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Home»Fan Fiction»I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 11
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I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 11

administratorBy administratorMay 25, 2016Updated:June 1, 20167 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys I am back after a long time… Missed u all a lot. So let’s start. This is the 11th part of my ff.

Pune:
College:
Shivani, Varun and Aryan are sitting together. Though they r together, Aryan’s eyes r searching for someone else.
Varun: hey bro…. where r u???
Aryan: I’m here only…
Varun: no…. u r not…
Aryan: shivani…
Shivani: hmmmm…
Aryan: where is ur bestie???
Shivani: who Aaroo??? She is with Rithvik….
Aryan [a little dissappointed]: oh…. Where???
Shivani: maybe is the library….
Aryan [getting up from his seat]: guys I’m coming….
Varun: ok….. [Aryan leaves].
Shivani: he loves Aaroo….
Varun: of course… see how desperate he is…
Shivani: yeh…. Varun…
Varun: yes….
Shivani: I have an idea….
Varun: what….
She tells something which is mute. At the end they shake hands and leave.

Krishnavati:
Kumudini’s house:
The car comes and stops in front of a house and the ladies along with Biswas come out from the car. Kumudini walks towards the door and folds her hands and sits in front of the door. Tilsi comes and holds her.
Tulsi: aayi….
Kumudini: they have kept me away from my Krishna for 21 yrs… They will have to pay for this…. Biswas…..
Biswas comes and gives a key in her hand and Kumudini opens the lock of the door. As the door opens Kumudini enters followed by Tulsi and Biswas. She goes and stands in front of a small temple. It was her Krishna’s temple. The temple was covered with spider combs and dust. She goes near it and dusts it all with the free end of her saree make it clean. Then she folds her hands.
Kumudini: ‘Krishnaye Govindaye Namo Namaha’… deve Krishna…. I have come back… I will take the revevge for insuting me… for insulting u….. give me the power…
Tulsi: aayi…. Y u always talk of revenge….
Kumudini: stop it…. I don’t need ur lecture…. Biswas… go get some grocery from the market…. Go…. [Biswas leaves]…
Tulsi: aayi… this is wrong….
Kumudini: tulsi… there is a saying….everything is fair is love and war… and this is my war with Praduman Rao… go take rest…… [Tulsi leaves]…. I have come here not to get emotional… I am not an emotional fool like u Tulsi…. I will have my revenge… by hookor by crooks…. [she smirks and rotates her tiny box].

Aaba’s mansion:
Munnim enters the house crying.
Aaba [irritated]: what happened u fool??? Y r u crying….???
Munnim: the news that I have brought will make u cry as well….
Aaba: what news…???
Munnim: those ‘tata thaiya’ [Kumudini and Tulsi].. have come back….
Aaba [standing up from his arm chair]: what????
Munnim: yes…. I have seen them entering their house with my own eyes….
Aaba: Kumudini….. [he takes the stick in his hand in his own style and leaves the place]

Pune:
Aaroo and Rithvik r sitting together hand in hand when Aryan comes there.
Aryan: Aradhya…. I need to talk to u….
Aaroo: tell it here only….
Aryan: no…. come with me….

Aaroo: then leave it I can’t….
Aryan comes and holds her hand and takes her from there. Rithvik looks on.
Aaroo: Aryan… leave my hand…..
Aryan: why….. so that u can hold his….
Aaroo: Aryan… have u lost it….
Aryan: y is he so special to u ?
Aaroo: I know him from childhood….
Aryan: is he ur bf….????
Aaroo: Aryan….
Aryan: yes or no….
Aaroo: first leave my hand….
Aryan: first answer me….
Aaroo [irritated]: shut up Aryan… u have gone mad…. Leave my hand… u r hurting me….. leave me….
Aryan: first answer me…

Aaroo slaps Aryan in disgust. Aryan is shocked. He leaves Aaroo’s hand and keeps looking at her. Aaroo leaves the place rubbing her hand. A tear trickles from both Aaroo and Aryan’s eyes as they turn around. This entire scene was seen by Rithvik who was seemed to be enjoying this.
Rithvik: it’s just the beginning… Aryan Rao…. I will snatch ur everything… I know u love Aaroo a lot…. That is y I am here to separate u both….u will have to pay for ur aaba’s sins….. Aryan I will make ur life a hell… [he smirks and leaves the place and goes to Aryan].
Aryan: what u need here???
Rithvik: I just came to console u….. I am xtremely sorry for Aaroo’s behavior… actually she is vry possessive abt our relation….
Aryan: I need to go…. [Aryan leaves]

Hope u guys liked it. Plzzzzz do comment.

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7 Comments

  1. Rhimjhim on May 25, 2016 9:17 pm

    this is not part 3 but part 11… plzzz make the necessary change

  2. AYUSHI on May 25, 2016 10:08 pm

    Nice episode update soon

    • Rhimjhim on May 25, 2016 10:23 pm

      thanks

  3. sneha on May 26, 2016 7:39 am

    aarghh,…….this rithvik……….well nyc one

    • Rhimjhim on May 26, 2016 12:13 pm

      thanks

  4. Rhimjhim on May 26, 2016 4:06 pm

    ony 2 coments…. guys aren’t u liking it…plzz tell

  5. Roma on June 3, 2016 10:07 pm

    Awesome episode, love you loads. . I’m loving this story. ..plzzz continue…keep writing. ..muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂

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