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Complicated (ragsan ss) shot 13

Many shared your opinions abt wat would you do if your closed one is in the place of sanskar… Many said they would be against of it.. And many said they support them….
Now i m sharing my opinion….i would really against of it… f someone closed to me will be in sanskar’s place…bt i would hv agreed seeing his love for the girl.
And REALLY i would feel great seeing the person like sanskar…and if he proves by taking care of her..and i would definitely feel proud my decision of supporting him and wn he succeeds in taking care of her..

And today i want to tell something abt me.. That i am physically challenged from one of my body part…i hv listened a lots of taunts from the ppl bt my parents and my brother sister and i would also credit some of my friends and cousins they took a stand for me in every step of my life…recently i heard a taunting behind me by one of my closed one i didn’t thought that he Vl taunt me.. and now i made those weakness as a strong so it wont affect me…now i smile wn ppl taunt me abt my hands.. before i used to ask my parents..that why it hpnd to me bt now i m happy that god makes everything for a reason and if he had took ability from one thing he returns it by some or the other…i don’t know why i said this may be becs we didnt see eachother or know eachother☺….sorry for my bak bak and wasting ur time……so lets get in to the story..

Let’s begin…

Next day…
Rag was crying and sahil was consoling her
Sahil:jayenge na.. pakka..ab shona busy hogi
She was holding the gift which she didn’t open… Which is given by sanskar
Sahil: let’s open the gift
He was abt to take.. Rag takes it a back
Rag:open..no..she continues to cry
Sahil:arey..lets see.. Wat is in it?
Rag still crying: no..no..no…di…di…

Sahil: ok.. Let us go to eat pastries… laado loves pastry ryte?
Rag was still crying…
Shejan comes

Jan: look… Wat we brought for Ragini
She shows the pastry
Rag was crying..she nods in no

Shekar:so my princess wants to meet her di
Rag nods in yes…
Shekar: ok chalo
Jan: its not nice Shekhar.. if we go like this..
Shekar:laado chalo…
Sahil and jan tries to stop him but he takes Ragini with him..

They moves to door

Shekar: my princess will only open the door..
Rag gives the gift to shekar to hold..
Rag wears her shoes and takes back the gift from Shekhar…and runs to open the door..
Shekar smiles

Rag opens the door and sees swara
Rag hugs her tightly..
Swara smiles…
Lak sees this.. He smiles

Here sanskar wanted to go with swalak badly…bt suji said him to take monali for the shopping
She was seeing the dresses
Monali: Sanskar…
He was lost Actually sad…he wanted to meet Ragini
She pats him
Monali:wr r u lost?i m calling u from last 5 mins…

San:oh m really sorry!
Monali:will u plz help me to select the dress
San:no..i m very bad at the selections..and you choose by yourself…
Monali: ok atleast come with me…
She held his hand.. He felt uncomfortable… She leaves his hand seeing his expressions
San:monali you go and watever you want buy it..
Monali smiles and goes…

He sees a doll which has wore long black skirt and white full sleeve top
And a black scarf around neck..and a white hair band on the hair and few bangles in the hand

He just remembered the first meet with Ragini..she has a wore a similar dress..
The moment he held her from falling from the escalator..and the way she was scared

sun mere humsafar
kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar
ki teri saansein chalti jidhar
rahunga bas wahin umr bhar

(Listen, O my co-traveller,
do you have even a little bit of idea,
that the way your breath moves,
I’ll be there, all my life.)

He remembers wn he met her in swalak engagement.. wn felt she is ignoring him… He smiles biting his lips.. Then wn he saved her from the goons and brother moment? wn the Goon wanted to create the unwanted relation how his blood boiled ??
When she called him as stranger
And the moment he realised she made a special place in his heart..and Ragini’s gift and the moments in swalak wedding..her mischiefs..and her way of showing mehendi and she saying “laado husband loves laado”
And the song was in the back ground

jitni haseen ye mulaakaatein hain
unse bhi pyaari teri baatein hain
baaton mein teri jo kho jaate hain
aaun na hosh mein main kabhi
baahon mein hai teri zindagi, haaye

(as beautiful these meetings are,
more beautiful than them are your talks.
once I’m lost in your talks,
I’d never want to come back to consciousness.
my life is in your arms.)

San was in beautiful memories…
Monali: Sanskar
He composes and sees her she was wearing a salwar
Monali:how i m looking
San smiles:good.. Is your shopping completed?
Monali nods..

Here rag was not leaving swara for a second too..bcs she is scared that she vl go leaving her…

Sw:ok open the gift now atleast
Rag nods in no…
Lak:u should open the gift and see wat it hv?
Rag nods in no…
Sahil:she is having a special attachment towards Sanskar… She didn’t bod with anyone this soon.. this is wat shocking me…
Lak smiles…
Sahil: seriously…

After sharing some time..swalak decides to leave

Rag held swara’s hand tightly… As she doesn’t want to let her go
Sahil:laado…shona has to leave hai na..leave her hand
Rag with a crying face nods in no
Lak:laado…will you come with us?
Sw smiles:laado…u vl come with us?
Rag smiles and immediately held Sahil’s hand
Sahil smiles:no…laado
Rag:yes..laado
Sw:chalo na bhaiyyu
Sahil then nods…

They goes to mm

Here sanskar and monali reaches…
At the same time swalak raghil reaches

San sees Ragini….he smiles widely…
Rag:lak…laado tough
Lak smiles
Lak:laksh
Rag:crying boy..
San laughs a bit
San moves towards them:still u are calling me crying boy… That’s not fair.. Even you were crying yesterday
Sahil: sanskar…(he dragged his name a bit)
Rag smiles and imitates sahil:sansii…
All laughs

Monali gets frustrated bcs she was left alone

San:sansii… sanskar
Rag smiles:sansii
Later they goes in

Monali angrily hits the car…
Monali:i hv to do something with this girl.. Sanskar acts like blind whenever he sees this mad girl.. Huh..!

Rag was sitting in the hall and seeing some file
Rp was sitting there…

They were sitting in the corners of sofa

Rp sees the gift in her hand
Rp:beta..who gave you gift?
Rag smiles..she seeing the floor
Rag:laado friend
Rp:who is that?
He closes his file
Rag: crying boy
Rp laughs lil:crying boy?
Rag:laado friend sansii
Rp:sansii

Lak who was seeing this:chaachu..she is telling sanskar
Rp:good name.. Ragini
Rag:laado
Rp smiles:laado…! actually you should call him sanki
Rag giggles:sanki…good name laado chaachu
Laksh laughs
Rp:chaachu?
Lak:she is calling you bcs i called you that
Rp smiles:why didn’t you open the gift?
Lak:she will not? Everyone has tried

Sahil and sanskar comes
San:you still opened the gift
Rag nods in no
San:why?

Rag just smiles

Sahil: its her habit.. Whether she wish to open she vl!

San sits next to ragini
Rag:laado friend..sanki.. crying..boy..sansii..sanki..(she tells giving a gaps in-between the words)
San: waaattt??

While rp and laksh burst into laughter

Sahil:laado..we should not call like that?
San: who told you this?
Rag:laado chaachu
Rp and laksh hifies
San:chaachu?!dad
Rp laughs
He sees them…lak points towards rp

Dp comes: Wats hpng here??
Rp smiles:talking with Ragini
He sees Ragini..

San:look laado…i m not sanki
Sahil:he is sanskar..call him sanskar..ok
Rag:sansii
Rp:why r u telling her strictly…she is calling him ryte…sanki…

Dp smiles a bit

Rp:sahil..very soon we were going to come to your House
Lak:laado..di ke laas chale..
He takes her in..

Sahil smilingly: anything important uncle??
Dasi listens this.. She stops and listens

Rp : Actually i wanted to talk shekar..bt i think it will be best if i tell you now..u can discuss the matter wirh your family..and then i vl talk to shekar!
Sahil gets confused bt smiles:abt which matter?
Rp smiles: Actually..we wanted Ragini’s hand for sanskar

Sahil’s smile vanishes.and he was shocked..he stands:wat??

Dasi was shocked bcs she didnt knew this vl move this soon…

Swara who came there with Raglak was also shocked..she looks at laksh

To be continued….

Stopped at the right time!!

So which story i hv to post next??

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Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

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