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Home»Fan Fiction»Broken heart:But still it beats for you my ladoo (raglak) epi-4
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Broken heart:But still it beats for you my ladoo (raglak) epi-4

fouzarshi16By fouzarshi16September 7, 201655 Comments6 Mins Read
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Sry guys I promised to back on Tuesday even. But what to do yesterday our clg bus met with accident but god grace no one got injured.
Thank u guys for d warm response. Plz wait sm more tym entire past will be unfold informs of u people. Its a short ff. Thanks for d silent readers also.

Let’s start our story

After few minutes ragini was in her Laksh room. Nothing has changed in a these 3 years. Everything was just perfect like as always hw wanted to be. Her eyes become moist to c d most important part of her life. Her laksh’s
room. Once she was supposed to live here as his wife his soulmate but everything got ruined in a blink of eyes. She still feels his presence nd fragrance in room. Everything here havesh d special LAKSH touch. She touch his photo right above his king size bed nd stood infront of it.

( ragini, with tears) where r u laksh? U r ladoo is dying to c u plz laksh at least give ur ladoo one chance to ask for ur forgiveness. I know I don’t deserve a second chance. Once I will meet u I promise I will never back to laksh. I betrayed u in d name of love. I couldn’t keep my promise. Sry laksh. I have failed as a over. I know u nd I will never be one. Am least cm back to papa. I had a reason for my silence on that nyt. But I know it’s lym excuses after I ran away from responsibility. I can’t even ask forgiveness from u laksh. Laksh ur ladoo is dying in guilt day by day. Plz forgive me if u can laksh

She cried her heart out nd fell on her knees. After she slowly stood up nd layer on d bed. She filled her soul with his presence nd closed her eyes. Beautiful memories of their love slowly hitted her head

*********flashback
Raglak were laying in each other’s embrace in his room. He whisked her away from family members after sanky’s most precious gift.

(ragini) laksh hw could u be able to kiss me infront of ma papa
(laksh) I couldn’t control cing ur shocked face.
( ragini) laksh this is my best gift ever in my life. I just want to be with u in my whole life.
Only death can
Before she could speak further she felt pair of rough lips on her rosy lips. She pressed her hard on d bed nd bite her lower lip. She gasped in pain nd he pressed her waist to calm her

(laksh) don’t dare to talk abt death.
He got up nd sat. She to got up nd holder his hand but her here off
( ragini) sry laksh.
He was not paying any heed to her.
She back hugged me nd kissed on his shoulder.
He didn’t move a bit. She made him turn nd kissed near his chest.
(ragini) sry
Laksh didn’t show any emotion. She slowly kissed near his lips. He grabbed d opertunity kissed her lips nd pressed her waist. Both fell on bed without breaking d kiss. He slowly started kiss her neck,then shoulder while ragini was clutching d sheet.
He slowly parted away nd looked at ragini who had tightly closed eyes. He smiled a bit nd lay dwn near her nd dragged her to chest

(laksh, whispered) sleep fast, I will not be saint man if u keep on blushing. I can’t hold more.

Ragini hits his chest nd hug him tightly.
( ragini) everything will be fine na laksh. I didn’t know why I am feeling like smthng bad is going to happen

(laksh) oh my drama queen. Nothing will happen until we r together

(ragini) I want to like this for eternity
(laksh) I think we will fit in a single room in a single bed under a single quilt hena ladooo
( ragini) chiiii.
Laksh laughs loud nd kisses her forehead

_______________________________________
Its swasan haldi ceremony after cmptng haldi ritual nw everyone is playing with haldi. Laksh was sitting far as he doesn’t like any stain on his dress. He was looking Dam handsome in his white kurta nd pyjama. He was busy in his phone while ragini took this as chance nd applied haldi on his face nd runway.

(laksh) ragini ki bachi. Aj tho the khyre nahi.
He started to chase her. He throw sm haldi on her but it fell on dp’s face as she bend away. They were running like tom nd jerry in house. And all family was adoring their cute fight. Ragini ran upstairs. She got in to laksh room. Before she could close d door he too entered nd smirked at her.
He cm closer to her as she was moving backwards. She hitted d bed nd fell dwn by pulling laksh along with her. Laksh was on top her

(ragini, eye closed) laksh plz don’t do this. Am ur pyaari ragu na. Plz leave me
He was memorized to c her. He cm back to reality after hearing her voice. He smirked at her nd applied d haldi on his face which is in her hand.
The he slowly took of her pallu from her belly nd carresed her belly with his cheeks where as ragini clutched d bed sheet. He kissed her belly button nd slowly moved upward nd he applied haldi on her cheek nose tip by rubbing his cheek to her.
He slowly moved towards her nd captured her lips. Their trance were broke when some called out ragini’s name.

________________________
It was arunoday. Ragini decided to check on her lucky. She got In his room but couldn’t find
him. She peeped in d bathroom as d door was open.
As soon as she ended she shouted loudly
(ragini) ahhhhhhhhhh
She turned
(ragini) can’t u wear ur dress
Laksh grabbed d towel nd wrapped himself i with it as he was in birth suit. Ragini entered just when he was going to wear his dress

(laksh) r u gone nuts can’t u just knock d door
(ragini) don’t yell at me.
Can’t u close door while having bath
She was abt turn
(laksh) don’t u dare to turn. Get out right nw
(ragini) am going . Am not interested to watch u in ur
(laksh) stop right there. Don’t dare to make fun of me
Get out right nw
Ragini giggled nd we out were as laksh felt embraced he patted his head

(laksh) dump lucky. Can’t u just lock d door. Shaadi ke phase saari suspense khatam ho gayaa.
He smiled at him
********** flashback ends

After a long gap of 3 years ragini fell in deep sleep with out her regular sleeping pills. She felt his warmth nd she cuddled to her laksh in dreams.

Screen freeze on ragini’s peaceful sleeping face

Sry guyss for being little naughty today. Hope u people will like it. Plz sry for typos nd I will add laksh scene in next epi

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    Hey am a raglakian. But adores varun too. My pa's princess. He is my backbone strength nd everything.

    55 Comments

    1. Ragz_teju on September 7, 2016 8:44 am

      awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 11:18 am

        Thank you rags keep supporting my dr

    2. megha123 on September 7, 2016 9:09 am

      Amazing

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 11:23 am

        Thank you megha

    3. lovely on September 7, 2016 9:35 am

      Feeling bad for ragini

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 11:24 am

        Everything will be fall in correct place soon

    4. Divya on September 7, 2016 9:39 am

      Nice

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 11:27 am

        Thank you

    5. Ammu on September 7, 2016 9:46 am

      wow Raglak scenes are awesome di and eagerly waiting for next part. Loved it a lot

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 11:26 am

        Thank you ammy. I will update asps

    6. varsha on September 7, 2016 9:55 am

      Super dear

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 11:27 am

        Thank you varsha

    7. Arjuna on September 7, 2016 10:23 am

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 12:42 pm

        Thank you arjuna

    8. Sindhura on September 7, 2016 10:29 am

      Super

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 12:40 pm

        Thank you sindhu di

    9. ammy on September 7, 2016 10:49 am

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 11:28 am

        Thanks you ammy

    10. j on September 7, 2016 11:26 am

      superb

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 12:38 pm

        Thank you my dr

    11. Ani on September 7, 2016 11:26 am

      I missed ur ff.. Can u give me the link of 2 and 3 epi

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 12:42 pm

        Sry dr Am updating my ff via my phone. Plz u can Search on google

    12. Malu on September 7, 2016 12:54 pm

      It’s superb episode dear

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 2:01 pm

        Thank you

    13. Akshata on September 7, 2016 12:56 pm

      hope you are fine, take care :D. awesome update, feeling bad for ragini.

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 2:00 pm

        Don’t worry dr . Everything will be fine soon

    14. Ashly on September 7, 2016 1:30 pm

      superbbbbbbb

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:47 pm

        Thank u ashlyy

    15. Ashnoor on September 7, 2016 2:24 pm

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:48 pm

        Thank you

    16. dharani on September 7, 2016 2:57 pm

      very nice

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:49 pm

        Thank you thank you dharani

    17. Shana98 on September 7, 2016 3:09 pm

      Awesome can’t wait to read more

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:49 pm

        I will update aur 2 days dr. Sry for d delay

    18. Fats on September 7, 2016 3:40 pm

      This was a really nice update. I loved reading RagLak’s memories. They were so romantic. All the kisses were really hot ?. And aww I feel bad for Ragini, she’s so upset currently. But it was nice how Laksh’s memories soothed her and she was able to have a lovely sleep ❤️. Can’t wait to read more.

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:12 pm

        Thank you fats.dont wry everything will be fall in its place soon. I will update after two days as I was busy in some work

    19. j. on September 7, 2016 4:08 pm

      awesome waiting for laksh’s entry

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:54 pm

        Soon our hero will give an heroic entry

    20. rafeee on September 7, 2016 5:03 pm

      superb

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:46 pm

        Thank you

    21. lisa on September 7, 2016 6:40 pm

      that was so romantic loved it

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 8:54 pm

        Thank you lisa

    22. SPP on September 7, 2016 8:48 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic
      Raglak were just Amazing and adorable
      Feeling bad for Ragini
      How r u dear???
      Take care
      Waiting for the next one………….

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 9:16 pm

        Thank you spp. Am fine. Only sm scratches on my forehead. That’s all. Am fine right now. Glad to c ur concern

      • SPP on September 8, 2016 5:02 pm

        U r always welcome dear
        Take care
        I concern to my dear ones so that’s not a big deal I think so

    23. Anjali on September 7, 2016 8:55 pm

      Superb superb haha…. Really love raglak scenes.
      . You rock yaaar really enjoyed this ep and SO sorry for late reply. Hey can we be friends because I love to make friends . And yes update next ep soon can’t wait. Sorry once again. You know what I am becoming a fan of this ff. ????????

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 9:19 pm

        Yup sure my dr. We can be gud frnds. Thank u my dr. I will update after two days

    24. Sreevijayan on September 7, 2016 9:01 pm

      Past was soo romantic…loved it……

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 9:17 pm

        Thank you sree

    25. abi on September 7, 2016 9:40 pm

      Superb….

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 9:48 pm

        Thank you

    26. Anju on September 7, 2016 10:09 pm

      Awesome

      • fouzarshi16 on September 7, 2016 10:18 pm

        Thank you anju

    27. Sherin on September 7, 2016 10:34 pm

      Loved Raglak nd feeling really bad for Ragini

      • fouzarshi16 on September 8, 2016 7:53 am

        Everything will be fall in its place dr

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