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Home»Fan Fiction»When She Confessed!!! (SwaSan One Shot) by Marsuu
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When She Confessed!!! (SwaSan One Shot) by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsSeptember 23, 201772 Comments15 Mins Read
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Hello guys!! Here I m with one shot. The story is continuation from the serial
When sanskar bought lengha for swara on diwali and misunderstood that swara accepted laksh again. Here also ragini is negative and was trying to defame swara’s character.

WHEN SHE CONFESSED!!!
(SwaSan One Shot):

The story commence when Sanskar bought the lengha and is standing on the stairs. His heart broke into million pieces seeing swara and laksh laughing and happy with each other. Already when he went to farmhouse, ragini has manipulated him saying that swara has given chance to laksh but his heart was not ready to accept it and that’s why when he saw that beautiful dress he was only able to imagine his beauty in that dress. He was standing hugging that lengha when ragini saw him and went near Sanskar.
As usual making innocent face which was actually never innocent she said
Ragini: they both are very happy with each other Sanskar ji.
Sanskar came out from his grief listening her voice.
Till now swara had also seen Sanskar so she came near the stairs but sanskar didn’t saw her.
Ragini: swara and laksh are meant to be together.
Ragini again opened her mouth to speak such stupid words which was burning sanskar’s heart much more.
Swara who also listened her words was shocked. How can she say like this?
Sanskar: yes
With great difficulty this one word came from Sanskar’s throat which make swara astonished.
Ragini: may be in our destiny there is no love.
Sanskar was not able to listen her rubbish and was about to leave when ragini asked
Ragini: you bought this lengha for Swara??
Sanskar: yes
He said in flow but then flashes of swara and laksh together came in his mind and without waiting for a second he left to his room.
Ragini saw Swara near stairs and smiles at her. She thought that swara didn’t listened what she said.
Ragini went to kitchen while swara went to Sanskar’s room which was even her.

SwaSan Room:
As the door was open,swara enter inside but Sanskar was no where. Then she listened some noise from washroom indicating that sanskar is inside. She looked at the lengha on the bed which Sanskar bought for her. She picked it and went out of the room.

After half an hour:
Sanskar came out of the washroom and saw that lights are off and it’s pitch dark. His heart started beating as everytime it enhances its rate when swara is near. He can feel her presence but then brushed away his thoughts that why she will come here.
He onn his mobile’s flash light and then he saw a figure standing near the window. He was not able to see clearly as it was dark but he was sure about someone’s presence when he heard bangles voice. His heart was shouting that she is swara but mind denied that she won’t come.
He got numb when he heard her anklets sound and it was coming closer. His heart was ready to burst. The flashlight was off till now. Their was only darkness and he could feel her breathe striking his chin it means she is standing hell close to him.
Sanskar: swara
Swara: hmm
Sanskar: what are you doing here?
Swara: I want to talk to you and show you something.
Sanskar: then show me.
Swara lean and whisper huskily in his ear
Swara: for that you have to switch on the lights.
She giggles moving back. It was now that he realized they were standing in the darkness only. Sanskar went near the switche and on the light.

As he turn back his breathe got stuck somewhere seeing swara in the lengha he bought for her.
Swara smiles at him and then twirl around asking
Swara: how I m looking Sanskar?
Sanskar: very beautiful
Swara(blushes): thank you.
But then it striked Sanskar’s mind that he didn’t give her this dress then how come she got it.
Sanskar: from where u had taken this??
Swara: actually the person who wanted to give this dress to me is very coward so I took myself only.
She said teasing him and finally a smile came on his dull face listening her words.
Swara: thank you for the gift I will wear it tomorrow.
Sanskar: u liked it.
Swara: yeah in fact loved it.
Sanskar was not knowing what to say as he really don’t want to discuss about laksh as it unnecessary hurt him.
Swara was observing his expressions.
Swara: so Sanskar u are happy that i and laksh are going to marry again.
Instantly his eyes got wet and the mere hope he was having that it might be false as he don’t trust ragini was also shattered.
Sanskar: yeah
He mumble looking here and there blinking his eyes to avoid tears.
Swara went close to him and said
Swara: then why are you crying???
Sanskar: I m not crying.
He said still acting strong but his tears betrayed him and flow down his cheeks. He instantly wiped them though he know swara has noticed them.
Swara: why are u hiding your feelings??
Sanskar: which feelings??
He tried to act as if he don’t know anything.
Swara: that feelings which u have for me.
Sanskar: swara I m sleepy we will talk later.
Swara: something is bleeding in pain.
Sanskar(confused): what??
Swara: your heart.
Sanskar: swara I m not understanding what u want to say we will talk tomorrow.
Swara: don’t act in front of me sanskar.
Sanskar look at him and swara noticed his eyes are red as he was trying to control his tears.
Swara: say what is there in your heart.
Sanskar: it doesn’t matters what I feel or what I want.
Swara: what if it matters??? Just say.
Sanskar turn his face not able to face her.
Sanskar: swara plzz go.
Swara: I m not going anywhere until or unless you speak.
Sanskar was not able to bury his emotions and finally they came out
Sanskar(shouted): what u want to listen that I love you then yes I love you and it’s hurting me damm very much seeing you with someone who is none other then my brother. I m feeling suffocated here just imagining you away from me.
His cheeks were all wet with tears but he doesn’t care
Swara went near him and tried to wipe his tears but he shook her hand and said
Sanskar: u no need to show sympathy on me I will handle myself and don’t worry u can live happily with laksh I don’t mind.
He said as few fresh tears came out from his dark brown eyes.
Swara’s eyes also got wet seeing his vulnerable state. She jumped and hugged him tightly making him stumble back but some how he maintained the balance. He closed his eyes feeling her petite figure against his. He wrapped his arms around her hugging her more tightly. He just want to hold her for his whole life. They stood there for long time feeling each other.
Swara could feel wetness on her shoulder and whisper against his ear
Swara: stop crying sanskar my dress is getting spoiled.
Sanskar look at her breaking the hug. She has turned her lips into prefect pout.
Sanskar: I m sorry
Swara place her hand on his mouth
Swara: no need to say sorry and how can u think that I will go back to laksh.
Sanskar: ragini told me.
Swara: u just leave ragini. What type of girl she is ??? She was ready to kill me for laksh then how can she let me go back to laksh ?

Sanskar: means she is doing drama of regretting.
Swara: of course and I don’t believe her.
Sanskar: means u r not going to laksh?
Swara: I can never go and u know why??
Sanskar: why??
Swara held his hand covering the little gap which was between them and said
Swara: bcoz I love you
Sanskar got numb. Swara saw him not moving and jerk him
Swara: Sanskar
Sanskar: what u said??
Sanskar asked breathing heavily.
Swara: I said I love you.
Sanskar: u are not joking??
Swara shook her head in no and said
Swara: I m damm sure about it. Its not like I started loving you today it’s from long time but I didn’t told you bcoz I wanted to bring ragini’s truth out.
Now Sanskar is crying keeping his palms on his cheeks. He went and sit on bed.
Swara is not understanding anything. She went near him and asked
Swara: now why r u crying u r not happy??
Sanskar just keep on staring her and swara is getting annoyed
Swara: sanskar say something.
Sanskar: u had made me speechless.I was thinking that I lost you but when I got you back suddenly I don’t know how to react.
Swara smile and hug him.
Swara: I m always yours.
Sanskar: never leave me I just can’t imagine my life without you.
Swara; never
Swara broke the hug and sanskar touch his forehead with her’s . Both wants to meet their lips but both don’t have courage to initiate. After few mins, when sanskar was just staring her lips and not doing anything swara said
Swara: u r going to kiss me or I should do.
Sanskar got shocked seeing her bold side.
Sanskar: I was….
He was not getting words to speak. Swara place her lips on his and started sucking them. Sanskar was too shocked to respond back. She broke the kiss and look at him.
He touched his lips with his shivering hands still not able to believe that it was true or just his dream which he often see now a days.
Swara: huh!!! U can’t kiss me very bad. U are so unromantic.
Sanskar smiles and the next moment she was in his lap.
Sanskar nuzzles his face in her neck and whisper
Sanskar: Mrs Sanskar Maheshwari if once I started then u will get tired.
Heat rushed through swara’s pink cheeks listening to his words.
Sanskar picked her hand and kissed her palm. Both shared a beautiful eyelock.
They came back to senses as there was knock at the door.
Swara: let me see
Sanskar: hmm
Swara went and opened the door.
Swara: yes ragini
Ragini: swara what are u doing in sanskar’s room at midnight what all will think.
Swara: u no need to worry I will manage and I m here bcoz its my room after all I m sanskar’s wife.
Ragini: what are you saying swara?? U don’t have any right to be here.
Swara(irritated): plzz ragini we can talk tomorrow now I m busy.
Swara shut door at ragini’s face. Being humiliated she left from there.
Sanskar: what is ragini up to??
Swara:she is trying to prove me characterless.
Sanskar: what??
Swara: yes she thinks I don’t understand but she is trying to show everyone that I m using u and laksh.
Sanskar: she is really a cheap lady. And Swara tomorrow we will tell everyone about our relation I can’t stay away from you.
Swara: yeah we will declare it.

Swara came out of the washroom wearing casual dress. She saw Sanskar standing near window and back hugged him.
Swara: what are you thinking??
Sanskar: i m just thanking god that he Bought you in my life.
Swara came in front and saw that shine in his eyes which was missing from many days.
Sanskar: u know swara I was thinking that today is my worst day but who knows it will turn out to be the best.
Swara (smiles): u r very happy??
Sanskar: very much I just can’t express in words.
Sanskar pull her closer and kissed her softly. Swara closed her eyes feeling his lips. Soon they broke and slept hugging each other.

Next Day:
Swara is alone at home as whole family went to some temple in village and they are going to come in the evening. Raglak went to badi as dadi called them. Sanskar went to office as he had to go urgently.
Swara is cutting vegetables in the kitchen when suddenly someone back hugged her. She smiles as she felt similar touch.
Swara: Sanskar
Sanskar: hmm
Swara: what are you doing here at this time??
Sanskar: actually its not safe to leave my beautiful wife alone at home so I came for her.
Swara turn towards him and raised her brow
Swara: asha Ji
Sanskar: yes and no one is at home so we can enjoy.
Swara: like?
Sanskar: let’s watch movie and I bought your favourite ice cream.
Swara(excited): really
Sanskar: yes

Later Sanskar sit on the sofa in the hall and on the laptop.
Swara came with ice cream bowl and asked
Swara: here we will sit??
Sanskar: yeah why??
Swara: we will sit in our room if anyone will come.
Sanskar: no one is going to come till evening so chill.
Sanskar place laptop on table and sitted back hugging swara. They both got busy in eating ice cream and watching movie.
After sometimes, sanskar smiles naughtily and started caressing her belly and kissing her neck.
Swara: Sanskar behave your self.
Sanskar: not today.
Raglak who just came got shocked seeing swasan like this. Ragini was fuming. She angrily came near them and shouted
Ragini: Swara
Swasan came out from their dreamland listening her.
Ragini: how can you do like this swara giving hopes to laksh Ji and now enjoying with Sanskar.
Swara got angry and stand up and came near ragini. Swara tightly slapped ragini making her stumble due to the force of the slap.
Swara: shut you mouth ragini. I wished I would have never got a sister like you who didn’t mind killing me and proving me characterless. Shame on you ragini. What else I can expect from you The girl who can blame falsely her brother in law for misbehaving with her, she can do anything. U are such a selfish and mean girl I had ever seen. And what u thought you are trapping me then u r Wrong I m well aware about your cheap tricks.
Laksh: swara what are you saying.
Swara: laksh she wanted to show that I m characterless and having relation with you and sanskar.
Laksh: but she said she is trying to improve her mistake.
Swara: its her another drama. I want to clear here everything. Sanskar i accepted just laksh’s friendship nothing more.
Sanskar: I trust you swara.
Swara: I m sorry laksh but don’t expect more from me bcoz I love Sanskar and want to spent my life with him.
Laksh: its okay swara I m happy for you and bahi.
Swara: thanks for understanding.
Laksh: I hate u ragini for your deeds.
Laksh left from there.
Ragini was still shocked bcoz she never thought her plan will be backfired like this.
Swara: ragini may I tell you one think u are obsessed with laksh and just want him without caring about his love. See everyone pay for their deeds u broke my marriage and did all this for laksh but still he is not yours and I didn’t did anything and god had given me sanskar who love me more than his life. If you want to understand u can otherwise I don’t care.
Swasan left to their room leaving behind ragini.

Next day:
Sanskar had gathered everyone as he want to announce his relation with Swara.
Sujata: Sanskar why u called us here??
Sanskar: mom I and swara had decided that we don’t want divorce and want to live with each other.
All were happy with their decision and gododia family is also present.
Shomi: that’s good. May god bless you.
They took everyone’s blessing. Ragini was not liking as swara was getting attention.
Sanskar: I want to announce one more thing.
Swara is confused as she also don’t know.
Sanskar: I m going to handle karma company on my own and bade papa is not having problem with it. And the name of the company is changed to Swara industries.
Swara was shocked to the core. Her eyes got wet. How much this man love her.
Swara: sanskar what was the need of this.
Sanskar: its for my wife u don’t agree.
Swara: okay (make faces)
All laughs looking at them.

After that swasan just cared for themselves. Swara also joined office and both swasan work in Swara Industries. Swara hardly talked to ragini after that. Ragini asked sorry many times but once relations are broken then it’s difficult to mend them but she had broken their trust several times.
Raglak got divorced as laksh didn’t wanted to live with ragini.
Swasan consummated their marriage and finally became SwaSan from swara and sanskar.

The End.

Phew!!!! Finally done with this long os.
I had written in one go and now my fingers are paining???. Never Mind tell me how was it???
Sorry if you felt it boring as i made it lengthy and plzx leave your comments.
Don’t be silent.????????
No bashing.
Thank you
Bye
Take care
Lots of love???

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    1. Vidhi on September 23, 2017 9:35 am

      OK.. So first thing is marsuu updated… Yeahhhh…
      Secondly it’s not at all boring ????
      N at the last.. This was amazing yar… Like I never thought that there confession could be this special… Although the gerua one was sure cool… Bt this one was something which is like wow… Awesome description of their emotions.. Feelings… A package of everything needed… N sanskar’s feeling….omg….
      That was super cool…. ❤❤❤❤
      Loved this one…
      One of the Bestest work of urs…
      I literally have no words… Just amazing…keep going girl… Proud of u… N keep on writing on swasan …
      Love u in tons. ….❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 9:50 am

        Omggg vidhuu I jumped reading your beautiful comment. Thank you soooooo much for your worthy words. They really means a lot??????????
        And sorry for not giving anything yesterday but don’t worry I won’t skip any day now?????
        Swasan is always special??????
        I was imagining Sanskar while writing it??????
        Once again thanks dear
        Love you??????????
        Take care????

    2. Stg on September 23, 2017 9:46 am

      Awesome ??

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 10:48 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    3. japnaaz_gill on September 23, 2017 9:49 am

      hey ripu dear …..its amazing….one of my fav track…u write it so beautifully …better than serial writer…i just loved it sisli 🙂 :-*

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 10:47 am

        Awww thank you so much dii i m happy that u liked it????? take care????????

    4. Bush1122 on September 23, 2017 10:36 am

      Really awesome ….
      The way u portrayed Sanskar’s feeling… it was adorable….
      Missing Swasan alot this days…
      But ur this os gave some happiness…
      Fabulously written….
      No words r enough 2 tell how i felt….
      And Really missing ur other ff’s too…
      My kindest request…
      Plz post them asap…..
      Plz plz plz…
      Anywyz… u r an amazing writer…
      U r just gifted with awesome wriring skills…
      Keep writing…

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 10:44 am

        Awwww thank you so much for your beautiful comment. Even me too missing swasan a lot??????
        I m really sorry for the delay but soon I will give my other stories also???
        Thanks dear
        Take care??????????

    5. Rekha on September 23, 2017 10:57 am

      Awesome as always……….

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 12:04 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    6. Halima on September 23, 2017 11:23 am

      I don’t like it but loved it so much pls update ur other ff too n sorry last time I didn’t comment I hope u understand lots of love marsu n keep writing ur stories r just amazing.

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 12:06 pm

        Thank you so much dear will post my other stories also soon tc????

    7. Kashu on September 23, 2017 11:26 am

      Nice one dear.. Really enjoyed reading it..

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 12:07 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    8. anu on September 23, 2017 12:01 pm

      marsu i love you so much so happy to read ur ffs daily
      coming to this os its awesome.. loved it dear…

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 12:44 pm

        Awwww so sweet of you ?? thank you so much dear love u too tc?????????

    9. kittykrishlife on September 23, 2017 12:12 pm

      Excellent dear. I will post an OS on swasan. Can you tell me how much time it takes to update on telly page?

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 12:48 pm

        As per I know it takes about 4-5 hours after you submit it.Any other problem u can ask. Well thank you so much dear.
        Take care????

    10. Tamil on September 23, 2017 12:26 pm

      Wow dear…..it’s really amazing……loved it

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 1:50 pm

        Thank you so much dear glad u liked tc????????

    11. Kumu on September 23, 2017 12:33 pm

      Beautiful..loved it ❤❤
      Missing swasan so much??

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 1:55 pm

        Thank you so much dear me too missing swasan alottt???? only their stories makes me feel good??
        Well thanks glad u liked take care??????????

    12. Bhargavi on September 23, 2017 1:03 pm

      superb dear

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 1:45 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    13. Tweety_SwaSan on September 23, 2017 1:22 pm

      Hey Mars dear… ? It’s amazing… Loved it very much… ❤ Its not at all boring… And you have beautiful penned down everything… ? My SwaSan ? Anything on SwaSan is very small to me… Thank you… Love you… ❤?? Tc…

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 1:43 pm

        Awwwww thank you so much dear and yuppp we can write limitless on swasan???? glad u liked it love u tc????????

    14. Neptune on September 23, 2017 1:33 pm

      Marsuuuuuuuuu am back… he he what to do so busy these days that am not even able to comment on ffs….

      But see I came on Tu and got this surprise…. it’s soooooooooooo lovely and heart touching os dear… I loved I loved it I loved it soooooooooooo much….

      He he sanskaar’s feelings his cute expressions that I was imagining while reading it.. I soooooooooooo much wish to get some swasan scenes like this in the show…

      At the end swara’s bold side to kiss sanskaar… amazing…

      Waiting for your other ffs too dear…. love you.. tc

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 1:48 pm

        Welcome back nepuuu and its okay it happenes when we are busy???
        I m happy that u loved it????
        Thank you so much nepuuuuuu
        Yeah we didn’t got such scenes in serial leave it we can write our self now???? I will give my other stories also soon sorry for the delay??
        Take care
        Love you???????????

    15. Febi on September 23, 2017 1:55 pm

      Awesome as always dear

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 2:51 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    16. Maryam on September 23, 2017 2:02 pm

      Amazing yards. .!! Totally loved it..!! I mean u wrote it perfectly..!., u know what u have become one of my favourite Writers n the only reason I visit telly update is Stella”s Mitwa n ur stories..!!
      Sorry but I am not reading all ur stories just the ts n two fs one is My Dangerous Boss n crazy me. The second one is Sanskar ki Sanskari Swara..!! Please post them soon. Eagerly waiting n if possible plz send me the link of Your Ff “Believe Me”. I would love to read it and any other ff based on the tracks of the Serial.
      Stay blessed and Keep Smiling.?

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 2:47 pm

        https://googleweblight.com/i?u=https://www.wattpad.com/443899840-believe-me-swasan-ss-completed-believe-me-prologue&grqid=UYx7n4CI&hl=en-IN

        Hey dear this is the wattpad link of my ss believe me. Here u can get all the parts. If u face any problem plzz let me know.

        Thank you so much dear I m happy that u liked this os and that’s so sweet of that u come here to read my stories
        I will give next part of MDBCM and SKSS also soon.
        And I had written a ts which is after six months leap from serial. Its U are stupid and i m idiot if u want u can read it.
        Once again thanks
        Take care????????

    17. sweeta on September 23, 2017 2:26 pm

      As always awweeesome. ….loved it ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 2:53 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    18. Rosey on September 23, 2017 2:36 pm

      Omg finally you posted…
      I mean I was really eager to read it…and you just fulfilled my demand just great…
      First of all I’m sorry for late commenting…I just now came back from job and open Tu firstly…and become super happy seeing this one shot…
      Well I really like th3 concept that Swara didn’t believ on that Ragini as like on serial…I just loved it…when she shows that Ragini to mirror…
      And SwaSan confession wow just unbelievable?????????…
      I mean than that kiss and bold Swara?????????????????
      Than that Sanakaar’s romantic side and when she slaps that Naagin??? was just too good yaar..,
      From start to end whole one shot was packed with sweet cute and awesom moments…I really loved it…
      Thanks for fulfilling my demand..???????

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 3:00 pm

        Thank god you liked it I m happy for that No need of sorry dear its alright. Yuppp me toooo loved when swara kissed sanskar?????? and yuppp ragini deserved that slap ?????
        How dare she tried to defame my shona???
        Thank you so much dear hope so I was able to fulfil your expections and sorry for less romance????
        Once again thanks alotttt
        Take care???????????

    19. Neptunezzz on September 23, 2017 2:53 pm

      Hey mars really loved ur story it was amazing my heart pained when Sanskar cried.. Infact in serial also he was much hunted and suffered the most tht time! Loved his confession.. U describes well thanks a lotttt for this
      Bye tc..

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 3:02 pm

        Thank you so much dear i m glad u liked it??? take care???

    20. independent on September 23, 2017 2:56 pm

      Awesome yaar I felt like watching the serial really this was far more better than the original track loved it

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 4:57 pm

        Awwww thank you so much diii. Seriously in serial hardly they had given us anything good well glad u liked it
        Take care??????

    21. Rp on September 23, 2017 3:09 pm

      Nice dearr

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 4:59 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    22. sneha on September 23, 2017 3:21 pm

      Awesome story. U just recreate the magic of swasan on each of ur story.

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 5:00 pm

        Awww that’s so sweet of you thank you so much dear tc??????

    23. Prashasti7 on September 23, 2017 4:24 pm

      u know what marsuuuu I so wanted it to happen in the serial I never liked swara giving so many chances to ragini in fact she always forgive her n what that ? did always backstabbed her …….,..loved this one so much

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 5:03 pm

        Yupppp that so called ragini doesn’t deserve a single chance????
        She was such a selfish Lady leave her Swara give her nice answer by slapping????????
        Well thank you so much dear tc????????

    24. NDSG on September 23, 2017 4:53 pm

      Everything was just perfect Mars ???????

      Starting from the beginning… Aww poor SANSKAAR the way he hold the lehnga… Seriously this boy doesn’t need dailouge to express his feelings… Ragini????????? tried to create misunderstanding between them… Evil minded. But it’s not easy our cutie pie, smart and beautiful, intelligent… Uff words r less to describe her. Swara is here she handle everything in her own way.

      Sanskaar’s condition when she confessed…?????????? I wanted it would be some more long… Loved SwaSan moments…. At last SWARA Showed Ragini her real place. She broke her trust many time. Even lucky have mind she didn’t tried to separate SwaSan… Finally he got divorce… Happy for him.

      Loved it soooooooooooo much??????? bye take care

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 5:35 pm

        Thank you so much depuuu dear seriously Sanskar’s expressions are enough to express his feelings???
        Swara’s beauty is just??????
        Yupp that ragini deserve that only she is always after our swasan???
        I m happy that u liked it.
        Take care??????????

      • NDSG on September 23, 2017 5:59 pm

        Mars something for u in ur wall …??

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 7:21 pm

        I had seen depuuu dear and thank you so much for that edit.?????

    25. nabamita on September 23, 2017 5:02 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 5:36 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    26. Priya on September 23, 2017 5:04 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it i too want this in serial ur all stories are different from other stories

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 5:38 pm

        Thank you so much dear glad u liked it tc????

    27. kittykrishlife on September 23, 2017 6:19 pm

      Hi mars. I posted Swasan Os- Night of Horror. I will be very happy if you read it.

      • Mars on September 23, 2017 7:18 pm

        I had already read dear it’s really nice I had commented also thanks???

    28. vyshu10 on September 23, 2017 8:15 pm

      superb

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 8:34 am

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    29. harneet on September 23, 2017 8:16 pm

      WWWWWWOOOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!?????
      IT WAS AMAZING . classy ….. best thing was that after such cheap yricks rags was punished … otherwise in the serial she was forgiven … like seriously after such things also ??.. few dialogues were awesome?? … keep it up… and sorry i was not able to coment from 3 to 4 days as was busy? and i havent read ur daily updates as well … but will read⚘ …. di it was not at all boring ??? . love it ???

      bye tc ….
      harneet …

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 8:37 am

        No need of sorry dear its okay?? thank you so much dear glad u liked it.
        Take care??????

    30. Liza on September 23, 2017 10:57 pm

      Nice yaar

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 8:41 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    31. Adishu on September 23, 2017 11:29 pm

      wowwww marsuuuu this one is so amazing fantastic…. I loved it sooo soo much… I wish this would have happened in serial too…. but those CVS what else could we expect from them!!!anyways keep writing like this… TakeCare…

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 8:44 am

        Thank you so much dear I m happy u liked it yupp they didn’t show like this in serial even I wanted???? well Thanks tc?????

    32. Milestone on September 24, 2017 12:57 am

      Nice………

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 8:46 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    33. Soujanya on September 24, 2017 9:15 am

      Awesome…

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 10:09 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    34. Jannatul.Nayma09 on September 24, 2017 9:35 am

      Nice

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 10:12 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    35. gayathri.visu on September 30, 2017 4:13 pm

      Marsuuuuy…..when will u leave ur habit, that is saying ‘sorry if it’s boring…..blah blah…’???? Your work makes me laugh, cry(happy & sad), feeling relax….and more. So definitely ur hard work is not boring. Plz stop saying like this dear!!! And moreover I always loves to read lenghty os! U know what….I m third time read this os. But now only I got time to post my comment.
      Such a excellent os Marsuuuuu….I just loved it….especially Swasan’s kiss n Sanskaar’s reaction, Swara’s bold action……how cute!!! Omg…..I loved laksh’s decision, brilliant decision! Finally Swasan cares for themselves….only themselves….yayyyyyyyyyyy!

      • Mars on September 30, 2017 4:25 pm

        Okay okay I won’t say sorry and all from next time ???????? I m really happy that u loved it thank you so much dear tc????????

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