ignorance was killing him inside… But he brushed it out and continued…
Laksh- wt were u doing there…at these time…it wasn’t a safe place..

She looked at him with a cute pout face…

Yaar I got late after party man…she replied cutely.

He looked at her with disbelief..
wt???partying??? …he looked confuse

Laksh-u r kidding Right???
She looked at the empty road…
And replied… Ya RIGHT….

Hooo….he took a sigh of relief after hearing her reply…. And continued his driving…

That’s it….!!!!!

U IDIOTIC ONE WOMEN COMMITTED MAN…..she screamed at him and pulled his hair…laksh some how managed to put break… He escaped from her grip…

Wt was that for…???he questioned her with wide yet surprised eyes.

She said -“u need focus man..I said “RIGHT”…
Laksh- wt????
Rags-i said u to TURN RIGHT….u have to drop me in my home…not someone else…so follow my instructions and stay focused.

He put his hand on his head… She was completely a nut case…have to deal with carefully….
He took his car back and turned right..

So u were trying to say u were partying??? -He continued in his CBI mode..

She huffed…- Ya…didn’t u hear it well???now don’t tell me u never did or saw anyone partying at late night…

Ya …I attended so many late night parties…even arranged so many my self…that’s why I am asking u…-he said politely.

Wt u mean-she asked curiously.

I mean u were in party..in these dress???-Laksh

Rags-not again.. U came up with the same topic…what is wrong with my dressing sense..no…I mean wt is wrong with U????-she fumed…

No…I mean u look beautiful. in fact u look so angelic in this outfit..but…u were in ‘late night party ‘that too IN TRADITIONAL OUTFIT ???.. Didn’t u feel odd???..

He said it in a breath…taking whole safety measures.. He took his seat belt without getting noticed by her..He was all ready to jump from the car to protect himself from her up coming outburst for sounding just like a flirt for praising her beauty without being in sense…

She blushed when he said her beautiful.. She understood it was his first time he appreciated a girl’s look…he looked so uncomfortable to face her after praising her beauty… But her blush turn to laugh when he completed his sentence… She really felt difficult to control her laugher…but some how did it for him,who was eying her with his pout face..he was a kid inside..just wanted to hide the fact with an arrogant young man’s look and she simply adored his expression…and said…
Rags-Today was my parents wedding anniversary.. So thought to have a small late night party between we three..and u know na…no girl can take risk to wear shorts in front of her parents specially in front of her hitler mom even if there is no one there except me and her…so have to be in traditional attire..she rolled her eyes…
He looked at her …she was damn cute…he giggled at her..she was a lioness but not in front of her mom…but suddenly his smile got vanished with a thought…
He again came up with his next question.

Laksh- and ur parents allowed u to go from there all alone???

She looked at him all puzzled… Ya…wt is wrong in that??they cant’t drop me so have to do it myself na…

Why can’t they drop u?..u r not a small kid anymore.. U just thank god.. u r safe with me…I wasn’t any jerk…but in these late night standing alone in a road and taking some unknowns help isn’t that cool as u think…- this time laksh was fuming..

he literally fall in love with her in his first sight without his knowledge…he can’t imagine anything wrong happening with her bcz of someone’s carelessness… Even if it is her parents also,he won’t leave them like that….but more than angry.. He was in surprise with his own behavior… Who never believed in god, first time said to someone to” thank god.”..he just glared at himself for a second.

She felt so happy hearing his concern for her..deep inside her heart, she liked him…but didn’t understood her newly found feeling…
She replied politely-dont worry man…I know Hw to protect my self…
He looked at her…the reply he got irked him..she wasn’t serious abt her safety.
Laksh- really???
Rags-yep…really…

She blinked her eyes like a barbie doll.. her attitude was something so special..

But he wasn’t ready to let her matter go like that..he wanted to make her understand abt the danger which she was inviting herself.

Laksh- then tell me wt will u do if I would have turned out to be a complete jerk…-he said it with an equal attitude.

She looked at him with a small evil smile and said to stop the car…laksh did as she said…
She came out of his car,he too followed her.
She put his hand bag in his arms..and instructed with serious note…
Rags- plz handle with care OK…I know u r a good man..so I can’t give u my answer in proper manner…it will risk ur life..so I will give u a demo of my equipments and my moves….

She carefully unzipped her bag and started to pullout so many things…

His eyes got widened giving competition to hers.

There was everything… Safety pin to big sharpened knife…
She looked at his gaze…his eyes were on that shining knife…
She giggled…and replied
“I put it to my bag just to cut an apple..didn’t have any other intention…that pepper spray is more than enough for me to handle any type of jerks…u know wt I am a black belt…she did some moves with her hand cutely.
He smiled wide…and looked at her eyes…she was special… Her confidence and fearless behavior made his confusion clear…ya..she was the girl…she was the girl who made for him…it was first time some one made him dance in his fingers…but he loved it…he understood.. He found his soulmate…he never thought abt a love life…but he fall in love.. in a few hours..that too with a complete package of fun and adventure… His first love…he looked at her with a smile…he wished the moment to stop…

She waved her hand in font of him taking him to the reality…
Rags- laksh…I said na…I won’t hurt u..just come out of ur fearful mode man….

Laksh replied with a smile
Laksh-I feel pity on the man who even think to come near u with any intention…

He chuckled…he thought” oh man u will be dead after marrying her…she will put u upside down with her one hand bag and Its stuffs…”he laughed at his own thought..
She looked at him…he was smiling like idiot without a reason…
She murmured “did I scare him that much with my stuffs that he lost his mental balance…
She looked at him with pity eyes…
Laksh heard her murmur… He said to himself.. Yep…I lost mental balance girl…just because of u…wt I just want is kiss u till my life end….
She glared at him…” Wt???…where r u man??? She shook his shoulder…
He came out of the thought… She sighed…and started to put her equipment carefully to her bag back one by one…
Just then he noticed something…
He saw some threads in her bag which beautifully decorated with beads…every single thread had an alphabet…
He pointed at it…

Wt is that-he asked curiously

Oh These…these are my hand made raksha bandhans…I wanted to give a surprise promotion to some of my Collogue from so called friends to “BHAI ZONE”… She said it with an irked expression.

He laughed at her helplessness.it wasn’t their fault..she was damn beautiful.. And more than that an innocent soul who know how to live “Life”..any one will wish a life partner like her…even he too wished…not like her…he wanted her… She was so cute…

But that laugh of him didn’t went well with her…she fumed…and retorted.
Rags-by the way…u r really a good man I can’t let u go so easily from my hand…
Laksh’s heart skipped a beat…he got froze there…but got a crack in his heart after hearing her next sentence
Rads- and u really deserve one of my raksha bandhan…

she smirked looking at his expression. He looked at her with blank eyes.. He wanted to scream…but was helpless..she took her bunch of raksha bandhans…
“ur name is laksh na…so have to give u one with alphabet” L”…she said it enthusiastically and looked for it…but couldn’t find…

Oh ho…u r really unlucky man…u lost ur chance to become rags brother… She said it with pout face and continued…
The raksha bandhan with alphabet “L” got finished… Better luck next time….she patted his shoulder like consoling his loss..

But that news was blessing to him..he took a sigh of relief…she gave a minor heart attack to him..he thanked his stars fist time..just few minutes before he wished to propose her today itself while dropping her home…but now he back off from his plans without a second thought… He was damn sure…if he propose her today…he will get a beautiful rakhi from her with an alphabet “L” the morning itself… He wasn’t ready to see his love like a sister even in his dreams…
He wanted to distract himself from wt happened nw.He took her hand…and said…
Let’s go….”
Where???-she asked curiously .
Ur home…u wanted me to drop u there na??
Yep…we reached already… She said it with mischievous smile…
Wt??? He looked at her
Two four steps more…i will reach my home.

I can drop u in front of ur home…-he replied.
Noway…if my badimaa see me with u na…she will kill me with questions… I am done with one question bank…not one more..i too need some rest man…

He smiled at her…
OK…bye…I am sure we will meet again…-he said it with sparkling eyes…he didn’t want her to go…but the determination he had to make her his made him Little easy with his feelings…
She hugged him…a friendly one which made laksh’s desire to make her his on fire…he too responded to her hug..
She broke it and waved her hand…and started to walk to her home.

Before going she looked back and screamed out with a heavy heart yet with a cute smile…

Hey …u…one women committed man…All the best…may god bless u with a happy married life…I really wish ur would be wife have the energy to control u and have the dare to put a full stop to ur question bank just like me..she waved her hand and turned back…

He froze…ya the reality really hitted him so hard…he was committed… Committed to a pure soul…but his love was her..his crazy girl whom he met just few hours ago in an unexpected situation… His eyes got filled with tears…he murmured…
“Rags…only u have the energy to control me…only ur eyes can put a full stop to my every single question… U r the only one whom I really wish to have in my hands for eternity…”
He looked at her disappearing image….he cursed his fate…he was helpless… He never ever thought in his wildest dreams the “great laksh maheshwari” will fall for a girl….but it happened.. That too with in her mere glimpse.. But …he can’t ruin his friend cum brother’s feelings…he can’t risk his only family …his sister’s life who was going to get married to her love.. His friend.. ,And most importantly he cant ruin his bf’s Lil sister whom he is going to get married in a week…he wiped his tears…and looked at the lonely road where she went…he murmured”u know wt rags…U r a mad girl…a perfect nut case…”he fall on his knees… “No..it is not u..its me who is real nut case… For letting you go away from my life”….he sarcastically smiled at his fate and took his seat in his car and drove to his destination where he really wanted to go just before he met his CRAZY GIRL… His LIFE…and his FIRST and LAST LOVE….
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Ragini stood near the gate scratching her head..she murmured…
Oh no…where did I put the key of the lock…??? Oh nooo…not again…I can’t loose it…Ram will kill me…god plz… show some mercy on him at least…it is 26th time he is making the key of same lock..RAM… I am sorry my dear…I think u r in trouble again…

She took her mobile and massaged him…
“Man…I need ur help…I am stuck again in ur stupid gate….”

She got her reply with in second..

U r impossible my gf…I gave u a new key na…u lost it too???..ahhh…but now, coming to u is next “Mission impossible girl..because of being all the time with u as partner in crime…
Our Hitler started to spy on me yaar…

She banged her head on the gate giggling…suddenly an idea stroke on her head..she took a hairpin from her head and smirked looking at the lock.
She pointed her finger to the lock and murmured…
No one can stop me from anything… Even u can’t…get that in ur mind…
Saying this she put the hairpin in lock and tried her best to unlock it…but she failed in every single attempt.

“Why r u showing so much attitude man…plz open it yaar…”

she begged to the lock next time….and put her hairpin again…but result was same…

Suddenly someone tapped on her shoulder… But she was busy in trying to open the gate…
Someone tapped her again and said…

“I think this key will help u from the trouble….”

She turned back and took the key from the hand without looking at the face of the person…

“Thank god …it really worked!!!…”

she took a sigh of relief and turned back to see the angel who helped her….
But wt she saw made her stood numb….
She smiled weakly…
“Hitler….!!!today I am going to get murdered by her…”-she murmured under her breath.

“Laado.!!!!…..”-person screamed at her…

Ragini looked here and there…and screamed even more louder.

RAM……..help me out…..!!!

The person was going to pull her ear …before that she was dragged into a safe embrace.. She glued on him…

Thank God… SHe muttered..

Ram…this time u can’t help her from me….the person screamed..

I will…ram smirked at her..
“Being her bf…I can’t let a Hitler harm my gf ….”

“Wt did u say…u called me Hitler???”

Oh ho suju…u r really a Hitler yaar….the lady Hitler sujatha mam…right radz…
She giggled hugging ram more tightly.

Ahh..u guys r impossible… Bcz of u ram she started to going out at night… Why can’t u guys just understand… Itsnt safe…

Oh my suju…just take a chill pill…I am perfectly alright…Ragini showed herself to sujatha like posing on mirror… But wt she got back was…angry vibes…

BTW where did u go this night?… U even didn’t tell me…ram pouted like a kid.
Ragini looked at them…took a deep sigh and told in low voice…

Wo… Wo…. I went to home…today was mama papa’s wedding anniversary na…so…

Everyone face become dull…she looked at them with tears…and smiled weakly..I know it is awkward and may be u guys will be thinking I am mad…but…I can feel them there..and plz let’s change the topic na…
Saying this she went to home..sujath and ram stud there teary eyed..
Sujatha-kab tak???… Ram..kab tak meri Laado will bear this pain ha???I hope jise hamaari beta Chuna hai wo uski taakat bane…I hope he love her like no one ever did…
RAM- ha suju…she will get worlds best husband.. Aakhir ladka kon chun raha hai??? Do u even think sanky will take a wrong decision in her matter…
Sujatha smiled wide nodding no.

@ragini’s room

She came to her room…and stood in her balcony looking at the shining stars…

Dad..mom…once again happy wedding anniversary guys…love u…muje yaha akhele chodkar wahan aaplog romance kar raha hai na???.aaj wedding anniversary hai isliye chod rahi hum…warna hamesha ki tarah aaplogon KO meri baaton se main pareshan kar deti… Specially today…u know wt…aaj I met a person… Laksh… Bohot Cute dha… Bilkul papa ke jaise angry young man ke tarah behave kar raha dha…but dil se bohot acha hai wo… Patha nahi..I felt like we r connected.. Aap ko patha hai jab main rakhi lene lagi to uska chehara kaise uthar gayatha??? Par kyoon???

She took a rakhi with letter “L” from her bag…and looked at it..

Aur main bhi aise ajeeb kyoon behave ki??? Raakhi ho kar bhi, heart didn’t allowed me to tie it on him…aisa kyoon… Kaash u guys were with me,I would have got my answers… I miss u guys… I miss u sooo much…
A lone tear escaped from her eyes.

Precap-last part
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