Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction»Only those who care about u can hear u when ur quiet (OS on DevAkshi) Part 2
Fan Fiction Kuch Rang Pyar Ke Aise Bhi

Only those who care about u can hear u when ur quiet (OS on DevAkshi) Part 2

Bharti123456By Bharti123456November 8, 2016Updated:November 8, 201612 Comments5 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

Hi all,
I know I’m late………Or very late but I’m so sorry I was having high fever so couldn’t post so sorry again

Previous link: part-1

****
Dev reaches home very late
Rithwick : (Dev’s brother)Bhai so late what happened
Dev tells what happened
Rithwick : Bhai u dropped her home
Dev : Ya why
Rithwick : Because u normally don’t do that
Dev holds his ears
Dev : Bhai ko tana mar raha hai(Taunting ur brother)
Ishwari comes
Ishwari : Beta u came but why so late
Dev : Nothing there was a lot of work
Ishwari : Ok go take rest
SONA’S HOME
Asha : Beta why so late
Sona : Ma woh mera boss hai na ek number obhodro hai(Ma my boss is one numbers rude person)
Asha : What happened
Sona tells what happened
Asha : Oh the car is fine know
Sona : Yes
Few weeks pass Dev gets a big deal
Mr. Gujral : Dev
Dev : Oh welcome Mr. Gujral. Um…….the deal……..
Mr. Gujral : Yes it will happen but one condition
Dev : What
Mr. Gujral : Ur small brother Rithwick has to marry my daughter
Dev comes in tension
Mr. Gujral : R u alright Dev
Dev : No I’m fine……..we’ll finalize the deal after one week
Mr. Gujral leaves
DEV’S HOME
Dev : Rithwick come here..
Rithwick : What happened bhai
Dev : U have to marry Mr. Gujral’s daughter
Rithwick : Bhai how can u say that u know I love Sonakshi
Dev : But she loves me
Rithwick : No I know she only loves me
He screams and leaves
Dev : Ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega(I’ll itself have to do something)
After few days Dev calls Sona
Sona : Mr. Dixit u called
Dev : I love u
Sona : Huh!
Dev : It’s true and I know u also love me
Sona hugs him and he reciprocates
Sona : I love u too
Few days pass the deal gets signed Dev goes to Sona
Dev : I want to tell u something
Sona : Sure go ahead
Dev : I don’t love u
Sona gets shocked
Dev : I used u to get a deal
Sona gets even more shocked
Dev : Only because so Rithwick stays away from u and we get a big deal
Sona gets really angry and slaps him
Sona : How dare u…….How dare u toy with my feeling
Dev : Wait how can u think I love u
Sona : I don’t know but one thing accept my resignation
Dev : Sonakshi wait please
But she leaves. Dev had started feeling for her but did not know and he felt really bad from inside
Dev : I didn’t know I did such a bad thing
He leaves. Few days later Ishwari knew about the relation between DevAkshi but didn’t know about their breakup and she went to Sona’s house for Sona’s hand for Dev. Next day
Asha : But y……y u don’t want to marry him
Sona : Ma I just don’t
Asha : Beta please for me
Sona : Fine
Everyone got happy. After one week Sona was getting ready
Sona : (thinks)Sab ka yeh sapna hota hai ki ek raja saphed ghode ke upar apni rani ko le jaye. Lekin mera aisa koi sapna nahi tha. Jab Dev meri zindagi mein aye unhone mujhe pyar karna sikhaya aur phir nafrat karna. Aj meri shaddi us insaan se hai jo mujse pyar nahi karta. Yeh meri kahani hai(Everyone has a dream that their prince will take their princess on a white horse. But I didn’t have any dream like that. When Dev came in my life he taught me how to love and now he taught me how to hate. Today my wedding is with a person who doesn’t love me. This is my story)
Elena : Di come down fast pandit ji is calling
Sona : Ok
After an hour
Pandit : Where is the bride
Asha : Elena u called Sona
Elena : Ya ma I did wait I’ll check
She goes up and then after sometime she comes down running
Elena : Ma di kamre mein nahi hai(Ma di is not in the room)
Everyone gets shocked Dev and Rithwick start finding for her and find her unconscious under a tree and both rush to pick her Dev picks her and carries her to the hall
Asha : Sona………….Dev beta kya hua(Dev beta what happened)
Dev : I don’t know ma we fund her like that
They bought her in conscious and started the wedding. Fast forwarding the wedding. DevAkshi room
Dev : U sleep here I’ll sleep on the couch
Sona : No need u can sleep on ur bed I will be fine on the couch
Dev : (little angry)I said u sleep here
Sona : (whispers)Obhodro
Dev : What
Sona : Nothing
Few days later Dev realizes that he can’t stay without Sona he realizes that he loves her and decides to tell her
Sona : Tell Mr. husband what is it
Dev : I love u
Sona : What joke is this Dev…….now y u want to use me
Dev : Please listen to I’m not lying neither am I using u for anything trust me please
Sona : Give me 2 good reasons y
Dev : I’ll never use u neither will I destroy ur trust……Please listen
Sona : Promise…
Dev : Yes
Sona hugs him tightly and he reciprocates
Sona : I love u
Dev : I love u too

Story ends
****
How was it hope it was good sorry if it was late
I want to just tell u all that I’ll soon be posting an other OS ” Isi life mein ” adapted from the movie isi life mein
So please drop ur comments
Hope to see u all soon

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleYoU aRe MiNE – SuKoR – part 3
Next Article the magical ishqbaaz promo
Bharti123456

    My love is unconditional but my trust and respect are NOT

    12 Comments

    1. Maleeha on November 8, 2016 7:24 am

      Awesome one bharti…..?❤??????…..amazing……and I will be waiting for ur os…..???…….

    2. Manya on November 8, 2016 7:43 am

      Superbbbb❤️❤️???????

    3. Ria on November 8, 2016 8:53 am

      Heya Bharti,
      It was such a sweet story. Well, I’ll be waiting for your OS. Try posting soon.

      Loads of love.❣

    4. Aarti98 on November 8, 2016 10:18 am

      It was really sweet n cute story..N I’ve seen d movie isi life mein..it’s nice, so I’ll b waiting for your OS

    5. AnShIta on November 8, 2016 12:36 pm

      Hey Bharti di!
      Loved the OS like hell! It was soooooo nice to read it!
      I’ll be waiting for your next OS! Since I haven’t seen the movie, it’d be great to read on an unknown storyline!
      Love ya!<3

    6. Niki645 on November 8, 2016 3:30 pm

      Omg……. I loved it so much!!!
      It was fabulous?

    7. rj12 on November 8, 2016 4:35 pm

      Amazing Bharti
      Pat the next OS soon

      • rj12 on November 8, 2016 4:35 pm

        Post*

    8. Nikki on November 8, 2016 5:45 pm

      Bharathi it was CUTEEEEEEEEEE story?????……………
      I m eagerly waiting for your nxt OS.
      Plz post sooooooooooooon????…………

    9. Heshine on November 8, 2016 7:31 pm

      Hey…Bharti…!!! The os was juz amazing… ??.!!! Awesome…!!????loved it….and about ur upcoming os im not aware of the movie….waiting fa ur next os….!!! Try posting it soon…!! Pls… .??????
      Love….??

    10. NIKKI on November 8, 2016 9:25 pm

      Hw r u? Is everything okay

    11. Rithu2089 on November 9, 2016 4:42 pm

      Amazingly awesome post the next OS soon????

    Sponsor
    Latest Posts

    Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

    November 29, 2025

    Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

    November 29, 2025

    Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

    November 29, 2025

    Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

    November 29, 2025
    Sponsor
    Latest Comments
    • NRI on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
    • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
    • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
    © 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

    Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.