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Home»Fan Fiction»bhabi plz give ur sister hand (Part 17)
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bhabi plz give ur sister hand (Part 17)

AnniyaBy AnniyaAugust 10, 201634 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys, Thanks for u response on previous part.
Hope u like this part also…

Flashback continues..
Laksh: sanky, wat r u both talking ?
Sanky: bhai,I was telling her some ideas .
Ragini; kindly tell us which kind of ideas u r giving to her?
Sanskar; arre bhabhi simple, she can share my room. Our problem will solve.
Swara; Mr kidnapper, I will not share my room with u. I don’t trust any kidnapper.
Sanskar: first stop calling by stupid name. If u don’t wanna share room it’s ur problem not mine. That is my room not ur room.
Swara: di, u know I love that room. Plz tell na ur BIL leave that from ur princess.
Sanskar: bhabhi, who is princess here ? I am only seeing a devil. I can leave that room at one condition, if this devil fulfill my two wishes.
Swara; No way, I will prefer to die rather than fulfilling his wishes.
Sanskar: u don’t have other way.
Raglak; shona, now u don’t be sturnborn. Agree with him or live in other room. We both r going, sought out ur self.
Swara: par ..
Raglak: bye…

…..
Swara: first tell me ur condition.
Sanskar: no, first u promise. You will agree with me.
Swara: I can’t..
Sanskar: okay then bye..
Sanskar began to go from there,
Swara; (monologue) How could he even imagine I will share my room with him. Ya that is his room but when I am here that time that is my room. But now what I do, I can’t even imagine to live in other room. Now I have agree with him.
Swara: Mr kidnapper , I will agree with ur all condition. Now tell me ur condition( she shouted from behind)
Sanskar come closer to her, due to so much closeness swara closes her eyes.
Sanskar: (his lips are touching her ears, due to it she is shivering) listen princess, I will tell u my both condition later but I must say u r very intelligent. But not more than me. ( Sanskar slightly kisses her near earlobe)
Swara is still in same position, while sanky goes away winking at her.
Swara monologue
What is happening to me, I know he likes me . but I don’t have any feeling for him then y his closeness is effecting me. Swara control ur self, u can’t love him. Love always give pain.( her eyes are filled with tears)
Sanskar monologue
Why I lost my control whenever she is near me. I love her more than anything, but I have to wait until she don’t love me. I can wait for her love whole life. I love u swara.

….
Unknown place..
Lady: mam, when we will start our plan. If we will not start early may we loose our game before starting.
Lady 2: relax urvashi, nothing will happen. Just wait for sometime now only love is started. Until love game not reach high peak we can’t do anything.
Urvashi: but mam if Sanskar’s love for swara increases, he may refuses for revenge.
Lady 2: He can’t , Sanskar will take my revenge. Laksh father give many pain to me. What happen if he is dead . his son is alive na, laksh has only two weakness Sanskar and ragini. Using Sanskar, I will hurt ragini. It’s very simple just hurt swara , ragini herself will break. That time my revenge will fulfill.
Urvashi: why Sanskar will agree to hurt swara. He loves her from many years.
Lady2: revenge can change anyone, when he got to know Laksh father truth he will hate Laksh, that time we will make our move. We will use sanskar love to complete our revenge. Just keep eyes on swasan, until both not confess each other. No one should come between them.
……
Swara is placing her things in her room( Sanskar room).
Swara: oh god,how much work I have . moreover this Mr kidnapper thought are distracting me.
Ragini; shona, where r u lost.
Swara; sanskar
……
Precap: first kiss…, alia entry in past( hope u remember her)

Now a days little busy, that’s y short update. If u wanna long parts then I can post alternate days.
So , tell me should I post long parts alternate days or u are okay with short part.
Every Saturday or suneay : long parts pakka..
If u have any doubt u can ask me.
Lady 2: suggest someone who can play sanky mother.
Don’t expect so much romance from me, I am not very much comfortable in writing it. Whenever I will able to feel comfort in that zone. Than I will try to write romantic parts…
Thursday; In your love
Friday; next part of this ff..
Bye take care, and love u all..

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    34 Comments

    1. chandu on August 10, 2016 5:34 pm

      awesome..!! loved it..!! keep Urvashi if sanky’s mother is negitive character..!!

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:46 pm

        Thanks…..

    2. Soujanya on August 10, 2016 5:48 pm

      awesome…..

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:59 pm

        Thanks…

    3. anu on August 10, 2016 5:50 pm

      nice

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:50 pm

        Thanks…

    4. sanjanaagrawal on August 10, 2016 5:57 pm

      Hiii anniya …. the epi was awesome and I am okay with short part but update regularly and for sanky ‘s mom character u can keep dadi of swaragini I know I have given u a weird suggestion but she looks like a devil !!!!! ??

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:53 pm

        Hii sanju, I really love ur suggestion. But Dp and Dadi pair will horrible. And she is really devil…
        Still thinking about how they look together…
        Thanks…

      • sanjanaagrawal on August 11, 2016 7:13 pm

        Lol u r right ….??

    5. maisha on August 10, 2016 6:02 pm

      amazing love it dear love swasan nok jok

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:54 pm

        Thanks…

    6. s on August 10, 2016 6:20 pm

      nice

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:54 pm

        Thanks…

    7. Vidhi on August 10, 2016 6:24 pm

      The episode was awesome….. Loved it…. N I am OK with short update…. Lots of love from vidhi???????????

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:55 pm

        Thanks ….
        Love u too ….

    8. vyshu10 on August 10, 2016 6:50 pm

      nice….upload longer ones alternative days. Keep Monica bedi as sanky’s mom

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:56 pm

        Thanks….

    9. dharani on August 10, 2016 8:08 pm

      awesome

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:57 pm

        Thanks…

    10. SHAN on August 10, 2016 8:56 pm

      Awesome

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:59 pm

        Thanks…..

    11. AnuAnn on August 10, 2016 9:00 pm

      Awesome dear.. For sanky’s mother u can choose rithik’s mother of nagin

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:49 pm

        Thanks…

    12. Sumeeta on August 10, 2016 9:28 pm

      nicr.okey with short update

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:48 pm

        Thanks…

    13. tamanna on August 11, 2016 12:08 am

      Nice… M ok with short updates but please Update regularly….
      Waiting for next one…

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:47 pm

        Thanks…
        Today also I have send next part of this ff. Just waiting when they post…

    14. sanji on August 11, 2016 12:08 am

      nice

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:45 pm

        Thanks…

    15. khushiii on August 11, 2016 12:35 am

      Amazing

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 3:41 pm

        Thanks…

    16. Alia on August 11, 2016 4:05 pm

      superb

      • Anniya on August 11, 2016 4:10 pm

        Thanks ..

    17. hemalattha on August 12, 2016 6:43 pm

      awesome

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