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Home»Fan Fiction»i cant live without u (part 13)
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i cant live without u (part 13)

ayathBy ayathSeptember 14, 201633 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello ishqbazians, ayath here sorry for the late submission bcz am busy with eid shopping and all…so plz plzz guyz keep commenting

Scene 1
@oberoi mansion

Ishaana goes to om’s room but om is still sleeping she walks near him and sits beside him.om feels ishaana presence .he hugs her tightly like she cant move anywhere when she shouts om leaves his hand but he make her on the bed itself beside with om.they start talking….
Om; ishaana tomorrow is our wedding right
Ishi; yes om u have any doubt about this
Om; nahe dear woo..mein….
Ishi; kya..woo…mein what all these

Om; mera matlab tomorrow onwards my life will be changed(he cuts his words) bcz when he stare at ishaana she became red so he changed his topic.
Ishi; so omkara singh oberoi thinks u dont get any freedom or space after our wedding right
Om; no ishi i didn’t mean
Ishi; its okay om all boys are thinking like this only
Om; no ishi u know am different from everyone
Ishi; ha i know u very well
Om; then why u teasing me
Ishi; its my hobby darling
Om; so its ur hobby can i do my hobbies if u dont have any problem with it

Ishi; no om am just kidding
Om; dont worry ishi
Ishi; o mi will; go from here so plz stop
Om; came close to ishi and make her sit in the bed
Ishi; om what are u doing
Om; he kept his finger on her lip
Isha; didn’t utter a word
Om ; make her comfortable and tell in her ears
Ishaana today we cant see each other tomorrow morning only we can see after all rituals gets over
Ishi; omi plz tell me,we cant c each other

Om; no ishi this rituals is doing for our good future if we didn’t do this we cant live together for 100 years with our 2(no..no)5 children’s
Ishi ; stop omi , we dint even married u think all this matter so fast haaa
Om; i prepared everything
Ishi; what the wuck u done all preparation without me
Om; no ishi i mean i decorate our room with our favourite things and …nothing
Om; i think u thought something else right
Ishi(gets shy); no om… mera matlab…
Om; know everything, he tickled her a lot
Om and ishaana smiles and hugs each other
When rudra and soumya were coming to the room for some discussion at the same time shivaay and anika also joins them

Scene 2
@ om’s room
Shiv; rudra what u want
Ru; whoa bhaiyya, designer came they need om’s selection
So; ha bade bhaiyya, om bhaiyya is different so we cant choose anything for him
Anika; its okay soumi u dont need to give this much explaintion om is ur bade bhaal bhaiyya
Shiv; looks at her angrily
Ru; soumya did u noticed something
So; what ruddy
Ru; something fishy b/w bhaiyya and bhabhi
So; ha ruddy first time u said something good
Ru; dont start again soumya
So; u started first now u stopped me
Ru; i didn’t mean it
Ani; guys come lets go inside and discuss
(They four stand in front of the door bcz they all get stunned seeing om and ishaana )

Ru; bhaiyya u can do these now
Shiv; shut up rudra
Ani; she calls ishaana
Suddenly ishana and om leaves their hand
So; bhaiyya wo..wo…designers
Ru; what soumya, bhaiyya ithni fast u has so much time after ur wedding just wait for tomorrow
Om gets awkward and said with his low sound
Om; u guys are here what’s the matter
Ish; ha any problem
Shiv; no problem , i came here honeymoon pack
Anika looks shivaay
R u okay shivaay i mean u never done all these matters. How u know about this
Shiv; no anika i dont want to create a fight here am soo busy now

Ani; i know that u dont have much time for call me also
Now shivaay understood why anika is too stubborn
Shiv; no anika i called u bt…
Ani; ha but what tell me
Rudra soumya om and ishaana looks at anika bcz she lied to them
Om; anika yesterday u said shivaay called u and all
Anika; whoa om he called me but
Ishi; but what bhabhi
Ru; tell me bhabhi
Anika; he scold me verywell bcz he was full of angry
Om; then why u sayed that shivaay is fine he will come home and all

Anika; bcz i dont want ur bhaiyya gets tensed for me. Its a silly matter
Om; no anika its not
So; i know di well, yesterday full night u were crying
Ish; yea soumya i also seen her
Ani; no guyz i didn’t cried
Shivaay understood everything and pulled anika towards him and anika tell me one thing yesterday night u cried or not ….tell me dammn
Anika; yes shivaay i cried bcz of u .your words make me hurt today morning i saw u, get happy bcz u r safe then i came near u but that time also u were busy with ur business u know i left my dad for his misbehaves but i cant leave u like this. shivaaay shocked hearing this words by anika and he realised his mistake. shivaay makes her comfort but she didn’t .she leaves the room
Om; shivaay u can only make her happy then why u doing all these
Ishi; now happened plz make some plan to make dii happy
So; ha bade bhiyya dii gets hurt by u
Ru; i have a plan
So; i know ur plan ruddy

Ru;what soumi
So; dinner date right
Ru; yes soumya how u know my idea
So; bcz u had only this idea
Om; guys let stop everything and make some plan
(Om ishana rudy and soumya tell their opinion but shivaay didn’t like none of them)
Shivaay ; i know everything i will do this but its risk i dont know how it works
Shivaay make his plan after discuss with everyone
Anika; shivaay come with me
Shi; ha sweetheart what u want
Ani; dont call me that name only loved ones calling me that name
Ani; dadi called u

Precap ; anika got a letter after reading this she gets shocked but didn’t discuss with shivaay she gets worried and goes to her room she ran towards shivaay and hugged him. shivaay doesn’t know the matter after a while she leaves him and gone outside

guys i know this part is little boring and next tyme i will make it a good one. and sorry guyz for the delay bcz i am not well, i had fever.

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    I trusted u,bt now ur words mean nothing to me bcz ur actions spoke the truth

    33 Comments

    1. Shaza on September 14, 2016 8:14 am

      Rocking episode ???…get well soon di …and post next ep ASAP..

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:39 pm

        thanks a lot dear…..take for ur concern may allah bless u

    2. Jazz on September 14, 2016 9:25 am

      It’s not boring. It’s really good. I hope u will get better soon

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:40 pm

        ohh thnx jazz….now am okay

    3. Abiha on September 14, 2016 9:29 am

      Superb yr ..post next asap plz..

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:40 pm

        thnx abiha…sure

    4. bshama1239 on September 14, 2016 9:30 am

      Oh ayath are u OK dear … And the episode was awesome don’t say that its boring … Its better than my last one actually it was a rough sketch which I made in hurry…and posted it but your ff was a proper dialogue script

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:51 pm

        shama where is today’s epi…. now am fine dear….thanks for ur concern and comment also bye take care

    5. Priya15 on September 14, 2016 9:35 am

      Wow nyc part di..

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:52 pm

        priya after a long time u commented no problem dear…u liked my ff

    6. Akshaya on September 14, 2016 10:33 am

      Nice yaar

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:53 pm

        thnx akshaya

    7. Dobhsh on September 14, 2016 12:07 pm

      Wow awesome episode. Get well soon. And its not boring. Bcoz if this is boring, then your awesome will be way way too good.

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:54 pm

        thanks dobsh for this sweet words ….now am fine keep supporting

    8. Goms on September 14, 2016 2:59 pm

      Ayath.. Really good epi… Tc.. Take rest.. Get well soon..

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:55 pm

        goms..today’s epi was awesome….yea dear am fine now and plz upload nxt part tomorrow itself take care dear

      • Goms on September 14, 2016 9:01 pm

        Sure sweety… Am veryyyyy happy you liked it..

    9. Shivika on September 14, 2016 3:54 pm

      Awesome

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:55 pm

        thnx shivika

    10. namrata on September 14, 2016 4:24 pm

      Awesome
      Get well soon
      Waitng for nxt episode

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:59 pm

        thmx namrata…first time u commenting am so happy keep supporting dear and am fine now

    11. Jara on September 14, 2016 5:42 pm

      NYC part yaar get well soon

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:57 pm

        jara where is today’s epi…..yea dear am fine now

      • Jara on September 14, 2016 9:03 pm

        Updated at afternoon itself..it’s still in process…

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 9:25 pm

        jara…..juzt complain it dude may be they will upload it (in contact us)box

    12. alekhika20 on September 14, 2016 6:37 pm

      Awesome update,cont soon

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:56 pm

        thnx alekhila

    13. tanu on September 14, 2016 7:35 pm

      plzzzzz update soon eagerly wating for next update…..

      • ayath on September 14, 2016 8:56 pm

        thnx tanu …..tanu am not well today..pacca tmrw I will post it

    14. Fiza on September 15, 2016 7:32 am

      Amazing

      • ayath on September 15, 2016 11:06 pm

        thnx fiza

    15. Tulasi on September 15, 2016 11:49 am

      Luv ur ff…..plz update soon…..its jus awesummm….

      • ayath on September 15, 2016 11:05 pm

        thnx dear

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