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Complicated (ragsan ss) shot 9

Let’s begin…

Sanskar was crying hard bt then realized the position and composes…

Rag:..want…. colours?
He is having tears he smiles weakly..
And nods in no
Rag:.want spoons..?
San left out a small laugh and nods in no
Rag:…want …. pastries?
San nods in no…
Rag:..want…cars???i hv.. colouful cars..i wont give it
San:bt wat i want… nobody is ready to give me…
Rag:laado bhaiyya.. laado di ..laado pa..pa laado mumma.. gives…wat laado wants!
He smiles seeing her innocence…

She was looking down
Rag:wat….ever…i…ask…..i get….why?
San shruggs his shoulder:i don’t know
Rag: love..val..ue..aff…aff
San:affection
Rag:affec…he tells with her….
Ragsan:affec….tion….affection
San smiles…
San nw gets that she is talking to him
Rag: stubborn

Here wn sw reached there
Sahil asks her abt ragini
Sw: Sanskar is woth her
Everyone looks at her….
Swahil felt wierd

Ap signs laksh…
Lak nods
Lak: let’s go swara…ragini will feel alone…
Sw nods
After seeing suji she goes…

Swalak goes

San:u don’t know.. This thing is not enough for some condition
Rag stays silent
San: there vl be some chances that we should forget abt wat we want

Swalak listens this
Laksh understands bt swara was confused

San: we are forced to do that!

Lak:bhaai
San turns he stands…
Sw: thankyou sanskar.. For staying with Ragini
San nods…
He goes..
Laksh follows him
Lak: bhaai…
San stops..
Lak goes to him and held him from shoulders
Lak: bhaai..i kn…
San:lucky…leave that..
Lak: bhaai…plzz
San:i m feeling lonely today…
Lak:bhaai i m with u
San smiles weakly: wn your own mom acts to separate from her own son’s love.. That’s the unbearable feeling

Lak shocked: bhaai…act?chaachi
San goes from there
Lak: bhai..bh.. He sees sanskar already left

Later all left the hospital
Only rp ap laksh and sanskar were present
Rp:you should be happy now Sanskar
San just smiles weakly
Ap:sanskar…plzz understand beta..see this much hpnd…
San goes to suji’s room

Suji sees him
Suji:sanskar!
San smiles:how are you mom?
Suji:m fine beta m still hvng pain in chest..
San:no i think you hv pain in some other parts too…
Suji:wat?
San sadly:no tell me … it’s ok… He smiles..may be you would hv pain in your thoughts..hmm yes i think so..may be i think u hv pain in the whole body…bcs even after getting heart attack u had time to talk with doctor…after getting unconscious too u had time to tell my name to doctor…if this was heart attack na mom then u would be in angiogram..mom u may be hv forgotten bt i didnt u had an angiogram a month back and the reports are negative and if you had an heart attack too without any test how can a doctor say that its an heart attack…
He told it nicely.. Without intention to mock her

Rp and ap laksh listened this
Rp slaps sanskar: is this a way to talk your mother… That u know her condition

San: fixing condition….
Suji:u r doubting me
San: ma i never intended to… Bt made me to do that.. Bcs wn i was going.. Wn u showed you had an attack… You hv held right side of your chest in left hand
I got that wn i came near you… If it was an heart attack..u works hv terrible posting in your left hand and and left side of the chest…i brushed those thought.. In the hospital…i was feeling guilty bcs i hv raised my voice to you bt wat i got was a shock

Fb
He was moving lifelessly for the guilt wn he heard the talks of nurse and a doctor

Nurse:doctor..we should check on the heart patient..who is brought now and you said heart attack

Doc: no.. She isn’t hvng any prblm..i m her home doctor…she just wanted to make her son listen to her… So it’s a kind of drama…
Nur:bt..
Doc:leave that…u hv to tell them that she should be kept in observation…

Fb ends

San:now say mom
Suji gets up: yes i did… Bcs i didn’t wanted you to take any wrong steps
San just smiles
Rp:r u out of your mind Sujatha…you hv scared us…
Suji: then wat did you expect me to do..i should appreciate sanskar for his madness
Ap: bt this was wrong…u don’t know how scared we were
San:mom wn you can be stubborn..being your son i should also get some of those from the genes..so as decided let me stay unmarried
Suji:wh…
San:mom..i would hv left my love..i needed time so i was going…bt ur this drama made me stubborn..watever i spoke to you at that time..if possible forgive me… u wished me to marry a girl whom you wish…and i wished to marry Ragini…so lets make a deal…
Suji:deal
Rp:sanskar..i know ur mom was wrong..bt her intentions wasn’t
San: let’s go on balance..niether my wish nor yours…i vl stay unmarried… From now on no discussion
He turns
San:i m sorry dad badi ma…and mom i m sorry once again
He goes..

He told this from the pain.. He told in a calm voice like he was before…. He is a spiritual his love is spiritual.. And his relations is a spiritual be proved it…

Rp: this is bcs of you…. We could hv discussed… Your this cheap tricks made to lose your son’s trust on you
Suji with tears: bt i wanted him the best
Rip: bt wat is the need to do this.. He is our son sujatha.. If not today he would hv listened tomorrow or he would hv listened soon or on some day he would hv listened…. Bt now i don’t think so…
Ap: he loves her truly… It showed now.. Bt i didn’t expect you to do this sujatha
Suj:jiji…
Ap:a child always wants a trust from mother… Watever be the reason.. He told us so clearly that he was wrong.. Bt he wanted his mother to trust him instead he only lost trust on you… You could hv waited sujatha… You could hv waited for a little.. He would surely hv lisyened to you… Didn’t you had trust on your son
Suji cries… She was fully for her doings she didn’t get wat to do bt…
All goes from there leavingcrying sujatha…

Here sanskar gets in his car and cries..like a lonely kid… He then remembers ragini’s word’s

“Rote…woh…hai…jo….darrpok..hote hai”

San:ha Ragini…mein darrpok hoon… Isiliye tho ro raha hoon…
He then wipes his tears and drives rashly..

Here ragini sees her collected colour boxes pencils sketches…spoons..books…cars ..from childhood.. She remember his cry..

To be continued….

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