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Broken hearts…(episode 7)

AahanaBy AahanaOctober 30, 201630 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys ..i am here with my 7th episode of”broken hearts”..hope you all are enjoying reading it….thank you soo much for your comments….i really i need you support…so keep supporting…Love you all♥♥♥
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At london……….

::::::::::LAKSH POV:::::::::::
In this crisp autumn morning looking out to the outskirts of london through the window of my room reminds me of my past days…Every morning has become my hardest part of life as i wake up i the morning , remembering what i was trying to forget last night…In these days at london ..I had smiled like nothing is wrong, pretended like everything is alright and acted like it’s all perfect eventhough inside was really hurting…i done that just for swara….for my besty…..she had never cheated me….her words or doings have never hurted me. I am ready to do anything for her, to make her broken heart fix again and be a strong wall around it by not allowing anyone to break or hurt it again…she was the one who made me understood i am not unlucky..i am lucky ..yes…she is right..i am lucky to get a besty like her.

Adam,adarsh,james,jack, and sahil who had become my frds with me i this short time had created a strong bond. They had always supported me and swara in everything. They have never asked me and swara about our past …may be bcoz they understand that by recalling our past again and again from start can make us fall weak…I really hate ragini and sanskar…i will never forgive them for there doings….not with me…but with swara being a sister and lover.

Suddenly disturbing my thoughts i hear knock on my door, walking to the door i guessed it’s swara. and guess seemed to be correct when i open the door…She gave me a flooding and a warm smile and wished me “good morning” . By seeing her staring at me continously i understood why it was and suddenly wished her ‘good morning’ by bring up a smile in my face..then also she doesn’t stop staring ..i shake her and ask “did you had breakfast?” . she nods no…i was to ask why?…but she cutt’s me off by asking “Having a rough morning”…Don’t know how she understands eveything by just by seeing my face. She seeing me thinking repeats her question…And this time i nods as she is right. she was looking staright into my eyes. May be my eyes speaks to her about me and my pain….she took my hands and keep it in my chest and ordering me to feel the heart and understand what is in that heart. I close my eyes trying to feel and know what’s in it…After some secs suddenly with a shock i pen my eyes….i was really shocked to see what’s in the broken pieces of my broken heart…. swara who was looking at me and my reaction says..”laksh…don’t know what you feel or what you see or whom you see….but i ill surely says that’s called purpose …you are alive for that reason or for that person….as it i still there in even in the broken pieces of your heart…. And you know that’s love….i know trust in love have beenlost for both of us. But still that’s love as it’s still there…” I was more shocked to hear this words as i have seen swara…swara leaves by asking me to get ready soon …after she left i am trying hard to control my mind…”no…it’s not that love…it’s the love as a friend…as a best friend…”….i throwed away the thought making myself busy in getting ready…
::::Laksh pov ends::::

Swara is praying in home temple…
“Ramji…plzz….don’t make laksh sad. Today morning while wishing Good morning i was able to read his pain from his eyes. Don’t know why butit really hurts when i see him in pain…he had beared a lot…and plz don’t gave more pain….And today is the final selection for the dance competition….plz give your blessings to all of us to do our best….i will not fall today..i will dance for him…for his dream…for his happiness…He had made the dance inside me come out…i am really nervous..but it gets away when i think about laksh….plz ramji…plz….don’t gave laksh more pain…he won’t be able to bear it….evethough he act to be strong infront of me…for not making me fall…but i can always read his pain from his eyes..”

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In an areoplane….

::::::::::SANSKAR POV::::::::
I had never thought fate will play such a game in my life. Yesterday afternoon…maa and papa come to me and gave me the tickets for honeymoon and they asked us toleave today morning. I and ragini was shocked hearing that….i have never in my dreams thought about such a thing that with ragini….i and ragini restricted a lot…but they didn’t move a little from the desicion of sending us to honeymoon. They thought we are restricting due to the happenings but the real reason was something else…They forces and emotionally blackmailed us for going to this honeymoon….we atlast nods yes……I and ragini thought to go and enjoy as friends…for the happiness of the family…..now sitting in this plane to LONDON….i don’t know if i am happy or sad…the emotions are getting mixed…

I thought if swara and laksh was with us…i really miss both of them…i always gets myself busy in something to something…but whenever i took a pause i remembers swalak..and the golden moments i spend with them…i miss you both every second of my life…i know you both will be hating me and ragini a lot…

Suddenly my thoughts got disturb by a sudden wait in my shoulder..I turns and sees ragini sleeping putting her head in my shoulder..i can see the pain her face eventhough in her sleep….The pain which she was gone …..when she faced that bastard alone…when she made herself stronger to face me to save her sisters future…when she sacrificed her love ………is really unbeareable. I promise to myself i will try my best for making her pain less.. I know she also would never ever thought of going like this with me…..
::::Sanskar pov ends::::::

After sometime sanskar too sleeps…
After hours…the announcement was heard that they have reached london from the plain…by the announcement sanskar and ragini wakes up and sees they are sleeping hand in hand……..there had a deep eyelock……both departs away and for getting away from this awkwardness sankar stands up and sayings “lets go..’…ragini nods and follows him…

ragini{in mind..};; ” while out of this airport to the outskirts of london…don’t know why my heart is saying something is waiting for my arrival…while looking at sanskar i understand he misses swara and laksh a lot…in childhood by seeing swara crying by getting hurt by the stone i through unknowingly i took a promise that i will never make my swara cry knowingly or unknowingly….but i broke that promise….i know i done that for not getting her future get spoiled…but eventhough i thought if i couldn’t have broken the promise…..by seeing sanskar i always feels guilt as i unknowingly became reason for his pain…the pain of missing swalak…i prays to god not to give him more pain…”

After sometime they come out of the airport with there lugage…they looks around…

On the other side laksh, swara, adam, james, jack, adarsh and sahil steps up in stage for there perfomance….

Screen freezes in faces of ragsan and swalak…

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PRECAP;; {No idea}….

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Thankz for reading….. 🙂
Sry for the mistakes…

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    30 Comments

    1. Sindhura on October 30, 2016 4:05 pm

      NIce post soon as naa

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 5:03 pm

        Thank you sooo much sindhura….
        i will post next episode on next sunday….

    2. crystal089 on October 30, 2016 4:46 pm

      superb plsz be regular

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:12 pm

        Thank you very much crystal… and i will post next episode on next sunday

    3. Dali on October 30, 2016 4:57 pm

      Wow…i love your writing aahana…

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:18 pm

        Thank you soo much dali

    4. Madhu on October 30, 2016 4:58 pm

      Fabulous

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:22 pm

        Thank you very much madhu

    5. Fairy on October 30, 2016 4:58 pm

      Wowwww super amazng update dear….loved ragsan part…hope sooon love wl blossom btween dem…waitng eagerly for ragsan n swalak face off!!!keep rockng n sta blessed dear????

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:23 pm

        Thank you sooooo much fairy☺☺

    6. silent_writer on October 30, 2016 5:46 pm

      Itsss awsmeeeeee dear plz update soon

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:25 pm

        Thank you very silent writer…next update will be on next sunday

    7. jazzy on October 30, 2016 6:26 pm

      Amazing update soon

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:28 pm

        Thank you very much jazzy……
        I will post next episode on sunday….

    8. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on October 30, 2016 6:27 pm

      Yoo!Yoo✌, it’s becoming interesting day by day.. Loved it to the core dear…keep it up. Waiting for nxt..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?
      “HAPPY DIWALI”

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:30 pm

        Thank you soooooooo much abdul…..
        Happy diwali
        ☺☺☺☺☺

    9. Sherin on October 30, 2016 6:56 pm

      nice…

    10. Aahana on October 30, 2016 7:31 pm

      Thank you very much sherin…..

    11. asra on October 30, 2016 8:07 pm

      awesome dear…plz clear their misunderstanding and unite the both brothers and sisters dear…tkcr…

      • Aahana on October 30, 2016 9:01 pm

        Thank you very much asra. ..

    12. Prakriti19 on October 30, 2016 10:56 pm

      I loved it Di.. Out standing Di..I can clearly feel Laksh’s pain in this episode Di…Swalak scenes were amazing…Love have blossomed between them…I really love your writing styles Di..
      Coming about Ragsan scenes…It was brilliant buy love didn’t blossom between them…Hope love will blossom soon..
      Waiting for next chapter Di..Post soon Di..
      Bye Di..
      Take care..
      Keep Smiling
      Love u loads
      Happy Diwali

      • Aahana on October 31, 2016 5:34 pm

        thank you soooo much prakriti…….
        love you toooo…♥♥♥

    13. ammy on October 31, 2016 12:35 am

      Awesome

      • Aahana on October 31, 2016 5:35 pm

        thank you very much ammy

    14. A.xx on October 31, 2016 5:14 am

      Nice hope u had a great Diwali and plz try to post more regularly as we can’t wait for next epi.xx

      • Aahana on October 31, 2016 5:35 pm

        thank you very much A.xx

    15. suhani on October 31, 2016 6:57 am

      Nice episode…who are there pairs in ur ff…waiting next part soon….

      • Aahana on October 31, 2016 5:36 pm

        thank you very much suhani…..
        and the pairs are swalak and ragsan…

    16. Akshata on November 2, 2016 4:12 pm

      awesome, waiting for the next

      • Aahana on November 3, 2016 7:38 am

        thank you soo much akshata

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