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Home»Fan Fiction»Chahat (pt 2) by Aliya
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Chahat (pt 2) by Aliya

A12345By A12345December 22, 201722 Comments6 Mins Read
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Let’s begin….

Rag was sitting in the middle of the bed…which is beautiful decorated with roses… Rag was biting her lips only her lips were visible she was wearing a veil she was so nervous that her body is shivering and her heart hv taken a challenge to win the race…

She heard the sound of the door opening….

Shaan enters the room..he sees his bride in the middle of the bed!

He smiles..

He locks the door

He comes and sits in the bed…

He sees her nervousness….

He opens her veil… Rag was blushing.. Her cheek has turned Crimson red
She closes her eyes.

He held her hand…
Shaan:Ragini…
She looks at him blushing
He smiles
Shaan:aaj hum sirf baatein karenge!
Rag smiles….

Shaan:we hv known eachother..still if there is anything left ..lets talk abt it!
Rag:i think there isn’t any torpic left that you didn’t talk…
Shaan:hmm..that is also true…hmm come with me
Rag:wr??
Shaan:u just come…
Rag gets down the bed..
He held her from shoulders..
Rag:shaan..
He covers his eyes..

Rag:shaan…aap yeh kya….
Shan:shhhh….
He takes her to the balcony…
He opens her eyes…
Both looks at the moon

Rag:sha…
Shaan:tum kitni bolti ho yaar
Rag smiles
He back hugs her
Shaan:moon… Don’t you see special in the moon today
Rag:no..
Shaan:oh ho…see properly

Rag:no… There’s nothing special!
Shaan: you know wat! You are boring..atleast meri tasalli ke liye tho keh deti!
Rag:hmm…accha baba theek hai.. special dik raha hai!
Shaan: you will feel this if you look at moon…bt i think now i don’t need this moon..bcs you are with me…
Rag smiles.. She turns and hugs him

Shaan mischievously: wat if you ever find that i hv an affair
She pushes him a bit
Rag: then i vl hang you upside down in this balcony
Both laughs
Shaan:spare me!
Rag:i know that you can never do something like that!

Shaan:if i doubt you that you hv affair
Rag:hmm..nai hogi!
Shaan:kyu?
Rag:bcs i know you
He smikes:bt still!
Rag:hmm!i vl leave you and marry another guy
She giggles
Shaan: don’t do that!

Rag:hmm..leave that..
Shaan:i always wanted a relation with you..to talk like a best friends..protect like a parent and argue like a sib..no no typical husband and wife and play like kids!
Rag laughs
Shaan:its my feeling..you hurted me
He pouts
She smiles.. He too smiles

Shaan: your this smile makes my mood!
Rag: so cheesy!now tell me why you changed sibling to typical husband and wife
Shaan:bcs i never fought with my siblings…samar tho baccha hai… Aur mera chotu tho sab se alag
Rag:chotu!i knew that you hv 2 siblings..bt i didnt saw your chotu..and i think this is the first time you talk abt him..
At the time Shan gets call!
Shaan:chotu..100 saal jiyega..usika phn hai!

He excuses himself… And goes…

Rag was looking out…

Voice:bhabhi!
She looks down and sees samar! Standing down
Sam: how r you??
Rag left out a small laugh
Sam:i was so busy that I didn’t got time to talk to you..!
Rag: it’s ok..
Sam: I can’t listen!
Rag lil loudly:aap yahan aa jaiye na!

Sam:no bhabhi i m fine here
Rag:aap ayenge ya nahi…
He gives a sheepish smile
Sam keeps the ladder
Rag helps him to come to the balcony
Rag:u could hv come through inside
Sam: bhaiyya calls me satan..and if satan doesn’t do this type of works who will do
She laughs: u r so cute…
Sam:i know bhabhi!

Here shaan:the number u hv dialled is angry at you…
Shaan:smart..i m not angry ryte..if you were infront of me..i would hv killed you!
Shaan:kab aayega?
Shaan:are you out of your mind..if i had powers to drag you out then i would hv dragged you and punched you hard..
Shaan: ok… Do one thing settle there! Don’t come…and from today your brother won’t talk to you
Shaan:maska!!aazmake dekh lena!
Shaan:if you beg me too.. I won’t talk to you! Did you get that!
Shaan:you r challenging me…
Then he laughs

Shaan:i m missing you! Chotu…
Shaan: ok.. Ok bye.. m still angry!
He laughs and disconnects the call…

He goes to balcony and sees samar was telling some jokes and making ragini laugh

Shaan:wn did u came..i was in the room only!
Sam:u were in the room not balcony!
Shaan sees the leader…

Shaan:bandar(monkey)
Sam:i think bhabhi look like angel and i like a model and monkey .. who left ???oh it was you..you complimenting you yourself..not bad my boy!
He pats shaan’s cheek

Shaan:kya kaha tune…
Sam runs…
Rag laughs…!

Next day…

Rag wears a red saree….
She was talking to her reflection..
Rag:i m the most happiest person..i m blessed to get a family like my in laws and shaan..i think i even can’t imagine my life without shaan..the best husband in the world!

Shaan who was sleeping:and my wife is the best wife in the world
Rag shocked:shaan u hv woke?
Shaan:how can someone sleep wn you vl hv a beautiful wife…and more than that golden hearted wife!
Rag smiles: shaan aap bhi na..
She was abt to put the vermillon
Shaan: that’s my rights
Rag smiles
Shaan puts the vermillon on Ragini’s forehead

Shaan:this makes me to say that you are mine!
She hugs him..

Sam comes: oops wrong time
They parts…
Shaan:wn u were in ryte time
Sam: of it was bhaiyya then you would hv praised him
Shaan: yes i would hv happy
Rag:arey… Don’t fight now
Shaan sam laughs…
Sam: this or way if love bhabi

Shaan: yes bt i still love my chotu more
Sam:i hv my bhabhi to love..kyun bhabhi
Sha:nautanki
San:u know bhabhi bhaiyya ke jo chotu hai na..
Shan:khabardhar

San:woh ek sadhoo hai
Shan:kya.. Ragini woh bohoth seedha hai!never tells anyone that eat he wants!he was doing in job while studying! Spends those money in old age home…
Rag smiles
Shaan:and now need to go
Sam:wr?

Shaan: there’s an important meeting! Wch is arranged in last minute!
Sam:no bhaiyya..
Rag: its ok samar..
Sam smiles: now i can’t debate
They laughs

To be continued…..

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A12345

    Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

    22 Comments

    1. Thara on December 22, 2017 4:17 am

      Fab n nice going

    2. vini on December 22, 2017 7:46 am

      Awesome. I believing you

    3. Manisha on December 22, 2017 9:49 am

      Awesome and Amazing

    4. Lahari on December 22, 2017 12:16 pm

      awesome

    5. keerthi on December 22, 2017 4:44 pm

      Awesome

    6. mk on December 22, 2017 5:02 pm

      Waiting for sanskar entry.

    7. sug on December 22, 2017 5:14 pm

      Nice

    8. geet on December 22, 2017 6:04 pm

      Awesome

    9. maha on December 22, 2017 6:24 pm

      Awesome

    10. RAGSANIAN on December 22, 2017 6:27 pm

      Amazingggg

    11. PriyaS on December 22, 2017 7:28 pm

      Awesome

    12. Rikashini on December 22, 2017 7:29 pm

      Ragsan ??

    13. Rehna on December 22, 2017 7:52 pm

      Superb dear

    14. vani on December 22, 2017 8:39 pm

      Superb dear

    15. shalini on December 22, 2017 8:59 pm

      Awesome.

    16. asra on December 22, 2017 9:01 pm

      awesome dear…loved it…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear

    17. nive on December 22, 2017 9:31 pm

      Sissy superb part. Waiting for to know ragsan love story

    18. manu on December 22, 2017 10:26 pm

      Nyc

    19. moni on December 22, 2017 10:56 pm

      Superb

    20. harneet on December 23, 2017 4:04 pm

      nice ………….waiting for next epi

    21. Bela on December 23, 2017 8:39 pm

      Read both the parts together. Liked them a lot. I don’t know how it will ultimately end up as Ragsan, but knowing you, it will happen well❤❤❤

    22. pinky on December 23, 2017 10:08 pm

      Awesome

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