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Home»Fan Fiction»I committed a sin [episode 4]
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I committed a sin [episode 4]

Shubhangi1By Shubhangi1March 25, 201716 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello beautiful people !!
Thank you so much for ur response. This is the last episode till 30 march as i am going to my grandma’s house on 25 march and my cousins would not let me write anything. So…..and yes wish me luck my result day is also on 25 march. Now….i will stop my blabbering and start the epi.
Episode 4

Recap- drunk sanskar
Sanskar got up with a heavy head. He holds his head.
Sanskar- ugghhhh!! My head is paining….what happened yesterday……ahhh!!
He stood up went for a bath. He got ready and went to take his breakfast. After eating it he went to his room and took his phone. He started watching the cctv footage of his house, at one point is eyes widened. After watching it he closed his phone. He rested his head on the headboard of the bed. He closed his eyes and started thinking.

Sanskar-[thinks] ms. Gadodia took care of me. She brought lunch for me. She took me to my house last night when i was not in my senses. She waited till i fell asleep. She even pecked my forehead [smiles] she is so innocent and kind. [Feels a different feeling in his heart] she is so different [immediately opens his eyes] no she is also like other girls….every girl is same[angry] she is also the same.
He again gets lost in his thinking.
After sometime he goes to his office. He was still having a headache.
He was sitting in his office and working. Someone knocks his door.
Sanskar-[busy in his work] come in
Swara- [smiles] good morning sir.
Sanskar looks towards her.

Sanskar-[rudely] ms. Gadodia don’t u have any work in office that u just came to say good morning. Remember i pay u for working not for taking care of me.
Swara-[feels bad] [murmurs] my sansku was much better than this khadoos.
Sanskar – i heard that ms. Gadodia
Swara- [eyes widens] vo….vo…..sir actually i came to give u this medicine.[sanskar raises his eyebrow] vo actually i thought that u must be having an headache and as there is no one at ur house to care of u soo….
Sanskar- how do u know that there is no one at my house for me.
Swara-[smiles] sansku….[bites her tongue]…i…i mean u only told me.
Sanskar-[sighs ] ok umm…keep this here and u can take a leave.
Swara keeps the medicine there .

Swara- [smiles] take care sir
Saying this she goes from there leaving sanskar in her thoughts. Sanskar closes his eyes and gotlost in his thinking.
Lunch time….
Swara – may i come in sir
Sanskar- come in
Swara- sir now leave all this and come i will serve the food yesterday also u didn’t ate the food. Now come
Sanskar- ms. Gadodia do not tell me what to do….i have told u this many times…u serve the food i am coming.
Swara-[angry] [murmurs] huh….

sadu ….i liked my sansku i think this sadu should always remain drunk….huh…yesterday he seemed so sweet he was calling me swara and [makes face][mimics him] ms. Gadodia…
Sanskar hears her and shakes his head and smiles.
Swara- sir come.
Sanskar- [sighs] ok
To tease sanskar swara started singing break up song. Sanskar eyes widened in shock and he glares her.
Swara- [murmurs] sansku sansku sanskuuuu
Sanskar- ms. Gadodia i think u forgot that i remember everything from yesterday night…so stop teasing me.
Swara-[acts innocently] when i teased u sir….
Sanskar- oh god u r so innocent right?
Swara innocently shakes her head. Both stares each other and started laughing . After a long time sanskar was laughing whole heartedly.

After some time they both finished their food and got busy with their work.
15 days later…
In these days many things changed. Sanskar started calling her swara instead of ms. Gadodia. They both started being a little bit friendly. The loneliness in sanskar’s life started to fade away. He started smiling . There was anunknown feeling arising in their heart for each other. But still swara called sanskar as sir bcoz they were not so friendly. But one day swara decided to ask who was kavita and about his family.
Lunch time…..
Swara- may i come in sir.

Sanskar-[smiles] come in swara. Come and set the food quickly i am very hungry.
Swara- [smiles] yes sure but before that i want to ask [hesitates] usomething.
Sanskar -[confused] yes ask
Swara- ummm….vo actually i wanted to ask….umm…
Sanskar- swara hurry upp
Swara- vo actually sir i wanted to ask [takes a deep breath]why u live alone actually why ur parents r not with u? I know u feel lonely but if u feel so y u don’t talk to them.
Listening her sanskar’s expression got changed. He became reallyangry. His eyes became red with anger.
Sanskar- [tries to control his anger] swara stop it
Swara- [got scared] and and who is kavita sir…..y u hate her…..sir u should never hate someone its not good to do so an….
Before she completes sanskar pins her to the wall.

Sanskar-[shouts ] swara don’t u utter a word now…
Swara-[scared] sir but…
Sanskar- [hell angry] stop it right now…
Swara- bu…
Sanskar- [shouts] u want to listen na then listen yes yes i live alone and u y bcoz my family hates me they left me and i also hate them for not supporting me….i hate them for misbehaving with me[tears fall from his eyes] i hate them i hate them very much [stops swara from speaking] and about kavita she isthe girl who betrayed me who made my life hell….and i hate her…and yes hating someone makes me bad then yes i am a devil who everyone hates and i also hate everyone bcoz each and every person is fake and selfish.

Swara-[teary eyes bcoz of his anger] but sir…its not..
Sanskar-[shouts] not a word ….not a word now….u know what [takes her lunchand pushes her out of the room]u take this and not even dare to enter my cabin….bcoz i hate u as well…now get out
Swara- [teary eyes]but
Sanskar-[shouts] GET OUT!!
Swara runs from there with tears in her eyes. Sanskar also holds his head to control his anger. Tears continuously fall from his eyes depicting his pain and broken heart. He throws a glass and messes his whole cabin. He fell on his knees and shouts.
Sanskar- shouts] why u did that….

Precap- sanskar thinks to apologize to swara but later insults her.

So here was the epi…i hope u liked it

Bye….

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    16 Comments

    1. Sus on March 25, 2017 11:58 pm

      Awesome

    2. Kristen on March 26, 2017 12:14 am

      Awesome give me the previous episode links dear

      • Shubhangi1 on March 26, 2017 8:55 am

        http://www.tellyupdates.com/committed-sin-episode-3/
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/committed-sin-episode-2/
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/committed-sin-episode-1/
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/committed-sin-promo/

    3. a on March 26, 2017 1:09 am

      nice..

    4. independent on March 26, 2017 8:21 am

      Awesome dear

    5. Soujanya on March 26, 2017 10:11 am

      Awesome

    6. Simin on March 26, 2017 10:12 am

      Ohhhh noo
      Abhi to sab theek ho raha tha
      Swara plz dear stay strong
      Sanskar control ur anger

    7. Priyanka on March 26, 2017 2:04 pm

      Superb waiting for next chapter

    8. mica on March 26, 2017 3:43 pm

      nyahahhahah, my sansku….. awesome part dear

    9. raina on March 26, 2017 5:20 pm

      very beautiful!! i am loving it

    10. pravee on March 26, 2017 7:10 pm

      Update next soon

    11. Shreeyu on March 26, 2017 10:14 pm

      Superb dear… Post next one soon!!..!!?

    12. Febi on March 26, 2017 10:41 pm

      Awesome dear

    13. sumayyah on March 27, 2017 10:03 am

      awesome can’t wait long for next epi

    14. Pramudi on March 27, 2017 1:39 pm

      Awesome..
      But why is he going to insult her?

    15. Simi on March 29, 2017 12:22 pm

      Awesome but precap ?

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