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Fan Fiction Kaala Teeka

brokenhearted (Episode 1)

kashiBy kashiAugust 12, 20169 Comments5 Mins Read
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thanku anonymous n anu…anu –do u remember me?
is it good enough to write on? i hope u all like it…

here is it..episode-1

———————————-
5 YEARS LATER..

kali was singing in concert at delhi…
n she was not singing bhajan but a rock song..all dressed in her own swag n style…without any mangalsutra or sindoor n with her own identity: kali malhotra..
the crowd cheered “kali!kali!kali!kali!” n she ended her song with a speech on women empowerment n making one’s own identity by thmselves..n waved them a good bye.
she used to inspire people…
… kali was not the pity kali like before,she was different,she was now legally human n she had no regrets or anything,she had just accepted herself as kali,kali malhotra…

kali was thinking of something,of her life n her stardom(she was happy) but she told herself that she felt anxious for something..someth….
KALI!KALI!KALI! a lady was hurridely taking her name n she came in front of her n clapped…
kali:what happened mom?
mrs.malhotra:u made it..
kali:i made it to..what?
mrs.malhotra: aree.. u made it to the….
kali: really dad?! oh my god!
n they gave a family hug ..but there was someone missing! the little creature went n tried to get in the hug saying
naira:aree nanu n naani how cn u hug withoutn me…i ll punish u three now!
malhotra’s: how can we forget u our little sweetheart..u just were not here so…
naira:no more excuses…now u would have to take me to the ice-cream parlour for mumma’s victory n she bumped into kali strongly hugging her…

AT THE ICE CREAM PARLOUR,
naira was dancing n chanting:my mommie strongest!my mommie strongest!

someone interrupted, “no! my daddy is much more stronger!”
naira:no my mom is stronger…
someone:no my dad is stronger…
n both naira n that someone started pulling each others hair… when kali interupted n said no more fighting! if u both get hurt then! n she took naira away…
but naira in the last said that see i told u naa my mommie strongest! u r a looseR(teasing him)!

kali(in mind):ya allah ! naira is getting so naughty day by day…

AT HOME

kali gripped her ears n told naira who is getting a little more naughtier day by day to which naira replied with a devilish smile “not me mumma” n that made kali grip her ears….
naira:sorry mumma..u know naa u r the best..n i like showing off! u be my cool dude mom…u r not my mom but my superhero! i luv u mumma n gave her a kiss n hugged
kali smiled n said i luv u too my life…

saying this she went into deep thoughts…to the day,the day when she got to know that she was pregnant n the day she almost fell off the cliff….but thankfully her daughter ,her only will to live life was saved..she thanked the doctor in mind….n then she went a bit teary eyed thinking how her life had become topsy turvy because of being kaala teeka..she was…
KAALI! KAALI!
kali:yes mom!
mrs.malhotra: u know what there is a big sale in dior…we will leave in 1 hr ohk? i want u to look the best(Saying this she put a kaala teeka on her)
kali smiled
mrs.malhotra:now why r u smiling? n y this tear-u know i cant see even one tear in your eye..come have dinner
kali said ohk mom give me a min..she wiped her tear n told to herself that she was happier than ever before ,getting a family who could do anything for her n she didnt wish for anything else,said thanku ramji n went too eat…..
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thats just the basic format of kali life…there r more things to it..but thats a suspense..how kali reached to malhotra?

—————————- (a bit of yug)

reyansh: dad u know what ?
yug:now what my little master?
reyansh: i met a girl in ice cream parlour
yug:dont tell me tht u fell on some other girl also..who is she?
reyansh: aree no buddhu..tht girl was a fool
yug:oh ..how did this happen i mean u calling a girl –a fool..why?
reyansh: daddy u r just..uhh..nyways she was chanting my mommie strongest
yug:so ?her mom might be a pehelvaan(body builder)
reyansh: no so i said her my daddy is strongest n we fought n she called me looser..i mean look at me? do i look like a looser from any angle?no1 can ever get a guy as handsome charming stunning hot…
yug:oye bass bass! chup ho jaa ab toh
reyansh: ohk..btw her mom was beautiful..just like ur sita…
listening to this yug cracked up n asked what r u saying my son?no1 can be like my sita!
reyansh:no dad..she just looked almost like her

gauri: who looked like sita?
reyansh:aree mom i met an au..
yug:stop it reyansh! go to ur room n sleep..
reyansh went
gauri:why didnt u let him complete? who is sita?
yug:aree nothing it was just..
gauri:no tell me!
yug:see my head is paining,i m going to sleep
gauri:daadi ki kasam
yug:which daadi?

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    9 Comments

    1. Sonia on August 13, 2016 1:16 am

      Inter change the gender of the children of kali and gauri. And also change the name of the boy.

    2. Saasha123 on August 13, 2016 1:22 am

      First epi very wonderful. Di try to comment in my ff too. And did u write tryst with destiny?????

    3. elena on August 13, 2016 1:37 am

      Bless kali with a boy child rather.

    4. debanjana on August 13, 2016 1:46 am

      It’s getting almost the same story as yeh waada raha. Plz change a bit

    5. ishani on August 13, 2016 1:56 am

      It’ll be better to watch a boy standing for his mumma and a girl for her supper daddy

    6. anu on August 13, 2016 6:18 am

      Good I love it

    7. Suman on August 14, 2016 8:17 pm

      Nice superb ????????my real name is sumaiya but my nickname is Suman

    8. Mouni on August 15, 2016 11:23 am

      I wanna watch d episode can anyone please help me

    9. Anonymous on August 16, 2016 12:14 am

      Loved the strong kali… And plss don’t let kali easily forgive yug he deserves a good punishment and just one suggestion can there be a man in kali’s life in future from whom yug can be jealous… Update soon dear

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