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When she coloured my canvas – IB& DBO – Colour 21

Shraddha-DBOBy 34 Comments3 Mins Read

Hi all,moving on to next.Hope u will like this.

Try to find out the colour of this chappy.

Colour 21

Day after tomorrow is Om’s birthday.There has been no information about gouri till now; her phone is switched off.But Om didn’t want to make his mom said; he told her that Gouri had gone to visit her friend & will come on his birthday.He told the truth only to bhabhi.

He was sure that she is not in bareilly.She had only one friend archisha in Mumbai; but she wasn’t there too.He searched maximum locations; but suddenly it striked him that someone might have harmed her.She hadn’t taken her dresses , do she planned for a casual trip.Also the securities had seen her going on foot; she didn’t want anyone to accompany her.

He was sure that svet might have done something as she was planning an attack in OM.He didn’t have any way to find her.He could feel the same fear as he felt when kali had trapped her.He was mentally cursing him on talking nonsense to her.Suddely he felt a touch on his shoulder; he thought it was gouri but it was bhabhi….

One day has passed.Om was very much disturbed.He didn’t want all these celebrations without gouri.He tried all means to reach her but was of no use. The whole day he spent in his gallery, reminiscing his old moments with gouri; he was very much broken.He had apologized a 100 times to gouri in his mind.

It was 7 pm, he came back to home.He saw jhanvi, she asked for gouri.He had to lie that she would come the next day.He wanted to take off all decorations; he felt all these useless.

He freshened & went to the balcony.It was beautifully lit up with dim lights. As he watched around he saw something covered ; it was a canvas.As he opened it, he was amazed.It was his portrait; with open hair, glowing eyes & a wide yet soft smile.He wondered who could do this; there was no one other than him who could do portraits like this.Some spark suddenly passed through his head.

He ran from the balcony & just below the stairs he saw something which his eyes had been longing for; Gouri.Yes, he thought it was a dream; yes it was a dream.A dream which could give real happiness for him; a dream which could make his heart run fast & lose his senses.

He ran to her.She had a blank face.
O: gouri, where were u? ha..tell me? tell me gouri.

She was staring angrily @ Om’s eyes & turned to go.

He caught her by wrist; he can’t afford to lose her again.He feared that situation.He turned her towards him.
He took hold of her waist; she gasped.He had never done this to her after marriage.

O: Answer me gouri…come on!!!!
But she wasn’t least feared by his order; because she was dabbang gouri!!!

Waiting for ur comments, don’t know how the story is going!!!!

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34 Comments

  1. Staicey on

    Totally unexpected …. Can’t wait for next update….my heart is beating fast and on top of that you didn’t give precap Di

  4. Maahi on

    @shraddha chappy 21 itna chota …. not done yrr…. Tumne toh suspense mein he chod diya hume….

    Wherever the story is going is just perfect.. so don’t worry about that…

    Loved Omkara being tensed for Gauri and Gauri is not ready to forgive him easily….

    NOW I really want some Sweet moments between Gaurikara and it should be started by Omkara… ( Samjh rahi ho na mein kya kahena chahti hu)…

    Today’s chappy 20 colour is:-
    Orange – for regret of hurting someone special…

    Chapter 21. Colour is:-
    Silver – 1. For spark in eyes for someone u are longing to see for long time….
    2. Spark in Gaurikara’s relation of being in love….

    Plz post next double dhamaka sooonnnn…. jaldi se post karo…. can’t wait for next….
    Also plz try to make ur chapter (any one atlaest… for me) bit long … I really love to read ur FF and never miss it…..

  6. vasundhara on

    Are titan chota epi I didn’t expect this from you yaar and u r giving a lots of suspenses day by day

  7. Anusuya on

    I have read all your chappies and loved your idea,your description…waiting for your next chappy…

  11. shashi on

    Om should get a punishment like this. Always scold our gauri. Api is awesome. I really really loved it. Waiting for next one.

  12. simrat_14 on

    Only question in my mind: where did Gauri go? Great update ? (Plz tell where Gauri went in the next update. It’s killing me.)

  15. Verna on

    OMG…. such caring hubby Om and his restlessness for losing her is awesome.. I just.want him to learn how to manage time for his business and wife.. and really excited for next part dr

  17. Shreyanvi on

    U always do this wd us… not fair yaar….bich main atka diya….now post nxt part soon….

  18. Bubblu on

    Awesomw dii… superb..waiting for d nxt update…my colour s Dark blue for dis serious Om

  21. Sanyukta on

    Awesome episode.Keep writing dear.I wanna give Om apricot green for new beggining ,missing his loveand fear of losing Gauri

  22. deepu on

    Y u didn’t give precape nd itna chota epi not fair shraddha.. but i like the way om questioned gouri.. how despo he is u nailed it.. Don’t worry about the track it is very nice.

  24. Richa19 on

    Again an amazing update sissy!!! But a short on too.. But loved om’s restlessness…. N I think the portrait is made by gauri only. .. But where she was?? Pls update the next part soon… Can’t wait to read more…. Take care!!! ? ?

  30. Aliza111 on

    shradha di pls post next color as soo nas posibblie . iam dying to read it . dabang gouri hehe. ps post fast. todays color dark red for gouri s anger and pink for om’s love and green for om’s tension

  31. Astha_Reddy on

    Omkara’s late response to situation and adjusting with it hurt her and she stay close to him and still away, Too close yet so far. But Gouri never left his heart, she always was in his mind, thought every moment im his happy birth day preparation, he was unable to join the fun coz. she was not with him to share his happiness. He saw the worse before so his mind is traveling to the worst like Shwetlana kidnapping her after confirming that Gouri is not with Archisha is Mumbai. His canvas has turned from Indigo up to Lavender , from hallucination to reality then realisation and result is a dabbang Gouri right in front of him in the same house after searching the whole world.