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Home»Fan Fiction»I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 9
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I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 9

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Hey guys thanks for commenting. Here I come with the next part of the ff.

Pune:
College [Canteen]:
As Aaroo enters the corridor leading to the canteen, she finds the entire way filled with balloons carrying the same message: ‘I AM SORRY ARADHYA’. Aaroo understood who did this. As she was about to turn and leave, Aryan comes in front of her and immediately kneels down.
Aryan: Aradhya… I am really sorry…. Plzzzz forgive me….plzzzzz…. [then he presents her with a sketch. The sketch was of Aaroo and filled with I AM SORRY in the drawing (same as in the film Paa…)].
Aradhya takes the sketch from his hand and looks at it.
Aaroo: I made it…
Aryan: yes…. Why????
Aaroo: it’s very good…..
Aryan: thanks… that means u have forgiven me…
Aaroo: who told u that….???
Aryan: then???
Shivani comes in just then along with Varun.
Varun: happy birthday…. Aradhya….
Aaroo: thanks…..
Aryan: Aaroo…
Aaroo: yes…. [Curtly]
Aryan: happy birthday….[he gives her a gift]
Aaroo: thanks but I don’t celebrate my b’thday…. So I cannot accept the present… and btw I am not done with u…. so u come with me to the canteen…. [Aaroo leaves]
Aryan [standing up]: her anger will melt as soon as she will see the canteen….
As Aaroo opened the door of the canteen, there was a shower of chocolates and candies on her and as she looked forward, there was written on the wall ‘HAPPY BIRTHDAY AAROO’. Aaroo was stunned. Just then the three enter and and hugged her.
Shivani: Aaroo…. Aryan did all these to make u happy…. Plzzzz forgive him…..
Aaroo: ok…..
Aryan [cheers]: thank u so much…. Plzz come in….
As Aaroo enters the place, her eyes fill with tears. Aryan notices that and puts his hand on her shoulder.
Aryan: Aradhya…. R u ok…
Aaroo: yes…
Shivani: btw Aaroo… it’s Aryan’s b’thday too….
Aaroo: what???
Varun: yes…..
Aaroo: oh… happy b’thday….
Aryan: thanks…. R u telling it from ur heart or just for the sack of saying….
Aaroo: I am telling it from by heart… [Aaroo’s phone rings. It’s Tulsi.]
Aaroo: hello… aayi…
Tulsi: have u reached there….???
Aaroo: yes…..
Tulsi: is it ok….???
Aaroo [sad]: yes aayi……
Tulsi: ok…. Bye….
Aaroo: aayi….
Tulsi: what???
Aaroo: I miss u….
Tulsi: I miss u too….
Aryan looks at Aaroo and smiles. Just then Aryan’s phone also rings. It’s Aba saheb.
Aryan: hello….
Aaba: happy b’thday…. My lion……
Aryan: thank u aaba…
Aaba: u r still angry with me….
Aryan: no…. but plzzz don’t repeat it next time….
Aaba [fuming]: sure my lion….. ok njoy….
Aryan: bye…
Aaba: bye….

Krishnavati:
A car comes and stops at the entrance of the village. A lady comes down from the car. It’s Kumudini. She is carrying a sankh in her hand. She comes and stands on the road and plays the sankh loudly.

Aaba’s mansion:
The entire house came to a stand hearing the sound of the sankh. Aaba Saheb stands up from his chair and fumes.
Aaba: who dared to play the sankh before me….. who dared to break the year lasting ritual…???? Who????
All the servants, Shashwat Pavitra…. Everyone are standing beside Aaba… all tensed.

Road:
Kumudini puts her hand down and smiles evilly.
Kumudini: Praduman Vidyadhar Rao… I have come… now it’s time to make the equation equal- equal…… [she laughs loudly and turns]…. Come on Biswas… my Krishna is calling me….. let’s leave…
Tulsi: aayi…. Do u think… they will let us stay there????
Kumudini: the punishment for 21 yrs have ended…. So don’t worry…. Come on Biswas…. Leave… [Biswas nods and starts the car and they enter the village].

Temple:
Aaba sahib comes to temple and asks Shastri bua about the sankh
Shastri: I don’t know aaba…. But whoever had play it…. Sankh has already been played….
Aaba: I want to know.. who tried to go against me…. [he fumes in anger].

Pune:
College:
After giving the treat to her friends, Aaroo goes to the library to collect some books. While going there she strikes with a boy. The boy looks at her. Aaroo gets surprised to see him and smiles looking at him.

Who is this new person who is coming between Aara?? To know that plzzz continue reading my ff.

Hope that u liked this part. Plzzz keep commenting.

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17 Comments

  1. Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 19, 2016 12:37 pm

    Superb.. I thought today aradhya birthday.. But Aryan.. Quiet good..

    • Rhimjhim on May 19, 2016 1:12 pm

      thanks a lot

  2. Osheen aggarwal on May 19, 2016 12:39 pm

    Nice one…

    • Rhimjhim on May 19, 2016 1:12 pm

      thank u vry much

  3. Nisha Singh on May 19, 2016 1:19 pm

    Great going Rhimjhim ?

    • Rhimjhim on May 19, 2016 1:52 pm

      thanks a lot

  4. Sonal on May 19, 2016 1:34 pm

    The sorry moment is very good. Loved it.

    • Rhimjhim on May 19, 2016 1:53 pm

      thanks a lot

  5. Aaliya on May 19, 2016 1:40 pm

    Its Lovely Rhimjhim

    • Rhimjhim on May 19, 2016 2:46 pm

      thanks a lot

  6. Maleesha on May 19, 2016 2:11 pm

    Wow.very.nice. ohh I can imagine that corridor. Great job . Keep it up

    • Rhimjhim on May 19, 2016 2:48 pm

      thank u so much

  7. Siddhi on May 19, 2016 3:23 pm

    I like your writing skills rimjhim

    • Rhimjhim on May 19, 2016 5:15 pm

      thank u so much Siddhi

  8. Sneha on May 19, 2016 11:27 pm

    carry on dear…..hats off

    • Rhimjhim on May 20, 2016 2:50 pm

      thanks a lot

  9. Roma on May 26, 2016 11:58 pm

    Awesome episode, love you loads.

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