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Home»Fan Fiction»Should I confess ??? Ch 23
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Should I confess ??? Ch 23

AdyaBy AdyaDecember 9, 201620 Comments6 Mins Read
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Chapter 22
Hey guys.. I’m back..
Well quite disappointed with the comments. Thank you all of you. Silent readers thank you. Nd yeah you guys wanted long.. hope this one would be..

Today’s episode.

Twinkle was literally shocked. The room was like a perfect honeymoon suite . She was like ‘ what to do know ‘. As un common , she went and sat on the middle of the bed with veil on her face.

After 10min or so… Kunj entered the room . He himself got the biggest shock of his life. Seeing the whole room decorated and his wife sitting in the middle. He stopped at the door. At first he examined everything and then was lost in thinking what to do next. He was about to do something when he was pushed inside by the girls. Twinkle saw all this and was herself very nervous. Kunj didn’t know how to talk to her.

Kunj – Twinkle, u don’t need to do all this. Just go and change.
She nodded and as she was about to get up , her heavy lehnga got stuck somewhere and she was about to fall when she felt two strong arms holding her. She slowly opened her eyes and saw kunj staring at her.
Kunj – when will you learn to take care of yourself ? See ! What would have happened if i wouldn’t have been here ??
Twinkle still in his arms – Sorry kunj.. I’ll take care.
Kunj – You better do !

Twinkle stood up and went inside the bathroom. She realized that none of her clothes were with her except that wedding lahnga. She said – Hey babaji ! Again siyappa
..what will I wear now ?
After 10mins she gathered a lot of courage and spoke – kunj !!
Kunj immediately came ( from outside ) – What happened Twinkle ??
Twinkle – Kunj actually I don’t have my clothes .. what..will ..I ..wear .. now ? (She was quite nervous )
Kunj – umm..mm.. I can’t even go to mom at this time. He went and brought his shirt and handed it to her by opening the door slightly.
Twinkle – Kunj ! Will I have to wear this ? But how..
Kunj – See Twinkle .. I know you’ll find it a bit uncomfortable but you’ll have to adjust. No other option.
Twinkle – ok..

She wore the shirt and slightly opening the bathroom peeped out.
Twinkle – kunj is not here.. I must go to bed before he comes.
She came out , took the hair dryer and came Infront of the mirror. She was looking stunning. The shirt came up till a bit above half his thighs exposing her beautiful legs. Her hair was wet and the first three buttons of her shirt were open . She was looking like an angel. She was drying her hair when suddenly kunj entered the room .

He was in the balcony. As he entered , he was shocked to see Twinkle , her beauty , her beautifully exposed body. He lost his senses and started walking towards Twinkle. Everything around him stopped for the moment. He came from behind and held Twinkle by her waist. She became uncomfortable or rather very nervous by his touch. He even didn’t know what he was doing. He placed his rough dry lips on twinkle’s collarbone and kissed her there leaving a love bite. Twinkle – kunj ! (She whispered ).
She lost control on herself. He kissed her on the other side. She again moaned . Kunj made her turn towards him. He motioned towards her lips and captured her lips with his. He bit her lower lips and the the upper one. He was sucking her like hell. His hands wrapped around her waist and her hands caressing his hair. Twinkle too responded with utmost pleasure. They were finally out of breath and parted away. Kunj picked her up , his hands touching her bare thighs and other hand wrapped around her back whereas Twinkle had her hands around kunj’s neck. He slowly laid her on the bed and came on top of her. He again started kissing every inch of her body. He moved towards her leg started kissing her toes and while kissing motioned towards her thighs , then to her navel and then to her cleavage.. nd twinkle was truly enjoying it and her loud moans proved that. He was about to open her shirt when he realized what he was doing . He immediately got up .
Kunj – Twinkle ! I’m so sorry Twinkle. I don’t know what happened to me.. I don’t know.. what happened.. Twinkle pls forgive me ! I didn’t have such intentions .. sorry Twinkle. Pls
Twinkle realized what just now happened. She remembered that kunj still didn’t know about her being HIS Twinkle. She was cursing herself for loosing control .
Twinkle – it’s ok kunj !! That was even my fault …. I should have protested. I’m sorry.
Kunj quietly took a pillow ,a blanket and went and slept on the couch . Twinkle too slept on the bed covering herself with duvet.
Kunj’s pov –
What did just happen ? Why couldn’t I control when I saw her !! She was looking hell gorgeous and hot in that dress. I felt like kissing her again and again . I feel very addicted to her !! I Donno why. Twinkle .. my Twinkle I’m sorry yrr.. I don’t know why I did that.

Next morning

Kunj got up and saw Twinkle getting ready sitting in front of the mirror. He was mesmerized to see her. He just got up and went to take the shower. He came out and saw Twinkle sitting on the couch.
Twinkle – Kunj you came ! Get ready fast . We need to go down.
Kunj got ready and both went down. Twinkle took the blessings from elders and she moved to the kitchen to make her first rasoi . She was making something suddenly Shana ( kunj’s sister ) asked her – bhabhi .. what’s this mark on your back.
Twinkle saw it nd became red , it was a love bite. She remembered whatever happened last night. Their first kiss , that beautiful moment .. everything . Kunj was there , he chuckled.. usha smiled.
Kunj – Shana you come here.. I’ve some work…. Kunj said trying to handle the situation. Twinkle was already the darkest shade of red. Shana left. Kunj was also smiling.

Precap – Old memories… New entry.
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    20 Comments

    1. Chiku on December 9, 2016 10:32 pm

      Woaaah its amazing ?????lovely. Soooo cute
      Twinj first kiss. Lovely. Woaaah I seriously loved it
      Post next soon
      Love u?

    2. soumyad on December 9, 2016 10:49 pm

      It was amazing..!!! Twinj’s first night was very romantic. Plz post soon..

    3. Sushmitha on December 9, 2016 11:19 pm

      Amazing adya loved it

    4. Simiyy on December 9, 2016 11:25 pm

      I loved it to bits
      Don’t be disheartened about the comments dear
      Post soon
      Love you ?

    5. Priya23 on December 10, 2016 12:30 am

      Omggggggg…..
      luv this episode very much……
      Ufff,,,,twinj first night and their romance its just freaking hottttt…it is very romantic and I want more romance…day by day its getting very amazing…. Pls because of less cmnt don’t dare to thinks to ending this ff…
      Plssss post next epi soon….
      Waitinggggggg….luv u…..

    6. SidMin23 on December 10, 2016 3:17 am

      It was awesome episode and twinj first kissed And their sweet moment I love it twinkle moment with sana and kunj try to handle situations and he is also smiling seeing. Do post it soon

    7. Ramya on December 10, 2016 5:53 am

      Wowwww adya
      Awesome amazing
      Cute epi
      Loved it n love u

    8. Monica on December 10, 2016 8:29 am

      OHMYGOD! Adya what was this? I loved the romance, it was hot! ? Shana asking Twinkle in the end about that love bite and Kunj handling the situation was so cute! and the precap … It really seems very interesting! Post soon!

      Lovess! xx

    9. Twinj on December 10, 2016 8:42 am

      Hey adya,
      Too gud.Their first kiss.Wowwwwww.
      Amazing plus awesom epi.
      I think I am addited to TU but I am trying to control myself.Sry for not cmting on the previous epi.Twinj married.So sry yaar couldn’t attend twinj’s marriage. Luved it.Post soon.Can’t give u guareente regarding my cmt.Sry if I won’t b able to cmt.

      Lots n lots of luv,
      twinj

    10. Sameera on December 10, 2016 9:13 am

      Hayeeeeeeee adya twinj first kiss yaar loved it amazing ???????and the track is going superbb yaar loving ur ff day by day more ?? love u ?

    11. TwinjSidMin on December 10, 2016 9:24 am

      Hey adya firstly I’m really sorry for not commenting on previous epis… I was not feeling well so dint… This episode is freaking awesome… TwiNj first kiss tho ???? loved it to the core❤❤ I hope Kunj recognize his Twinkle soon… Waiting for next…

      Once again sorry…

      #Love ?

    12. Anayaali on December 10, 2016 10:04 am

      Hey adya epi was amazing…..luv it….try to post nxt asap…

    13. SidMin on December 10, 2016 11:06 am

      Loved it awesome and Kiss Omg so hot the episode was superb 🙂 Post soon waiting for the new entry 🙂
      Love you 🙂

    14. Malhotrarochika on December 10, 2016 11:44 am

      Omg!!!! Adya di yeh episode toh super se bhi upar Hot AND SIZZLING THA!!!!! UFFFF YRRR THEIR FIRST KISSS AND NIGHT ….THAT WAS REALLY VERY VERY AWESOME!!!!!! AND I AM VERY EXCITED FOR THE NXT .PLeazzzz post it asap! Luv u???

    15. kruti on December 10, 2016 1:10 pm

      Wowwwww………that was amazing nd sizzing hot…..that kiss….ufff
      Loved it
      Continue asap

      and about d comments they have been drasticaly decreasing on all ff’s

      Loads of Love 🙂

    16. Aamna_2690 on December 10, 2016 2:46 pm

      It was awsum.. Luved it

    17. Aanya_pandey on December 10, 2016 7:39 pm

      Amazing yrr amazing episode

    18. Vipul on December 11, 2016 5:00 pm

      Hi Adu, sorry for late comment actually I’m ill n busy too… please yaar don’t be angry…..

      Now comming to the epi…. wowwwww Adu what was it haan? itna hot…. mujhe nahi pata tha tu bhi itni romanctic hai … waise aur kitne roop hain apke… well hayeee their first kiss n that hot night scene yarr I’m still blushing… then morning scene it was amazing… loved it… post next asap…

      Love you…

      “Shalini/Neha”

    19. Meeta on December 12, 2016 3:40 pm

      I’m so sorry, Adya.
      Actually, I opened TU after about 20 days.
      Apologies.
      Well, I read 12 of your episodes in a row.
      Still, I ain’t satisfied.
      You write so well.
      Next one soon.
      Waiting.
      LOVES.

    20. baby on December 15, 2016 3:26 am

      adyuuuuuuuu………….ohh goodness srsly nailed it
      yr hell romantic soooo cute actually she mst be luking gorgeous haina hehhehahaha
      yr kunj ne kaha well srsly luvd it bechare twinj wen shana askd ohh shit hell embarrissing it mst be……….. 😀 loved d episode wen will kunj get to know precap shws sm new entry ohhhh god siyapaa…………♥♥♥love u lods♥♥♥

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