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Home»Fan Fiction»” Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj ff !!”…..shot 10
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” Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj ff !!”…..shot 10

SayeedaBy SayeedaAugust 14, 2016Updated:August 14, 201691 Comments8 Mins Read
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” Caught In Love Embrace Of A Wild Beast – Twinj ff”……

Episode starts with Twinkle’s shocked face…

T-” Kunj speak up… Why u brought these divorce papers…. Why…u want to divorce me “…

K-” No… I want u to divorce me… U don’t deserve inhuman person like me… U deserve someone best for u.. Sign the papers nd end this unwanted relation between us… Go nd enjoy ur life… “… He is not making eye contact with her..

T-” What u just said that u want me to give divorce to u…. U wanted me to free from u… U wanted me to throw u from my life…u wanted me to enjoy my life being far away from u…. U called our relation as unwanted one…
How could u even think of it… From where did this thought came in ur mind that u will take this nasty action without consulting me… Kunj our relation is not planned by us ; it is planned by Babaji ; then how can u call it as unwanted one… If u have taken this step so listen my verdict….
I WILL NOT SIGN ON THESE PAPERS… I WILL NOT GIVE U DIVORCE… NEVER EVER KUNJ SARNA… NEVER TILL MY BODY HAS LAST DROP OF BLOOD LEFT IN IT “….

She throws the papers..

Kunj gets frustrated nd holds her by her shoulder..

K-” Don’t behave like a insane… For God sake sign on the papers nd get yourself free from imprison of a person like me…. I’m very bad… Very bad “…

T-” No kunj u r not bad… I know that very well… Earlier I was also having the bad guy image ….. A devil impression for u… but now I’m sure that u r not so.. U r not what u want to show to world nd me… U can hide the real person inside in u from others but u can’t hide it from me as I read ur soul nd I found it as pure as a new born baby… U were never bad ; something made u to do so… Tell me what’s it… “..

K-” No….. I’m not good…. For how many times should I tell u that I’m worst person born on the earth…
How can u forget that I raped… I’m the one who separated u from ur parents ; from Yuvi…. I’m the one who blackmailed u to kill ur parents…. I’m the one who kissed u… Who touched u without ur agreement… I’m the one who made u bad in front of world… I’m the one who made me u to attempt suicide… Nd yes I’m the one who harassed Chinki..
U can’t stay with a criminal like me…. U can’t think me as a good person…. Their was no reason behind my behaviour.. Yes I did it for the revenge nothing else… But I don’t know when I fell for u…. When I started to love u… I revolted against my emotions but I failed…nd I know that u don’t love me… How can u love a person like me… How…. why u want to spend ur entire life with me… Go away… Go… “… He pushes her away nd cries..

Twinkle moves to him.. Nd hugs him tightly….
T-” COZ I LOVE U…. I LOVE U STUPID.. YES I’M CAUGHT IN THE LOVE EMBRACE OF A WILD BEAST LIKE U….. YES U R WILD BEAST BUT ONLY FOR ME… FOR UR TWINKLE… “..

Kunj is shocked to hear these words…. He is overjoyed… His emotions are overpowered on his guilt….

K-” What u said… U love me… R u serious… If u r in a mood to crack jokes ; then plz I beg u not to play these pranks with me as I’m not able to handle it……No u can’t love a bad guy like me “… He is speaking continuously while Twinkle is struggling to calm him down but she is failing to stop him..

In order to stop him… She placed a light slap on his face….
Kunj is shocked to get a slap from her… Then at the very next moment …. She pulled him forcefully towards her nd placed a peck on his lips….

Kunj is not able to make out what happened just now… She slapped him nd the very next instant she kissed him….

Kunj is making a sad puppy face nd touches his lips in order to judge that whatever it happened in real or he is dreaming.. .

T-” Kunj sssshhhh….. How much more u will speak… Yes I love u… If u want to make me write on stamp paper I’m reading to do that to make u believe me… I LOVE U KUNJ….. Why r u not kissing me back haan!… When the first time I slapped u at ur farm house u kissed so intensely ; so again I slapped then why r u not repeating ur action Kunj…
Till now I was waiting for the moment to confess my feelings to u nd now it’s the right time for it… I know u also love me but ur guilt is over shadowing ur love….
See in my eyes nd say that u don’t love me… ”
Twinkle moves closer to him nd holds his collar nd pushes him towards her…both r staring at eo lovingly…..

T-” Kunj speak up or else I will kill u…. Even I don’t want u to be murdered by my hands but if u r not going to confess then I will do it…. I’m dying to hear those words from ur mouth… “…

Kunj hugged her nd speaks..” I LOVE U TOO.. LOVE U… PLZZ FORGIVE ME FOR MY DEEDS…. “…..

Twinkle while hugging him speaks…” Don’t spoil this moment kunj by saying sorry… I’m all urs… Let me enjoy the blissful.. Since long time I was waiting for it… “…..

Both breaks the hug nd look at eo with passion…. Love.. …..Tears are rolling from Twinkle’s face….. Kunj kisses her forehead nd cheeks nd sucked the tears flowing down…

T-” Why r u looking with a puppy face at me…. U have permission kunj… U have it… I’m ur wife… Don’t wait.. Make me all urs completely….. “….. Kunj is overwhelmed to see the passion of Twinkle’s affection..

Now his emotions is not in his control…..

He spins her around and grabs her waist… He makes his lips to get close to her… Due to alcohol effect on kunj.. He is not able to meet his lips with her’s… Twinkle understands this nd holds his hairs from back nd made their lips meet… They kissed eo so passionately..
Somehow, kunj managed to unclip her hair… His one arm is holding her tight around her waist and the other is carressing her hair… Both are simply lost in the fabric of time.

Initially it was a soft kiss but then it turned to aggressive one….
Both were holding eo very tightly…. Kunj then caress her neck with his right hand and pushes her curls back. Look into her eyes he put a kiss on the area around lips. Slowly caressing her curves with his left hand, he kissed her slowly, he started to suck her lower lip….
Both are enjoying each other’s touch… Twinkle is feeling so happy to feel the warmth of his lips… Though it’s not the first time kunj is kissing her but this touch is new to her as now she also have her yes in kunj coming to close to her..
Both of them departed away to inhale oxygen…. While kunj is smiling seeing Twinkle blushing…

He then makes his way towards her neck nd places hell lot of neck kisses…..
He then lifts her nd makes her on bed…
Kunj is in top of Twinkle…. She hides her face with her hands as she is so shy to face him….

Kunj slowly removes her hand’s nd plant a soft… Deliberate kiss on her forehead…. He kissed her ear lobes ; eye’s…..
He is about to kiss her lips again when suddenly he remembered that how he tried to force him upon her… All the haunting deeds of his starts to flash before his eye’s… Tears drop from his eye’s falls on Twinkle’s face… She opens her eye’s… While kunj moves away from her…..

He stands up…. He looks at the sad face towards her….
K-” I can’t come close to u… I can’t…..what I did was wrong… Sorry but I can’t do it”…

He is about to turn but Twinkle holds his hands…
T-” Kunj don’t leave alone plz…. I can’t live without u… Don’t go ; come to me…. Come nd make ur Twinkle coloured in ur love…. ”

She starts to sob hard… Nd through her hands action she calls him come towards her….

Kunj is not able to see her crying… He moves towards her… Nd kisses her forehead..

K-” Don’t cry jaan…. I’m not going anywhere.. Throughout our whole life I will stay with u…till my last breathe I will always beside ur side… “…

… He pulls the bed sheet nd Finally both of them consummated their relation…..

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TO BE CONTINUED….

PRECAP – Twinkle to consume poison…

Thanks to everyone who commented… Hope u all went through my replies on ur comment in last shot

Hello everyone…
How was the shot….
I hope you all liked it…

Love u all…. Keep supporting…

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    91 Comments

    1. Ria on August 14, 2016 3:38 pm

      Hiiiiii,
      Today I’ll be the first. I know. The episode was just fabulous. The way Twinj confessed their love made me spellbound. I legit loved it. Do post soon. Can’t wait for the next update. Though it’s scary but, still let’s see.
      Loads of love.??
      Your Ria.

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 7:50 am

        Yes Ria u r the first to comment…
        I’m happy that u liked it…..
        Love u too ???

    2. Sameera on August 14, 2016 3:46 pm

      Blast epi enjoyed ??wow twinj confession amazing sayu fab
      Twi to consume poison next wala jaldi post kardena plshh
      Love u too ?

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:27 pm

        Thanks Sam…. I don’t know when I will post next but I will try to post it soon…

    3. Joonakanksha on August 14, 2016 3:49 pm

      Wow …awesome
      Superf
      Bt precap is scary..
      Plz post soon

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:28 pm

        Thanks Joon…
        Will try to post next one soon.. ??

    4. twinjfan.tamanna on August 14, 2016 3:51 pm

      awesome…it was just amazing….it was so romantic….cant wait for next episode…plz post asap…

      • Zain on August 14, 2016 5:49 pm

        Guys see look at the logo it’s the same blue one which jisha,Sayeeda when she didn’t register in tu,Chehak use and only comment on Sayeeda’s ff this is why I’m telling you guys that she’s using her account with different names!

      • Jisha on August 14, 2016 9:01 pm

        Hi zain,
        I understood what u are saying…but it is an issue with tu I guess… coz when I registered i had a logo of white n green lines…u can check in some of my ff episodes it comes with that logo… n some time this logo… I clearly understood what u said…the thing is me, fan and twinj fan.tamanna has this same logo…I don’t know what is the issue…
        If me n Sayu are same person, y wud I write an ff altogether with a new name as Jisha coz Sayu is already a known name to tu friends…trust me, me n Sayu are 2 different people… I think I should send a mail to tu people regarding this…will do that tomorrow coz I am not well at health today… thank you to bring it in notice…

      • Zain on August 14, 2016 10:09 pm

        Jisha I’m sure now why do u people only have the problem no one else does what are u trying the prove to me there was one person who did this to one ff and Tara di and smc di found out that the person was using the same email and cheating us and how can I believe cuz Sayeeda had this same logo and then jisha,Chehak,fan and dreamer that what is this
        All complete lies and yes it’s ok if u can write three ff’s at one time but no one has had a problem like this

      • Sayeeda on August 14, 2016 11:28 pm

        Zain dear just be cool minded nd listen…
        I nd others r different….
        My dp has pic of Jasmine…
        Nd see whenever any person who is registered don’t put any dp in then TU gives them this default pic….
        If u want u can inquire from TU through mail…..
        Dear u r just confused…..
        Everyone is different here….
        Chiku… Jisha di everyone is different…….
        Plz get ur doubt get clear soon with TU soon as possible coz of it many ppl r hurt….

        I know u don’t want to bash anyone… U just wanted to clear ur point….
        If u want u can see ff of other serials also… Many of ff writer has this dp as default one…

        So dear no one is same… The same person is not using different I’d to comment again…
        Plz yrr understand it…

      • Sayeeda on August 14, 2016 11:50 pm

        Dear plz don’t think anyone is cheating over here….
        U can check my previous episode of this ff only… Tamanna asked me to get her registered nd I also mentioned the message regarding it to her in my first ff… Then how can u say that we all r same nd using different I’d to comment….

        See yrr yes being a writer I like comments but for increasing number of comments I will never do this…. Never ever…… Nd dear I’m not on TU since long time nd everyone knows me very well…. Some of them knows me personally also…….

        Plz TU I request u to clear the confusion soon as many others r suffering due to it

      • Zain on August 15, 2016 1:37 am

        See Sayeeda no intentions to hurt you I meant jisha so please don’t get involved in this plz Ik you’re already suffering bcoz of that bhavika so I don’t wanna stress you and I complained to tu and they said that it could be like that but it won’t be the same logo it would be with another colour

      • Zain on August 15, 2016 1:41 am

        Even I felt smc cheated us
        Jisha and smc and how can smc get so many comments so fast

      • Angita on August 15, 2016 8:23 am

        Nothing like what you think zain they all got the same logo as TU is running out of logos…and TU I’m sure won’t accept same email twice yaar

      • administrator on August 15, 2016 11:23 am

        Registered members who don’t upload their profile picture will get same picture which is our default profile picture. It was blue logo before, but now we have changed it to blank face.

        Random logos work only for guests.

        Hope this clears all confusion.

      • Jisha on August 15, 2016 11:30 am

        Hi zain,
        I complained about this to tu..they have sent a reply to you below.. please check…I hope now your confusion is over…we are different people and we are not fake users… I/ we don’t use such tricks to increase the comments…
        Thank you

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:30 pm

        Thanks Tamanna….
        Love you ??

    5. thanmy on August 14, 2016 4:08 pm

      ONE MORE SUSPENCE AWAITING YOU ALWAYS AMAZE ME BY UR WRITINGS I JUST LOVE THIS AND I WAS WAITING FOR THIS FROM MORNING AND YEAH FINALLY AND U KNOW DII I WAS READING UR REPLY COMMENT ALMOST 5 TIMES SO SWEET OF U CHANTA THO NAHI LAAGA PAR PHIR BHI DIII KE LIYE THO KUCH BHI
      JUST LUV U DIII

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:32 pm

        Awww Thanmy dear u liked the reply so much…. But I love ur comment more than anything else…… Thanks for liking it…
        Love you ??

    6. fatima on August 14, 2016 4:13 pm

      heyy sayeeda….
      I loved it..
      it was just awesome…
      u write so nice..
      I m becoming a gr8 fan of urs now..
      plzzz post the next part ASAP….
      love u

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:33 pm

        Thank u so much Fatima… Ur words made me felt so happy…. Thanks for it…
        Will try to post next one soon..
        Love u too ??

    7. aamu on August 14, 2016 4:22 pm

      sayu…………………..
      it was amazing as always…………
      awww kitna cute epi tha yaar…..
      n now my curiousity is eating me to know y twinkle consume poison…..
      jaldi post karna….
      wait karungi

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:34 pm

        Thanks Aamu….
        I’m happy that u liked it…
        Will try to post next one soon…
        Love u ??

    8. SIDMIN-daamini on August 14, 2016 4:23 pm

      Sayeeda di it was just fabulous!!!!!!!!!!
      Omg ……………….that Precap
      Ufff!!!
      Really loved it
      Waiting for ur next one
      What a suspense?

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:35 pm

        Daamini first of all thank you so much for commenting….
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it…
        Will try to post next one soon…

    9. Meeta on August 14, 2016 4:26 pm

      Breathtaking beautifully written
      Ab isse zyada Kya likhu.
      Bas jaldi post karo.

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:37 pm

        Thanks Meetu….
        Ur words means a lot to me…. Love u??

    10. shreya098 on August 14, 2016 4:31 pm

      So mere naughty mind ka guess sahi nikla????….

      The epi was fabulous…
      The confrontation was superb…loooveed it❤❤❤❤❤❤…

      Precap????…

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:39 pm

        Yes Shreya… Ur guess was right… I must say nice guess dear….
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it…
        Will try to post next one soon..
        Love u ??

    11. Monica on August 14, 2016 4:40 pm

      Firstly, i am sorry i wasn’t able to comment on your previous chapter as you know, i was traveling yet i read it. Coming to today’s part, it was legit amazing! The way twinj confessed their feelings ? but OMG! Another suspense? You never fail to give out such suspenses don’t you? Twinkle consuming poison? Eagerly waiting for the next part to unfold the suspense. Looking forward for more and more of this. Continue soon x Love you ?

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:42 pm

        Monica don’t be sorry… I know u were busy…
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it….
        Will try to post next one soon..
        Love u too ??

    12. TwinjSidMin on August 14, 2016 4:44 pm

      Awesome amazing flawless and what not…twinj confession tho???????????? sayu how you manage to write soooooo good…precap seems quite scary…please post next episode asap…I just can’t wait for more time after reading precap…plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sayu meri jaan next episode jaldi post Kardo…love you dear??????

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:43 pm

        Twinjsidmin… I will try to post next one soon but when I will do it I can’t promise it…
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it…
        Love u too ???

    13. SidMin on August 14, 2016 4:50 pm

      Sayeeda di Loved it have no words to describe and Bechara Kunj so much of Guilt (so sweet) Loved it and Twinkle’s confession was so cute and that slap and kiss was so cute in short it was very cute and sweet and Lovely 🙂
      But the precap is a bit scary :0

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:44 pm

        Thanks Sidmin…. I’m happy that u liked it….
        Love u too ??

    14. Purnima.agrawal30 on August 14, 2016 5:10 pm

      awesome amazing fabulous marvelous romantic cute emotional epi…..loved it…..bt precap……darr lg ra h….

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:46 pm

        Thanks Purnima…. Don’t worry everything will go well….
        Love u ??

    15. Priya_ on August 14, 2016 5:12 pm

      Super duper confrontation…
      Mast episode…
      But .. Next episode… Seriously
      Waiting for it..

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:47 pm

        Thanks Priya…
        Will try to post next one soon…

    16. kruti on August 14, 2016 5:12 pm

      Finally confession……just loved it sayo
      Kunj ka guilt and then twinkle ka confession wowwwwww Superb…..amazing……awesome ??❤❤❤

      Precap…scary but im super excited for d nxt update post soon

      Love u ❤❤

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:49 pm

        Thanks Kruti… I’m happy that u liked it….
        Will try to post next one soon
        Love u too ??

    17. Laddoo on August 14, 2016 5:22 pm

      Ahem ahem…has Twinkle gone mad? Ye kisi ne poison pilaya ya khud pee rhi hai? Agar khud peeye to bhai duniya ki sabse badi wali paagal wahi hai…
      Aap batao Sayu di, aap kya khate ho? Aap ekk kaam karo, mujhe apna dimag de do….haye kya emotions daale hai! Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh
      More than I love u??
      Arey nhi nhi…I always love u more than anything else, happy?
      Haan ye hui na baat…jldi se haso…jldi jldi….haa….good girl….love uuuu?

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:54 pm

        Awww Laadoo….. Ur comment kya kahun main lafz nai bache hai mere pass tumhari tarref krne ke liye…

        U always make me feel too happy through ur words…. Infact u give me ur mind as u r the best ff writer I ever came across….
        I’m happy that u liked it.. Its my luck that I can satisfy a great writer like u….
        Love u too… Nd very soon u will get to know the reason behind her behaviour…
        ??

    18. srija on August 14, 2016 5:27 pm

      sayeeda loved it to the core
      ?????????????
      kunj’s guilty feeling and each & every part of the episode it awesome

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 9:55 pm

        Thanks Srija… I’m happy that u liked it…
        Love u ??

    19. SidVee on August 14, 2016 5:33 pm

      Wow amazing epi.. finally they confessed their love for eo.. but why did twinkle consume poison?.. well the ans would b In the next epi?.. eagerly waiting for the next ?

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:11 pm

        Thanks Sidvee…
        I’m happy that u liked it….
        I will try to post next one soon…

    20. Franciee on August 14, 2016 5:58 pm

      Very nice.

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:12 pm

        Thanks Franciee…
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it

    21. Shatakshi on August 14, 2016 6:22 pm

      ???????????

      I m seriously hypnotised
      Suyu u really killed me with this episode
      All the time I was thinking ‘what next’ n at last i was like sayu u r the best

      Really loved it to the core Sayeedaaaa
      Love u❤❤❤❤

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:17 pm

        Thanks Sattu… Nd I’m not best but it’s u who is the best nd I mean it…
        Love u too ??

    22. silent reader on August 14, 2016 8:17 pm

      Amaizing dii..ohk m new here m gonna comment for the first tym..but always reading ff’s os’s n many more….n srsly u all r phenomenal guys…I wonder how can u guys write so nicely…. M same like u dii muslim…n that whosoever..insulted is such a heartless person….pehli hi baar me itna zyaada I mean m just too much..,awesome epi…

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:24 pm

        Finally one of my silent reader spoked up… Thank u so much that ur comment made me so happy…. Love u dear for ur appreciation….
        Plz keep supporting like this… ??

    23. dreamer...arundhati on August 14, 2016 8:36 pm

      Sayu di osum epi.. Luved it… Precap is killer.. Ctd soon

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:25 pm

        Thanks Aaru for liking it….
        Love u too ??

    24. RiaA MendeZz on August 14, 2016 8:43 pm

      This chapter made me alittle emotional but the precap is a bit scary..enjoyed this chapter..please let chinki wake up ..I want to see yuvi punished even leela and Rt should bare sum type of punishment for treating their daughter so cruel..All in all I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:28 pm

        Thanks RiaA…. Nd very soon ur wish will get fulfilled…. Don’t worry u gonna like that shot also…
        Love u ??

    25. shikha on August 14, 2016 8:48 pm

      nice episode
      their confession was soooooo cute but still you didn’t disclosed why Kunj really did all that
      he is really a very good person still he can’t come close to her as he did so many bad deeds
      and now again a new suspense as why Twinkle consumed poison
      continue soon as m very curious to know about it

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:34 pm

        Shikha dear sorry for making u wait for revealing the truth… Very soon it will be out…. I hope u like it…
        Yes… I agree he can’t come close to her but when u will get to know about the truth u gonna know it…

    26. Jisha on August 14, 2016 9:06 pm

      Wow… Sayu… loved it…twinj confession was awesome…
      I think zain is doubting us to be same coz some of us have that typical white n blue logo..me,fan n twinj fan Tamanna…may be an issue with tu…will send a mail to tu tomorrow…

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:39 pm

        Thanks Jisha di for liking it…
        Love u ??

    27. ranabulbul on August 14, 2016 9:54 pm

      I think I know it tw will be asking kunj the truth abt his behavior with her and he will deny and she will consume poison its just a guess but ??????????????????? mujhe abhi bhi lag RHA hai ki usne iska rape ni kiya hai uhuhuhn han mujhe bina tears wala Rona aata hai Ab to story bhi clear hai but ye kambhakht dimag ni man ra but do cont soon di love u loads

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 10:41 pm

        Bulbul dear about ur guess u will get to know it soon….
        Thanks for liking the episode….
        Love u too ??

    28. S.Z.F.Z on August 14, 2016 10:01 pm

      Sayu Api!!!!!Aapki Zuhu hazir hai aapki khidmat mein 😉 Well sorry for not commenting previously, actually network issues that is why I was not posting my FF finally the problem is solved!
      FF ke baare mein kya bolun aap ne toh bolti hi band kardi??? Very well done? Beautifully described and written 🙂 Mashaallah! Ab jaldi se reason bhi reveal kardo!
      Love u ❤❤❤❤
      Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂

      -Zuhu

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:16 pm

        Zuhoo please don’t say sorry… Its OK dear…. Ur comments are always so special for me… As u r so special for me…..
        Love u…

    29. Chiku on August 14, 2016 11:03 pm

      Di srry fr late comment actually papers r cming so unable to comment..
      Cming to episode it is awesome ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
      Di aap kamaal likhte ho?????
      Luvvvvvv uuuuuu
      Eagerly waiting fr next one
      Nd agar mein thode din comment nahi karun toh chalega na?

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:18 pm

        Thanks Chiku nd don’t say sorry jaan… Its OK….
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it…. Nd u hope now u r not sad as all confusion is sorted out…
        Love u too ?

    30. baby on August 14, 2016 11:13 pm

      sayeeda di omgggggg i mean amazing kya khun speechless breathtking romantic osm wowwww n d precapis full of suspense aftr dis dont no wts gonna hn di amazing post nxt episode asap di luv u u were amazing as always

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:19 pm

        Thanks Baby for ur lovely comment….
        I will try to post next one soon…
        Love u ?

    31. Sidhanshi on August 14, 2016 11:17 pm

      Mindblowing episode… Just awesome…

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:20 pm

        Thanks Sidhanshi….
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it..

    32. AYESHA KHANUM on August 14, 2016 11:28 pm

      amazing sayeeda dii superb I dont know how u guys will write but day by day Iam getting crazy about ur ffs and specially ur writings are just awsome loved uit to the core suberb

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:21 pm

        Thanks Ayesha… I’m so happy that u r liking my writings…..
        Thank u for making me so happy for ur motivating comment….

    33. Romaisha on August 15, 2016 1:34 am

      Waoww twinjj consummation scene was hot yaar ❤❤?????
      Dii too good !! precap? poison? Oh dear ?
      What have u planned sayu? Hmm … Post soon cant wait to read next epi ..
      And yea sorry for late comment .. Kinda busy .. Love u .. :*

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:49 pm

        Don’t be sorry dear….
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it….
        What I have planned u will get to know it very soon..
        Love u too ??

    34. Sonali05 on August 15, 2016 3:43 am

      omg !…. what a performance dear!
      awesome epi… their love confession…
      their first kiss… was really too cute…
      but again a new suspense with new PRECAP…
      aap sudhrogi nahi na sayeeda…
      ab smile kya de rahi ho aap…
      haan maja aah raha hai hame tadapte dekh kar …
      but seriously I’m dying to read ur next epi…

      & so sorry sayeeda… pls forgive me dear… for late comment & also for not commenting in last epi… actually after ur 8 epi now I’m visit here on tu page only to check if u r return back & here I’m amaze to see that this was ur 10 epi means u had already posted d 9th one which I had miss… I’m so sorry sayeeda… ya I know I’m so bad…. first of all I always do mistakes & then say just a sorry… so something for… specially for u…. only for u

      u make me smile by ur appearance…
      u make my day by ur ff dear…
      & u also make me fear…
      in d thought to loose u dear
      as I always want to read ur ff for years & years

      keep smiling like this
      & I’ll always try to brought a smile on ur face
      & try to make more like this & pls sorry if u not liked it… an kya karo poet hoti toh ease acha likh path but aap issi se kam chala lo na
      & pls its not me who wrote this… its ur ff magic… u write so beautifully that I’m also not able to resist my hand from writing this

      love u & mostly ur ff to d core…
      OK baba love u more than ur ff

    35. Sonali05 on August 15, 2016 3:58 am

      omg !…. what a performance dear!
      awesome epi… their love confession…
      their first kiss… was really too cute…
      but again a new suspense with new PRECAP…
      aap sudhrogi nahi na sayeeda…
      ab smile kya de rahi ho aap…
      haan maja aah raha hai hame tadapte dekh kar …
      but seriously I’m dying to read ur next epi…

      & so sorry sayeeda… pls forgive me dear… for late comment & also for not commenting in last epi… actually after ur 8 epi now I’m visit here on tu page only to check if u r return back & here I’m amaze to see that this was ur 10 epi means u had already posted d 9th one which I had miss… I’m so sorry sayeeda… ya I know I’m so bad…. first of all I always do mistakes & then say just a sorry… so something for… specially for u…. only for u

      u make me smile by ur appearance…
      u make my day by ur ff dear…
      & u also make me fear…
      in d thought to loose u dear
      as I always want to read ur ff for years & years

      keep smiling like this
      & I’ll always try to brought a smile on ur face
      & try to make more like this & pls sorry if u not liked it… an kya karo poet hoti toh ease acha likh path but aap issi se kam chala lo na
      & pls its not me who wrote this… its ur ff magic… u write so beautifully that I’m also not able to resist my hand from writing this

      love u & mostly ur ff to d core… jealous
      OK baba love u more than ur ff

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:55 pm

        Sona jaan… Very soon I will become diabetic as ur comments are too sweet…. I can’t tell u the way u make me feel special is so different nd unique… Though I’m not good writer but still u appreciate me.. That’s so sweet of u… Those lines…. MashaAllah kya kehne yrr I’m speechless… I want to thank u more but I’m not able to express my gratitude towards u…. Why u always make me feel so good….

        Don’t be sorry yrr… U r my frnd cum sis nd sis don’t say sorry….
        Love u soooooooooooooooooooooo much…. Inna saara pyar tumhari Sayu ki taraf se…. ?????????????????????

    36. jasmin on August 15, 2016 8:00 am

      Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow n just wow…sayu di such a superb epi…but precap seems horrible…i noe wat i came upside for exercise but then i suddenly remebered that i dint read ur ff..so just opened it n was reading it while exercising…hehe..i noe something stupid…but all that aside..love ur ffn u to moon n back…love u loads!! Muah!!
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      N HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY TO ALL THE TU MEMBERS…

      • Sayeeda on August 16, 2016 12:02 am

        Jasmine dear thank you so much for ur sooooooooo lovely comment…..
        Ur words made me smile so much… Thanks for it…
        Love u too dear ???

    37. Angita on August 15, 2016 8:23 am

      Just awesom3

      • Sayeeda on August 16, 2016 12:05 am

        Thanks Angita…

    38. Fan on August 15, 2016 4:50 pm

      Hey sayoo..first of all iam very sorry dear for not commenting earlier n supporting u in clearing the misunderstanding with zain..i was out of station so i had no access to internet n till now i was reading all the ff that i have missed in these 4 days…i was shocked when i was reading the comments ..
      zain sayoo is not creating fake ids n commenting in her own ff..she is genuinely getting comments because of her writing ability..i know y u r misunderstanding as even i remember that incident when tara n smc used to get criticising comments from the same user back then i was a silent reader n i never used to comment but after that i slowly started commenting at first my logo was brown n a design with triangles but after that when i got registered it changed to blue n as jisha di said we all r different people n we write diff ff which r in our name..i hope ur confusion is cleared..
      Sayoo i really sorry yaar for commenting late..iam seriously a very bad friend i did not help u when u were in need..iam feeling very guilty right now?..plz forgive me dear…
      N lastly..u r an amazing writer..plz dont let these small incidents stop u from writing..u describe things beautifully n even put many twists in the story which urges readers like me to comment..i love ur writing.. love u loads❤?..n if possible plz apni is bhulakkad dost ko maaf karde..

      • Sayeeda on August 16, 2016 12:10 am

        Fan dear u r not a bad frnd at all infact ur the one of among those besties which I got through TU…

        About misunderstanding.. Now it’s clear from TU.. So don’t worry..
        I won’t stop writing at all as I can’t disappoint my readers….

        But if u r asking for apologie so I will do it but only if u post ur ff soon… Lollzz….
        Thanks for supporting nd commenting..

    39. manu on August 15, 2016 6:06 pm

      Wowww sayu di lovely loved he confession and he precap is horrible cum interesting eagerly waiting for it plz plz post asap and sy I didn’t comment actaually bussy with ge practice of indepandence day btw happy independence day to u love u

      • Sayeeda on August 16, 2016 12:17 am

        Don’t say sorry dear….
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it
        Love u ??

    40. Angel on August 15, 2016 9:36 pm

      Wowwww.. brilliant episode i just luvddd it……. u r an amazing writer …. u must b thinking who i am …. so i am a silent reader but today i decided to cmnt ….. i love your episods….

      • Sayeeda on August 16, 2016 12:20 am

        Hey Angel hii…. I’m so happy that u commented… It was my good luck to see ur comment…. Finally one more silent reader spoked up… Woowww thank u soooo much Yrrr….
        I’m soooo happy that u liked it…
        ??

    41. Fatarajo on August 15, 2016 10:44 pm

      U r just amazing and too good saayu loved ur ff to the core

      • Sayeeda on August 15, 2016 11:47 pm

        Thanks Fatarajo… I’m happy that u liked it…

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