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Complicated (ragsan ss) shot 11

Chandana thankyou so much buddy for loving this story immensely… It means a lot to me…. And thankyou all readers for the views and likes…. And comments.. It really encourages me a lot to write more…. Thankyou so much readers….??????and i m hoping that i vl get the same support from you all..till i write the stories…

Let’s begin…

Rp:so…..
He was collecting words to talk to his own son…. Bt still he is lacking
San keeps those on the table
And faces rp and ap
He was all smiling…
San: yes dad
Rp: son.. You say that you love her..i don’t know i should believe this or not.. bt i want to know from you..i know you will say that you love her.. You will keep her happy… Bt?
San: bt wat dad?
Ap: sanskar… This is not abt your own life.. You are dragging a girl who is so innocent…you are mixing up your life with an innocents… If you both r together…we wont be there with you for your life..wn there vl be a changes in life that there will be no parents no siblings bt a life partner… You should think abt it… I m just saying that u should not be guilty and regret your decision…. later
Sanskar stays silent
Rp: bhabhi sa…is ryte.. We want the best for you we intend to see your success your bright life… Your beautiful married life.. Niether we don’t want to see you suffer…
There was just silence
San breaking silence
San:dad…dont take me wrong…i always wanted to see a friend in you bt i was scared….and now i want the friend in my dad
Rp:i always had beta..even if you tried to explain me before…leave that torpic
Which i couldn’t before..i want to be now…
San smiles: if i still say that i vl face the hurdles..bt i vl be happy with my life
Rp: stubborn…
San:may be dad
Rp smiles a bit
Ap:she would be connected to you…you can’t just hold her everywhere
San:badi maa..you only thought us that a true and loving partner will hold their hands forever..watever be the circumstance
Ap smiles: Ram.. hum baat kis se kar rahe hai..jo hamare sawal ko hamare hi seekh jawab mein de deta hai..ab hum jo bhi pooche tho jawab yeh aise de dega jaise hum mana hi na karpayenge
(Ram.. with whom we r talking..who is giving our thoughts as answer for our own question..now if we ask anything he will reply like we cant deny for anything)
Rp keeps his hand on sanskar’s shoulder
Rp:i don’t know beta…i m doing right or not.. Niether i don’t know that you are right or not… Bt this time keeping all my worries away i m feeling like to support your decision…
San smiles
Ap: if someone else was in your place we would hv definitely say that.. He is a kind hearted a good person… We would not hv word to praise for accepting a girl like RAGINI…. Bt we feel wrong wn our own son does this…
A close one a family always thinks that their son is wrong wn he is taking a decision like this.. Bt we appreciate the same wn others do this… And some ppl vl be there they vl Niether hv benefits not loss..they just blabber their mouth..wch leads to hurt…

San:watever be mom won’t agree…
Ap:watever you said to us explain the same..she is your mom… express your feelings to her.. Anger fight frustration is not the solution… Be calm and then explain her..
At the time they listen clap
They see sujatha at the door…

Suji smiles sarcastically:wah..jiji..wah..mere bete ko mere hi khilaf bhadka rahi ho..aapke bacchon ne aise kiya hota tho aapke samaj mein aata
Ap:bt i didnt differentiated…….
Suji interupts: if you didn’t.. Then you would hv not filled my son’s ears..jiji
Rp shouts:sujatha! Are you insane? bhabhi sa was just..
Suji:mujhe aur nahi sun na…aap bhi
Rp:sujatha… Don’t make the situation complicated
Suji:i vl not accept….. She storms from there.. She sees dasi standing there she goes

Rp: bhabhi sa… don’t take her words she is just worried
Ap was hurt by still hides and smiles weakly and goes from there
Dasi immediately hides

San was just silent
Rp:sanskar.. Don’t worry…
San smiles weakly: its ok dad…
Rp:i vl make her agree…
San: she vl not agree dad
Rp:i am giving you a time… Still think and tell me… Still think abt the future
San just nods
He goes

Next day
He ragini was sitting in the balcony
Rag:12..13..14
Jan comes:laado kya kar rahi hai
Rag:laado..cars gin rahi hai..24..25..
She again gets busy in counting the moving cars in the road..
Jan smiles and cares her hair
Sw comes: laado ki mehendi dikhao
Rag smiles and nods in no
Sw: u vl not show me?
Rag nods in no
Sw acts as crying
Rag giggles and continues to count cars
Sw: i vl not show you my mehendi
Rag: laado ne di ki mehendi dekhli hai..
Sw:haww.. cheating.ab tum mujhe bhi dikhao
Rag fists her hand and moves back side
Sw smiles…
Jan: laado…will show to her mumma..hai na?
Rag nods in no
Jan acts sad: laado will not show me
Rag forwards her hand..
And shows them

Sw:wow..even my mehendi has dull colour then you…
The next wat ragini said shocked swajan
Rag:laado husband loves more…than di husband….
They were shocked….

Here everyone are busy at mm

Suji comes: i want to tell you all something
All looks at her
Rp:ab kya bacha hai sujatha?
Suji smiles: Actually…i thought something and finally i want my son’s happiness
Everybody looks confused
San was more confused
Suji: why are you all seeing me like this?
Rp: tumhari thabiyat tho theek hai?
Suji: arey…i m agreeing to sanskar…i hv no problem with Ragini
Everyone are shocked…
Suji goes to son and cups his face
Suji:are you happy now?
San smiles:mom….
Suji nods….
He hugs her: thankyou mom…. Thankyou so much
Rp was confused bt smiles brushing off his thoughts
Suji:bt there’s a condition
San: wat mom?
Suji:we vl ask Ragini’s hand after laksh’s marriage is it ok?
San nods smilingly
San:i can’t ask anything much… Thankyou so much mom… He hugs her again….

To be continued…

Wat you think wat vl hpn next?? Love to read you guesses?

I want to ask you if your some one closed one is in sanskar’s place..wat vl u do? Don’t think abt this story! Just think genuinely and answer!
Want to know this very badly… May be this story vl shapeout with your replies

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