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Home»Fan Fiction Original»A COMMON LOVE STORY –XI
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A COMMON LOVE STORY –XI

administratorBy administratorNovember 16, 201513 Comments3 Mins Read
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****The Talk*******
“Love is the bonding between two hearts
It has no language”
I was shell shocked on seeing my patent’s at my room’s door,
They were furious and they should be because I had done wrong ……….
My mom held my Dad’s hand and was stopping him,
My sister looked afraid and my mom broke that silence by asking me to pick up the phone and keep it on speaker ……….
With my shaking hands I put the phone on speaker ……..
And with stumbling body and voice I said hello, and no reply came from him,
(On other side his phone was also on speaker with his parents also listening to the convo)
I still had blurred vision because of crying a lot………..
I again said hello, and this time he answered hut, his voice didn’t have that calmness…….
His voice was full of pain…………
Then in a low voice he said, “You called me right?”
And I nodded a yes, and soon realized that I was on a voice call not a video call or talking face to face,
And with a coordinated movement of my face muscles my lips move and a sound came out of my throat/mouth……
Hmmm…….
He spoke again and said “Anything serio….. I mean any ……….”
I answered no nothing much just that I am sorry for that happened today ammmm….. Are you fine…?
He said no need to worry and it wasn’t your fault at all……….
But I introduced you to them and they did it for sure and I got you into trouble…. I said almost screaming on phone as if forcing him to accept the fact……
He said it’s not…… and my father’s patience broke …. And seeing him like this my eyes filled with tears again …… and I started blaming myself for all this………
My father started questioning him……..
He said tell me how you know my daughter? Who are you? Tell me about you… Since when do you know her? What ……..
He was just bombarding him with questions just then an elderly voice spoke from the other side and that voice, was calm ………
The person on the other side said “Sir please calm down we are as confused as you are….”
My father looked confused and a freaking silence broke out again….
That time we got to know that his parents were also listening to our conversation ……
My father took the phone and put off the speaker and went to another room and had a chat…
We were worried and just waited for him eagerly to come out of the room…..
He came out looked at me and left……….
Ah! Just that well that was enough…..
What could a terrified, confused not in senses girl do who is surrounded by three pair of eyes , one of them red in anger my Dad, and one of them worried my Mom ,and the third one my sister who was sitting close to me was expressionless ………
That day and the following night, was so cold, just cold…….
(Here cold means silent)
None of us spoke anything and, quietly went to sleep……..
The next day I was asked to get ready and we left for an unknown destination……
***to be continued
*********
i know it’s a short one frndss but today’s two short chapters made a long one 🙂
hope you enjoyed it and keep reading … 🙂
i will update next ASAP….
welll when the protagonist was crying in my mind BG was…
Naina laggiya Baarishan….
lol 😉

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13 Comments

  1. Hayathi on November 16, 2015 11:57 am

    Nice dr

  2. AaLiyA on November 16, 2015 12:08 pm

    Di the way of Portraying the emotions was Amazing..i like ? it..I was so curious to read next after learning the truth what the parents did but u created a Suspense ..i am waiting for next curiously..pls update soon…take care ?..

  3. Ananya on November 16, 2015 1:06 pm

    Richa I was a silent reader. Your story is soo good. Plz update soon. Want to wat happens nxt. Keep up the nice work..

  4. Liya on November 16, 2015 1:30 pm

    Nice 🙂

  5. Richa on November 16, 2015 3:49 pm

    THNKUUU @ hAYATHI,aALIYA AND LIYA…
    @ ANANYAA DRRR THNKUUU SOOOO MUCHHH DR NYC TO KNW THERE ARE SILENT READERS TOOO 🙂 THNKUU DR KEEP READING ,TC ND I WILL UPDATE ASAP

  6. hg on November 16, 2015 4:06 pm

    Nys dr.ge

  7. Manha on November 16, 2015 4:20 pm

    Oh no. What is happening. What is going to happen. U really keep suspense in amazing way. Waiting for next.

  8. dia on November 16, 2015 5:20 pm

    Amazingg diii

    i hav jst 1 wrd fr u….cuz u r jst damn awsm…..ur all epis r too gud that i m jst bored to say awsm nd amazingg

  9. Susi on November 17, 2015 9:52 am

    So Nice richu dr…..? keep on going… dr..

  10. Richa on November 17, 2015 3:56 pm

    THANKKK U HG MANHA ND DIAA KEEP READINGG 🙂
    finally u dere suuuusiiiii sweety i hope u liked itt nd keep readin dr lol 😉 ????

  11. ¤¤ Anna ¤¤ on November 17, 2015 4:11 pm

    Awesome Dear just toooooo……. good

  12. Richa on November 17, 2015 4:59 pm

    thankk u dr anna nd u 2 writee awsmm dr i hav read ur ficstooo srry i didnt cmmnt ;( as m a silent reader…

  13. ¤¤ Anna ¤¤ on November 17, 2015 5:14 pm

    🙂 That’s okay. Actually many people do that and thanks

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