Choti Sardarni 21st December 2020 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
Scene 1
Meher says I will expose the ghost.
Manav says to his men look in teams for Meher and Sarab. Meher comes and asks people if they saw kids. They dig a hole for her. Meher makes the round slippery. She says now the ghost will scream for help. Meher hears noise. She comes out. She sees grass.
Param counts 3. 2.. 1.. the kids scream help. Meher and Param come there. It’s the same kids, their bodies are itching. Meher put clump in the bucket and it fell on them. Meher says sorry kids. I thought it was an adult. Meher brings water and cleans them. Meher says it will heal in a bit. A kid says why are yoy crying? Meher says all kids are equal for a mother. They say but we don’t have a mother or father. Meher says why don’t you become friends with Param? Param shakes hand with them. Monty says no one will become friends with him. They say this is our playground, empty it today,
Param says no one wants to be my friend. Meher sees him sad. Sarab is leaving. Meher says you can’t go. He says where will money come from? We need food. Meher says we cannot take this risk. He says I want to take this risk for my family. I can’t see my kids hungry. Meher says I thought we were together but you’re not listening to me. Sarab says where will we eat from? Meher goes inside in anger.
Scene 2
The kids leave nails on the road. Manav’s car punctures. He asks kids if there is a puncture stop. He says yes raju puncture shop. Raju gives them commissions. Manav hears, they get scared. Manav gives them money.
Manav shows kids photos of Meher and Param and asks if they have seen them? Kulwant calls. Kids couldn’t see the picture. Kulwant asks could you find about Meher? HE says no I will inform you. THe kids are gone.
Meher says don’t worry Param. Yuvi wasn’t your friend either but you became friends with time. The kids are playing around. Meher fills the water bucket. Meher asks Param to bring the second bucket from home.
Scene 3
Sarab says okay Meher I won’t go for work. You care about me and I care about the kids. Param picks the bucket to take to Meher. He can’t pick it. Sarab says I will take it. You take care of Karan. Param says your milk is finished? I will fill it. He sees the milk is finished. Param says I will bring milk for you but papa asked me not to leave you alone. But how do I take you? He sees a wooden cart and puts Karan in it.
Param comes to milk shop with the card and says give me milk. He says I dont’ have money. The shopkeeper says then no milk. A man leaves his money. Param picks the money. He looks at Karan crying. Param comes to the man and says uncle you forgot your money. He says you are such a well mannaered kid. God keep you happy. Param says to Karan sorry I couldn’t get you milk. I will do something but where do I get the money from.
Episode ends.
Precap-Meher says where are Param and Karan? Param begs people for money and says my brother is hungry. Meher and Sarab see him begging people for money. Meher slaps him.
Update Credit to: Atiba
27 Comments
Like seriously, writers have gone mad in showing stupidity🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️…
Don’t get who deserve slaps more producers or writers for spoiling show😠😡🤬😠😡🤬😠😡😡
It’s sad – I really liked this show. I thought it was a lovely story about the love for our children – i.e bond between Param and Meher and how it healed her and her fighting for her unborn… but lately her character has evolved into something else …
I too use to like this show as it was with different concept: that is how a step mother and step father accept each other children with their past… But now they are totally off story… In middle i left this show and had thought that this custody drama will end soon.. but this is dragging more than any story…
Meher, please slap yourself before slapping Param.. 😕
100%!
Right apni itni badi galti kuchh nahi, vaise maher used to say I married manav so how come sarab her husband?
Let’s take a moment to reflect here. A young boy who is otherwise given every wish and desire as a very rich son of a very important and affluent man in a mansion etc is suddenly taken by his parents and told it’s a “game”.
He’s thrown into an unknown and very harsh environment with very little told or explained to him about what is going on.. He is taunted, thinking there are ghosts and then kidnapped and rolled around in the dark…
If all of this isn’t enough ..
He is then given the task to supervise his baby brother (he’s way too young to be left alone let alone to be left in charge of a baby too) by his Dad.
He clearly has lost a feeling of a secure safe and stable world around him and is traumatised and panicked. So he decides to “help” his little brother (as a small kid who is traumatised and worried about his world might!).. he clearly doesn’t understand that he needs money to get things (he is clearly very sheltered growing up with luxuries – none of this is his fault). He decides to ask the adults around him for money because his motivation is to feed his baby brother.
Param obviously has lost trust in his parents to be able to provide for his brother or himself and so in an act of asking for money they show Meher come up to him and SLAP HIM?!
Both Meher and Sarab have made very bad parenting choices by ending up where they are but most of all it was appealing to see Param left unsupervised in the care of an infant. Param was also left unsupervised in that park earlier which was the only reason those kids came and started to bully him.
But after all this to see Meher slap a poor innocent little kid … I’m sorry but that’s just too much. This is unacceptable.
Meher 😡😡😡😡😡. I never like meher. Sorry for all respect. Indeed,only support Sarab. Sorry since this kulwan family came arruined Gill family.
Whats wrong with mehar?? 🙄🙄 why is she hitting param?? Poor p for param.. and whats wrong with the writers…what are they trying to show i dont understand 🤷♀️🤷♀️ It was such a wonderful show and now viewers are noteven understanding whats going on..
What the heck Meher slapping Param…maybe he wouldn’t go beg if his parents were responsible enough to think about their kids well-being instead of their stupid ego😡…This is not teaching humble life but emotionally & physically torturing small children 🤨. It is unbearable now..these kids don’t deserve it…Param & karan will have more stability in foster care than with those stupid delusional parents 😒 .
Meher slapping Param, heartbreaking. If the writers are trying to prove that Sikhs do not beg, this is a ridiculous way of expressing this theme. How can you leave an infant in the care of a six years old child. It is beyond thinking. A responsible couple raising two children is now turning into an abusive family. There is child neglect, physical, financial, emotional and psychological abuse. Sometimes, it is ok to ask for help; it is not for Mehrab; it is for their two children whom they love dearly. Grow up, please, writers, producers. What are you trying to prove? For the last couple of weeks, the show is off track.
It is hursh to say that a foster family is better than the Meher and Sarab, they are Singh they don’t beg. A mother’s love questioned just because he gave him a slap? Pls. be responsible isn’t that normal in India to slap a child when parents thinks that children taking wrong path? For sure she will apologize to him and every thing will be forgotten. That will not kill him.
Is giving Karan’s custody to his biological father who loves and cares about him so much so bad that they are ready to keep their kids starving but not give to him?
Earlier Sarab had mentioned how he could afford and provide everything to Karan that Manav could so it made no difference who had the custody. Well then let Manav have it. How does it makes any difference anyways.
Besides in the current situation he is not able to afford all those facilities that he had taked about.
@Gv having a childs custody is not all about having money and the facilities that are given to a child.. do you mean that all the unemployed citizens in India dont have a right to get married and have a family?? Or should the mothers just give away their child if the biological father of the child happens to be richer at this point of time?? Not to forget all that manav claims that he has is all a farce..because he is pretending to be vikram deewan he has all the facilities..as far as his job is concerned it will also depend on the disciplinary actions because inspite of his memory returning he never did anything to inform it to his superiors..he has continued living his false identity and has been cheating the government.. my point being even his luxuries are not something thats permanent…and as of now the BIGGEST PROBLEM in giving karans custody to manav is that he is still married to aditi and giving him custody means that karan is gonna be near aditi.. inspite of knowing how wrong aditi is and how evil she can be, manav is still staying with her in gill mansion.. tomorrow when he goes to work and karan is under aditis care who knows what she is gonna do to karan..
AND YES ITS TRUE THAT THERE WAS NO NEED FOR MEHAR TO SLAP PARAM..it was unnecessary because PARAM ALWAYS UNDERSTANDS GOOD VALUES TOLD TO HIM CALMLY ITSELF..HE ALWAYS LISTENS TO HIS PARENTS..SO THERE IS NO NEED TO SLAP OR HIT HIM TO MAKE HIM UNDERSTAND ANYTHING…BUT..we shouldn’t also forget that the same mehar in Saturdays episode made param eat food by herself staying hungry…can anyone assure that tomorrow if such a situation comes then aditi will do the same for karan?? AND AS FOR MANAV THE FIRST THING HE SHOULD DO IS TO DIVORCE ADITI BECAUSE HE SHOULD KEEP ADITI AWAY FROM KARAN… AS A FATHER ITS HIS RESPONSIBILITY TO RECOGNIZE THAT ADITI IS A BIG DANGER FOR HIS SON..and if he hasnt realized it still..then its his dumbness..
And also suppose karans custody is given to manav and due to any reason manav loses all the wealth he has now..then what?? Bounce the kid back to mehar and sarab?? Are these what a parent child relationship is all about??
If one doesnt have money then give away ones own kids?? What kind of moral value would that be??
And we shouldn’t forget that even mehar and sarab are not used to such hardships in life..they also had a privileged childhood and an adult life..even they have come to such circumstances since 2 days… but that doesn’t mean that just because one is hit with poverty all of a sudden one can give away their child.. and they are not purposely making the kids suffer or anything..they are not like aditi who is deriving pleasure out of torturing other people…both mehar and sarab are trying their level best to make their children comfortable…( though its true there was absolutely no need for them to leave gill mansion in the first place but since they have left saying nothing changes it)..
When Sarab had moneyand status all said meher can win and know Sarab doesnt have they can take their children. Right Manav has money he can take Karam. Some doble speech. For me the real guilty ,meher family and her. So, meher doesnt deserve Sarab neither manav
Gv for me the problem is that Sarab does not acknowledge that Manav is THE dad of Karan. The show runners seem to be sadistic… in that they are putting them in some very unrealistic situation (problems) and that too through some clunky ways and then they solve it in some unrealistic ways. The show has jumped the shark so many times that it is jarring to watch it. The story line if was given some thought could have been executed well. Manav is not evil like some characters but us not perfect too… the dynamic of the lead pair with such a character could have been shown in an interesting way… where it is not easy to resolve it as Manav is not outright bad… Also it had to be Meher who spoke to manav ( being the titular character i.e the sardarni) but they did a huge disservice to her by having Sarab being given a more prominent voice when they speak to Manav.I am not saying Sarab should not interact but it should have been prominently meher
Narayana, you are absolutely right. I have expected a lot from meher but she failed miserably. She had a past with maanav but never tried to explain her current situation to him in a right manner.
@Narayana
That’s right. Sarab does not thinks giving Karan to Manav is even an option. The kids should rather starve than staying with Manav. Fact is Manav loves and cares about Karan a lot.
@Radhika Purohit
I think that kids should be with their parents even if they are poor. But the person in question here is one of the parent and not any third person. Agreed Sarab loves Karan equally but Manav loves him too. There is not one right or wrong here. Both parents have equal rights as well as duties. The situation portrayed here is far from reality. The current situation portrayed for Sarab and Mehar is where they cannot even afford basic amenities. In such situation Manav can take care of his kid. Besides he is not at all a bad man. Regarding Aditi, she was never Manav’s priority over Karan. He was ready to leave her earlier as well (which I think was wrong on his part to dump her like that), he might in future as well if he has to for his kid.
Parent-child relation is not about money but the fact that they are not even able to provide the basic needs to the child while other parent can gives him an edge.
The current track is not good. The money Sarab earned as a minister belonged to him. He gave even that up. When Amrita wanted to start coaching classes Meher had claimed the house belonged to her father as well. Now even if they want to start on their own, what about the fact that they are educated and can at least try to do some job like clerk or peon if no one is giving them any other job because of defamation. They are shown to be doing labor work not even trying for a job.
They need the money right now not in a month, if they look for a job they will be paid in a month but they have to feed them now.
I used to love this show. Now not so much
Meher is being so much insensible so if she doesn’t go for work and doesn’t allow Sarab to go to work either what are they and the kids going to eat? If Sarab is not well and has to rest then she should go and look for food. So if they all sit at home will the food come from nowhere and appear in front of them? She left Param with no choice but to beg for money to feed his small brother. The money was not even for his food but his brother’s milk yet he was slapped. He just proved that he is caring and generous as he though of his small brother and was reasonable enough to think what his brother will drink wen the milk he had is done. Meher should have explained in a better way other than slapping him because he has no fault in all this but the circumstances that pushed him to those limits.
The show has become a no show of late.
Writers has no problem showing a small boy begging for his brother food but can’t show shared custody which would solve all the problems. The poor life drama doesn’t feel relatable but forced. If they went bankrupt it would make sense but leaving house unnecessarily without money is above my understanding. I am still waiting for the story to take a mature turn and introduce shared custody as many are asking for ages. There is no reason to have this “poor life” track, meherab must have savings or qualifications and beside they have rights over their family inheritance no matter what. Manav has also rights over karan. The best for everyone is to stop their stubbornness and co-parent like mature adults so the children finally get the healthy environment they deserves.
I guess we are now getting to see the realities of relationships. So far we got to see a very understanding couple in Sarab-Meher. However, the shortcomings in their relationship are visible now. On the other hand, we have Aditi and Vikram, I never really thought that this relationship would survive but seems that their relationship is far stronger than it looks.
Hi everyone. Even I started Disliking this show. This show has always made me happy but now it’s getting irritating.
Nonetheless Meher will regret slapping Param for sure. She will realise and it’s for sure.
Agree Meher didn’t do the Right thing slapping my fav P for Param but this action could be completely impulsive and she will definitely realise her mistake.
It’s so very painful to see your child beg. Param is begging because his parents don’t earn! It was totally Meher’s fault but she will Realise it.
Even my parents hit me once in my childhood when I was not even 1% at fault. I know it hurts so much💔
“I can feel you hurt Param ❤️ but your mumma will realise her fault soon :)”
Maybe the slapping of Param is someone’s bad dream.
Meher ne param ko slap kiya pahle jake khud ko ek jordaar slap kare kyonki aaj jo v param or karan ki ye halat hai uska reason sirf or sirf meher or sarab hai.
Or slap karne k baad regret karne ka kya fayda….. Or param kiniss condition ka jimmedaar kon hai….
Agar meher sarab ko kaam krne nhi bhej sakti. To meher khud v to kuch kaam kr sakti hai taki ek waqt ka khana de sake bacchon ko.
Pr nhi ab meher ko kaha kaam krne ki adat raha gyi hai meher ko to bs ab huqum chalana hi aata hai.
Meher Or sarab ka pet to bs ek dusre k pyaar se bhar jayega. Or ek dusre ko rab sabit karne se inka kaam to chal jayega pr bacchon ka kya…..
Ab meher na khud kaam karegi na sarab ko karne degi to param ko hi kuch karana padega to use jo theek laga vo vohi kr raha hai. Kyonki param ko to karan ko to dikh raha hai ko karan bhuka hai isliye vo logo se paise maang rha hai…..
Bechra param …..
Ek baat or meher ne manav ko to bada jimmedaari ka lecture diya tha ab kya jb inn pr jimmedaari nibhane ka samay aaya to meher or sarab kya kar rahe hai…… Param or karan ko theek se do waqt ka khana v nhi de pa rahe hai or nahi ek acche se rahne k liye ghar….
Or agar ye dono ko mahaan banane se fursat mile to bacchon k bare me soche na….. Apne bacchon k liye log duniya se lad jate hai pr inn dono ko puri duniya ki nazar me mahaan banana hai ki sb kahe wahi kitne acche hai meher or sarab ko apni sauteli behan k liye inn dono ne ghar chod diya Sare asho araam chod diye…. Inke jesa mahaan to koi ho hi nhi sakta….. Bs yahi gungaan sunna chahte hai.
Are koi v fesla lene se pahle ek baar to bacchon k bare me soch lete ki ab inke decision ka asar bacchon pr v padega…..
Bs innse badi badi baatein karwa lo…. Baki koi kaam k nhi hai ye dono…..
Bechte bacchon ko apne parents k mahaan hone ka fal mil raha hai.