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When She Coloured My Canvas – IB & DBO – Colour 8

Hey buddies, thanks for all ur lovely comments.
I have reached 8 chappies coz of ur support.

Colour 7 – Read Here

All other chappies & my new os also available in www.tellyupdates.com/user/11299/?profiletab=posts

For colour suggestion,
Verna – red for rebel gouri
Blue for understanding, caring om.

Try to guess the colour of this chappy.
Dunno if it is boring.
Please do tell if u do not like this plot.

Recap:- Jhanvi learnt that om is using drugs and he slapped gouri who stopped him. Her body raised and she collapsed.Gouri cares her and is hurt in the process.Om tends to gouri.

G: y r u caring this characterless girl??
O: I would have did this for anyone!!

G: would u have kissed anyone’s foot also??

Om was flabbergasted. He was embarrassed. He didn’t think that she would question him like this. He was so hurt in seeing her bleeding feet; he did it to reduce her pain. He didn’t know y he cared for her like this. He stood up and moved back silently.

Gouri was also confused with this behavior. She couldn’t read his mind. At times he scolvmded her like hell but when hurt he was always by her side. She wanted to speak to him about maaji, but worried if he would shout at her.
G: omkaraji, I know u will never be ready to hear whatever I say.Now, all ur problems r solved. Sultanaji is jailed, ur mom doesn’t have to suffer again. As for sasurji, I think he has now understood his mistake; he is repenting.V need to give him a chance for a new life.V need to bring maaji and him closer.

Om was just looking at her surprisingly. As usual, he didn’t feel that this was a new drama; he could feel that she is saying from heart. But still in some corner of mind, he doubted her.
But he was happy that she had cared for his mom. His hands were slowly raising to catch her by her shoulders while she was looking down.
G: now, I’m the only problem remaining in ur life.Don’t worry after maaji is fine I will go back from here.

Om was shocked, his hands moved back.Oh, so she is going. Y should I feel sad.

G: I have only one request,please don’t make maaji cry.It is so sad to see the destruction of lived ones. Maaji loves u a lot, she have many dreams about you.So live for maaji.

Om’s heart was being pierced. He couldn’t bear his mom’s pain. He resolved in his mind not to make mom cry again.
He heard gouri’s phone ringing.S he attended it, but with a shocked reaction. ” Ka?? MERI maa??….”

1 week had passed…………..
A car is seen moving on the Mumbai road, whose destination is oberoi Mansion.The 2 ladies in side r anika & gouri. Both were very happy and lost in their thoughts. Gouri’s pov

How my life had changed in 1 week.This is all play of fate. My aayi was brought here for better treatment as her illness was high. She met anika baujai. She was having a faint memory of meeting my aayi b4. This was cleared when my aayi showed her album to baujai from which she found out that baujai is my aayi’s friend’s daughter,i.e. my didi.
The rest all was like a fairly tale. V came to know that v r the part of royal family of Jodhpur.Due to some enemies planning to snatch away property from our Papa and maa, our family of 4 were destroyed. Our parents died but we were separated. Me with aayi and didi in orphanage. Hey Sankarji, this is all ur decision. U have given me my family back. Our palace in Jodhpur is ver big, we got to see every relatives, dadi, dadu and all.I feel very lucky not to b a royal family member but to get such a huge family.

As she was lost in her thoughts, the car reached mansion. All the family members were waiting for them to celebrate this happiness.

As the sisters came out from the car, dadi,pinky, jhanvi were ready to welcome their bahus.
P: aayiye bahuranis. Ye tho such much Ranis hain na..
All laughed. They were welcomed by Arathi.

Gouri’s eyes were searching for Om and she saw an irritated Om. She wondered what happened to him to be restless.

The sisters entered the mansion & had a good time with the family. Specially aniri. They were ,of course emotional but the mood was made lighter by Rudy.

Gouri entered their room She was so happy and excited that day. She saw that Om was working on an idol. An excited gouri ran and came near Om.
G: Omkaraji, tumhe pata, how big our palace is?
O: u haven’t changed gouri, u r still seeing everything thru greedy eyes!!!!

She didn’t expect such an answer
Her eyes were filled immediately.
G: what r u saying?
O: tumhe kya lagtha hai? that I will accept u since ur bhabhis sister. Don’t even dare to think like that.
G: Maine aise kab kaha?
O: kuch galat mat fehmiye please
Gouri was Freezed.
O: anyway u have got a very rich family now. U don’t need to stay with me to get all the money and property, isn’t it?
Gouri couldn’t bear this insult any more. She was doing this for almost few time and now this has become unbearable.
G: what do u think? U r never ready to hear my side. U r making decisions on ur own. Don’t think u r perfect. Of course I know all ur old stories. U were a drug addict and even now u r doing the same thing. U doesn’t know how to behave properly. U think u r Always right. But in fact u don’t know anything , u don’t know to judge people or hear them.i.e.y u r suffering in ur life.
O : mind ur words gouri. I know u will say and act anything to win,anything to get money. U only know to break families not to join them. Otherwise u wouldn’t have agreed to marry kali. Besharam ladki hai ti. Cheap and bad charactered. suddenly they heard a roar.

” ENOUGH OM!!!!!JUST STOP THIS!!!!!”

Whose voice is that??

Precap:- what?? is gouri an unmarried girl??

Waiting for all ur comments.
Any sort of comments are expected??

Shraddha-DBO

In love with the swag of Janhvi Mittal ??

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