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Confession (Part 1) Avneil 2 Shot

nikitansxBy nikitansxSeptember 26, 20177 Comments3 Mins Read
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Confession – (Part 1) Avneil 2 Shot

Their sweet talk
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I can’t believe that I used to be that girl who literally hated him. I couldn’t even stand him, I never liked him. I always thought that he was flirty and dirty and all. He proery gentle inside. I am falling for him each day, whenever I’m around him, I get butterflies in my stomach. I really want to confess my feelings to him but I just don’t have the guts to say it.

Someone came behind her and rested their hand on her shoulder.

“Avni” he said.

Avni smiled as he heard him and she immediately turned around to look at him.

“Neil” she said.

He held her hands, and kneeled down on his knees near the sofa. (She was sitting on the sofa)

Neil: Look I know, that I’ve done wrong. But, trust me, I was just playing around with you. I had no intentions to hurt your feelings. You know how much I care for you. You know what your place is in my heart, I couldn’t allow you to risk your life. What would I do?

She was amazed hearing his words. An teardrop rolled down her cheeks. His eyes got teary looking at her teardrop.

Avni: What’s my place in your heart?

Neil blushed then he decided to leave that coversation.

Neil: Avni, I was thinking since we are here in France for Rhea’s dance competition, but both of us, can still go somewhere right? Do you want to visit the Eiffel Tower with me?

Avni blushed and hesitated.

Avni (thinking): Why did he suddenly change the subject? I was having the best moment of my life. I should say yes, we’ve never been out somewhere together and alone. I can’t ruin this moment, I need to enjoy it.

Neil: Avni where are you lost

Avni came back to her senses.

Avni: Oh nothing, it’s just that…

She blushed more.

Neil could see that blush on her face, he loved it when she blushed. He came more closer to her.

Neil: What Avni, don’t be shy? Oh are you not feeling well? Is it your period.

Avni blushed more and she wasn’t on her period.

Avni punched Neil’s right arm, as he laughed.

Avni: No that’s no the problem baba.

Neil: Mai kyo baba waba nahi hoo, I’m Neil, Neil Khanna. Anyways what’s the problem?

Avni: What if people think that we are dating

Neil: Let them think that because that might come true.

She blushed

Neil: Don’t get angry, that was just a joke

Avni smiled and hugged Neil, while he hugged her back tightly.

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Hello Guys, this is my first 2 shot! I legit can’t believe that I’m writing a 2 shot. I know the parts are not that long but please just cope with it. Anyways I am soon posting a fanfic of Avneil, which maximum will have 8 or 9 chapters. Stay tuned for that.

Next Part coming soon!

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    7 Comments

    1. Sweetgirl7 on September 26, 2017 8:32 pm

      thx so much yaar.it was so lovely.but it is still related to one of my story

      • nikitansx on September 27, 2017 9:02 am

        Thankyou

      • Sweetgirl7 on September 27, 2017 1:40 pm

        welcome..

    2. fenil on September 26, 2017 8:37 pm

      Superb.
      Neil was hilarious at cracking jokes.
      Avni loved her pov.
      Can’t wait for next.

      • nikitansx on September 27, 2017 9:03 am

        Thanks and yes, Neil is cute and funny at the same time

    3. Alia on September 26, 2017 9:54 pm

      Amazing

      • nikitansx on September 27, 2017 9:07 am

        Thanks

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