Surprise II
Woosh, woosh, woosh… Meher looked above at the small AC vent that sprayed fresh cool air on them as they sat in a small family cabin of a private jet. “Now can you tell me where we’re going Sarabjeetji” asked Meher for the fifth time. “I told you we’re going for a family holiday to Himachal Pradesh” replied Sarab calmly, casually flipping through the magazine in his hand. Meher grabbed the magazine and replied “I mean why are we going, you didnt mention anything, nor asked and all of a sudden you tell us to get ready shooshatak and in two hours suddenly we’re sitting in a plane flying to Himachal Pradesh.” “First of all Meherji, this isn’t a plane, its a private jet, with Covid and all the travel restrictions in place, I rented this to safely bring my family to and from the vacation. I have also made all the preparations for our stay there, and I know your worried about our home but don’t worry I had also informed Ajayji about this for the past couple days so he knew what to do. ” A couple days asked Meher shocked” slapping Sarab’s arm with the magazine again “you’ve been planning this for a couple days and couldn’t be bothered to tell me, you can tell Ajayji but can’t tell your wife” she hit Sarab again with the magazine. “Mamma” called out Seher as she joyfully climbed into Sarab’s lap, “why are you hitting Papa” she asked smilingly. “Yea Meher mamma why are you upset with Papa” asked Param next sitting next to Meher as Karan followed behind him. “Yea Papa planned such a nice surprise for us” said Karan excited! “Thank you baccho, only you three value me” said Sarab feigning hurt as he kissed Seher’s head.” “Oh please” said Meher cutting him off. “And puttarji said Meher holding Param, I’m hitting your papa because he was planning this vacation and wasn’t bothered to tell me. Tell me puttarji when you have a project at school do you prepare for it in advance or do it the night before”? “I always plan in advance mamma, and even you help me mamma” replied Param. “Exactly Puttarji said Meher as she kissed Param’s cheek. “If your papa was planning a surprise for you kids, shouldn’t he have told me so I could prepare things at home for when we go and also have things ready for when we come back. So when we get back home tired from the vacation, we don’t have to worry about laundry, or cleaning our room etc. “Your right Meher mamma, papa why didnt you tell Meher mamma” asked Param. “Meher mamma ka chamcha” replied Sarab softly. “What, what did you say” asked Meher. “Nothing” replied Sarab. “No no, you definitely said something” “Meherji, I didnt say anything” “you definitely said something, some moo mantra for sure” “Meherji am I crazy to argue with you, you my Bandarji and invite my downfall” replied Sarab folding his hands playfully. “Smart boy” replied Meher as the family burst into laughter.
After a couple hours the private jet landed in Himachal Pradesh. Sarab, Meher and the kids got off and got into the car that waited for them. They drove through beautiful greenery and large mountains. The kids ooed and eeed as they had their eyes glued to the windows. Sarab looked at them from the rear view mirror and smiled as he saw the kids so happy. He reached over to his wife sitting next to him and entwined his hand in hers, holding her hand as he drove through the long road. He was happy that the start of the vacation was going well, what starts well, ends well. After driving for 30 or so minutes Sarab slowed down and turned into a long dirt road. The long winding dirt road was narrow but after driving a few minutes turned into this beautiful large wooden bungalow. The bungalow sat elevated to the ground and had two stair sets leading up to the beautiful home. Across the home you could hear the crash of water as a great river ran around right next to it. Surrounded by tall green trees the home was secluded from the rest of the world and large mountains looked over the trees past the river. All three kids wowed as Sarab stood smiling watching the kids and Meher stunned by the beauty of what laid in front of them. They could hear no cars or engines, the only sound surrounding them was nature, birds chirped at the green tree tops and the water crashed through the rocks as it continued forming the crisp dark blue river. Slight winds flowed through the air moving through the tree leaves singing a song of their own, if heaven had a name it would be here for sure. Meher was speechless, now she knew why Sarab choose this place to vacation, no resort or water park or any man made hotel could come close to this, this place was designed by God, by Mother Nature and nothing could compare. Walking over to Meher, Sarab grabbed his wife from the back and pulled her close. Pecking his wife’s cheek he asked “so what do you think”? Still stunned by the natural beauty Meher replied “its beautiful” “not more than you” said Sarab looking at his wife. “Sarabjeetji you can flirt with me later but look around you” Meher pointed “this place is heavenly” “I don’t think so” Sarab replied “besides I did’nt come here to look at anything else, I came here to look at you.” Meher turned to look at her doting husband. “There’s no cell towers here, no signal, and not many people so finally no phone call or message or person can disturb us. I came here to spend time with you, to spend time with my kids, my world away from the rest of the world. Meher held Sarab and rested her head on his chest as she closed her eyes “It’s perfect” she said. “mamma, papa” the kids came running one followed by the other. “Maybe there is someone here after all to disturb you” Meher teased slapping Sarab’s chest as she walked towards the kids. “I can take care of that no problem” Sarab yelled behind Meher “I just need you to cooperate with me” he smiled as Meher turned around to show him a thumbs down and stick her tongue at him. Sarab loved when Meher made those faces, she did it more often than she knew, she often teased him with her tongue out and crossed eyes or by making a sad face and pouting when Sarab didn’t get his way. She would suddenly bring out the little kid in her and Sarab loved it, his Bandriji he thought!
“Mamma Papa, can we go swimming in the river? Please, please, please” the kids jumped together. “of course” said Sarab walking up behind Meher, “we’re going to go swimming, fishing, climb trees, zipline and so much more” he said picking up both Karan and Seher, one under each arm. “what do you think we’re here to do” he asked as he started running with the kids. Karan and Seher laughed as Sarab ran around with them. “Param let’s go” said Meher holding Param’s hand and running behind Sarab and the kids. The running and laughter between them soon turned into a game of tag, with one running and trying to catch the others. No one was tired from the flight or travel, seeing the beautiful home and scenic location had leased everyone a fresh new energy. It was a beautiful sight seeing Sarab, Meher and the kids so happy and content together. This was perhaps the first time that all five of them had been away together alone, so carefree and so content.
After running around and playing outside the family finally went inside and decided to rest before having dinner. The wooden bungalow was beautiful it was a two story double home that was combined together to make one big home. There was a big kitchen with both wooden gas and an electric one. The rooms were large and comfortable and almost every room had a view of its own to love. Meher and Sarab’s room was in the middle corridor and overlooked the beautiful river that ran by the house. The river was calm and wide at the end where it turned and then by the time it got to this side of the house it would crash through the rocks creating an amazing atmosphere. They had a large bathroom with two showers, two sinks and a large bathtub in the middle. The kids room was a few doors down on the right side of the home. In the middle there was a study and a library before having a small children’s playroom which was attached to the kids room. This home was owned by a family who know lived abroad but because they had a large family Sarab thought this would be an apt choice for his surprise vacation. The upstairs had more rooms and bathrooms followed by a small movie theater. Finally after running through the home and taking a quick shower the kids were hungry. Meher had just finished setting all their clothes and started to tie up her hair to begin making dinner. Meher was looking at the fridge and pantry doors when suddenly she felt her hair loose falling against her face, turning around she saw a smirking face of Sarab throwing and catching her hair pin, before Meher could say anything she felt herself pushed into the pantry and heard the door close behind Sarab. Turning on the single bulb in the pantry Sarab turned to face Meher. “Sarabjeetji what are you doing, the kids are outside!” Meher said quickly in a hushed tone. “Meherji” said Sarab holding Meher close “The kids are outside and we are inside, what difference does it make, besides how could I miss this chance” he continued slowly leaning down towards Meher. “Mr. Jatt in Toilet, have some shame, your the father of not one but three kids.” “So what, I’m the father of three kids and I definitely don’t mind being the father of one more” Sarab said with a wink, “or three, or four or five, actually let’s have 9 then we could make our own cricket team” he said excitedly.” Putting her hand on Sarab’s mouth to cut him off Meher replied “I am very happy and very tired with just three kids, you try giving birth to one and then tell me about 9.” “Fine” said Sarab, “three kids and the two of us are perfect, besides Yuvi and Kushi are also our own kids, right” asked Sarab? Seeing her husband mention her brother’s and his sisters kids as his own, swelled Meher’s chest with pride and love. Apart from his handsome looks, Meher loved the heart of her Sardarji even more. He loved and cared for everyone around him without any discrimination or self motive. He was always there for everyone and showed his love freely, except his love for his wife, that was reserved just for Meher and just that thought alone gave Meher butterflies which was enough for her to pull her Sardarji down towards her.
After their little moment in the pantry, Sarab and Meher now both sat on the outside deck. Meher leaned towards Sarab resting her head on his shoulder while Sarab had his hand around his wife. They both used a throw to cover themselves from the slight cold wind and sat quietly enjoying the sound of water and the swaying of the trees. Life was peaceful after so long. After having a nice big meal the kids played ball outside for sometime until the sunset and then finally tired from the day they went to bed. After several quite moments Meher quietly, in order to not ruin the moment asked Sarab “Sarabjeetji, will you tell me now why we actually came here”. Sarab looked over at his wife and kissing her head replied “how do you always know Bandriji” ” I know you better than yourself, just like how you know me” Meher replied “we’re both halves without each other, the other piece knowing the other better than themselves.” Sarab smiled “I really wanted to bring you and the kids out somewhere, somewhere where my wife doesn’t have to worry about fighting the next problem, somewhere where my kids can be kids. And honestly if I had to live like a farmer my whole life or some small retail worker in order to live here like this with you and the kids I’d choose that anyday. But unfortunately we have responsibilities and a busy world we have to go back to. But before we do that, before we go any further there is something I need to do” Sarab said looking out in front of him. “You want to tell Karan don’t you” asked Meher? Sarab looked over at his wife and with a slight sadness in his eyes nodded in approval. “I have to Meherji, the more we delay the more I feel like I’m lying to him. It won’t make a difference in our relationship or it might but either way I’m going to tell him. “I knew that you would tell him” Meher replied “and I think its best you do it yourself, your Bandru adores you and I’m sure he would want to hear about it from you only.” “Like how Param only listens to you” asked Sarab getting a smile in return from Meher “Whenever you think is the right time to tell him, tell him and if you need me, your Bandriji is always here, right next to you” said Meher snuggling closer to Sarab. Holding her close Sarab smiled, his heart said that everything would be fine, he knew his son but his brain wanted him to tell Karan the truth and so he would. Not any time but tomorrow itself. Meher and Sarab sat there enjoying each other’s company, living in the moment. Now Sarab had no worries for tomorrow, he closed his eyes and enjoyed his today.
Next morning Sarab was busy getting his boots on when his Bandru came running to him waving his head cloth. “Good morning my Bandru” “Good morning papa” replied Karan happily. “Meher mama already got Param and Seher ready and they’re walking to the nearby fruit farm to pick fruits.” “Good” replied Sarab as he tied Karan’s head cloth “because papa and Bandru are going somewhere else” “where, where Papa” asked Karan excitedly “Slowly puttarji, your head cloth will be tilted, we’re going to the market to pick up some groceries and other stuff, we can then walk up to meet your Meher mama, and Param and Seher at the local restaurant for lunch, sounds good” asked Sarab as he finished tying Karan’s head cloth. “Great, let me go get my boots too, today I’ll wear my boots like you” replied Karan before leaving. Sarab grabbed his wallet and watch and held Karan’s hand before walking out the house with him. They walked outside the house and Sarab decided to take the short cut to cut the narrow driveway. They walked through the small bushes and found themselves surrounded by large trees. The tree’s made a canopy over them with the sun peeking through the holes in between. “wow papa, this looks just like my fairy tales, so pretty” said Karan excitedly. “Karan, puttarji fairy tales are great, they give you an inspiration when you feel down in life but we should always be living in the moment. You should have stars in your eyes but you should also be able to look at the world in front of you. Like look at these beautiful trees and this quiet nature, there are minimal cars here and everyone lives so happily, do we get to see this in Punjab”? asked Sarab as Karan nodded no. “The amazing thing about traveling puttarji is you get to see different parts of the world and meet people who don’t live like you, its like reading a new fairytale, every new destination is like a new book and every new person we meet is like a new character in that book. I want you to live life and actually see these fairytales, this way you not only get to read the fairytale but you get to live it puttarji” said Sarab picking up Karan and walking with him on his shoulder. Karan laughed and both father and son continued walking happily. Karan looked at the trees above him and heard birds singing. Karan saw a nest of birds and poked at Sarab’s head while he had his eyes glues to the top “papa look a nest, look you can see the small birds beak, they look so nice” said Karan fascinated by the birds. Sarab looked up to see a nest of Crows. Sarab put Karan down and seeing the birds felt as if God was giving him an idea. “Karan puttarji those are Crows” said Sarab. “They’re so pretty Papa, they look big and strong and they sing so well” said Karan still looking at the nest. “Crows are amazing creatures puttarji, they can not only make their own tools but they also use those tools to accomplish their tasks. They can make things out of wood and leaves and use those to care for their family, they’re one of the most intelligent birds. In fact if there is a danger nearby, crows will inform other birds and warn them about it, Crows are also known to remember our faces.” “So if they saw me, they’ll remember me” asked Karan stunned as Sarab nodded. “Hey guys, I’m Karanjit Singh Gill, guys I’m down here, can you see me” said Karan jumping up and down excitedly waving at the birds. Sarab smiled and replied “but do you know why I really like Crows” Karan shaked his head “why” asked Karan. “Because Crows have a good heart, they don’t look as colorful and pretty as the other birds but they are really kind, helpful and loyal. Koyal’s the birds who sing really well” continued Sarab “Koyal’s will often place their eggs in a Crow’s nest and in turn push out the Crow’s eggs and then fly away. When the Crow comes back and finds the Koyal’s egg what do you think they do” asked Sarab now kneeling down next to Karan. Shrugging his shoulder Karan replied “I don’t know, Crows will also push the Koyal’s eggs out because they pushed out the Crow’s eggs” “No” said Sarab calmly. “The Crow treats the egg just like it takes care of his own eggs. He cares for the egg and loves it without thinking whether its his own egg or some other birds. When the egg hatches the Crow feeds the little bird” “Even though its a little Koyal” asked Karan quickly. “Even though its a little Koyal” confirmed Sarab “The crow takes care of the little Koyal like it takes care of his own, feeding it, keeping it safe, teaching it to slowly fly and then when the Koyal is big enough to fly, it flies out of the nest one day to go build his own.” “Wooow” said Karan quietly in awe. “Puttarji I need you to look at me” said Sarab slowly turning Karan towards him. “Puttarji what I’m about to say will never change the love I have for you in my heart. I love all my kids equally but there’s a special bond between us, all you kids have my heart but my Bandru is just my Bandru.” Karan smiled as Sarab continued. “Puttarji, both you and I are like the Crow and the Koyal” said Sarab slowly gauging Karan’s reaction, when Karan didn’t react Sarab continued. “Puttarji, your Meher mama and I got married when you were already an egg, Meher mama brought you as a baby in her tummy with her, I wasn’t there when she had you but I was there when you were born, even before you were born I was there to feel your first kick. I saw your first pic at the hospitals monitor and was there with you before you even entered this world and I will always be with you Puttarji as long as I have air in my lungs and as long as my heart beats, you will always find your Papa next to you” Sarab said engulfing Karan in a hug. “So I’m like a Koyal who was given to you like that Crow” asked Karan “so I was the only Koyal” he continued “not Param or Seher but just me, I’m like that Koyal” asked Karan again slowly. Afraid of what Karan’s next reaction would be Saran nodding slowly. Karan was just a kid, that’s why Sarab wanted to explain to Karan in a manner that he could understand, Sarab didnt want to throw medical processes at him and confuse him and make such a big revelation at the same time. His sons mind would be overwhelmed and Sarab didnt want that, that’s why Saran opted to tell him in a storybook like way, but now that Sarab had told him he waited nervously for Karan’s next reaction. Sarab prayed silently to God, he prayed that his son would understand his emotions more than his words and would remember his feelings over the new facts. Karan stood there still processing the new information and all Sarab could do was wait and pray. Time froze for Sarab, his heart beat louder than those crashes of waves and if anyone could hear it Sarab was afraid all the birds and animals nearby would run away hearing how loud his heart beat. Sarab prayed to God because it was not a matter of him, it was a matter of a father, a father was desperate for his sons approval, a father was desperately hoping that these worldly facts would not come in the way of his sons love. At that time a father prayed and waited for his son’s next words, for his son’s next reaction, this was no longer Sarabjeet Singh Gill who could fight the world, this was simply a father kneeling down next to his son. A father who waited for his son.
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Finally 🥳🥳🥳 there are tears rolling down my cheeks @dropofthought… the emotions portrayed are just😍😍😍😍😍 be it romance, mother son bond, father son bond or father daughter bond… every single bond is perfect… and sarab and his little bandru is just 😍😍😍 thank you so much for this treat .. sabr ka phal meeta hi hotha hain..
Keep writing dear…
As always waiting for the next one…
The article you wrote is just “PERFECTTT!!!” May i ask you a question @dropofthought?? Are you a writer by profession coz you writing is no less than professional in this field..Thanks for all the postive vibes..I must say why don’t you promote it on instagram..Fans who are upset will gather more here and enjoy a better company..Good idea @Radhika @MD @Bacii
Radhikaji thank you very much, your words and comments always bring a smile to my face, I look forward to your feedback possibly more than you looking forward to the chapter. 🙂
Pixelss thank you so much I’m flattered with your question but no I am not a professional writer this has been in fact my first tryst with writing anything let alone a fan fiction, I started this when I wasn’t happy with the episodes when Meher was kidnapped and resumed now again. A little bit about me I’m currently working and preparing for my exams and further studies hence why it takes some time for me to update the next chapter, I like to read books fiction, nonfiction, mythological are my favorite, anything that’s not a romantic novel lol and here ironically I write this, I’m not sure for how long I will write but we will see. Also I don’t have instagram or any social media accounts so I cannot promote this on there, if you would like then please feel free to but please be kind enough to give me credit and share this link directly. 🙂
@dropofthought really glad to hear that you wait so eagerly to read our comments.. and No dear you underestimate yourself.. the pull and eagerness to read your update is really a high level one..
About sharing on IG..I think dear its a very good platform to share writings.. maybe after your exams , once you are free you can try uploading posts on IG if interested.. definitely the fan following in IG is a huge one… let the world know this hidden talent dear… and who knows maybe someone may ask you to write for their show🤭😍😍😍
You literally have made my day beautiful, I thank you so much @Dropofthought,these is what I needed, to lift me up. Our lunch was burnt so had to do it all over again because🤭😁 I was cooking us lunch for got about it while sitting in my kitchen and reading your novel. One more memorable moment of CS for me!
Hahaha Ayni thank you so much, lovely to see your feedback as always, now just waiting for MD’s thoughts, the original MD not the other one lol. Also now I don’t know whether I should feel touched as my chapter got you so involved that you burned your food or feel bad that your food was wasted and you had to make It all over again. 🙂
No pls.@Dropofthought don’t feel bad, I don’t feel bad either.
Honestly guys writing the end of this chapter I was slightly hesitant because I was not sure on how the idea of a Crow and Koyal would be but I couldn’t think of any other option on how to tell a child such a sensitive issue. While it felt slightly childish at first I thought I’m also talking to a child here so maybe… What do you guys think?
@dropofthought the idea was wonderful… amazing.. and loved it 😍😍😍😍😍
Also please ignore the comment below which says bad about the writing with the name MD.. Its not our MD.. that’s megha Desai..just ignore her
It is a beautiful idea, Karan lived in his own world with his fairy tale books (recently bit less) so that is a perfect way for to explain him his origin.
I loved it!! It’s so hard to explain such complex things to children! To do it using an analogous way through the story of the crow and Koyal was great! Something Meher would have done in the show to explain to her kids!! Very creative @dropofthought
So incredible!!! As always 🥰😍😍 you have a talent my friend!! Please keep it up if you can!!! Thanks a million!
Hello friends!! So sorry for the late response! 🙈🙈 My best friend got married yesterday, so the wedding took up all my time!
Wow @dropofthought 🤩👏👌 this was such an lovely read that just brought so much joy and nostalgia for me of the good ok’ CS days 🥰 you captured the amazing Mehrab moments and the way they tease each other flawlessly!! The family vacation you described is the exactly how I wish the makers could have shown us, had the show continued. It was truly uplifting and I just didn’t want it to end!! And you left us with a cliffhanger!!!! I cannot wait until the next part!! Good luck on your exams and thank you for taking the time to entertain us all 🥰
Sorry friends for being negative but i couldn’t control my emotions really sorry..Guys..just read the article from etimes tv of Yuvleen aka Jeeto..in which she revealed that she was offered a role of a mother of one of the leads after avinesh was offered the role to be father of Seher!!! Heights of disrespect by the ph!!
@pixelss I also read this article. I was happy that it came out because it confirmed all the dirty politics that are taking place bts. I know that a lot of attention was placed on the news of Avinesh and Anita, but the truth is that the entire cast was disrespected!! I would like to see more of the actors speak out about what (if any) roles they were offered for the leap because it makes the PH look even worse!
@MD.. the makers have probably asked all the cast members to not reveal the details.. yuvleen was bold enough to talk about it… geetika didnt speak anything… dolly matto didnt say anything.. all actors wont talk about it😪😪😪 thats the sad truth… but one thing is for sure… they forced the entire cast to quit!!!
Unbelievable! I just can’t seem to comprehend how such a destructive decision can be made! And it is getting difficult and in motivating to watch these remaining episodes. Thank goodness for @dropofthought for these posts!!
Just saw the promo..MY MEHRAB💔💔😭😭..Rest is Just shit..same story but in a canadian fixture and a modern one..Nimrit having mehrab tattooed in her IG post..(hope that reminds her why her debut show was successful).. Believe me these makers will be burnt alive in hell🤬🤬..Sorry for negativity
@Dropofthought, I mentioned your name on Instagram that you write an excellent story after some one was saying that don’t agree on the end of mehrab story and she/he will write his own! Hopping they come here in this page and read yours.
That’s so kind of you @Ayni!!!
Wonderful @ayni… thats so thoughtful… hopefully the prrson reads the ff and comments here too…
Will someone respond to my question please? @MD @Radhika Purohit @Ayni what post written by Nirmit is creating such a row? What about my Mehtab? And how was Puneet Kasar disrespected?
Asked this question on the written update thrice, but still no reply…
@Bacii.. I have left that site.. no more reading the written updates.. I think even MD and ayni are probably not keeping a track of the WU..
Its not a post written by nimrit.. it was an insta story of her crying over end of mehrab.. which almost everyone could pick up as fake crocodile tears.. it was pretty obvious that she isnt really sad.. because immediately after this crying drama video she posted her happy video of new look … basically her post gave the idea that she is celebrating her success and mocking everyone else…
And also she posted the promo in her feed.. which she has hardly ever done before…she didnt even post the promo of previous leap or her comeback after sickness in her feed..she has posted in stories but not and never in feed..
And Puneet issar sirs character was not given a proper ending or a purpose and he was made to stand around having to to do nothing in a lot of scenes.. which considering his experience in the field and his seniority is a huge disrespect.. if he has nothing to do in the scene.. then they shouldn’t make him stand around.. and not only him it applies to all characters of the show.. if the scene requires everyones attendance then everyone should have something to say…
Whatever @Radhika said is absolutely true..That crying part went overdramatic featuring only her as if she’s the only one sad out there..and then posting the new promo in her feed and even tagging avinesh😔.. Personally i think that ratings might jump after heavy promotion by the leads and even the OG cast who aren’t a part of it anymore (they still are attached to CS and its their humbleness that they are promoting it even not being a part of it)..If nimrit is sad she should have rejected the role of seher..but she didn’t as she is a newbie and wanted to remain under the tagline of CS.. Personally i did like the new male leads voice but that turban doesn’t suit him at all..In CS that turban suited well only on Avi,Puneet Sir,and Amal(jagaa veerji).. Jokingly sarab kk love story would have been much better than seher and rajveer..Even the cast didn’t receive a proper farewell..💔💔
Also at Bacii a few may feel nimrit is really crying from her heart… but honestly just think… they are all actors.. people who know very well to pretend cry infront of a camera…
Has anyone ever felt that she is not a really crying when meher is crying onscreen?? Well there lies the answer for this question if the tears are real… then when someone is really sad there is way of expression, a gesture that reveals the sadness… not a pretend video one makes by manipulating the other person just because he is too polite and too professional to refuse…
Look at yuvleen kaurs stories today.. or look at the post by the cast when kratika senger left the show.. yes they were all sad but no one posted a fake crocodile tear video!!!
And as for the cast promoting the show.. another farce by the PH and the channel!!!
@Radhika I completely agree. This is a cry for attention from the actress and very strategic of the PH to get the cast to promote the show and have offscreen pics of Avinesh and Nimrith so that those who thought that she had issues with her male lead would think otherwise. Again…this PH is so naive to think that fans can’t see through all of these cheap tricks. It’s actually insulting 😡 @Bacci I too have given up on commenting on the written updates. It’s getting more challenging to tolerate the show as we approach the end. If I was in this industry and had the money, I would scoop up all the brilliant cast members and start a new show! But again…it’ll never be the same. Like all other loyal fans, I will assume that CS ended when Mehrab remarried.
By the way, I don’t get one thing. It is Nimrit’s debut show, and the other actors are much more experienced. So how come the makers are listening to Nirmit and not others?
Shouldn’t the other actors be their priority instead?
@Bacii.. good question and the exact answer can be given by the PH alone… and I dont want to speculate the reasons…
But shaika and cockcrow have proved that they dont value talent, experience and versatility.. they have different priorities and probably nimrit fits those bills and they would do anything to make and keep her happy…
Otherwise there are lots and lots of tracks which could have raised the TRP back to more than 2.0 if the makers used the talent carefully… yuvleen and geetika, abhishek and abhianshu all should have been given adequate screen space… a good story for dhillons including yuvi… focus on political issues… make meher enter politics.. meher handling the CS hospital.. harleen getting exposed.. kids having some issues at school…
And carefully observe… the CS Before nimrits break had meaningful tracks…post nimrits break makers purposely showed no story so that audience believe the false story that there is no story left for mehrab and with low TRP we need to take a leap..
And if the leap was so necessary to show sehers story.. why not get a 18 year old young actress and keep avinesh and nimrit as mehar and sarab… but the makers actually didn’t want it… so this leap and this plan of nimrit playing seher…
@Radhika i think we must get our shoes ready…these makers seriously need some beating and harassment from us in public!!
Oh yess they do!!!
@Radhika @MD @Bacii I think we must forget whatever took place bts for a thumbs up for the leap..we must relish the joyful and happy memoy of the entire cast of CS.. Nimrits stories are really aching my heart💔. But for the next 2 days we must enjoy the memories which the casts are sharing through their IG’s.. Nimrit herself is giving farewell to the cast.. Seriously the makers are not even bothered to give a farewell to their own cast.. May be high in some pathetic weed!!
I’ve never been so insulted as a fan and on behalf of the actors. I’m living in denial that the episodes this week ever existed. What a complete waste of talent! I vowed to stay with the show out of respect for the actors and I will stay true to that. I really want this leap along with the PH to crash and burn. I’m not falling for PH’s tricks bts nor do I feel that whatever the female lead is posting is genuine. It’s all a facade. I don’t have any other shows that I watch, nor have I ever enjoyed a show so much (not counting recent tracks) so for me, this is a true loss 😢
Yaa the ig stories are too over dramatic and which actress celebrates so happily when she is shooting for her death sequence🙄
It definitely speaks to her immaturity and lack of professionalism, both of which you would think she would have gotten better over time while working with seasoned actors who have class.
Nimrit Kaur Ahluwalia is the worst female actress in the history of ITV!!! Whatever she is doing through her Instagram stories is insulting and disrespectful… she thinks she is fooling people by doing all these.. but no… infact there were already some sensible people who sensed trouble in her behaviour and predicted the outcome too.. but people like ua who had no clue thought it would be a rumour.. and assumed that she would have a professional behavior… BUT we were proven wrong.. and when people like us who had loved her for her role and performance in CS can see and understand that she isnt really emotional but is instead mocking the current cast by posting such stories and not shooting with them except for the death scene.. and she is probably the only actor who would celebrate and post about the death scene!!! That shows that she clearly didnt love her character as meher!!! We are so attrached to sarab and meher that we cannot bear to look at the pics.. and she has been playing the role for 2 years and she has the ability to post the videos of the death scene shoot .. I must say anyone can clearly say that she is celebrating her apparent victory!!! I have never had any dislike towards an actor offscreen.. she is the first one and whose I dont even like seeing any of her offscreen pics anymore!!!
I share your sentiments @radhika!! She has zero empathy and respect for her fellow colleagues. Honestly, I have a feeling that she has no remorse for her actions. As long as she remains in the spotlight, she doesn’t care about anyone else. She is extremely selfish and I hope one day she gets a taste of her own medicine! Seeing some of the actors on social media on their last day broke my heart!
@MD..Karma will definitely hit her one day… and that day everyone will tell her on her face that she is getting back what she did to others… So her happiness is only untill then.. the original cast of CS are obviously sad about end of CS.. they really didn’t sign up for this… but in future they will get bigger happiness..
True @Radhika.Its just depicting that she is very much happy because of the leap..The cast didn’t get a proper farewall also..it was done by some great fans who sent numerous cakes and appreciation cards..Dont know why the makers suddenly required bank episodes post leap with something like 15 new characters added post leap including nimrit..She also said that via her ig people would get numerous pictures but what she did was just reposted the fans hardwork,gloried herself,and took 2 bts a death scene and just a video of the farewell cake..Is this the way you treat your fans and cast..Is it??😳🙄..And to be honest the perfect sardar look is adorned by ghe character playing the grown up param rest all are looking pathetic making fun of themselves..Nimrit having contact lenses post leap for seher😂..Avi was sensible enough of not reposting nimrit stories to gain attention..Anyways i dont care what they show post leap!!
And @Radhika,@MD for replacement of avi they got
1) Mahir’s eye colour
2) Grown up param’s turban look
3) Height and angry as that of Varun
4) Dressing sense as that of Grown up Yuvi
5) Cuteness as that of grown up Karan
OMG..can you believe..for the replacement of an iconic character SSG they had to introduce these new 5 leads with a hefty amount..Still they forgot..Avinesh Rekhi is irreplaceable as a Sardar in CS..and we fans can proudly say that..They new ones can never ever match the aura,charisma and the standard set by the one and only Avinesh Rekhi.!!!
Avinesh’s IGTV itself speaks as to who is,who is happy and how a goodbye is given to your loved ones!!
Avinesh in Nimrit’s story:- I wish..(silent)..I could stay more..💔💔
We feel your pain avinesh sir https://www.instagram.com/p/CRtIw3mB4bJ/?utm_medium=copy_link
@Ayni… she had the nerve to ask him that question.. and she herself is saying she is feeling a lot… and laughs out loud!! Oh yeah right… she feels a lot of happiness and excitement!!
@Dropofthought.. please dont forget us.. I know you are busy with your exams… but if you could let us know an approximate date or day when you would upload the next part, it would be an easier wait🙈🙈
@dropofthought absolutely cannot wait until your next post!! It will make things so much better once we get another dose of your writing 🥰
@Radhika you know what , I was shocked when I watch her laughing💔. We defended her back then when people were talking about her behavior! I never thought, not in my wildest dream a professional actor can mix her personal life with professional one There is really no excuse for this. I think her mental health issues are not treated properly! Some screw is missing there. Haha she may went to one of those damp doctors of CS 🤔 Who still have no clue about blood types and treatment. They might advised her to be egotistic brat, as a part of therapy!!! Sorry for my open word but I 🤯🤯 regret supporting her for the last 2years.
True @Ayni.. I regret thinking that even if she is a newbie she would still behave like a professional… and therefore dismissed even the possibility of a generation leap with only her.. because i believed firmly that no PH would destroy their own hardwork of 2 years.. and letting avinesh rekhi sir go from CS is as good as stabbing CS right in the heart… and making every other cast member go can be treated as stabbing all the vital organs of CS!!! I feel so disgusted looking at nimrits stories and posts that I have muted her account today!! I thought of unfollowing first but then decided not to be immature like her!!! She will regret all this one day @Ayni… sooner or later..
But @Radhika yes she is newbie in acting but she had a profession befor that, isn’t? She should have some manner in any job she has does I think she got carried away with fame she is getting and lost in the process.
@Ayni.. who knows how she was in her profession before entering this field.. may be she was the same.. 🤷♀️🤷♀️
Nimrith went to law school. Not sure whether she practiced law afterwards or went into acting post graduation, but can you believe that?! You would think she would know a thing or two about professionalism, confidentiality, empathy, etc. Whether she knows it or not (and to me, it doesn’t even seem like she cares), she has lost a lot of respect and credibility from fans and her colleagues (though they are too professional to say so).
Mar diya mere mehrab ko💔..
As for Nimrit’s next two love interests as ‘Seher’, she look’s like their aunty and maybe the writers were looking for a ‘mother figure’ for those two young chap’s. One is a cheap imitation of Manav and the other an even more cheaper imitation of Sarab. Don’t just give up yet! She may yet not have the last laugh. The tears shed by Nimrit were very temporary, The real one’s might come later.
@AJ 👏 absolutely! I truly hope that the real tears come sooner than later. This leap looks like the knock off version of Mehrab’s love story. They will never achieve the greatness that once was CS with the original cast. They can never substitute any of the incredible characters that were built nor can they replace or make fans forget the actors that breathed life into those characters. They all deserve better. And I only wish these artists the utmost success. Perhaps this was a blessing in disguise. If this is how the PH unethically treats its artists, then it’s better for them to find a place where they will be respected and appreciated. I’m so impressed by Avinesh and how despite all this nonsense and injustice, he remains a class act. Cheers to all of the cast that were able to see this gong show to the bitter end 🥂
Absolutely right @AJ… Nimrit looks older than her own age and she is gonna play a role younger to her own age …. that overall makes her look like an aunty i front of the kid Male leads..
@MD… even i keep waiting to hear the news of the downfall of this show… and I am sure it will happen… because for any building to stay strong , foundation and pillars are important.. and CS lost its foundation and all the pillars.. and once the downfall of CS occurs we can probably see the real tears… but honestly when there are real tears she wont post it publicly in her stories.. but we will know she is crying even though we cannot see it… this is the first time I am wishing for the downfall of a show and its PH and Actress… Before this I may have disliked a show but never have I hated and wished something bad for any show… This crappy PH and nimrit forced me to do this
Oh shut up people! Stop passing personal comments.
@MD how dare you try to blacken the character of a woman? What do you mean by crush?
Have some etiquettes people, name calling isn’t acceptable at all.
This Radhika keeps messing up with a 13 year old, Snowflake.
This place has so much hate. Constantly targeting me, Snowflake, AJ, Kairavi etc. And you people forcefully ousted Jinny Jenny. What shame!
Radhika aunty, I am 15. What will you do now?
And madam MD, who are you to tell me what to do? I will comment on this forum and never stop. What will you do?
Oh shut up people! Stop passing personal comments.
@MD how dare you try to blacken the character of a woman? What do you mean by crush?
Have some etiquettes people, name calling isn’t acceptable at all.
This Radhika keeps messing up with a 13 year old, Snowflake.
This place has so much hate. Constantly targeting me, Snowflake, AJ, Kairavi etc. And you people forcefully ousted Jinny Jenny. What shame!
Radhika aunty, I am 15. What will you do now?
And madam MD, who are you to tell me what to do? I will comment on this forum and never stop. What will you do?
One and only @Megha Desai is doing this on other serials’ pages too. Like BB and Udaariyan. And she is defaming everyone. What do we do? @Radhika Purohit @Ayni @MD @Dropofthought
Ignore or laugh about it @Bacii there is no other way😏😕.
Can’t someone give her a response that shuts her up? Why aren’t the admins blocking her at all?
@Radhika Purohit @MD @Ayni @Dropofthought
@Bacii.. its okay.. just ignore it.. let her do what ever she wants… and if she is posting on some other sites then aftersometime the site itself will block her… We cannot do anything.. she needs medical attention and help🤷♀️
@Bacii I agree with @Radhika and @Ayni. Megha Desai is an attention seeker, which is why she keeps reposting the same comments repeatedly, hoping that others will have a reaction. She’s only 15 years old and has a lot of learning and maturing to do.
Nimrit already started receiving hate along with the lead before her new begining..Fate,Karma already hit her hard!!
And Nimrit is not receiving the love and affection from the CS cast either. For example, the actress playing Harleen has reposted in her Insta her thanks to every cast member, past and present, but “by mistake” left out Nimrit! I don’t think this was an oversight at all. Other cast members are more diplomatic. A particular actress I think who could have played the grown up Seher is Yamini Malhotra – young, bubbly, pretty. Nimrit is far too old to play a college girl. She could even play mother to one of the newcomers – just some makeup would do. Nimrit even now look’s 35 plus, despite being 26/27.
Rightfully so! She clearly doesn’t care about sacrificing her reputation, integrity and her fellow actors. She made her choice. She chose to get ahead in her career and have the show be all about her, no matter the cost. The PH somehow decided it was worth it to wipe the entire talented and experienced cast to retain a female lead whose acting is nowhere near as talented and able to perform at the calibre of Anita or Avinesh. Nimrith, along with the PH has an ego and enough arrogance to think that she alone is strong enough to carry the show forward. What if she has a problem with any of the new cast? Will she just have the PH fire them too??!! Does the PH work for her now??!! I’ve never wanted a show and actress to fall flat on their face so badly as I have with this leap.
@MD.. my sentiments exactly… and I am so happy that with every passing day more and more people are becoming aware of the truth including her own fans… karma.. definitely what goes around comes around
Yaa @AJ both simran and nimrit were good friends till date but god knows both unfollwed each other recently on IG..A single reel with the new male lead has not only made her a bad figure in front of csians,avians but even her own nimritians are speaking out the bitter truth in the comments section of her new post..Just go and check out..People from every fandom are unhappy with her behaviour..the comments section is filled with hatred towards her attitude..See this is happening so soon..God knows whats gonna happen further in future and surprisingly as many as 20 new characters are coming in aling with nimrit and they are promoting leap by putting the background of mehrab photo with a garland and nimrit herself would see that photo in which she is garlened..Lol😂😂
Nimrit story with the said lines :- No matter how good you are there will always be someone who is against you..Isnt that the greatest irony now😂😂
And surprisingly to that post of nimrit colors channel head Mrs Bharti Sharma(dropsunshine31) commented some emojis with this one 🤞 (fingers crossed)..she herself is uncertain that the will the show continue any longer with good ratings..Karma hitting them!!
Hey guys! I’m so sorry for not posting anything this week. I just got a new tank that I’ve been trying to set up and something or the other keeps not working so that’s a headache on its own. With that and work and the train wreck that the show has now taken I had taken this week off from all this headache. I am not at all interested in watching Seher aka Nimrit’s new yet as AJ mentioned old looking avatar, not even for the sake of watching the shows downfall. This dud of an actor opposite Nimrit can barely make a decent reel how in the world is his suppose to act or take on the monumental lead Avinesh has left behind, he can’t, period. Also while Param looks decent I doubt even he can act seeing his childish reels but that at least gives Nimrit a reason to connect with them something she didn’t have with Avinesh, they’re all childish and immature and lack class and maturity. The same goes for Megha Desai, I mean 15 saal ki bachhi hain, use kya hi argue kare hum so Pomel I think everyone just lets her be for that reason, she’s upset because of some reason hopefully she’ll come around one day and that day she’ll be as welcome as everyone else here. Thank you so much Ayniji for posting about me on instagram and trying to promote the page, it really means a lot. And Radhikaji the next chapter I am also confused because I don’t know where to take the story now as Sarab is shown to be dead. While it will continue with Karans revelation I don’t know if I should continue as if their accident didn’t happen or maybe try to show another logical way to end the characters. A bit confused any suggestions from you all would be appreciated. I really wished this forum would inform me of your replies, I’m very happy to see people discuss their thoughts on here, thanks to every single one of you.
@dropofthought..
PLEASE NO!!! Dont get the climax like the show please… we dont want mehrab to die… please no… show a happily everafter with karan accepting sarab and also his siblings… please take your own time to write the next chapter and also about the ending…
But please give a happily ever after and not death of mehrab… please please.. please
Dear @Dropofthought I wish I could do more than just mention about your excellent work! Because you deserves more! You have given us a wonderful stories each of it. I appreciate and love your work and wanted others gets to read it. I still hope all Merhab’s fans who are desperate about the tragic end, come to know and read about your thoughtful and lovable story and showers you with love and appreciation. Pls keep up the great work whenever you can, because idea how to write it you proved us more than once! You have been kind even more modest to us all.
So nice to hear from you again @dropofthought 🤗 please continue the story and keep the chapters coming! It’s so joyful to read your work!! I agree with everyone…it’s best not to kill off our favourite jodi of the century!! There is still lots to explore! @Radhika and @Ayni, along with others on this forum have had such wonderful ideas that would have kept the show going without resorting to this leap. If I had your talent for writing, I would have used @Radhika’s idea about a rebirth of Mehrab and started a new beginning that way!! As always, thank you for taking the time to write such wonderful fiction and for participating on this forum 🥰
And now the actress has got some exclusive picture of the previous couple and is sharing personally to the fans and have no guts to share that on her profile..Yea why would she do that..That couple has ended for her Na!!..My last comment about the controversy going on SM
Don’t kill them please. The story will be a lot better with the lead couple than it would be without them.
Wonderful writing @Dropofthought! That’s an excellent piece and truly worth all the praise. I felt as if I were myself a part of all those scenes. You have described the nature so beautifully.
Only thing that I would say is that the sentence structure wasn’t very easy to understand. I think that could be resolved with a better usage of grammar and punctuation.
Rest was flawless.
Also, please do mention Manav in the upcoming section. No need to tell the entire story, just say that he had met with an accident and was presumed dead. Like Meher made Param love Simran, Sarab should make Karan love Manav too. So I would love it if you do it.
As for killing Mehrab, please don’t do it. It is amazing the way it is. Let this story process naturally without any outside influence, don’t take any inspiration from the makers. You are going great without it!
And yes, Megha Desai is my sister. Extremely sorry to everyone for all this bad behavior. That’s all a result of awful company, that she has completely ruined herself and her personality. I tried a lot to bring her in the right track, but couldn’t. Sigh!
Forgive me guys! @Radhika Purohit @Ayni @MD @Dropofthought @Pomel
@Radhika Desai.. Welcome to the forum..
Dont take me wrong but if your sisters behaviour os because of bad company then maybe you should have a talk about with your parent/guardian.. or take help from school authorities.. we are unknown people and what she says or does will hardly have any effect on us.. just an advice..
And no hard feelings towards you dear..