Confession (Last Part) – Avneil 2 Shot
Just like prince, just like princess
Part 1 Link: Read Here
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Her prince was wearing a prince suit waiting for her to come downstairs. She came and lifted her gown to walk. He was amazed by her beauty, he wished that he could crash his lips into hers.
Neil (thinking): There is still time, I have to be more patient. If I kiss her like that, then she would hate me forever. I can’t take a risk to lose her.
Avni: Neil, it was dream to visit Eiffel Tower.
Neil: Yes, but don’t take selfies there, you know how girls are these days.
Avni: I won’t take selfies, because then I will lose that time to spend with you.
He blushed.
Neil: When did you start flirting with me?
Avni: I wasn’t flirting, I was just saying a statement.
Neil: Mmm…okay.
Avni saw a princess carriage and got surprised. There was horse too. It was like the Cinderella carriage.
Avni: Oh my God, are we going to travel in this?
Neil: Yeah, do you like it?
Avni: I don’t like it, I love it
Neil: That’s like my girl, I love to see you happy.
Avni: Did you say something?
Neil: I didn’t say anything. Anyways let’s go now.
Neil put his hand forward. She held his hands and they both stepped up the stairs and sat on the seat.
Neil: Avni, I never knew you can be this beautiful.
Avni: So you’re calling me ugly before?
Neil: No, I didn’t mean that.
Avni: Yeah whatever
Neil: I meant that you are looking too much beautiful, too much. I can say s*xy.
She blushed hard out.
Avni: Neil what are you saying?
Neil: Yes you are looking smoking hot, I wish you’d wear a dress that is way shorter than your knees.
He said that pulling her closer. They could feel each others breath.
Avni: Are you drunk Neil?
Neil: I can hear your heart beating fast.
Avni: Neil, no no. It’s just that..my heart is beating because I’m so excited to visit Eiffel Tower.
Neil: Avni, I can wait for our marriage. I can’t wait until our bodies become one.
Avni: You love me?
Neil: Tubelight Avni Mehta, I mean future Tubelight Avni Khanna.
She blushed more harder.
Neil: Of course, I love you. What do you think? My heartbeat depends on you. I just legit love you. I can’t see you in pain. I felt like killing your father Ashish, when he was about to sold you. I couldn’t sleep those night, I was lost thinking about you. When one teardrop rolls down your cheeks, a thousand teardrop rolls down my cheeks. I can’t see you in pain, I just want you to keep smiling.
Avni: Neil, you know that no one had ever said that to me. I feel very lucky to be the girl that you love. Girls die for you easily, but it took me time to understand and love you. I love you too.
Neil was extremely happy. He hugged her happily.
Avneil cupped each others face and shared a long kiss of this confession. It was their first kiss. Their new start to a new world.
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I honestly love this writing, but the problem is that it is way too short. Which is a sad thing for most readers.
Did you enjoy it?
8 Comments
Of course, I enjoyed it Niki.. It was just super. U write well Niki. There were many jokes here. I loved it. I thought I saw the scene.. I meant that I imagined it!!??keep writing yaar….
Thanks Girl! Yes, I will keep writing no matter what happens. Writing is my passion and Avneil are my life.
Wow…lovely shot Niksss.
Amazing love confession between AvNeil.Totally loved it.
Thanks bhai, I also loved your Avneil os, dude it was too cute to read. It was amazing af
nikki u rocked it.it was legit amazing beautiful lovely and what not…it is the most beautiful confession i ever read….please read my confession too….of avneil sweetest love story…and to again say,this shot was short but simply soloely that it was tooo long..i loved it…amazing love confession
You always read my updates, so of course I can read yours. Thanks for being there for me and thanks for loving and appreciating my work.
It’s always interesting to read your storyline. Such a magnificent way, you are going to think to give your best in your storyline that I can feel & realize easily. The same indication about avneil’s feeling makes your concept just mind blowing. Please keep it up that makes reader to feel & think about your storyline. All the best for your new concept.???
Lovely ff