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Home»Fan Fiction»My Cinderella…. a raglak ss (part-1)
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My Cinderella…. a raglak ss (part-1)

maha6By maha6October 30, 2016Updated:October 30, 201654 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi guys…. It’s ur maha with my second OS… M sry today I can’t give u epi of my ff” the soul of my life”. Instead I thought to write an OS. So here is the OS.

Intro..
Laksh maheshwari: actor…. He is a well known actor… Girls go mad for him… But he loves only his cindrella… He dont who is she… But loves her madly….
Ragini malhotra: assistant of laksh. Has feelings for laksh but couldn’t release it. Just thinks that it’s an attraction like every girl….. Knows abt laksh’s cindrella… But don’t know anything abt her.
Now coming to the story…..
As I already said laksh was a famous actor who is the heartrob of every girl…
He is in his shooting….just then he gets a call
Lak: haa raj did u get to know anything abt her.
Raj: no sir… We didn’t have anything related to her. We just only know that she is an orphan n u have her chain… It’s not enough Bhai..
Lak: raj… Do anything but plz find her….
He disconnects the call.
Lak(monologue): he takes the chain form his pocket n holds it… I don’t know who u r n where are u. But what u did to my father is just the thing which made me think abt u. I couldn’t see u that day. I just saw ur chain lying on the floor… M sure that u are made for me n I’ll definitely get u. He keeps the chain in his pocket again…
Just then rags comes there….
Rag: sir… Shoot is ready director is calling u.
Lak : yeah m coming….. He goes to the director…
Director: laksh today the scene is u have to propose the heroine… N u didnt know her earlier but with the help of this anklet u cane to kniw abt her.but she will deny u… N did u get the concept.
Lak: yeah…. He goes towards the heroine.
Director: ready…1…2…3…action….
Lak closes his eyes n dreams abt his cindrella….he opens his eyes n sees towards the heroine. He imagines his cindrella….
Lak: u dont know how ur presence makes me crazy… When u come to me then I don’t know why but my heart start beating fast… I didn’t see ur face till now I started searching for u. Whenever u come near to me my heart recognise u… But I don’t why till now my eyes could not recognise. Atlast I found u… Will u… Be my better half.. I promise I’ll give whole happiness.
Girl: m sry I couldn’t love u….
Lak got pain in his heart… But y….
Girl: I dnt know anything abt u… N how can I believe a stranger like u… N it’s my life decision. N my father have the full right to take any decision regarding my mrrg. While laksh proposing the heroine ragini felt pain in her heart the pain of losing him. The pain which arises thinking abt his separation from her.
She turns her face to hide her tears.. She wipes n sees towards the act.
Lak: I know it’s somewhat strange for a girl n no one will agree to a stranger. If u want I can come to ur father n ask for ur hand….
Girl: I don’t love u.. N this is final. Don’t irritate me more plz… Saying this she goes from there. While our laksh stood there helplessly with tears in his eyes..
Director: cut it…. Very good laksh…. But laksh didn’t speak anything n goes from there…
He comes to his home…
Lak: I don’t know why but what if my Cinderella also deny my proposal… I can’t take that. I felt like my Cinderella spoke those words…. No…. I can’t take that….but what if she has a boy friend… Or what if she is married… No no no she is made for me. She is my Cinderella…

Scene freezes…. Guys tell me is it worth of reading. If yes then I’ll continue. Orelse I’ll stop it. N continue my ff…. Give ur opinion through ur comments.

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    54 Comments

    1. lovely on October 30, 2016 4:48 pm

      Nice

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 6:39 pm

        Tq lovely

    2. Fairy on October 30, 2016 5:04 pm

      Wowwwww dis title is soo catchy???? loved it dear…yes yes yes!!!plz do cont……???? m eagerly waitng to know whoz dis cindrella ????hope shez rags?????????loved raglak sooo much???? keep rockng n stay blessed dear….superb story yaar..???post nxt part soon☺

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 6:40 pm

        Tq fairy. M glad that you liked the concept of this SS. Yes I’ll continue but only if u say u will comment on this ff.

      • Fairy on October 30, 2016 6:49 pm

        Hehehe pkka dear i”Ll comment …?????bt post sooon okay???

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 7:27 pm

        Yeah sure fairy. I’ll post it tomorrow. I won’t make u wait… Tq again for commenting dear

      • Fairy on October 30, 2016 9:54 pm

        Aww!!!dats soo sweet of u???…take care☺

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:30 pm

        Tq fairy

    3. sanchami on October 30, 2016 5:08 pm

      Awesome yaar plz continue

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 6:41 pm

        Tq sanchami

    4. crystal089 on October 30, 2016 5:17 pm

      nice

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 6:41 pm

        Tq crystal

    5. Athira on October 30, 2016 5:40 pm

      Its super plz continue

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 6:42 pm

        Tq athira. N yeah I’ll definitely continue

    6. j on October 30, 2016 5:52 pm

      interesting

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 6:43 pm

        Tq j

    7. jazzy on October 30, 2016 6:23 pm

      Amazing plzz continue

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 7:26 pm

        Tq jazzy. Yeah I’ll continue…

    8. saranya on October 30, 2016 6:30 pm

      nice pls continue

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 7:26 pm

        Tq saranya. Yeah I’ll continue.

    9. Ammu on October 30, 2016 7:33 pm

      Interesting and waiting for next

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:26 pm

        Tq ammu

    10. asra on October 30, 2016 8:12 pm

      amazing story. .. plz continue dear don’t stop….it’s interesting dear…waiting for nxt one…plz update soon…tkcr dear…

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:27 pm

        Tq asra for commenting. I’ll definitely continue it.

    11. Malu on October 30, 2016 8:19 pm

      Awesome

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:27 pm

        Tq malu

    12. IQRA222 on October 30, 2016 8:43 pm

      wow its so cutte and fabulous
      please continue

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:28 pm

        Tq IQRA for commenting. I’ll definitely continue.

    13. Arjuna on October 30, 2016 9:06 pm

      Superb nd plzzzzzzzzz continue

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:28 pm

        Tq arjuna

    14. Keerthu on October 30, 2016 9:43 pm

      Super yaar

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:28 pm

        Tq keerthu

    15. Fats on October 30, 2016 10:03 pm

      Great start Maha. The story’s concept sounds interesting. Can’t wait to read more ?

      • maha6 on October 30, 2016 10:29 pm

        Tq fats for commenting. I’ll try to post the next part soon

    16. SPP on October 30, 2016 10:57 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic
      Loved it
      Really Amazing
      Please continue
      Waiting for the next one…………..

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 8:36 am

        Tq spp for commenting n mentioning abt ur feelings abt this SS. Yeah ill definitely continue. Plz continue ur support.

      • SPP on October 31, 2016 9:36 am

        U r always welcome dear
        And I will continue to support you till the end don’t worry
        Update soon

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 10:35 am

        Tq spp for supporting me. So sweet of u…. Tq very much

    17. Ragz_teju on October 30, 2016 11:40 pm

      it’s amazing… I loved it.. please continue… Happy diwali Dear

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 8:36 am

        Tq Ragz_teju for commenting. I’ll definitely continue.

    18. ammy on October 31, 2016 12:27 am

      Awesome

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 8:37 am

        Tq ammy

    19. Ashnoor on October 31, 2016 12:31 am

      Amazing

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 8:37 am

        Tq ashnoor

    20. A.xx on October 31, 2016 5:13 am

      nice I wonder how he’ll find his Cinderella.xx

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 8:39 am

        Tq A.xx for commenting. He will find her becoz she is made for him….. What say….

    21. Soni Mishra on October 31, 2016 8:54 am

      plzz continue I love it

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 10:34 am

        Tq soni mishra. I’ll definitely continue

    22. Radhika.. on October 31, 2016 12:53 pm

      Awesome di continue it . the tittle only is very attractive and the story is more attractive . hope ragini is laksh Cinderella only. Loved it di .love u ☺☺

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 2:07 pm

        __ radhu. N yeah I’ll continue. N __ for taking ur time to read this radhu.

    23. Samairaseth on October 31, 2016 1:21 pm

      Nice??

      • maha6 on October 31, 2016 2:07 pm

        Tq samairaseth

    24. Joyful Jessica on November 12, 2016 3:52 pm

      Interesting

      • maha6 on November 13, 2016 1:03 am

        Tq jessica

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