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Home»Fan Fiction»Broken heart: But still it beats for you my ladoo (prologue)
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Broken heart: But still it beats for you my ladoo (prologue)

fouzarshi16By fouzarshi16August 19, 201669 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guyss am( Fouzarshi16) back with my new ff. Hope u people will shower d same love nd support on this ff too. And thanks for making my previous ff “raglak that nyt changed my life” a successful one. Thanks for d warm response on my both OS “mr. Arrogant and his personal sl*t and a medical love story

Let’s start our story

@landon
A boy is shown running on treadmill. He is on his boxers nd head phone plugged in. His beautiful brown eyes r shown then his lips which a sad smile. Then camera rolls on his sweat wet bare chest nd his hot abs is shown. He was running countinuesly but his brown eyes were sticked in photo just infront of his eyes. Its was a photo of a chubby girl with
beautiful round eyes nd pink soft lips. He was just looking to her eyes.

(Boy’s monologue) why ladoo. Why u stepped back when I need u badly.our love is that much weak that u could not trust me. U broke my heart but still I don’t know why still it beats for u dr.
He stopped d treadmill nd took of his headphones nd walked towards d photo. He stood just infront of it. Caressed it nd kissed on her forehead

(the boy) I saw pain in ur eyes when everyone accused me. Then why u kept mum. U could have stood with me ladoo. If u had done it, atleast I could have u by my side. I left all alone this world. But still I love u laddoo. Ur my childhood love. As days passes am falling more in love with u dr.
His trance broke by his servant shyam, he use to call him kaka. D one nd only person who is for him in this world.

( shyam) laksh beta. Here is ur ginger to tea.
The boy revealed to laksh maheswari
He takes blessings from his kaka.

( shyam) if u love her this much. Go and get her back beta.
(laksh) she doesn’t trust me kaka. Her memories r enough for me to live my entire life.

(shyam) I just know abt her as per u words. But my mind says u r missing smthng, I think she had her reason for it. She loves u from her young age. There something which is not visible go nd find her my heart says she is waiting for u beta.

Laksh gave a painful look. Took his towel nd cleaned his face. He took a sip of a ginger tea nd smiled

(laksh) ladoo I hate ginger tea. But u made me have it. Still remembers our nok jokh on ginger tea.

A small girl shown drinking ginger tea. A boy cm nd snatched cup from my hand nd took a sip.

( the boy) yuk ginger tea.
( the girl) lucky give back my cup. If u don’t like it then why did u snatch my cup everyday nd drink it from me.
( the boy) for teasing u

(laksh) ladoo its just an excuse to share ginger tea with u. I loved to drink d ginger tea from ur cup.
He said smiling

************
In India.
A girl is shown with doctor ‘s coat nd steth . She was tired after her ward rounds. Nw she was back to her cabin nd thrown herself in d chair. She closed her eyes for smtym. Then she took a photo on his table. The photo revealed to be laksh.

(the girl) where r u laksh. I know I broke ur trust. But laksh I was forced to keep mum laksh. I had a reason.I should have been stand with you. I was already shattered in that tym lucky. Laksh plz cm back. Ur laddoo is still waiting for u. Plz laksh cm back to me for once. Then u want to leave me then u can. But let me give a chance explain my part laksh plz laksh.

Suddenly a nurse came to her.
(mam) Dr. Sanskar maheswari is here to meet u
Girl look forward nd she revealed to be ragini. D name plate on her table showed her name
“Dr. Ragini laksh maheswari.

Screen freezes on ragini nd laksh face

Whether raglak is a married couple?
What happened in their past?
Why laksh is away from his laddoo?
Why Sanskar is here to meet ragini?
Why ragini did not stood with laksh?

Hey guyss plz give ur suggestions. Shall I continue or not

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    Hey am a raglakian. But adores varun too. My pa's princess. He is my backbone strength nd everything.

    69 Comments

    1. Shana98 on August 19, 2016 5:46 am

      Can’t wait to read more you this ff awesome b xx

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 10:16 am

        Thank u my dr

    2. Fairy on August 19, 2016 5:56 am

      Wowwww super interestng ff dear…omg u again nailed it!! Thanku so much for starting a raglak ff πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ …m very eager to know about wt had happened btween raglak?? Loved it ..n keep on rockng my dear doctor πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 10:34 am

        Wait my dr soon it will be revealed my Dr. Doll?????

    3. lovely on August 19, 2016 6:18 am

      Nice

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 10:24 am

        Thank you lovely

    4. j on August 19, 2016 6:24 am

      superb interesting

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 10:19 am

        Thanks u j

    5. SPP on August 19, 2016 6:58 am

      Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing
      Welcome back dear
      Loved the epi
      U just rocked it
      Waiting for the next one……………

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 10:48 am

        Will upload soon

      • SPP on August 19, 2016 3:56 pm

        Will be waiting

    6. nikky on August 19, 2016 7:08 am

      nice waiting for next part soon

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:17 pm

        Thank you nikky

    7. anonymous on August 19, 2016 7:14 am

      omg.arshi u ended ur previous ff…..did i miss the last episode……can u give me the link?????

      • anonymous on August 19, 2016 7:18 am

        wonderful story with many questions/suspense………………good start……….plz continue…..post the updates whenever u have time……..

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 10:59 am

        Yup dr. It ended before one week. I can’t give u link becoz am using my mob to upload it my ff. U can Search on google like this raglak that nyt changed my life epi 37 last episode

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 12:16 pm

        Anonymously i wrote two os
        Plz read it too
        Mr.arrogant nd his personal sl*t
        A medical love story

      • anonymous on August 19, 2016 12:52 pm

        Hey I read the first one….I liked it very much…how laksh found he was first man for ragini……and A medical story…..I didn’t read it…but I will read it for sure

    8. Sindhura on August 19, 2016 7:44 am

      Nice dear

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 12:18 pm

        Thanks u di

    9. ammy on August 19, 2016 8:48 am

      Nice.sounds interesting.eagerly waiting for next part

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 12:20 pm

        Thank u ammy

    10. Savi singh on August 19, 2016 8:54 am

      Wow awesome… U r superb writer like Always

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 12:21 pm

        Savi dr thank u so much

    11. Ragz_teju on August 19, 2016 9:13 am

      Awesome plzz continue

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 12:40 pm

        Thank u rags

    12. Ammu on August 19, 2016 9:24 am

      It’s interesting dear and eagerly waiting for next episode. Plz update ASAP

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 12:41 pm

        I am working on it . I will update it soon

    13. Nami on August 19, 2016 9:26 am

      Glad u r back with another raglak ff. The story seems interesting. Looking forward for the next update.

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:09 pm

        Thank you my dr. I am feeling little bit low. I will try to update soon

    14. Gayu on August 19, 2016 10:06 am

      Concept is very interesting. Please continue

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:10 pm

        Thank you gayu

    15. Teja on August 19, 2016 10:24 am

      Awesome yr plzzz continue

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:11 pm

        Thank you teja

    16. nitu on August 19, 2016 11:17 am

      Superb intro.. excited.

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:12 pm

        Thank you nitu

    17. Nive.. on August 19, 2016 11:35 am

      arshi this one is awsome… post next one asap… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ n yeah my nephew is in my DP.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      • Nive.. on August 19, 2016 11:37 am

        OMG..!!! not this one my previous DP..

      • Nive.. on August 19, 2016 11:53 am

        this DP only yaar..

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 12:15 pm

        Yup my dr.working on it soon Will upload it

    18. Anees on August 19, 2016 12:22 pm

      Hey fouzi u r back.. Cnt wait to read ur ff…

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:31 pm

        Thanks dr

    19. sailaja on August 19, 2016 12:26 pm

      hi i am happy you are bk with ragluk ff again πŸ™‚

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:28 pm

        Thank you my dr

    20. Sreevijayan on August 19, 2016 12:29 pm

      Nice update dear…

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:16 pm

        Thank you sree

    21. megha123 on August 19, 2016 1:04 pm

      It’s damn interesting can’t really with for it to start

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:14 pm

        Soon u will get it dr. Plz wait for smtym,am not feeling well nw so I will update it by tomorrow or day after tomorrow

    22. Fats on August 19, 2016 2:07 pm

      Wow, great start. All the twists in RagLak’s relationship sounds really interesting. Can’t wait to read more ?

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:29 pm

        Thank you my dr thanks dr

    23. Akshata on August 19, 2016 3:19 pm

      its quite interesting with so many hidden secrets. update soon

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:30 pm

        Thank you my dr

    24. Athulya on August 19, 2016 4:46 pm

      superb and waiting 4 nxt

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 8:32 pm

        Thank you athulya

    25. Aasthu on August 19, 2016 7:14 pm

      do update sooooon……….I’m sitting with my fingers crossed 4 the nxt 1………I loved all the prev updates of urs……..but my fav is “my doc love”…….going to read it again……….

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 9:04 pm

        Thank you my dr. I will update asps

    26. Aasthu on August 19, 2016 7:14 pm

      sry I meant: medical lo……….

    27. Emz fasa on August 19, 2016 7:49 pm

      Mindblowing πŸ™‚ waiting for next epi

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 9:06 pm

        Thank you emz

    28. lisa on August 19, 2016 8:31 pm

      interesting

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 9:07 pm

        Thank you lisa

    29. Malu on August 19, 2016 8:32 pm

      Loved introduction and it’s interesting

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 9:09 pm

        Thank you malu

    30. rafeee on August 19, 2016 9:09 pm

      superb

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 9:28 pm

        Thank you my dr

    31. loveleen on August 19, 2016 9:16 pm

      sry fr late cmnts..bt m glad u r back wid another raglak track….i loved ur previous ff alot……n dis one is also having great strt wid suspense

      • fouzarshi16 on August 19, 2016 9:36 pm

        Don’t to be sry dr. U cmmnt its enough for me

    32. Anju on August 19, 2016 9:43 pm

      Interesting dear

      • fouzarshi16 on August 20, 2016 9:25 am

        Thanks

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