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Home»Fan Fiction»Broken heart:But still it beats for you my ladoo (raglak) epi-5
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Broken heart:But still it beats for you my ladoo (raglak) epi-5

fouzarshi16By fouzarshi16September 22, 201645 Comments3 Mins Read
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Really sry guys. Sry for being late. Plz maf kardo na. Lo kan pakad diya ab tho maaf kardo yaar????

Let’s start
After more than 5 hr peaceful sleep ragini
got up nd looked around.

(ragini) its ur magic laksh. U r ladoo slept
peacefully with out her regular pills. U still lives here laksh in my heart. Where r u. Plz cm back
to me.
A tear escaped from her eyes nd she wiped it
off. She got dwn nd walked out after filling her
lungs with his fragrance
She stopped at door nd looked back once again. She could see the smiling faces of raglak
who is laughing and chasing each other. Again
her eyes welled up.

(ragini) kash ye din vapas atha.
She let out sigh nd walked to dp room took
his blessings

She met d person who she never wanted to
see again in her life her father SHEKHAR
GAGODIA.
( shekhar) princess he called out in a shivering tone.
Ragini stood there without any expression in
her face. He came near her to pat her head. But before he could do that she stepped back

(ragini) u lost that rut long back mr. GAGODIA.

She said in a deadly cold voice nd ran out she heard her mom cracked voice
(shomi) meri bachii
But she didn’t want to stand there for a
minute more so ragini walked out with out looking back leaving a sobbing sumi back.
Ragini got in her car nd burst out.

(ragini) sry ma.sry for punishing u without any
reason. I can’t meet ur eyes ma. I failed as daughter nd failed as wife nd soulmate.
_____________________
It’s around 11 clock she reached her home. She looked pale her eyes were swollen nd her
lips were dry.
Suddenly she felt a pair of hands on her shoulder. She knows who is it its her sujata ma(laksh chachi). She wiped her tears before
sujata could find her tears. But its of no use.
Sujatha sit near her nd slowly patted her. Sujata considers laksh as her own child she was d one who defended laksh when he accused for thing
he did not do. Sujata helped rago to bring d truth infact of everyone. She stood with ragoo when everyone went against her. Ragini leaned to sujatha’s lap

(ragini) why ma why its always me. Why god snatched my life ma
(sujata) am sure ragini god is planning smthng great for u that’s why he is testing u. God only tests d one who have ability to overly his tests.
(ragini) I don’t have more energy to fight back ma. I need my strength I need my laksh back.
(sujata) he will back soon. Hw many days he can live without you.
Nw get up nd have smthng
(ragini) nahi ma. Man nahi hai.
(sujata) par beta
(ragini) plz ma aj kaliya rahne de
Ap kuch kha lijiye. I know u were waiting for me. Plz have smthng nd take ur medicines on tym.
Ragini walked to her room nd changed her cloths nd cm to her little champ ( raglak 2 yr baby boy)
(ragini) sry mere champ. Becoz of me u r away from ur papa. He even dont know abt u. He doesn’t know that he have son.
She hugs him tight who smiles in sleep.
Screen freezes on ragksh nd ragini face

Sry for d small update nd the typos. I know it’s not up to d mark. Sry guys as I updated it in hurry. Plz pardon mr

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    Hey am a raglakian. But adores varun too. My pa's princess. He is my backbone strength nd everything.

    45 Comments

    1. Sreevijayan on September 22, 2016 11:30 pm

      Nice update dr

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:17 am

        Thank you sree

    2. nikky on September 22, 2016 11:38 pm

      after so long and so short anyway awesome update as usual next part soon plzz don’t delay

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:19 am

        Sry nikky I will be busy for next two weeks . But I will give u irregular updates

    3. Ragz_teju on September 22, 2016 11:43 pm

      awesome… raglak has a son amazing…loved it

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:21 am

        Thank you rags

    4. ammy on September 23, 2016 12:14 am

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:30 am

        Thank you ammy

    5. Fats on September 23, 2016 2:46 am

      I was just thinking about your FF today and here you are with another great update. Wow, RagLak have a son, that’s interesting. Can’t wait to read the next part ?

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:22 am

        Hope to update soon

    6. Akshata on September 23, 2016 2:54 am

      its too short, but awesome….. laksh has a son and he didnt know abt him. i am feeling bad for raglak. update soon

      • fouzarshi16 on September 23, 2016 12:14 pm

        I will update soon

    7. rafeee on September 23, 2016 6:36 am

      nice wen laksh wil cme…

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:23 am

        U have to wait for him

    8. Sindhura on September 23, 2016 6:41 am

      Nice

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:24 am

        Thank you sindhu di

    9. SPP on September 23, 2016 7:17 am

      Awesome Superb
      Raglak married and having a son
      Interesting
      Where is Laksh and please reveal the past soon can’t see Ragini in such a state
      Waiting for the next one…………..

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:27 am

        Soon laksh will back to his ladoo.

    10. varsha on September 23, 2016 8:27 am

      Awesome dear, love it even though it’s short

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:26 am

        Thank you varsha. I uploaded it becoz I promised you to back soon

    11. Ammu on September 23, 2016 9:02 am

      Awesome episode and feeling bad for Ragini. I’m eagerly waiting for next episode.

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:28 am

        Me too felt bad for her while writing dr

    12. Savi singh on September 23, 2016 9:10 am

      Soo sweet… Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:29 am

        Thank you savi

    13. j on September 23, 2016 9:47 am

      awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:35 am

        Thank you

    14. Arjuna on September 23, 2016 2:59 pm

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:36 am

        Thank you arjuna

    15. lovely on September 23, 2016 3:13 pm

      Nice

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:36 am

        Thank you dr

    16. Ashnoor on September 23, 2016 3:33 pm

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:37 am

        Thank you

    17. j. on September 23, 2016 4:36 pm

      after a long time u updated sooo they even have a son omg waiting for laksh’s entry and their meeting update next part soon and longer one

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:30 am

        Soon laksh will be back to his ladoo

    18. Malu on September 23, 2016 8:52 pm

      Superb episode

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:32 am

        Thank you

    19. Anju on September 23, 2016 9:36 pm

      Loved it nd waiting 4 more Raglak scenes

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:31 am

        U will get it soon dr

    20. Pearly on September 23, 2016 9:42 pm

      Interesting Dr

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:34 am

        Thank you

    21. Sherin on September 23, 2016 10:06 pm

      Very nice

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:33 am

        Thank you

    22. Monu on September 23, 2016 10:37 pm

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 27, 2016 7:35 am

        Thank you

    23. hemalattha on September 27, 2016 5:25 pm

      i loved it

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