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Home»Fan Fiction»BIWI HO TOH AISI (SHOT#4)
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BIWI HO TOH AISI (SHOT#4)

aamuBy aamuMay 25, 201710 Comments6 Mins Read
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hey guys……

well i m planning to end dis..as u all know dis was js a TP for me..!! I had told u till wen i have ideas in my chotu sa brain…till dan only it will cntinue..which is now lacking..i m not able to manage 3-4 ff at a tym…so it will b hard for me to manage all together..as i had  told u m not going to write in ramzan..but was going to write before it..so dat i can give u all d updates…but thats not happenning..as dis was a short story…n i had received much good response tooo..but sorry..

Thanks for ur support ….well its decreasing too..so may be dis is also one of d reason to end…
Dis story had left 1-2updates only..so enjoy…

N u know guys…wen i started writing for the first fym in my life…dat is wen i started my twinj ff..!! I hot much support..n till today m getting d same but its totally opposite here…i m getting just 4-5 cmnts..while i get there 20-30….so ofcourse i would chose dat over dis…n btw this ws a trash for me from d beginning i had not like dis plot of mine..though i tried..n ofc dint failed…i failed in making u all..cmnt..well m getting very good response evrywhere..except dis page of krpkab…so i will end dis…no wrries pfl is not going to end…but yaa if u dont like i will stop posting here..those who read..dat is only4-5 ppls..i will send u libks through pm’s…
Well.much bakbak..so lets begin

CHAPTER#4-dishoom

After reaching ps(police station)…dev was engrossed in that case…which was strange….
After finding n solving few mysteries he got to know that the lady is in ABC shopping mall…where he was few tym ago…he went to that place for investigation…

°°°°°°

@ ABC shopping mall…

Sona was walking with few shopping bags..she was now moving towards the cafe….wen suddenly she bumped into sm1…
“Ahhh..!! Cant u see n walk” sona said again holding d shopping bags which fall wen dey bump…
“Sorry…!”the lady said n quickly take her bag which was changed with sona…when dey both bumped the bag falk down…n dey got exchanges..now d lady’s bag was with sona..n sona’s with lady…
Sona stands up with her bags…wen a picture fall from the bag…
She bends n take the picture to find…dev’s photo..he ws in his duty dress dat was police officers uniform..

“Hawwww…!! Ye aurat k paas dev ka photo kyu..?? Kahin…kahin dev ka iske saath chakkar to nahi…?? …no no…no pr ye kya hai…..??(haww…!!y dis lady is having dev’s picture…..dev n dis lady is having affair..??? No..no..no…but  wat is dis) “She looks t d lady who was moving rpidly

“Hmm….sona se bachna mushkil hi nahi..na mumkin hai..tu daayan aurat…shakal dekhi hai apni…gandhi kahiki..? Tujse zyada to me achchi dikhti hu..pata ni dev ne tere me kya dekha…!!???…(hmmm….no1 can escape sona…u witch lady….have u seen ur face anytym…? Dirty..i look more beautiful dn u….donno wat dev saw in u..?)..sona murmured n went towards d lady….
She tapped her shoulder..
“Kya samajti hai apne aapko..huh..???(wat u think of urself…huh..?)”sona shouted as d lady turnes..
“Kya..?(wat..?)” She replied scaredly..

“Behri hai..?(r u deaf..?)”sona said angrily..
“Isse achchi to me..ye to behri..hai…?? dev ko isme kya dikha..?(i m much more better dan her…she is deaf..wat dev saw in her..??)”sona murmured..
“W..whaa..what happened..memsaab(mam)…”the lady stuttered…
“Tu kamini..besharam aurat..apne aaap ko samajti kya hai..huh…?(u witch lady..wat u think of urself …huh..?)sona shouted..

“…….”the lady was dumbfounded..
“Kyu be..chup kyu hai..tere saare raaz pata chal gaye muje..!!(why..huh…why…why r u silent…i cm to know ur mysteries..)”..the lady’s eyes widend…
The lady was shocked n after listening that..she was angry too…the lady was about to slap her..wen sona hold her hand…

“Badtameez aurat….mere par haath uthayegi….huh..batati hu ruk…me esi wesu nahi hu..black belt hu karate me…(shameless  lady…u will slap me…?? Huu…wait i will show u…i m blackbelt in karate..)”sona twist her hand at her back..
“Mere pati par dore daalegi…tu kamini…gadhi..badsurat aurat….apne aapko kabhi dekha hai aayne me…akkl ki maari…no beauty no brain…chudail kahiki..mere..mere pati k saath chakkar chalane ki hai..???abhi me tera haath ko marod ke tere haath me de dungi..samji”sona said as she twist jer hand again…many ppls gather around her..
“Dekho..bhaiyo n beheno..ye badtameez or ghiri hui aurat(she pushes her n she falls) mere pati par dore daalti hai…maaro isko”sona shout..evry1 gossip with dem n runs after d lady..
N beats her..

Dev with his gang came der n saw…he moves der n stop dem..
Sona sees him..
“Dev..!!”
“Sonakshi..? Ye kya ho raha hai.??”dev ask innocently..he had not seen d women till..
“Ise me marwa rahi hu..!!??”sje said smilingly bfore she could cntinue…
“What..?? Par kyu..is bechari ne kiya kya hai..?”dev askes..now sona’s anger reached her level …
“Matlab u think she is innocent..?”she asked..
“Yaa ofcourse..! Is bechari ne kiya kya hai..?”he said in a askin tone..but she listened in a different tone..
She punched him in d stomach…

“Oww..!! Ab muje kyu maara…??”dev asked again..
“Pehle to muje laga ki wo aurat hi..but tum bhi..?? Chi..dev..i dont beleive dis..!”sona said as tears made its way to her cheeks..
“Beleive wat..?? Muje kya tum samjhaogy”dev said wincing in pain..bcoz of d punch..all d ppl were looking at dem only..
“Huh..? Ye b me batau..? Tumhara or us aurat ka chakkar chal raha hai..!!  Wo aurat k paas tumhaari picture hai…or tum abhi bhi use innocent bol rahe ho..huh..i thought u love me..but u dint???”sonakshi stomped her feet on his…n leaves crying..
“Are ye to bataooo k kiss aurat se yaar…??”dev asked but she left..
He looks at d ppl around him..

“Aapko pata hai kis aurat se MERA chakkar chal raha hai..??”dey moves revealing dat lady…dev was shocked…his gang had caught her..as she was only d reason dey were here..
He slaaped his forehead..

“Tu besjaram aurat..teri wajah se muje khaani padi..!!”dev shouted at her..
“Wat should i do…muje pata chala tha k tu bada kaabil inspector hai..bachke rehna tha…isliye photo li thi…”she said

“Or to or..teri biwi ne muje b nahi choda…pehle haath toda or uske baad inlogo se muje hi tudwdiya…! Tuje kisne bola tha aisi biwi laane ko…waise u deserve dat..bohot choro(theif) ko pakadne kaa shauk hai na tuje.??…very gooood…(she looks at d other man) BIWI JO TOH AISI…”n she laughs n den cries at her injuries…the police took her away while dev stand der thinking how to convience his zaalima…his better half…

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????…so how was it…
Hope funny tha..
Well thanx for the support n cmnts..but sorry i have to end it..
Next is LAST….
So do cmnt n vote…

N yaa u will get bonus chappy of it…with romance n fun together..?..
So bahbye..for now..
N yaa last epi willl b before ramzan..
N bonus chappy will after it..so ta..ta…

Precap- dev on sona manao mission..n n…n…..n..’didaar tera milne k baad hi chute meri angdaayi..tu hi bata..de kyu ——– me kehlayi..’?
……
Guys..m going to give bonus chappy on wattpad if u want tooo..u hav to cmnt..if u thnk it worth…n if not den alll ok..
Bahbye

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    10 Comments

    1. V.V.harshita on May 25, 2017 11:58 pm

      Awesome….post asap!!

      • aamu on May 26, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thanx..

    2. DramaQueen1004 on May 25, 2017 11:59 pm

      Precap kaafi interesting tha… didaar tere milne ke baad hi chute meri angdaayi tu hi bata de kyu zaalima main kehlaayi… now wat do I make of dat….? Mayb some romance… idk
      This epi was hilarious
      Pls post soon
      Love u loads
      Assalamu alaikum sis

    3. MANSINAIK on May 26, 2017 10:59 am

      Sona the black belt wow
      Post soon
      Luv you

    4. Harshita on May 26, 2017 12:01 pm

      precap was amazing
      love it
      post soon

    5. akshita on May 26, 2017 3:08 pm

      ????? can’t stop laughing
      Post soon plzz❤

    6. darshana on May 26, 2017 6:30 pm

      Humorous ????…i know..even comments in my ft has decreased.. I think it’s the lack of readers.. I guess there are more silent readers.. Anyways this was awesome.. And I don’t think you should end.. But still whatever you wish…
      The precap ???..post soon

    7. Princess. on May 26, 2017 6:36 pm

      Awesome Episode

    8. Aarti32 on May 26, 2017 9:08 pm

      Superb..N wats d Zaalima precap??

      • aamu on May 26, 2017 10:57 pm

        Thanx n for d zaalima precap..u need to read…
        ??

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