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Can’t you see my love -RagLak ff part 1

Can’t you see my love -1
Hi friends.,back with the new ff and here is the link for the prologue

Prologue

Do read it and share your views about this plot..!!happy reading..!!and sorry for the delay..!!
Part 1:
“Everything will be fine Ragini.,don’t worry..!!”laksh placed his hands over her’s..!!
She nods simply and stepped out from the car and gazes the building..!!
“oh.,this is our quarters Ragini and we gonna stay here only..!!are you ok with this place..??”

“yeah laksh.,this place is too good..!!”

“let’s go inside then.,”laksh places his hand on her shoulder which makes her stumbles a bit..!
Laksh haven’t did that with intentions but unknowingly his hand travelled to her shoulder..!he takes his hand back and apologized feeling embarrassed..!!
“chale..!!”she asked..!!
He nods and they opened the door but was stopped by a lady not to step inside the house..!!
“aunty ji..!!Namaste..!!”laksh greeted her..!!
“putr..!wait here itself..,I will come now..!!don’t step in before I come..!!”she ran into her house and came back with the thaal in her hands..!!
Raglak looks each other and the lady did their grahapravesh and asked Ragini to enter after pushing the kalash..!
Ragini after finishing all the rituals went to her room..!the ladies in the quarters were decorating Ragini and the gentleman were busy talking with laksh giving him tips..!!laksh was laughing throughout..!!
“uncle.,this isn’t good for you..!!if aunty ji came to know..!you’re finished..!!”laksh laughs..!
“laksh putr..!!”
Everywhere their happiness spread over but still raglak were alone in their heart feeling something separately..!!

Flashback…
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“hey..!that flower wasn’t fixed properly..!!do it properly ..!!”a girl said while running towards the hall..!!
“and this samosa’s aren’t that much good..!change the entire menu..!!”she said still running..!
“this floor bina..!bhaiyya it’s slippery here..!!clean it quickly..!!”
“Ragini..!!careful na..!!!”

“aahh..!!”her legs slipped and she got bumped with someone and she was in top of him..!his face is revealed as Laksh..!!his eyes were dipped deep inside her eyes.,he lost him completely in her eyes..!

“tere naam hum ne kiya hai jeevan aapna sara sanam
pyaar bahut karte hai tumse ishq hai tu humara sanam”plays

Ragini somehow managed and stood up ..!
“sorry..!!”she said and offered him a tissue..!!but he was still staring her.!
“oh hello..!!”she waves her hand across his face..!!
Laksh came back to this world and was blinking his eyes.
“am sorry..!!”Ragini said pouting and points him something..!!
Laksh hand moves towards his cheeks and he rubs there and at that time only he found that her mehendi got messed on his cheek.he then wipes his face and uttered “am sorry for making it as a mess..!!”
“it was my mistake.!even though I found it slippery I stepped on it..!!sorry..!!”said she..!
“no no am sorry..!!”

“no that was me who need to apologize here..!!am sorry..!!”she said
“enough with your sorry guys..!!”
Ragini:paapa..!
“major sir..!!I missed u a lot..!!”laksh takes his blessings and hugged him..!!
Shekhar:Laado.,I told you about my junior na and he is that naughty boy.,laksh..!!
Laksh(chuckling):waise Ragini.,am not that much naughty.,don’t believe your dad.
Ragini was just blinking and she doesn’t believe her eyes.,because her father is a strict officer when it comes to duty.,but this guy is talking casually with him and that too in teasing tone..!!
“laadoo..!!”Shekhar waves his hand across her face..!!
Ragini:paapa.,is it real or am I dreaming..!
Shekhar and laksh laughs hearing her..!Ragini glares them and they sealed their mouth.”it’s real only beta..,more than my junior he is like family laado..!that’s why I invited him for your marriage..!!”Shekhar said..!!
“congratulations..!!”laksh forwards his hand to her and she too did it..!!he feels the spark in her eyes..!!
He crushed away his thoughts and made an excuse.Shekhar asks one of his relative to show laksh his room.!!
******fb ends when someone shooks laksh
“haan..!”he uttered without realising what he heard..!
“putr.,that much love..!”
“haan..!!”he still lost when he found his angel passing upstairs to his room..!
“chalo chalo..,old man..!!”all the ladies were dragging their husbands leaving raglak alone..!!
Laksh was wondering about the sudden turnover in his life which he never expected but he really dying for it once upon a time..!!
Fb*****
It was an cold evening and fog surrounds everywhere.,laksh came back to camp after wandering the city.he was found dumbstruck when he found the angelic beauty crossing over.he slightly pinched him to got clear that it wasn’t a dream..!!
“a girl..!that too from our camp.,unbelievable..!!”he was amazed ..!
The next moment his face turned dull when he found that girl waving her hand to someone and blown a flying kiss..!!
Laksh(whispering):who is that luckiest fellow..!
“major sir..!”he was shocked and pat his backhead and says”that means..,she is Ragini..!”
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To be continued •••
Precap:flashback and laksh supporting Ragini in her career.

So guys done with the chappy.,I know I bored u but still I wanted to update this and I wish you all a very happy ramzan dear friends..don’t forget to comment about this plot..!!
Take care dears
~Darshu

Darshini

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