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Home»Fan Fiction»Bol do na jra dil me jo hi chupa mai kisi se kahuga nhi (part 1)
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Bol do na jra dil me jo hi chupa mai kisi se kahuga nhi (part 1)

Sarah2By Sarah2August 1, 201714 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi everyone……this is my first ff I hope you will support me???? please avoid grammatical mistakes because my English is not up to mark…..

Characters

Shaurya……..successful business man
Mehak……..have cooking skill and never
express her feelings to anyone
Hareesh………shaurya’s father
Karuna………shaurya’s mother
Jeevan ……….mehak’s father
Swetlana………..mehak’s step mother(she is
villain only kaamchor type)
Mohit……….mehak’s 12yrs step brother love
her more than his mother
As per requirements other characters are introduce???????????

Episode starts with a 8 yrs. girl holding her father’s hand comes in Lucknow bus stop parking area where her father tells her first let me start bike then you sit….she nodes her head ok…father starts his bike and go leave her alone in this new city…
She saw him and run behind him crying?
Papa please ruko you leave me here..I’m yours daughter how could you do this with me?? she is crying badly and calls him…..papa pa pa papa wapas aa jao……suddenly she wake up yes it was mehak’s (now she is 22yrs.)dream…..mostly she wake up with this horrible dream??she goes to his father room check him as he is sleeping…..take long breath and relief??
Suddenly she realized today is mohit’s birthday she have to cook some special dish for his lunch box…after prepare food she wakes up mohit ….di please 5 min more?
Mehak…… No way it’s already 7 am and snatches his blanket?
Mohit……acha meri maa lo jaag gya abb jaldi se asirwaad de do and tuaches her feet she blessed him and wished happy birthday my golu molu bhai kissed his chubby chubby cheeks…??
Mohit…… ok ok pamper baad me kerna phle ye btao kya bnaya hi mere liye??
Mehak……nothing?
Mohit …….don’t lie I can smell it? whatever you cook it will be delicious I’m sure?
Mehak……..he bagwan ye ladka bhi na subah se hi shuru ho jata hi I’m hungry…first go and fresh than ask me for food…
Mohit…?ok

In khanna mention……… shaurya ready for his office karuna comes there and inform him today is mohit’s birthday he have to come early in evening…..
Shaurya.?maa how many time I told you I don’t want to go that middle class sharma house but you always asking me this questions….
Karuna …….because I want to know why you don’t tell me first
Shaurya……I call and wish him personally but please don’t say this I have no answer of this questions?
Karuna …….shaurii this time all knows that you are here….jeevan Bhiya specially invites you and your father….this time your father is not here so you have to come with me otherwise I will also not go there……
Shaurya?maa don’t say this he invites you….you have to go there… no I’m not without you?
Shaurya……..ok fine ready at 7 pm I will go with you
Karuna???I knew it you can’t see upset me and someone else (mehak)
Shaurya….?blushing maa….. He leaves from there and tensed think about something..
Jeevan comes khanna mention giving some files to Mr.hareesh
Karuna……Bhiya aaj bhi kaam kaam..today you have to take leave
Jeevan…..it’s urgent that’s why I came here…sir called me and told to give this paper to you
Karuna….I know I’m just joking….what about mehak how is?????
Jeevan……she is fine….She is my daughter but you know her better than me I know very well she loves you very much
Karuna?? meri best friend meera ki beti hi to meri bhi hui na bhiya(mehak’s mother’s name is meera.karuna and meera were best friends.when she died mehak is only 5 years)
Jeevan …..it’s your and hareesh kindness you trust me and give me job in your firm otherwise after meera’s death I was totally breaked (jeevan is lower and work for khanna industry)
Karuna….no no don’t say this you are capable for this post that’s why we gives you and most important you are giving your precious daughter to us so hum log itna to ker hi sakte hi.

Flash back ####
When Meera was alive karuna and Meera both decided to get merry thair children( shaurya and mehak)
Ends
Jeevan goes from there Mr. Hareesh comes from Delhi ….yes karuna and hareesh was laing with shaurya just because he comes for mohit birthday party??
At evening…in sharma house???
Mehak busy in cooking mohit follow her everywhere dii please dii please were that pink suit you looks very pretty in that dress
Mehak…..ok ok fine I will and now stop following me and do your work….he said don’t you know I’m doing my most important work and it’s look after my pretty dii’s hands made delicious food ???if someone eat it than what I eat after all it’s my birthday?
Mehak….ye ladka bhi n jab dekho tab khana khana…always thinks about food?
Swetlana…….mehak come fast I need your help ….coming wait it’s almost done
Swetlana ….my matching jewelry is missing find it??
Mehak … .here is this….ok ok don’t be smart I know where is it I’m calling you for giving this dress because mohit wants to you were it so go and change…
Mehak ….ok she change her dress…. she is looking gorgeous in that dress anyone can flat on her???? her long looks more more beautiful?
It’s 7pm.shaurya come to home with get fresh and than karuna and shaurya go for party….shaurya saw Mr. Hareesh is also in car’s back seat ??dad what are doing here..hareesh How can I miss mehak’s delicious food so I also come with you?
All laugh…
Shaurya… You guys are to much so this is your plan to make me fool?
Karuna….yes werna tum fir koi bhana bna lete…beta uss(mehakl) samjhne ke liye milna bhi to padega na
Shaurya?ok enough chal to rha hu…and blushing?

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    14 Comments

    1. Sapna saxena on August 2, 2017 12:05 am

      Awesome yrr…
      Very nice…
      You make my day…
      And thanks for adding so much hindi….
      I love hindi….
      Par plz yrr you keep writing everyday…
      Coz i can’t wait for long time… For yonext ff…

      Love you…

      • Sarah2 on August 2, 2017 11:07 am

        Hi sapna☺I remember you.I loves too Hindi…….thank you so much dear for appreciation…I’ll tried to update regularly

    2. Hani on August 2, 2017 12:59 am

      Nic keep it up waiting for next part of ff plz plz write soon?

      • Sarah2 on August 2, 2017 11:10 am

        Hello hani,thank you so much dear☺

    3. Alisha on August 2, 2017 7:17 am

      Nice ff. I dont understand hindi if possible try to translate to English

      • Sarah2 on August 2, 2017 11:20 am

        Thanks dear☺I’ll tried to understand you….In last paragraph karuna says to shaurya yes we are doing this because you make some another plead to not go there…shaurii someones understand it must to meet her(in sense of mehak)….in my next part I’ll translate in English.

      • Alisha on August 2, 2017 12:17 pm

        thank you Sarah

      • Sarah2 on August 2, 2017 12:21 pm

        It’s tital name in English…….. Say something I’ll not tell anyone

    4. jhansi on August 2, 2017 1:46 pm

      Good FF.The name I can suggest it as “please tell me,
      what’s hidden in your heart.”

      • Sarah2 on August 2, 2017 10:09 pm

        Thanks dear for your suggestions☺ actually I was in hurry so I was not properly translate the title.. It’s full name is….say something what’s hidden in your heart I’ll not tell anyone.. Thanks for reminds my mistake…

    5. Keya on August 2, 2017 9:01 pm

      Hey too good, lovely… I’m feeling so happy after reading your ff…continue soon and me too loves hindi..

      • Sarah2 on August 2, 2017 11:17 pm

        Thanks dear keep supporting me☺

    6. Geetika on August 3, 2017 10:38 am

      Hi Sarah this ff is so good yar I’m reading this type of awesome ff after long time on TU thanks dear for writing it.

      • Sarah2 on August 3, 2017 12:47 pm

        Hi geetika ☺thank you so much dear

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