Should I confess ??? Ch 16

Chapter 15
Well the present age of twinj ( after leap ) is approx 24 – 25 yrs
Girl: Sir …. Mr. Malhotra has suddenly called for a meeting. He is saying that it is very can u attend it ???
Man : yes….call him by 1: 30 nd ya..ask namita to cancel my meeting which was going to be in the evening.
Girl : ok…sir
The girl was about to leave …
Man : Listen … Shanaya…
S : Yess sir…
Man : order almost 20-30 bouquets of roses…..white roses !!!
S: Ok sir…
Shanaya leaves nd comes nd sits on her desk.
She says to herself : Today is 17 th June…Nd like every year kunj sir has ordered so many bouquets of white roses..god knows why is he soo addicted to white…( So the man is kunj )
Kunj comes out nd the media surrounds him.
A reporter is speaking Infront of the camera : Today is 17th June …yes 17th June nd like every year he will again go somewhere with those bouquets..
Yes he..the biggest business tycoon..Mr. kunj sarna… He has never told anyone, where he goes..That has been a secret since his career in this business field.
A reporter to kunj : sir..sir plz tell us where do u go ?? Is there someone in ur life..sir tell us..plzz
2nd reporter: sir …do u have a lady love..sir tell us..plss sir..we want to know sir …
The bodyguards make the reporters aside nd kunj leaves.

Screen shifts to a hospital.
A doctor is seen having mask on her face . She comes out of the operation theatre nd removes the mask.
D: The operation was successful… congratulations Mr Johnson..U r blessed with a baby daughter.
Mr Johnson : thnkuuuu doctor…I’ll always be grateful to u..jst because of u my baby and wife are alive..I had lost all hopes.. thnkuuuu doctor …U have come Infront of us as a god…may u lead a happy life ahead….
D: It’s ok Mr Johnson….go ..U can meet ur wife nd baby…
A nurse comes to her running…
N: Doctor doctor… somebody has come to call u…he’s very tensed…
.doctor come fast..
D: Ohk…
She comes out running and sees a man standing.
M: Doctor there is an emergency..plss doctor help me..
D: Where is the emergency…???
M: you’ll have to come with me..
D: ok come..Nd she sits in the car nd leaves with him….
They come half the way.
D: where are u going ? U said that u have to go to xyz place then where are u going…out of city..??
M: This is the way to xyz place…
D: Stop lying …stop the car here..ri8 now !!!!!!
Suddenly a man from behind puts chloroform on her mouth and she faints…
A dark room is shown where the girl is brought . A girl comes out nd takes the unconscious girl inside .

Precap : The place to be revealed where kunj goes..who were the people who kidnapped the girl….Nd who’s the girl ??

Hi…missed me ???? I knew u guys didn’t…
Ohk…wait for the next one….vl try to post soon… thank you for commenting….
Love u all

  1. SarahKhan

    Ugh, please disclose the suspense soon. And, I must say, you’ve done an absolutely great job. I love the leap thing, tho I can understand how difficult it is to describe things after a leap. Please post the next part soon! 🙂

  2. Kanchi

    Adu very bad U posted very shmallll one not fair ha suspense haha diya vo bhi itna…………………
    N the episode was muaaaaaaa love it waiting for the next one plzzzzz post it by tomorrow request
    Plzzzzzzz plzzzzzz
    Loads of love

  3. Simiyy

    Really enjoyed it
    But it was to short for me
    Is the girl Twinkle?
    Anyway post soon

  4. Paavu

    heyy i mised u sssssssoooooooooooooo much ok the girl is twinkli i think bt white hunh ur fav colour nice impllementation

  5. Sohi

    Hey it was fab I think doctor is twinkle and who had kidnapped her is kunjs people the suspense is amazing do continue

  6. Sohi

    Hey it was fab I think doctor is twinkle and who had kidnapped her is kunjs people the suspense is amazing I liked the Leap do continue and post soon

  7. Adya itna suspense dear
    I think girl twinkle plsss asap Episode was amazing super loved it n love u

  8. Mindblowing episode kunj as business tycoon and twi as doctor it’s damn interesting Adya and plz post asap can’t wait for the suspense to be revealed

  9. Chiku

    Woaaah very nice??????loved it. Its very nice. Bery sweet. I think kunj made the girl kidnap amd girl is twinkle.
    Plzzz post next soon
    Love u??

  10. Kruti

    Amazing epi adya
    Continue soon

  11. Hey adya I m first commenting on ur ff….it is tooo good,,,,,nice,,,,,awesome,,,,,fabulous…..and yeah school life is over now beginning of their adults life……hurrrryyyy…..I m exited to read further of twinj love story……plsss post next….soooon….luv u lodsss….tc…byyy….

  12. Malhotrarochika

    Oh my god!!!!! Its now mega suspense adya di….ufffff…but the leap is totally awesome and super se bhi upar…its amazing and fab!! Hats off to u! U write sooo well and your each episode is PAISA WASOOL! EKDAM JHAKAS!???? And please disclose the suspense sooon…eagerly waiting for it…please post asap.

  13. Hey adya,
    Supense. he suspense bhara epi tha.This suspense is killing me.Jaldi suspense kholo pls.Aur kisne kaha ki hum tum may miss nai karenge.Missed u a lot.
    Post soon.

    Lots of luv,

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  15. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous epi….eagerly waiting for next part

  16. Aanya_pandey

    Twinkle n kunj r grown up.. that ws a fab update yrr

  17. SidMin

    Loved it awesome sorry for the late comment 🙂 Love you 🙂

  18. Hayeeeeee Adu kya likha hai yaar….. I’m going mad for ur ff… really it was superb epi… n now tu bhi suspense queens ki list mein aa gayi…. well loved whole episode….


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