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Home»Fan Fiction»Burning in veangence #chapter 1 #by aisha08
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Burning in veangence #chapter 1 #by aisha08

Aisha08By Aisha08July 20, 202160 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello pappuos phir agyi me..

Finally here with 1st epi thoda boring lga meko.. dimg ni chlra tha..jo aya likh dia..

Bta dena continue krna hai ya nhi..

Lets start..

Scene 1

London (night)

A girl is cooking in kitchen and another girl comes from behind and hugs her..

Girl – Riddhu!! What’s these you are again late..

Yups she is riddhima)

Riddhima – Shanu di!! Stop scolding me like a daily soap’s typical saas..

She sits on kitchen slab and starts distrubing her sister..

Riddhima – I am so excited for your marriage di..

It’s sound so amazing.. sharanya weds atishey..

Sharanya ( pouting) – You! Shameless creature.. teasing your elder sister.. I won’t talk to you now .

Riddhima (hugging her) – You can’t stay away from me..i know that..
And i love to tease you

Sharanya – When i will go away from you then you will realise my worth riddhu ki bacchi!!

——-

Riddhima wakes up with sudden jerk sweating badly

Riddhima (shouting) – Nooooo!!!

Shanu dii๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ… why you left me alone in this cruel world..

It’s been 5 years you died but seems like you will come to now and take me in your embrace..

Suddenly the photo frame of sharanya fell down from the table..

_____

Scene 2

India (morning)

A men pick ups the photo frame from floor weeping his tears..

Man – Shanu!! Where are you jaan!! I am missing youย  so much!! My life is nothing without you please come back to me..

A lady holding tray in her hands come to him..

Lady – Atishey ji!! Your coffee..

Atishey throw the coffee from her hands and hold her neck..

Atishey (angry) – How many times i have to tell you shalmali that when i talk with my Shanu don’t interfere..

Shalmali (crying) – I am sorry Atishey ji!!

He throws her on floor with thudd and leaves

Scene 3

Raisinghania’s are having breakfast except vangre

Ajay – where is vansh and angre

Ishani – they are there where they should be.. you know na how vansh bhai is..and because of him..my husband suffers..

Ajay – It’s their work beta..

Aryan – Sir we have to go for a deal now..

Atishey – Dad i am going for a deal of gold ..

Ajay – Be careful..shalmali beta..make him eat curd and sugar

Atishey Stormed out from the house Despising shalmali..

Scene 4

A man is sitting on king size chair like a king keeping his one leg on another in a dark room..

Man – Angre!! Don’t you know how to welcome our guests..

Angre – Sorry boss!!

Angre drag a man by his collar and push him on the man’s feet

Man – Aakhir hi gye tum apni asli jagah pr..

Didn’t you know what are the consequences of messing with vansh raisinghania..

He put the gun in that man’s mouth

Vansh – Speak or i will shot you!!

Man (crying) – pardon me master!! I won’t do this again..

Vansh (pressing the trigger) – You have to stay alive for that..

Mercy .. I don’t the meaning of this word..

He goes to his office and stand near the window..

A girl comes from behind and hug him

Vansh jerks her and turn

Vansh (agitated) – what are you doing here aaru..

Girl – Arundhati doesn’t need anyone’s permission to meet his love..right baby..

Vansh – This is my office aaru..

Arundhati (tracing his cheeks) – Sorry baby..you know na i can’t stay away from you..

Vansh (detaching himself from him) – You very well know I don’t like this..

We are together just because our dad’s are partners..

He stormed out of the cabin..

Arundhati (smirking) – One day you will give yourself to me..

You are mine vansh.. you are mine..

Scene 5

(When it’s morning in London its night in india)

London

Next day morning

Riddhima is sitting on a chair holding guitar singing

Kya khoob rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko khuda

Hasratein ab meri
Tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri
Aakhiri ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye…

A man comes from behind and hugs her..

Riddhima (smiling) – kabir!!

Finally you got time to meet me huff!!

Kabir (holding his ears) – I am sorry jana..i was busy somewhere..

But now me and my time..all is yours..

Riddhima (hugging him) – I missed you so much kabir..

Kabir comes close to her lips and about to kiss her..

Riddhima (keeping her palm on his lips) – Kabir! Plz..no!! You know na i am not comfortable in this..

Kabir (cupping her face) – I am sorry jana.. I won’t do anything untill you are ready.. it’s just i missed you so much..

Kabir leaves

riddhima (smirking)

Chal bhi ek hogi..waar bhi ek hoga..

Nafrat bhi hogi or pyar bhi hoga..

Their will be one move their will be one attack..

Enmity will also be there and so as love.)

Sceneย  6

India (night)

Vansh is resting on bed keep his head on bedpost..

Vansh is sadly smiling holding a picture in his hand..

His pov

Bohot mushkil se khud ko is kabil bnaya hai..ki ab dard se bhi dard na ho..

Ab himmat nhi hai phir tutne ki..

Ab dil me nhi hai jazbat koi..

Ab man me nhi hai ehesas koi..

Ab na chehre par khushi hai..na labo pr muskaan koi..

( I made myself this much rigid with so difficulty that now pain also can’t give me pain

I don’t have strength to breakdown again

Their is no emotions in my heart

Their is no feeling in my heart..

Neither i have happiness on my face nor smile on my lips)

Done done dana done… Muh dikhayi ho gyi ab photo km dalungi ๐Ÿ˜ž


Done done dana done โœ…

Muh dikhayi kr di hai sbki ab km dlaungi photu..

It was boring i felt that..

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Aisha08

    Well i m not so good at writing ff as i m shayar and i love to pen down my thoughts in shyri..and here i m exploring my writing skills

    60 Comments

    1. RIVAN on July 20, 2021 8:32 am

      AMZING

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:42 pm

        Thnq dear…

    2. Prabhleen ๐Ÿ˜Š on July 20, 2021 8:35 am

      Interesting very interesting. Please continue this. It wasn’t boring at all. Post soon.

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:42 pm

        Thnq dear

    3. TG on July 20, 2021 8:36 am

      Not boring
      Loved this

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:41 pm

        Thnq

    4. Priyanshi_13 on July 20, 2021 8:39 am

      Amazing ๐Ÿ˜

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:41 pm

        Tysm…

    5. jaskiranarora0605 on July 20, 2021 8:40 am

      Nice episode

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:41 pm

        Thnq

    6. Akshara on July 20, 2021 8:48 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:40 pm

        Thnq..

    7. Aishwarya Wanjari on July 20, 2021 8:56 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:40 pm

        Tysm..dear๐Ÿ™ˆ

    8. Anannya07 on July 20, 2021 9:10 am

      Amazing

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:40 pm

        Thnq..

    9. Arpita jaiswal on July 20, 2021 9:17 am

      Superb

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:39 pm

        Thnq

    10. DDD on July 20, 2021 9:18 am

      Awesome ๐Ÿ˜

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:39 pm

        Thnq

    11. Varshini on July 20, 2021 9:31 am

      Amazing ๐Ÿ˜. It’s interesting. Post soon ๐Ÿ˜

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:39 pm

        Tysm dear

    12. AarushiSoni on July 20, 2021 9:59 am

      Amazing!!! Epi is wonderful..

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:38 pm

        Thnq jaan..

    13. Tanvi_5117 on July 20, 2021 10:05 am

      Amazing ๐Ÿ’š
      Ittu sa bhi not boring!!
      Post soon

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:38 pm

        Thnq dear๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ˜

    14. Salma on July 20, 2021 10:13 am

      Not boring amazing ff…. Please post daily..

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:38 pm

        Tysm dear..

    15. Mennahussein55 on July 20, 2021 10:13 am

      Awesome

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:37 pm

        Thnq dear..

    16. Tanya K on July 20, 2021 10:28 am

      FANTASTIC starting aishu di๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:37 pm

        Thnq

    17. Sumisha on July 20, 2021 11:23 am

      Amazing dear โคโ™ฅ

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:34 pm

        Thnq

    18. FARHANA on July 20, 2021 11:59 am

      not boring.plz continue

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:34 pm

        Thnq dear..will try my best

    19. Priyanka Thakur on July 20, 2021 12:02 pm

      Amazing episode Aishu it’s full of suspense and thrilling eagerly waiting for next update

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:33 pm

        Thnq dear..

    20. prapti0809 on July 20, 2021 12:57 pm

      awesome di loved it

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:32 pm

        Thnq dear…

    21. Cutuuu on July 20, 2021 1:38 pm

      Awesome โค๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™ Not at all boring ๐Ÿ˜… ๐Ÿ˜ Song ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’›

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:32 pm

        Tysm..dear๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜..

    22. @Mj on July 20, 2021 2:15 pm

      Amazingโคโค

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:32 pm

        Tysm..dear..

    23. Priya Singh on July 20, 2021 2:53 pm

      โค๏ธโค๏ธ เคฎเฅเค‚เคน เคฆเคฟเค–เคพเคˆ เค•เคพ sagun toh Lete jaao yaar aisha ye lo๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’ƒ

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:31 pm

        ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚u always drop emoji bt today u wrote something i m so happy…๐Ÿ™ˆ

    24. Parita on July 20, 2021 5:59 pm

      Amazing di!
      Not at all boring, a great startโค

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:31 pm

        Tysm..dear..

    25. Jayashree on July 20, 2021 6:50 pm

      Wow amazing ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
      It’s a amazing ๐Ÿ˜โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
      Thanks for mind-blowing updates ๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’—
      Keep rocking ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ
      One more thing is not boring FF is really fantastic FF โค๏ธ๐Ÿค 

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:30 pm

        Tysm..dear๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    26. Priyadarshini on July 20, 2021 6:51 pm

      Super ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:29 pm

        Thnq..dear..

    27. JJ on July 20, 2021 6:51 pm

      Wonderful ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’—

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:29 pm

        Thnq..

    28. Vkjhp on July 20, 2021 6:52 pm

      Wow fabulous โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:29 pm

        Tysm…

    29. Sree on July 20, 2021 6:52 pm

      Fantastic episode ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:28 pm

        Thnq.

    30. Zara on July 20, 2021 9:37 pm

      Amazing plz continue it …

      • Aisha08 on July 21, 2021 10:28 pm

        Thnq

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