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Home»Fan Fiction»I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 10
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I Can’t Take My Eyes Off You-Krishnadasi (ff) Part 10

administratorBy administratorMay 20, 2016Updated:June 1, 20169 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi guys I am back. So let’s start the 10th part of my ff. [Note: I have imagined Vibhav Roy as the new entry. If u want u can imagine any other]

Pune:
College:
As Aaroo goes to the library to collect some books, she strikes with a boy. She looks at the boy and smiles and hugs him. The boy to hugs her back.
Aaroo: Rithvik…. Long time… when did u come back…???
So the boy is Rithvik, Aaroo’s childhood friend.
Rithvik: last Monday…. And u… u r in this college…
Aaroo: yes… and u too…
Rithvik: yes…
Aaroo: great…. I am really very happy to see u again….
Rithvik: btw…. A very happy b’thday…. [Presenting her chocolate]….
Aaroo: Rithvik….
Rithvik: I know that u don’t take anything but for me at least…
Aaroo [receiving the chocolate]: ok… come… I will introduce u to my friends…
Rithvik: ok….
Their conversation was noted by Aryan who was standing outside the library. He could not hear what they were talking about but saw them hugging and Aaroo accepting his chocolate. Seeing this he feels some sort of jealousy and leaves the place.

Krishnavati:
Kumudini’s car enters the village. All the villagers get stunned to see a car from a city entering their village. As the car stops in front on a tree, Kumudini gets down from the car. The entire village gets frozen. The villagers began to talk among themselves. Kumudini walks up to the tree and touches it. Then she remembers about something long time back.
[FB shows]
Aaba is sitting on the bench infront of the tree and Tulsi is tied with the tree along with Kumudini.
Aaba: these r the women for whom our society is getting ruined….. do they have any place in the village…
The villagers roar: no…. nevr…. [Fb ends]
Kumudini: Praduman Vidyadhar Rao… it’s time to take rvenge… it’s time for u to pay back…
She again goes to get on her car. But before getting in she goes to each of the villagers and looks through their eyes.
Kumudini: 21 yrs have passed… go… tell ur aaba saheb… his enemy has come…. And she will not spare him this time…. Go….
She then gets in her car and leaves.

Pune:
College:
Aryan goes and sits angrily in the class. Varun comes up to him and sits beside him.
Varun: what happened????
Aryan: when I gave her a chocolate… she did not accept… but when he gave it she did not refuse…..and she hugging her as well….
Varun: what??? Whom r talking about????
Aryan: about that 2 foot ki dinosaur….
Varun: Aradhya…. Why??? what happened….???
Aryan: ask her only… no leave it…
Varun: oh God Aryan… u have gone mad…. Wait I will ask Shivani… [Varun leaves]
Aryan: why is it affecting me so much??? Let her do anything she likes…. Why am I so concerned???
Just then Aaroo enters the class with Rithvik. She comes and stands in front of Aryan.
Aaroo: Aryan… have u seen Shivani???
Aryan: no… why???
Aaroo: I wanted her to get introduced to my best friend…
Aryan: no… I don’t know… and why shud I … go ask someone else….
Aaroo [confused]: what happened??? Why r u behaving so strange???

Just then Shivani enters.
Shivani: Aaroo…
Aaroo: shivani… meet Rithvik….
Shivani: hii….
Aaroo: Rithvik she is Shivani… my friend…
Aryan [thinks]: see her… she is introducing him to everyone… but not to me… she doesn’t even bother about me…
Shivani signals Aaroo to introduce Rithvik with Aryan. Aaroo nods.
Aaroo: Rithvik… meet my another friend… Aryan….
Rithvik: hii…
Aryan: hii…. U r ???
Rithvik: I am Aaroo’s childhood friend… we have spent our childhood together…
This statement made the situation more complicated. Aryan started feeling uncomfortable. Moreover when he saw Aaroo laughing and talking to Rithvik made the situation miserable for him and he left the classroom.
Aaroo [confused]: what has happened to him???
Shivani: wait I will ask him and come… [Shivani leaves]
Shivani follows Aryan up till the corridor.
Shivani: Aryan… what happened???
Aaroo: who is this boy????
Shivani: he is Aaroo’s childhood friebd… they have spent their childhood together…. When rithvik and Aaroo were 10 yrs old… Rithvik’s family shifted to Mumbai for his dad’s business…. He is a really nice boy…
Aryan: why he has come now…???
Shivani: I don’t know….
Aryan: who told u about him…??
Shivani: Aaroo…. She always talk about him…
Aryan: does she like her???
Shivani: no… they r just gud friends…
Aryan [relieved]: thank God…
Shivani: what???
Aryan: nothing…
Shivani: ok… then come… the class will be starting within 15 minutes…
Aryan: yes…. U go I will come…
Shivani: ok… [she leaves]

Hope u guys liked this part. Plzz do comment.

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9 Comments

  1. Maleesha on May 21, 2016 1:20 am

    Fabulous Rhimjhim, it’s fantastic how Aryan felt jealous &the way he got tensed were mind blowing. Actually, this part really nice & the way you create scenes is very appreciative. Keep it up….
    Well done

  2. manikarnika on May 21, 2016 8:00 am

    Yar keep on writing frequently na,i eagerly wait for yur writeups, too gud,

  3. Osheen aggarwal on May 21, 2016 8:47 am

    I used to be silent reader but your ff forced me to comment on this ….. Such a great fan fiction really love it!!!!

  4. Ranaji(Miss ishveer.???.. on May 21, 2016 8:59 am

    Super yaar but pls give precap also..

  5. Aribah on May 22, 2016 12:03 am

    Fantastic Rhimjhim….keep it up???….and please Rhimjhim tell me that will Vibhav Roy gonna play negative role….and please never think to stop….love your ff❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????

  6. Nisha Singh on May 22, 2016 11:25 am

    ? loved it…waiting for the next one ?

  7. Rhimjhim on May 22, 2016 2:37 pm

    Thanks a lot every1… I’m extrmly sry as i cannot post for few days as i’m out of station… So plzz don’t mind

  8. sneha on May 25, 2016 9:40 am

    hats off to u….writers shud learn from u………. keep it up

  9. Roma on May 27, 2016 2:24 am

    Awesome episode, love you loads

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