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” I can’t stop loving u “- Twinj Love. Chapter 14

” I Can’t Stop Loving U – Twinj Love !!!”..
CHAPTER 14…

Now again this time also sorry for not replying back to the comments but trust me guy’s I read all those thrice or more than that as they all were so amazing …Thanks to all for always making me smile hard with ur beautiful words ….
Thank u. Shreyoo( Lovely – next time no sorry nd love u for ur cute words ) ; Sidmin ( see I’m posting next one today only on ur request ; u always make me feel so blessed ) .; Fan ( u need to express urself as I can understand ur feelings behind ur comment) ; Chehak( Thank u soo much for commenting ; I was so happy to see ur comment ) ; Shreya098 ( don’t say sorry yr it’s ok ….I was very happy to see ur comment ); Maggi ( thanks dear for ur love nd support ); Romaisah ( love u so much dear for ur support ) ; Angita ( dear ur comment is always so good to read nd don’t be sorry nd my Eid was very good coz this time I was having u ppl in my life); Naira ( I feel so happy to see ur comment that u also don’t know ) ; Aru ( thanks for loving the episode ) ; Mitali ( my OS queen thanks for ur lovely word’s ….love u ); Lama ( thanks sis for loving the episode ) ; Ruchi ( I’m fine dear s good to see ur comment ..love u ); Zaku ( thanks dear for liking the ff ); Purnima ( thanks for liking it) ; Rashi ( thanks dear for liking it ) ; Bhavika ( ur song was superb ….love u for ur so cute words ); Baby ( u always make me feels so special through ur words ; ur comment was expressing the happiness u were having ) ; Sana ( seriously I don’t have words to thank u ..the way u comment is so amazing ..I read it so many times nd every time it was giving a pleasure to me ….post ur ff I’m waiting ) ; Affa ( love u soo much for ur cute comment ) ; RiaA( I’m so happy that u liked the episode …thanks for it ) Shona ( thanks for loving everything in yesterday’s episode) nd Kruti ( though u did not commented on episode but u made me know ur views through message …love u)

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Continued…

Sarna House…

Tanya is in room along with Bebe ; Usha nd Manohar nd discussing regarding Kunj’s marriage with Twinkle…. While Kunj is outside the room nd moving here nd there in the tension nd biting his nails….

K-” Yrr kunj why r u becoming hell nervous as if ur board results r coming.. …why r u biting ur nails like girls..stop it or u gonna eat up ur whole nails …
But what to do… I’m so tensed ..whether all will agree for the proposal or not …if not then what will I do ..though I love Twinkle so much but for her I can’t stand against my family ; I can’t go against their will ….Babaji till now u have strengthen nd deepens my love ; my passion nd I have trust in u that I will pass this phase also….
Yes…yes….they will agree… Kunj come on start to repeat these lines it will give u positive feedback …But if they say no then ….Awwwaahhhh…..very soon I will become maniac thinking of it…”

All comes out from nd see’s kunj face full of tension ….nd signs eo …nd shows thumbs up..while kunj was boggled to see their expression…
He murmurs …” Kunj bacchoo tu toh gaya …ab kaun bachega tujhe ( kunj dude now u r gone ; who will save u from these ppl) ..” ..nd he pouts…

B-” I never expected kunj to hide such a big thing from all of us ”

U-” Ji Bebe …jikso hum apna accha beta smjhte the wo toh kotha sikka nikla ( The one who we thought to be a good son proved him to be false coin)

K-” Maa….Bebe : why r u saying like this …here I’m already getting half in tension nd u ppl r in a mood to speak phrases …tell me about ur decision ”

B-” See Manohar …what ur son is saying ; he himself had hidden his feelings from us …was ready to sacrifice his love nd now he is blaming us …Ulta chor kotwal ko daate
( guilty person blaming the innocent )

M-” So my son u want to know our decision …soo ..sooo ..soo”

K-” Are yrr papa jaldi bolo …itna time mat lo yahan meri jaan nikal rhi hai r ap so so kr rhe ho ( Papa plzzz speak fast …don’t take much time ; here I’m dying of tension nd ur saying so so )

Ta-” Haawww…kunj u r so excited for ur own marriage …have some shame …”.

K-” What’s the need to shame haan….someday every one has to get married nd now it’s my turn …guy’s yrr plzzz tell me ur decision ”

Everyone was surprised to see the new side of kunj …the quiet one tuned to a gingerbread nd industrious one…

B-” So listen…. We r not ready for the proposal …we don’t like Twinkle …”

Kunj was shocked ….he in low tone says ” okk…” ..he turns to go …while Bebe calls him ..
B-” Kunj first listen my complete nd then go …we r not ready infact we r super duper ready for the marriage nd we don’t like Twinkle infact we love her to make her DIL of Sarna family..”

Listening this Kunj’s happiness was upto extreme …
K-” Thank u all for accepting it …I have the best family with so cute ppl” …nd he hugs all of them ..”

Ta-” Maska marna band kr ( stop buttering us …) …now we have to do preparation as we will go to Taneja Mansion in evening to talk to them regarding Twinkle’s nd ur marriage “..

Everyone leaves..
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NEXT SCENE …TWINKLE’S ROOM…

Twinkle is standing in front of mirror nd having a look to her figure ..

T-” Is kunj was saying right ; have I gain weight ; do I became fat ?….But my figure is looking so perfect then why he was saying like that …That Sadu Sarna thinks himself as a very handsome one ..always having misconception about him ….uuhhhh…stupid ..yesterday he behave so rudely with me ..but somewhere I also did wrong with him ; he was trying to cheer up my mood but I fought with him …”

Her thoughts came to an end with the ringing of mobile ..the screen flashes kunj calling ..

T-” Yes ..kunj speak ..” ..she speak in fake anger tone..

K-” Siyaapa queen still u r angry with me …I’m sorry for my behavior …forgive me …but u also reacted in bad way “…

T-” Yes …I also did wrong ..I’m also sorry ”

K-” OK…enough of sorry …well u tell till how much time u gonna stand in front of mirror nd checkout ur figure ”

Twinkle was surprised ..
T-” Hawww.,….kunj how do u know this… R u near my room …or u kept hidden cameras secretly in my room”

K-” Wooww…it means my guess is right …I just guessed it nd u proved it right ..hats off kunj Sarna ” ..he pats on his shoulder
” Nice effect of my words …u think of me …Tabhi toh main sochu aaj subah se mujhe itni hicchkiyan kyu arhi thi ( That’s what I was thinking that since morning why I’m suffering with the problem of hiccups ) ”

T-” I nd missed u …fffoooo….in ur dreams ”

Kunj murmurs in low tone ” Now a days u r only in my dreams ”

T-” What did u said speak loudly …don’t say in ur mouth …I’m not able to hear it ”

K-” U tell ..yesterday u were crying bcoz u wanted the engagement to happen nd u felt sad that it got canceled ”

T-” No …I got sad seeing maa ; papa crying …I felt bad seeing their conditon …about engagement ; even I was happy that it got canceled my heart was not ready to accept Raman as my husband ”

Again kunj murmurs in low tone ” How u will accept it ; coz ur heart wants me to be ur husband ”

T-” See kunj again u spoke in low pitch
..I’m not able to hear it ….what u want to say speak Ioud so that it is audible to me ….sometime I thinks that with which kind of person I did frndship”

K-” Sorry …next time I won’t repeated it again …well I called u to inform that today my family nd I will come to ur house …we have surprise for u ” ..

T-” What kind of surprise ?”..
K-” U have to wait for it ..if I will tell u now then it won’t be a surprise ..so wait ..okk ..talk with u later ..byee..see u in evening ”
T-” Byee.” ….she thinks what it could be ..

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NEXT SCENE… EVENING …

Sarna’s arrive at Taneja mansion …
Twinkle was standing side of kunj ..nd showing her tongue to him ; to tease him …while kunj was enjoying her childish action ..
L-” Bebe… U all came to talk something important ….what’s that ?”

B-” Ji Leela ji …see right now I know it’s not good to talk about it but we can’t want someone else to come nd ask for the thing we r going to ask for ..one time we lost the chance but this time we don’t want that ..
Actually we r here for the marriage proposal of our Kunj for your Twinkle”

Twinkle was shocked to hear that …she stared at kunj with confused expression while kunj was blushing endlessly…

L-” Twinkle marriage with kunj ..woooww…Bebe u stole my words even I nd Rt ji wanted to talk with u all regarding this ..we like kunj very much …we r ready for it ”

Twinkle speaks ” I’m not ready for it …” …she runs to terrace ..
Kunj nd other was not able to interpret Twinkle’s behavior..

Tanya -” Don’t worry I will talk to her “”
K-” Di ! I’m also coming ”

Tanya nd kunj reach to terrace nd sees Twinkle standing their ..while kunj hides behind the door …

Ta” Twinkie r u fine…why don’t u want to marry him ? U don’t like him or u think he is not suitable for u ? ”

T-” No di ..don’t say like this …kunj is very good nd thereof I don’t want him to spoil his life getting married to me ..he deserves someone better than me ”

Ta-” What r u saying ; his life will not spoil infact it will lightened up with ur presence ..u know he likes u the way a boy likes a girl …for him u r more than a frnd ….for him u r everything …can’t u see the feelings fr u in his eye’s ”

Twinkle was shocked cum happy listening this ….” but di …try to understand I’m not eligible for him ”

” Who said u r not eligible for me ..infact u r perfect for me ” ..Kunj speaks ..

Twinkle turns nd see’s him..

Ta-” U both talk I’m leaving ” ..she goes ..

T-” Kunj u know about my past ….about Ranveer nd yesterday only I’m tagged with a tittle of girl who’s engagement got canceled …still u want to do it ..u deserve one best for u not I ”

K-” I know everything …nd I want to do it ..coz I’m proud to have u in my life ….coz u r special for me …”

He takes her hand nd place on his heart ..
K-” Now listen my heartbeat nd try to listen the name pumping in my heart …IT’S TWINKLE… TWINKLE ..”

Twinkle eye’s him lovingly ..
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TO BE CONTINUED….

PRECAP – Twinkle to agree for marriage ..

Hello everyone !!!..
Again I’m back to bore u all…
Guy’s I want to know one thing r u finding the track boring ….
Nd one more thing u want me to show pre marriage rituals ..or direct marriage ..
Do answer plzzzzzz!!!!!!

Silent reader’s plzzz guys ek baar boldo I know my ff is not good enough to break ur silence but still I will be very happy if u all give ur views…

LOVE U ALL….KEEP SUPPORTING

Sayeeda

Cute ....bubbly... smart... zyada hogaya na...but a big fan of Twinj # SIDMIN...love me ...myself..die hard fan of musical voice ARIJIT SINGH #

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