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Home»Fan Fiction»I committed a sin [promo]
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I committed a sin [promo]

Shubhangi1By Shubhangi1March 14, 201718 Comments3 Mins Read
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Helloooooo everyone!!!
I am back. Firstly i would like to thank u all for ur support in my previous works. So here i have returned with a FF. I promise the main couple would be together and alive. Pakka promise.

So….. Here is the promo….

I COMMITTED A SIN…..

Scene 1

A boy and girl in their 18’s are seen talking happily and hugging.

Scene2

Girl- u don’t have anything…no money, no reputation nothing what do u thing i would love a beggar like u.
Boy is seen with tears and broken ?

Scene3
A man is seen working in his offivce. He looks sad and broken.
A girl enters in the office.

Scene4
Boy – i love u
Girl- i love u toooo

Scene 5
Girl- u don’t deserve anything in ur life. U were and u will be a big loser. That’s y everybody abands u. I am thinking y ur parents even gave birth to u.
Boy is listening silently with tears continuously flowing. Suddenly another boy comes there and a sound of slap is heard.
Scene 6
A boy is seen in a room crying silently and a person is banging the door and asking him to open it.

Scene7
A man’s car hits a women. And he starts scolding her.
A girl comes there.

Scene8
A boy is sitting on his knees and proposing a girl.

Scene 9
Girl- i am soo happy we are geeting married. While the boy smirks.

Scene10
Girl- plz don’t leave me i will die
Boy- then go and die….i don’t give a damn.

Scene-11
A girl is seen huging a boy and crying on his shoulder. While a boy see them and burn in jealousy.

Scene12
Boy- plz i am sorry
Girl now its too late plzzz go froom here….
Boy- plz i know I committed a sin but…..

Sooo here comes the end of the promo.

Promo of my os 1

I girl is seen talking and laughing continuously while a boy is seeing here with eyea filled with love.
A girl is seen marrying while a boy is seeing with tears in his eyes.

Promo of my os2
It would be an explained version of my os ESSENCE OF HATRED but witj lots of scenes and modification….

A girl is seen marrying someone while the groom smirks evily .

Boy- get outttt
Girl-[teary eyes] butttt
Boy holds her with shoulders and drags her and throws her out.

……….

So here are three promos tell me what u want first ff epi 1 os 1 or os2 or nothing….??….so comment and tell me about ur views….

Bye……

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    18 Comments

    1. raina on March 14, 2017 9:41 pm

      i want the ff! it’s very interesting!

    2. rj12 on March 14, 2017 9:43 pm

      Hey it is amazing post soon

    3. keerthi on March 14, 2017 9:45 pm

      Os 2

    4. Sus on March 14, 2017 9:49 pm

      Nyc

    5. Seebu_s on March 14, 2017 9:55 pm

      promos r interesting?but i’m confused?which one should i select?ok…i’m so greedy??so i want 3…n i’m sorry 3 stories r interesting so cant select one?

    6. Simin on March 14, 2017 9:57 pm

      Superb diiii
      Let me warn u dont give a sad ending
      I want all the three
      But first the ff

    7. zelena81196 on March 14, 2017 10:27 pm

      all sounds so interesting….update soon…

    8. a on March 14, 2017 10:27 pm

      all of them look so interesting..
      im confused..i think u should start with ur ff first..tc..

    9. Pramudi on March 14, 2017 10:41 pm

      All the promos are interesting.
      But I want the ff first.

    10. xyz on March 14, 2017 10:57 pm

      os 1

    11. Febi on March 14, 2017 11:29 pm

      All 3 i want….. OS 2 is very interesting

    12. SRSL on March 14, 2017 11:32 pm

      Os 2

    13. mica on March 15, 2017 6:53 am

      sound interesting…

    14. Kakali on March 15, 2017 11:42 am

      Wohoooo !! it seems very interesting..!! I would love to read the OSs first..!! Then the ff..!,
      well continue soon!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    15. anu on March 15, 2017 2:41 pm

      all are amazing want three sorry cant choose anyone

    16. Arunika on March 15, 2017 4:00 pm

      I want all of the 3!!!

    17. ndsg on March 15, 2017 4:57 pm

      Interesting promo… Egerly waiting ….?

    18. Swarna01 on March 15, 2017 5:30 pm

      Ff n os 2. Ha ha ha so greedy we r

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