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Home»Fan Fiction»My Crazy Girl (SwaSan One Shot) by Marsuu
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My Crazy Girl (SwaSan One Shot) by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsAugust 18, 2017114 Comments16 Mins Read
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Hello guys!! This is mars with an one shot. This is going to be light and funny one. Hope so u will like it.
Let’s begin:

MY CRAZY GIRL (SwaSan one shot)
Mumbai:
Hyatt Hotel:
A man in his mid twenties enter inside the room and locked it. He loosen his tie and he seems to be tired. The man is Sanskar Maheshwari. He came from meeting held in restaurant. He sit on the couch resting his head at the back of it.
Then only he heard some noise from the room. When he keenly listened,he get to know that it is coming from inside the cupboard. He got up and went near the cupboard. Now he was sure that something is inside it.
As soon as he opened the cupboard, he was astonished to see not something but someone. There is a girl sitting like a small kitten in jumpsuit. Her long hairs falling on her face. She has covered her both eyes with her hands.As she felt someone is standing she shouted still with closed eyes.
Girl: no I m not out.
Sanskar got shocked that who the hell is sitting in his room no no specifically cupboard.

Characters:
Sanskar Maheshwari: 26 years old extremely handsome and the most richest and successful businessman in India. He has his mother and father(sujata and ram) whom he loved alot.For the world he is workaholic, arrogant and bossy. He had his company’s branch in almost every city.The most annoying thing in his life is,there is no privacy. Media people don’t leave him for a second also.
Even in hotel where he is living they are present.He wished to marry very mature, sensible and silent girl like him.
(LOL!!!!Soon he will get one)

Swara Gododia: 23 years old, had just completed her graduation. She is crazy and cute to dangerous level. Full chatterbox. The person’s ears will start bleeding if he/she lives with her. Enjoy her life to fullest. Love to watch movies. She has her dida and mother(shomi) in her family.

Coming back to story:
Sanskar was shocked to see that girl who just shouted
Girl: no I m not out.
Sanskar:ohh hello???
She remove hands from her eyes and look at sanskar. She is crazy heroine of the story Swara bose.
Swara:who are u ??? U were not playing with us.
Sanskar:first of all come out.
Swara:no first tell me who are u??
Sanskar:u should tell that bcoz u r in my room.
Swara (smile sheepishly): ohhh so this is your room.
Sanskar(irritated): yes will u come out now?
Swara:sure sure Help me
Sanskar(attitude): as u had went inside come out.
Swara(mumble): Hitler.
She jumped out and fall on Sanskar.
Swara:why the hell are u standing in between.
She moved back.
Sanskar: now tell me what are u doing in my room.
Swara: have patience let me breathe.
Sanskar : stop your drama and tell me.
Swara: I m swara Bose and was playing hide and seek with my friends and was not getting good place to hide and then saw your room which was open so I came inside and hided inside the cupboard….Uffffff
She said all this in jet speed. Sanskar was looking at her with wide eyes like how someone can speak breathlessly.
Sanskar: what was that???
Swara:answer to your question. Now may I go??
Sanskar was still so shocked that he just nodded.
Swara went to the door and try to open it but it was not opening. She held the handle tightly and started pulling it.
Sanskar saw this and went near.
Sanskar: u don’t know how to open the door also.
Swara: it’s not opening.
Sanskar: move aside.
Swara make faces and moved back.
Sanskar also tries to open but no use.
Swara: u don’t know how to open the door also.
She taunts him by repeating his line.
Sanskar annoyedly went to table and call to the hotel’s manager.
Sanskar: hello this is sanskar maheshwari my room door is not opening just check it.
Manager: sure sir will see now and inform you.
Sanskar: okay.
Little later,
Sanskar is pacing here and there while swara is sitting on couch. Suddenly her sight caught the magazine kept on table.
Swara(facepalm):my my my what I m seeing.
Sanskar(signed): now what??
Swara: your photo is in magazine.
It was Sanskar’s pic on front page of magazine.
Swara:u r a filmstar???
Sanskar: no
Swara: yes I had also not seen u in Bollywood then Hollywood??
Sanskar: no
Swara:tellywood???
Sanskar got irritated and went near her and tap on the magazine.
Swara saw there and it was written
“Businessman Sanskar Maheshwari”
Swara: ohhh so u are businessman I didn’t saw hihi
Sanskar again moved back.
Swara: u are married or not??
Sanskar again went near her and tap at magazine
Swara saw it and next line was
“Most eligible bachelor of India”.
Swara:hihi again I didn’t saw.
Sanskar: anything else u want to know about me read this magazine.
Then only there came call on landline.
Sanskar received it and it was of manager.
Sanskar:yeah
Manager: sorry to inform u sir its not opening by our man so we have to wait for mechanic till tomorrow as now it’s raining heavily.
Sanskar: what the hell. Is this your service.
She shouted angrily making swara flich at her place.
Manager: plzz adjust for one night we will do tomorrow morning itself.
Sanskar: okay.
He cut the call.
Swara:what he said?
Sanskar: it’s not going to open tonight.
Swara:ufff ham tum ek kamre band aur darvaza nahi khul raha.
Sanskar(shouted ): keep your mouth shut.
Swara make faces.
Sanskar: so now u can’t go out so kindly sleep on the bed.
Swara:where u will sleep??
Sanskar:I will sleep on couch.
Swara:aww so sweet of you.
Swara jumped on bed while sanskar went to washroom.

After one hour:
Swara is not able to sleep and is feeling cold also but sanskar slept soon as he was tired.Swara got up and went near couch.
Swara(slowly): sanskar
But he was in deep sleep.
Swara went near his ear and shouted
Swara:BSM
Sanskar jerked and got up
Sanskar :what happened??
Swara:where is ac remote I m feeling cold.
Sanskar: what u called me??
Swara: BSM
Sanskar : full form??
Swara:businessman sanskar maheshwari.
Sanskar signed and took the remote from table and raised the temperature of the room.
Sanskar:done now go and sleep.
Swara: I m not able to sleep(pout)
Sanskar: why???
Swara: I can only sleep on my pillow whom I m missing.
Sanskar: see miss…
Swara:swara how many times I have to tell.
Sanskar:whatever… U are getting on my nerves so before I lose my temper go and sleep.
Swara(pout):how rude.
Swara went to bed and lie on the bed completely covering herself with the comforter.
Little later, sanskar got up and went near bed and saw that she is finally sleeping so came back on couch and slept.

Next morning:
Sanskar got up first and felt pain in his neck. Then he remembers that he slept on couch and looked at swara who was sleeping. He went to fresh up and soon came back. The mechanic has already started opening the door. With that noise swara also got up. She asked
Swara:ohhyyee door is not opened?
Sanskar:it’s opening .
Swara:ohh.
Later the door opened and swara jumped in excitement. She was about to go but there was crowd outside the door. Camera’s were onn and media People has made the breaking news that “sanskar maheshwari got locked in the room”
But the most astonishing thing was one girl in Sanskar’s room.
Sanskar hit his forehead for not stopping swara.
Swasan are standing at the door of the room.
Swara saw her friends and got happy and excited.
Swara(shouted): vidhi, bhavni hey all I m here.
Reporter:Sir who is the girl with you.
Sanskar knows everyone will point at Swara if he didn’t said anything.
Swara was about to go to her friends when sanskar held her hand.
Swara:let me go now.
Sanskar ignored her and answered to media
Sanskar: she is my fiancé and it’s not wrong if she will be found in my room.
Swara(shocked): what are u saying sanskar.
Sanskar (whisper): keep quite.
Swara: let me go now.
Sanskar: go
swara went to her friends.
Now whole day,the main headline of the news is” sanskar maheshwari has fiance”.
In Kolkata, ram and sujata were shocked along with shomi and dida.

After one week:
Sanskar came to his house and sujata and ram questioned him
Sujata:Sanskar u have fiancé u didn’t told us.
Sanskar: I lied there.
Then sanskar told whole incident.
Sujata: but still u can’t let her go like this. Whole world got to know.
Sanskar: I don’t care.
He left to his room.
On the other side, swara also explained same things but they were not happy that they left each other after giving such news.

After two days:
Bose house:
Sujata find about Swara and went to her house. Now she has thought making swara only her dil.
Shomi opened the door and let her in when she told that she is Sanskar’s mother.
Sujata: actually I want to talk about swara and sanskar.
Dida: Ji
Sujata:they both have told whole world that they are fiancée but also not knowing each other bcoz of which people with point at them so I came here to ask swara’s hand for my son.
Dida:even we wanted the same but then thought may b u will not accept swara as we are middle class.
Sujata: for us it doesn’t matters girl should be nice. So this Sunday we will do the marriage at our place with few guests.
Shomi: so soon
Sujata: yes it will be better then.
Dida:okay we will make swara ready.
Sujata: I should leave now.
Sujata left from there.
Later, sujata told to Sanskar he got mad just thinking that crazy girl as his wife but he can’t say no to sujata.
And swara was Initially shocked but later ignored and agreed to marry.it doesn’t matters to her who is the boy but she is excited to be a bride.

On Sunday:
Maheshwari house:
Swasan got married with all the rituals. Only family members along with few guest’s were present. After Even trying a lot, media still came.
Later, sujata took swara to sanskar’s room.

After half an hour:
Sanskar was left with no other option except going to his room. As he entered inside, he saw swara is peacefully sleeping wearing casuals.
Sanskar: thank god she slept.
He also after changing slept on other side of the bed.

Next morning:
Swara has became very friendly with ram and sujata just in one day but with Sanskar she hardly talked.
Swasan room:
Swara is sitting on bed and watching TV while sanskar is in balcony listening to call.Then only he heard swara’s scream.
Swara:ommmmmmggggggg
Sanskar cut the call and came running inside.He saw swara standing on the bed with palms on her face, wide eyes and staring at TV without blinking.
Sanskar: what happened swara.
Swara: I m coming on TV.
Sanskar looked at TV and one news channel was showing their marriage.
Sanskar(signed): for this small thing u shouted.
Swara: this is not small thing I got famous u r crazy.
Sanskar: no this crazy word is made for you only.
He left from there, swara ignored him and got busy in seeing herself on tv.

After one month:
Days passed very frequently. Swasan had adjusted with each other. Sanskar sometimes got irritated with her bakbak but like it.
Swasan room:
Sanskar is sitting on couch busy in laptop and swara on bed.
Swara:sanskar
Sanskar:hmm
Swara:tell me your fb id I will send u friend request.
Sanskar: I m not on any social site.
Swara:what??? U r idiot u are so famous and still u didn’t make I’d.
Sanskar:swara these all are for time pass and I don’t have time.
Swara make faces.

Night:
Swasan are sleeping on bed. When swara got up to drink water. After drinking water ,she checked her mobile and got shocked to see something.
Swara(jerk sanskar): Sanskar wake up see what happened
Sanskar got up and asked tensely
Sanskar(cups her face): u r okay swara.
Swara nodded as voice was not ready to come out from her throat.
Sanskar: what u had seen.
Swara: I got one million followers on insta.
Sanskar: ohh shit. For this u??? Like seriously why I married you.He cursed.
Swara: I have these many followers u know why this happened.
Sanskar(suckling face): why???
Swara:bcoz u are so popular but u don’t have id and all your fans followed me as i m your wife.
Sanskar:okay your excitement is over??
Swara:no
Sanskar:then keep sitting like this whole night.(irritated)
He lie on bed and slept. Swara also kept the mobile at side and slept close to sanskar. He saw her and took her in his embrace. Soon both slept.

After six months:
Now swasan were very comfortable with each other. In fact they love each other. One night swasan went for business party and they were returning back. It was raining outside.
Sanskar stopped the car to attend the call and talking it as the chance swara went out to get wet in rain.
After cutting call, Sanskar saw swara enjoying rain.
Sanskar(mumble): ohh god this girl.
He went out to bring her. As he was going closer he was skipping his beats. Swara is looking very beautiful in black saree and her wet hairs.
He stood in front of her and pull her through waist as a result she fall on his chest.They shared lovely eye lock. Sanskar after seeing her shivering lips was not able to control and place his lips on her. They kissed each other passionately for the very first time.
After breaking the kiss, sanskar whispers
Sanskar:I love you swara.
Swara (looked at him): really???
Sanskar nodded.
Swara(blush): love u too.
They hugged each other. Later he took her inside the car and went to home.

One fine day:
Swasan has become very close to each other after confession. Swara is sitting on the bed tensely when Sanskar asked Sanskar:what happened swara.
Swara: sanskar I forcefully came into your life na?
Sanskar: what are u saying.
Swara:mom told me u always want mature sensible wife but I m not like that.
Sanskar: yeah I wanted but it was my thinking earlier now I m blessed to have you.
Swara:really??
Sanskar (kiss her forehead): yes.
Swara: love u.

Few months later,
Sanskar has to go to Mumbai for some meeting and he decided to take swara also with him. So finally they went to Mumbai. Sanskar booked same hotel infact same room where they met for the first time.

Swasan room (Hyatt hotel)
Swasan enter inside and swara jumped in excitement.
Swara:omg same room sanskar.
Sanskar (smiles): yes.
He back hug her and whisper
Sanskar:I thought we should remember our first meet.
Swara:hmm why u were here at that time.
Sanskar: I was having meetings here and you
Swara: u know we all friends after our graduation came here for picnic. We enjoyed alot.
Sanskar: ohh so that’s why u were playing hide and seek.
Swara:yes but now I will be bored as u will be in meeting then what I will do.
Sanskar: don’t worry we will enjoy our honeymoon also.
Swara: I m feeling shy.
Sanskar laughs.
Sanskar placed swara on bed and they consummate their marriage.

Next morning:
Sanskar got up and saw swara lying close to him. He smiles and peck her lips. He went to washroom to get ready as he has meeting.
Later, he came out all ready in black suit. He went to Swara and caress her hairs.
Sanskar: swara
Swara:hmm
Sanskar:I m going for the meeting i will come till lunch. When u will get up call and ask for breakfast I will order while going.
Swara: okay.
Sanskar: I have kept spare keys on table.
Swara:hmm bye.
Sanskar cover the comforter on her properly and went from there.

Afternoon:
Sanskar came back and saw swara still sleeping. He signed and went near her.
Sanskar: swara u r still sleeping.
Swara(open her eyes): u came back.
Sanskar:yes had your breakfast??
Swara:I wake up now.
Sanskar: fine go and fresh up I will order lunch.
Swara:okay.
Swara went to washroom and Sanskar ordered lunch.Then they had their lunch.

Evening:
Swasan came out for roaming around the city. When they came out of the hotel one reporter came to them.
Reporter: Sir mam plzz one short interview after marriage u didn’t gave together it’s fans request.
Sanskar was about to deny when swara said
Swara:sure why not.
Rep: thanks mam.
Sanskar give her irritated look that we are here to enjoy not giving iv but do swara care??? Nooo
Rep:sir where u met mam first time?
Sanskar: I got her in cupboard so picked from there.
Rep(confused): means??
Swara (laughs): I will tell you I was playing hide and seek and I hided in his cupboard…
Sanskar roll his eyes and cut her.
Sanskar:she is going to be always with me so it doesn’t matter how we met first time.
Rep:okay mam r u both similar to each other ?
Swara:not at all. I m very innocent sweet and fun loving girl but he is angry young man.
Rep(laughs): sir when u r planing for your baby???
Swara(cover her face): I m feeling shy.
Sanskar (chuckles): still we don’t have any plans. U will get to know whether it will be.
Rep:last question to Mrs maheshwari.
Don’t u feel jealous that Sir has huge girl fan following??
Even sanskar was curious to know.
Swara:sanskar is very famous so if girls like him it doesn’t matter bcoz he is mine. And to all girls u see your own husband and don’t look at mine.
Sanskar smiles listening her.
Rep: Sir when u r going to join social sites??
Sanskar: not so soon.
Rep:why??
Swara:he will not join as I had id otherwise my all followers will go to him(Pout).
Sanskar: it’s same thing whether she has account or me. Now excuse us plzz.
Sanskar held swara’s hand and was about to go when Swara shouted
Swara:one thing I forgot. Plzz all viewers follow me on fb insta with swara Sanskar maheshwari.
Sanskar dragged her from there.
Then they spend quality time together.

After three years,SwaSan was blessed with a baby girl and sanskar’s life was heavenly with his two princess (swara and their daughter).

The End.

Hope so u are not bored as its lenghty.
Tell me whether u liked or not.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    114 Comments

    1. Sus on August 18, 2017 10:06 am

      hahaha really crazy swara

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:17 pm

        Thank you dear and yupp swara is crazy only.

    2. Milestone on August 18, 2017 10:24 am

      Awesome dear…..

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:18 pm

        Thank you dear

    3. Soujanya on August 18, 2017 10:36 am

      Awesome…

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:19 pm

        Thank you dear

    4. Bush1122 on August 18, 2017 10:40 am

      Wow…. a mind blowing os…
      So cute n lovely….
      Loved it alot…..??

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:21 pm

        Thank you dear glad u loved it.

    5. Vidhi on August 18, 2017 10:46 am

      Superb yar… ❤❤❤

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:23 pm

        Thank you vidhu dear

    6. phoniex on August 18, 2017 10:51 am

      this was so cute dear 🙂

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:26 pm

        Thank you dear

    7. Smiley on August 18, 2017 10:57 am

      haha crazy Swara….. serious Sanskar…. Mars one request…. if u get time write a sad story ….. like your usual cute lovey dovey scenes but sad ending well I know I am mad…but still just a small rqst

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:28 pm

        Thank you dear and story with sad ending hmmm will give it dear.

    8. reethu on August 18, 2017 11:07 am

      that was crazy like you ,jokes apart it’s awesome dear .
      bye
      take care

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:29 pm

        Hawww crazy me…yeah little I m hihi.
        Thank you dear

    9. Parul on August 18, 2017 11:07 am

      Fantastic mindblowing historic jai mata di lets rock

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:31 pm

        Lol what a line…Thank you dear

    10. Rekha on August 18, 2017 11:08 am

      Lovely………

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:32 pm

        Thank you dear

    11. Rosey on August 18, 2017 11:13 am

      Wow Marsi….
      Amazing I’m laughing while reading this one shot…just superbbb I just can’t tell in words…it was too good…

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:35 pm

        Firstly I loved marsi name given by you its cool. Thank you dear

    12. Bella on August 18, 2017 11:19 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:37 pm

        Thank you dear

    13. Febi on August 18, 2017 11:28 am

      Just loved it dear

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:38 pm

        Thank you dear

    14. Anu Rathore on August 18, 2017 11:40 am

      Its awesome nd sweet os… I loved this crazy swara nd angry sanskar… ..

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:41 pm

        Thank you dear

    15. seebu_s on August 18, 2017 11:51 am

      this is soo crazy??

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:43 pm

        Thank you dear

    16. Rp on August 18, 2017 11:52 am

      Awesome dearr

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:45 pm

        Thank you dear

    17. Scooby on August 18, 2017 11:52 am

      Awesome marsuu?…. few incidents related here to the story from real life?

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:49 pm

        Hmmm real life story well after writing when I read it even I felt it like that may u are also talking about same story which I thought. But seriously I didn’t intented to compare it with anything it naturally came out like that.
        Thank you Scooby dear

      • Scooby on August 18, 2017 7:02 pm

        No offence marsuu?? just i felt it… i did not mention to hurt u?????

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 8:00 pm

        Heyyyy Scooby dear I m not hurt in fact I felt same. No worries

    18. Simi on August 18, 2017 12:12 pm

      It was so cute??
      Swara’s dialogue I am feeling shy??

      • Simi on August 18, 2017 12:13 pm

        I mean this emoji ?? not this ?

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:50 pm

        Thank you dear and I got about emoji

    19. Kumu on August 18, 2017 12:28 pm

      Awesome..loved it..

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:52 pm

        Thank you dear

    20. independent on August 18, 2017 12:28 pm

      Cute

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:54 pm

        Thank you di

    21. mica on August 18, 2017 12:39 pm

      i can’t stop laughing over something, the followers of famous person’s wife.. 😀 😀 😀

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:55 pm

        Thank you mica dear

    22. pnap on August 18, 2017 12:43 pm

      it’s really an awesome os

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:56 pm

        Thank you dear

    23. mannu on August 18, 2017 12:53 pm

      epilogue that to be parenthood Wala pa ??????????

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 2:59 pm

        Epilogue!!! Will try dear I had not planned btw thank you dear

    24. mannu on August 18, 2017 12:55 pm

      epilogue and that to be parenthood Wala pls ??????????

    25. Honey on August 18, 2017 1:07 pm

      so sweet os

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 3:00 pm

        Thank you dear

    26. Pramudi on August 18, 2017 1:22 pm

      Amazing dear. Swara is so crazy. ?

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 3:02 pm

        Thank you dear and yeah swara is crazy piece.

    27. Tamil on August 18, 2017 1:27 pm

      Awesome dear loved it

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 3:03 pm

        Thank you dear

    28. Neptune on August 18, 2017 1:40 pm

      awesome os..
      it was a cute one…..
      ha ha ha swara is crazy..

      and the answer swara gave to the reporter regarding jealousy i wish someone was this mature too….
      but there are these insecure people…
      hope you got to whom i am saying this…

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 3:07 pm

        All are not mature like swara u know what i mean nepuuu and i understood what u want to say. We can’t change someone’s thinking.
        Thank you nepuuu

    29. AnuAnn on August 18, 2017 2:14 pm

      awwwie! toooo cute yaar

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 4:30 pm

        Thank you dear

    30. Ashwini on August 18, 2017 2:15 pm

      Woow so cute and awesome os Kash SwaSan real me bhi aise hi couple hote cute se kitne ache hote vo din bg never mind bohot time h abhi duniya kabhi bhi palat sakti h ???????????

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 4:33 pm

        Thank you dear and yeah right duniya kabhi b palat sakti hai.

    31. swasan on August 18, 2017 4:10 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 4:37 pm

        Thank you dear

    32. Stg on August 18, 2017 4:14 pm

      superrrr Duperrr amazing ??????

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 4:38 pm

        Thank you dear

    33. Vanisha on August 18, 2017 4:30 pm

      Awesome….it was so cute??
      Crazy swara….loved it

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 5:00 pm

        Thank you dear

    34. vins on August 18, 2017 4:38 pm

      Superb one shot. U r really an awesome writter supsuperbs

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 5:01 pm

        Thank you dear your words means a lot.

    35. anu on August 18, 2017 4:45 pm

      awesome loved it

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 5:02 pm

        Thank you dear

    36. harneet on August 18, 2017 4:47 pm

      that was too cute and awesome dear ..

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 5:03 pm

        Thank you dear

    37. Abhilasha on August 18, 2017 4:50 pm

      Superrrr se uparrrrrrr…….. It was marvelous….. So adorable our swasan were… Loved it from bottom of my heart…!!!
      Missing our swasan and after so long I m commenting on swasan story… Remember me????

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 5:05 pm

        Thank you dear and ofcouse I remember you I don’t forget my readers.

    38. NDSG on August 18, 2017 5:53 pm

      ????????????
      ?????? SWARA is damm funny. Hotel room ne bana di Jodi… ?????????? they r meant for each other that’s why they met.

      I love it… So cute love story…???????? Shona is too naughty…

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 7:39 pm

        Ahah here comes depuu dear’s atrangi comment I was waiting for it.
        Hotel room ne bna di jodi lol tilte acha that dene ko
        Well thank you dear

    39. SHAN on August 18, 2017 6:05 pm

      Wow awesome!!! I loved it!!! Very nice!!! U know this social site id is compared with varun also!!! But his wife is not sweet like our swara!!! She is a vamp!!!

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 7:43 pm

        Yupp shan di swara is sooo sweet and that vamp is not even near to her huh!!! Want to say something but here it won’t look good as I m innocent.
        Thank you for liking it. And swara is best all other…… Let it be.hihi

    40. Heltej on August 18, 2017 6:51 pm

      First time m commenting on your story! Superb…! I lobed it! I think famous person should read this story! ❤️
      Apart from that i love all ur stories! Ur writing skills is awesome buddy!

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 7:58 pm

        Thank you dear glad u like my work. Your words means a lot to me.

    41. kiranmayee on August 18, 2017 7:16 pm

      hai i m new here nd also a silent reader for the first time i m giving my view reallt its sooooo nice i am a big fan of helly@swara i am crazy about her i read all ur stories really u r an amazing writer this os is soooo funny and as always my shona will fit in any role update ur ff’s sooooon

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 8:04 pm

        Wow another crazy fan of hellu like me good. Well thank you so much dear glad u like my work and yuppp shona can fit in any role.

    42. swasan7764 on August 18, 2017 7:17 pm

      hai i m new here nd also a silent reader for the first time i m giving my view reallt its sooooo nice i am a big fan of helly@swara i am crazy about her i read all ur stories really u r an amazing writer this os is soooo funny and as always my shona will fit in any role update ur ff’s sooooon

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 8:06 pm

        I think u mistakenly commented twice never mind thanks for your beautiful words.

    43. Kanha on August 18, 2017 7:35 pm

      Siso, after a long break, I am back????????????? Awesome siso. Swara’s crazy antics???????? Mars, I have become a big fan of yours. In every story of yours, Swara is the cutiepie????? and Sansku is sooo dashing????? Siso, ho sake toh mujhe bhi tumhaari story mein ek role de do????? Lotzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz of Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 8:21 pm

        Awww sisoo glad to see u back. Thank you so much sister. And yupppo will surely give you a role and don’t praise me so much I m feeling shy like Swara hihi.
        Loveeeee uuuuu

    44. Rachna on August 18, 2017 7:41 pm

      Awsm Dr…

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 8:21 pm

        Thank you dear

    45. vyshu10 on August 18, 2017 7:57 pm

      cute

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 8:24 pm

        Thank you dear

    46. Tani on August 18, 2017 7:58 pm

      More than awesome

      • Mars on August 18, 2017 8:25 pm

        Thank you dear

    47. Prashasti7 on August 18, 2017 9:27 pm

      awww it was cute story

      • Mars on August 19, 2017 4:43 am

        Thank you dear

    48. Adishu on August 19, 2017 1:27 am

      awwwwww it was so cute n lovely

      • Mars on August 19, 2017 4:43 am

        Thank you dear

    49. Rockleon on August 19, 2017 1:28 am

      Soooooo awesome and mind blowing!

      • Mars on August 19, 2017 4:44 am

        Thank you dear

    50. veena on August 19, 2017 5:18 am

      Amazing dear…

      • Mars on August 19, 2017 6:15 am

        Thank you dear

    51. guna_ammu on August 19, 2017 6:48 pm

      Awesome part

      • Mars on August 19, 2017 7:51 pm

        Thank you dear

    52. Nisha on August 20, 2017 4:36 pm

      Heyyyyyyyy… OMG.. You wrote an OS.. and it was such a cute one.. Loveddddd it… Swara hiding in the cupboard of Sanskaar’s room and that is how they Met.. Heheheheh.. ???.. That was soooo sweet.. Loveddddd how Sanskaar let her sleep on the bed and cared for her.. Then them getting married and finally coming closer.. Awwwww.. ????.. It was such a sweet story.. Swara’s answer to the reporter was so cute.. ??.. They are fabulous in all ur stories and Swara is always a darling.. Same as in this one… Thankkkk you for such a sweet and cute update.. Made my day.. ???.. You are a fabulous writer.. ❤️

      • Mars on August 21, 2017 3:51 am

        Awww thank you so much for your beautiful comment. Swasan are best

    53. gayathri.visu on August 21, 2017 4:35 am

      Awwwwww!!!! If Swara/Helly r cute then, u r here to make her more cute…. Wow yaar, I can’t explain how much I love this story. Ao sweet n cute love story. Write more something like this dear. Btw the way thanks for clearing ur name confusion!!!

      • Mars on August 21, 2017 8:51 am

        Thank you so much dear and helluu is cutest and yeppp many readers were still getting confused so I thought to write my name as marsuuu

    54. kitty on August 21, 2017 10:22 am

      I Loved it

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:37 pm

        Thank you dear

    55. rini on August 21, 2017 11:01 am

      superb

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:38 pm

        Thank you dear

    56. Chaitu on August 21, 2017 11:30 am

      Amazing dear cute is loved swara and social media followers sea awesome….air kya bolu hmmmkeep writing like this

      • Mars on August 22, 2017 12:39 pm

        Thank you dear for liking it.

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