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Home»Fan Fiction»I committed a sin [episode 2]
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I committed a sin [episode 2]

Shubhangi1By Shubhangi1March 18, 201720 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello beautiful people!!
Thank you sooo much for ur response in the previous epi.
I committed a sin

Episode 2

Precap-Swara slapping sanskar. Sanskar’s revenge plan. Swara surprised by sanskar’s behaviour at the office.

Its been 1 month since swara started working in sanskar’s office. She was very much impressed by His independent nature and professionalism. But she also noticed his arrogant and rude behaviour. She also noticed his loneliness , no call from home or any visit of his family at the office. He also used to miss his lunch sometimes. Seeing this she was little bit confused by his family members bcoz they never called at the office. Many times she ignored all these things. But today she asked her colleague who were now her friends about it.
swara- mmm….kabir can i ask u something.
kabir- yes sure …….how can i deny a beautiful women like u…[winks]
swara-[giggles] acha now listen ………don’t u feel the behaviour of sanskar sir’s family a little bit odd…
Kabir- his family y? I have never seen his family.
Swara- yes that’s the thing they never call him or they never send lunch for him even ……
Kabir- hmmm…..but what if sanskar sir has prohibited them to call in office
Swara- hmmm….yes but but they could…..hmm…..ok….this must be the reaso…
Swathi-[interrupts] arreew don’t u both know about his family?
Swakab- what?

Swathi- arreee i have heard he was thrown out by his family at a very small when he ,loved a girl after That even the girl he loved even she left him….since then he hates his family that’s y he is always drowned in his work and all.
Swara- ahhh what rubbish
Kabir- yes a hitler like him can never love anyone.
Swara-[glares him] kabir…..But i think it wouldn’t be the reason. Its all rubbish…i don’t believe all. It must be that he is very hardworking that’s y he is always drowned in his work.
Swathi-hmmm this could also be the reason but i told what i heard.
Swara-hmmyes…..bu
Swara was interrupted by a employee who told her that sanskar is calling her in his cabin.
Swara- oh gotta go bye guys
Kabir-[puppy face] now what will i do without u shona [points towards swathi] this witch will eat my brain.
Swathi- [glares him] shut up [to swara] shona u go….
Swara giggles and goes to sankar’s cabin.
Swara- may i come in sir?
Sanskar-[without shifting his gaze from the laptop]yes.
Swara-sir u called me?
Sanskar- yes ms. Gadodia actually can u tell meAbout the progress of mr. Mehra’s project.
swara- yes sure sir.

saying this swara started telling him about the progress. After 1 hr it was the time of lunch. Seeing the time sanskar asked her to go and take her lunch and after that they will continue. Swara agreed and was about to go but seeing sanskar working she asked him something.
Swara- sir can i ask u something if u don’t mind?
Sanskar- [still working] yes ms. Gadodia
Swara- sir r u not going to eat ur lunch?
Sanskar- no ms. Gadodia can’t u see i am busy.
Swara- but sir it is not good for ur health.
Sanskar- ms. Gadodia u don’t tell me what to do.
Swara- but sir ur family would be worried about ur health if u don’t take lunch.
Hearing the word FAMILY sankar blood started boiling. His eyes became red with anger. He closed his laptop with a jerk. He stood from his chair and shouted.
Sanskar- [loudly] SHUT UPP!! U the hell r u to question me
Swara- [scared] but sir i….
Sanskar-[red eyes] u want to hear then listen….yes my family doesn’t even care if i had my lunch or not….they don’t even care if i die or alive……now get out
Saying this a tear slipped his eye.
Swara- sir…
Sanskar-[shouts] GET OUT!!!
Swara quickly gets out from there.
Sanskar closed his eyes to calm himself but it didn’t work. So he threw the glass of water on floor with great intensity and kicked his chair.
He closed his eyes in pain and let tears fall. He started remembering his painful past.
Flashback……

Sanskar was sitting on his chair and studying with full concentration. His mother entered the room withfood .
Mom- sanskar beta come and eat good.
Sanskar- mom u keep it there i will eat afterwards there is alot to study.
Mom- no sanskar beta first come and eat it will become cold.
Sanskar- mom but….
His mother took him to the bed and started making him eat food with her hands. Sanskar also started feeding his mom because he knew his mother wouldn’t have eaten without him. After completing the food.
Mom- sanskar beta don’t study till late night ok?
Sanskar-[smiles] ok mom now u go and sleep. And yes don’t forget to take ur medicines.
His mother smiles seeing his care. She caresses his face and goes from there.
Flashback……
Sanskar smiles in tears.
Sanskar-[whispers] y u did that mom……
He opens his eyes, wipes his tears and again starts his work.

Swara’s cabin….
Swara’s pov
What happened to him suddenly…..i was just concerned about his health. And y he became so angry when i mentioned about his family. Even a tear escaped his eyes. Is it true that his family abandoned him….did he really loved someone….did he….ahhhhh….[holds her head with her hands] i will become mad…..but…i think that i should apologize to him…i may have hurted him if his family really abandoned him. Mmmm……but how should i apologize …..mmmmmmmm……yes i will bring lunch for him….yes it is a nice idea…..even he is human…..he also get hungry so it would be good to bring food for him if don’t have anyone for him to cook.
Swara’s pov ends
Like this the whole day passed……
Next day….sanskar’s office…..
Swara looked towards her watch. It was the time for lunch. She took her and sanskar’s lunch box which she asked her mother to prepare for him.
Sanskar’s cabin…..lunch time……
Swara- may i come in sir?
Sanskar was working in his laptop with full concentration.
Sanskar-[without moving his gaze] come in
Swara- [hesitates] mmm…..sir actually i….i….want to say something.
Sanskar- go on ms. Gadodia
Swara- mmm…..sir…vo
Sanskar- ms. Gadodia i don’t have the full day…..if u want to say something say it quickly ……if not then u can plz leave…..
Swara-[feels bad seeing his behaviour] mmmmm….sir vo actually…[takes a deep breath][ says fastly like a bullet train] sir actually i am so sorry regarding yesterday …..actually i was just thinking that u should eat on time as u r our boss….u know my mom so says that we should always take care about our health…k thought that if there is no one to rake care of ur health we all should take care na u r our boss…that’s y if u felt bad sir i am reallysorry i bought lunch for u today…
Sanskar was seeing her surprisingly as she said all this in some seconds only…..bullet train hehehe…..
Sanskar composes himself and says.
Sanskar- ms. Gadodia its ok and as i said earlier also no need for u or anyone to worry about my health or my personal life.
Swara- but u will eat this lunch na my mothers made this with so much efforts for u sir…..plz……
Sanskar- no ms. Gadodia now u may leave…i have my work to complete…..
Swara- but sir…
Sanskar-[loudly] leave ms. Gadodia….
Swara makes a sad face . She takes the lunch box and headed towards the door. On the other hand sanskar thought something. He stopped her.
Sanskar- wait ms. Gadodia….
Swara turns towards him.

Screen freezes.

Precap-sanskar leaving the office in hurry….drunk sanskar troubling swara…..
Now y have sanskar stopped swara from taking the lunch back…..is he going to eat the food or is he going to insult her for interfering in his life…..

To know more stay tuned to i committed a sin…..

And yes don’t forget to comment…..bye….

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    20 Comments

    1. Sus on March 18, 2017 2:47 am

      Awesome

    2. neeti on March 18, 2017 4:15 am

      great

    3. Simin on March 18, 2017 8:23 am

      Awwwww diiii
      Loved it
      This devil is amazing
      Hope she changes him

    4. Soujanya on March 18, 2017 9:17 am

      Awesome….?

    5. Stg on March 18, 2017 9:23 am

      awesome ?

    6. mariya on March 18, 2017 9:23 am

      Awesome continue soon.

    7. mica on March 18, 2017 9:41 am

      aweeeesome

    8. dracula1712 on March 18, 2017 9:54 am

      he stoppedher to makehisplan successful

    9. anu on March 18, 2017 11:04 am

      awesome sanky stopped swara to make plan successful… he wants to take revenge from her

    10. Viji on March 18, 2017 11:51 am

      superb

    11. a on March 18, 2017 11:55 am

      Nice

    12. swasan on March 18, 2017 1:37 pm

      Excited for next part… This chappy is awesome ??????

    13. AnuAnn on March 18, 2017 2:43 pm

      Awesome dear

    14. raina on March 18, 2017 3:14 pm

      it’s very nice!! i am loving it

    15. kat on March 18, 2017 7:19 pm

      awesome

    16. Seebu_s on March 18, 2017 10:00 pm

      Nice

    17. Arshaanya on March 18, 2017 11:32 pm

      Nyc

    18. sumayyah on March 19, 2017 8:13 pm

      nice track continue soon am eagerly waiting for the next epi ..

    19. Pramudi on March 19, 2017 11:02 pm

      Awesome dear.

    20. Febi on March 20, 2017 9:26 pm

      Awesome dear

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