Fan Fiction

Chahat (pt 3) by Aliya

The longest update! After reading this part you will get to know the upcoming story!!!
Let’s begin….

Rag comes down…
And sees charu.. She goes to her

At the time niel too comes
(Chaaru and niel are shaan’s parents played by Pallavi Kulkarni and Ronit Roy)

Chaaru teasing: you came this early…i thought you vl be late
Rag: maa..
Chaaru smiles
Rag takes her blessings

Tag goes to niel and was abt to bend
He moves back: no no no
Rag looks at him confused

Samar comes from niel’s behind..
And stands like niel

Niel: tumhe is budiya ne kaha na mere paav pakad ne ke liye!i know she is jealous of me…you ppl vl make me old…do i look like?
Samar was acting like him
Chaaru controls her laughter…
Rag too controls her laughter

Niel:u know beta.. wat ppl call me??
Sam acted the same

Rag: wat??
Niel: Hrithik Roshan

Sam burst into laughter

Niel turns:youuu…
Sam runs…

Shaan who was coming there held him
Shaan:wat??
Sam:same.old.dialogue
Shaan and sam both laughs and hifies..

Niel: Ragini beta..they r just jealous..wn i go with them you know wat ppl ask?

Shaan sam:are these both your elder brother’s
Niel: exactly!

Shaan sam laughs again…

Niel: ragini beta… You tell…how i look?
Rag: most handsome person in the world
Sam: if nobody are left in world
Niel:u just tell me.. your husband is handsome or me?
Rag:you dad!
Niel:dekha..kuch seekho
Sam:ha the same thing u were teaching 3 of us? And chote bha…
Niel: don’t take his name..he is always mom’s son
Charu: yes…i think someone is burning here!
Rag: papa..i m with you..!
Shaan:oh..party ha!
Niel: yes.. Mom and sons and dad and daughter
He tells looking at samsha and chaaru
Rag felt happy as she lost her father in her early age!

Niel side hugs Ragini

Chaaru: Ragini.. Today is your rasoi rasam..you hv to prepare some sweet!
Rag: ok mom
They goes to kitchen

Afternoon sometime
All hv the breakfast… And ragini serves the sweet dish to everyone
All tastes
Rag: howz it
All signs: ???

Rag smiles

Shaan:ok mom dad…m leaving
Chaaru:wr?
Shaan: there’s an important meeting mom…
Chaaru: aaj ragini ki mooh dikhai rasam hai…
Shaan:tab tak aa jaunga ma
Niel: post pone it beta
Shaan: no dad it’s important and i will be on time.. Ok
Chaaru:and bring gift for my bahu…its a ritual
Shaan smiles and nods
They nods
Shaan leaves.. he waves his hand to Rag
Sam: till now you didn’t wave your hand to any of us?
Shaan:bcs she’s my wife
Trio opens their mouth
He chuckles and leaves
Ragini laughs

Sam:i won’t marry! I had heard that after marriage every man will change
Niel: true beta..see wr i was and wr i HV reached
Chaaru glares him

Chaaru: ragini…i showed you a girl’s pic for Samar..i think i should cancel..
Sam: wat no no ma
Niel:naya naya dialogue!

Sam:babhi .. Let me show you our house..u didn’t got time to see…
Chaaru: yes.. Even i vl come

Sam shows each and every corner of the house and at last they moves to one room
Sam: this room is of bhaiyya’s chotu..i mean SANSKAR BHAIYYA
Rag sees the room which is simple and beautiful

Sam:and you didn’t see him..hai na!
He takes a small photo frame which is placed in side table..

Rag sees him…

And then places the frame back on the table!

Chaaru: he himself designed his room… He couldn’t come due to some emergency
Sam:mom..u know he said he can’t come for atleast 4 months
Chaaru: wat??? Wat to do with this boy??ahh…Ragini..u should get ready beta.. guests will be here soon
Chaaru and rag goes

Chaaru gives her lehenga and jewelry
Rag takes it…

Here shaan was in the meeting

Rag wears the lehenga and sits infront of the mirror…

She sees the vermillon box.. She remembers shaan applying on her forehead
Rag:this is only your right shaan!
She smiles..

She wears the jewellery

She see shaan’s reflection in mirror
He signs her ?
She turns and sees none.. She was hallucinating
Rag hits herself: Ragini.. She sees shaan’s photo
Rag: shaan.. This is wrong… You are distubing me in your absence… She smiles.. Plz come fast..nahi tho.. Your this wife will get mad!

Here shaan gets the deal… All congratulates him…

Chaaru brings Ragini down…

Chaaru:wr is this guy?

Here a guy comes out of the airport…
He was wearing a casuals and he has wore a Goggles..
He smiles widely: today i m gonna give the best surprise!

Here shaan goes to jewellery shop buys a pair of bangles
Shan: this bangles are blessed to be in my Ragini’s hand…
Sales pers:sir.. There is a riot going on!
Shan: riot?
Sales pers: Hindu Muslim riot..

(No intention to hurt anyone.. i already told this story is inspired me from the real one..)

Shaan comes out of the showroom and he was shocked seeing the view infront of him!

He sits in his car and drives fastly

Here lady:ragini beta!we got to know that you are a trained classical singer..
Rag smiles
Chaaru:meri bahu mein koi kami hai hi nahi!
Lady:we want to listen your voice beta

Here the guy sees the new in the airport abt the riot!

Rag sings:
Silsila yeh chaahat ka na maine bujhne diya (x2)
I haven’t let our love (here the lamp is symbolizes it) extinguish
Oh piya yeh diya naa bujha hai naa bujhega
Oh Beloved, this lamp hasn’t extinguished nor it will be extinguished
Mere chaahat ka diya, mere piya, ab aaja re mere piya
This is the lamp of my desire, My beloved, Come to me now, My beloved

Guy: wat to do should i go out not?? This ppl?cant they stay with the unity!

Here shaan’s eyes falls on mother and 3 kids…and few mens were approaching with the rod…

He stops the car and runs to save them…

The man was abt to kill a kid…
Bt shaan held the sword..

Man: who are you?
Shaan: wat you ppl are doing is wrong!
Man: now you will teach us! Do you know who she is and the kids
Shaan:u shouldn’t do this…wat the kids and the lady do to you?learn humanity!
Leave them!
Man and his gang laughs…
Man angrily:humanity!u know she is wife of the person who has fired some innocent people’s house
Shaan:may be..bt it’s her husband why r u dragging them?
Man:wat our ppl did to them?
Shaan:i understand.. And he should be punished for his deed not his wife and kids who are innocent?
Man:so you vl save them from us??
Shaan:plzz..i m begging you leave them…
Man pushes him
Man:kill them!
Shaan comes and stands in front of them
Shaan:no plzzz…
They were abt to hit him…he stops…they fights with him…

Here chaaru tells sam to call shaan…
Sam calls him
Shaan’s phn was in his car….

Shaan turns to the lady: run….
Lady:no..bhai.. Why r u fighting for us?
Shaan:i said run…think abt you kids

Lady takes her kids and runs

Shaan didnt let anyone to go near them until they runs bit far…
Shaan:ahhh…
He held his head and turns
He sees his hand..which has full of blood…

A man has hit shaan with rod…
He hits again
He falls on his knees…
Man who had sword in his hand: you will teach us!
He hits the sword on back…
He winces in pain

Tears fall fron his eyes..
He remembers his mom dad brother’s and ragini…every moment is running in front of his eyes
“Shaan…you are my son..i can say with pride..and never ever dare to leave us like your stupid brother”his mother’s weird ruined in his ears

“I m still the hottest father you know..he laughs u know na i m joking….i cant deny the fact that i hv the best son’s.. And shaan u understand us like a father.. i m proud you my son…”his father’s word ringed in his ears he remembered the moment

“Bhaai.. bhaiyya u r our friend a mentor an inspiration and everything hai na samar! Ha u r ryte sanky bro”he remembered his brother’s..he remembered he hugging his both brother’s

“Shaan you are the best husband in the world”he remembered Ragini

His eyes blur by the tears

A man hits him again with the rod…

There was no sound..he blinked his eyes he could see his family
He falls…his blood takes place around his head….
He smiles
The man hits him again very hard with the rod

He breathes his last!

Here Ragini murmurs: Shaan

Those ppl runs seeing the police van coming there! Police sees shaan

To be continued..

Now most of them hv guessed the upcoming story

And here shaan’s death sequence i took the incident from the real one!
In the real story.. He was killed in the Hindu Muslim riots…

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Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

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