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Fan Fiction Kaala Teeka

brokenhearted (Intro)

kashiBy kashiAugust 11, 20167 Comments2 Mins Read
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kaala teeka at its worse therefore i am back,back with a diff story..remember me?
thi time the show will take a leap marking the exit of kali in yug’s lif…i must say yug is the worst person–like kali didnt say anything to yug for gauri’s baby n sacrificed alot..but he is rude
n basically in this new story is rather a way that gives me happiness by showing what tv serials dont–showing women as strong instead of being a vamp or a needy….i will show kali to be strong…n i might not guarantee their reunion after yug has given her so much pain…
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SO HERE IS IT..I HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
a bit of intro….

yug threw kali out of the house n vishwa took her…the last thing told by kali to yug was that “look at you! u r not a man!u never loved me n u too like others hated me..n when u got chance u went with someone else”
yug got pricked but gauri started her drama again…
kali went with vishwa..they were standing near the cliff..same cliff where kali saved gauri n yug…kali was crying n vishwa was giving telling her tht even u were pregnant..tht clicked kali..how did her father knew..she went into thought but just then vishwa pushed her off cliff..n said a final goodbye to her….

but she was strong enough,strong enough to save herself n she knew she could because afterall she could save the two important yet worst people of her life-his so called husband n so caled sister…

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(5 yrs later)

PRECAP:kali was in delhi n yug was where he was with a family:his daughter,him,n his wife gauri

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    7 Comments

    1. Anonymous on August 12, 2016 1:38 am

      Hey…. First of all I want to tell that this would be my first fanfiction of kaala teeka that I am going to read… Secondly I just loved it… The show always showed kali as a weakling…. Wanna read more

    2. Anonymous on August 12, 2016 1:39 am

      Hey…. First of all I want to tell that this would be my first fanfiction of kaala teeka that I am going to read… Secondly I just loved it… The show always showed kali as a weakling…. Wanna read more

      P. S. Just a suggestion why don’t you start writing on other pages like India forum and myeduniya

    3. anu on August 12, 2016 9:31 am

      It is nice

    4. kashi on August 12, 2016 12:07 pm

      se this is a disclaimer: i have called him so called husband since the show has started representing yug in this way..what fight did he fought to win her not as a trophy but as his love..so my aggression spoke…
      but i really hope u like it

    5. Saasha123 on August 12, 2016 6:19 pm

      very nice kashi di

      • kashi on August 12, 2016 8:38 pm

        i was missing u..btw my name is kashika

      • Saasha123 on August 12, 2016 10:11 pm

        Oh k… R u not a registered member???

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