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my betterhalf (Episode 1)

administratorBy administratorMay 17, 2017Updated:May 19, 201738 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hlo! I m giving first update of this ff. Let me know your views through comments. Kindly ignore mistakes.

My better half
Epi 1
Maheshwari industries
A calm environment of an office can be observed. Everyone is busy in doing the work assigned to them. Then only one can see a man in his mid twenties entered inside and everyone wished him and he just nodded by giving small smile. As he was moving towards his cabin then only he collided with some one.
Girl: I m so sorry sir.( she said immediately as she looked at the man)
Man:its all right. Be careful.( he simply replied moving ahead)
But ragini was lost in him and was thinking

Ragini( monologue): OMG sanskar sir you are very handsome. I just love you.( she blushed)
Sanskar’s cabin—
Sanskar was seen annoyed.
Sanskar: what the hell!!! Why there is no reply since morning.
Then only there was knock on the door.

Sanskar: yes come in.
Ragini entered holding a file. Before she could say anything sanskar asked.
Sanskar: what is today’s schedule.( still busy in mobile)
Ragini: sir you need you check the presentation of different employees and choose the best one for meeting. Then there are some files which you have to sign and lastly in the evening you have a meeting with foreign delegates.
Sanskar: alright then let me check presentations first.

Ragini: sure sir. I will Hans over you within few minutes.
Sanskar: OK.
Ragini let the cabin and sanskar again checked his mobile and got irritated with the ignorance of the person he wants to talk.

Mumbai
Apartment.
A small house is seen with one bedroom,hall and kitchen. A girl of about 24-25 years is doing packing as of she was going somewhere.
Girl: is everything ready Rita.
Rita: yes swara mam everything is set you need to leave for airport as your flight is after an hour.
Swara: yes yes I m ready. Let’s leave I m damm excited to see everyone’s surprised faces after my visit.

Rita(she is swara’s PA): mam you didn’t inform anyone.
Swara: nope. Everyone might be expecting Me to come next month as I had informed but as the recording of my next song is delayed then why not to surprise all.
Swara and rita left for airport.

Next epi: swara come to Kolkata. Let’s see what happen.

Thank you .

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38 Comments

  1. jnana on May 17, 2017 10:01 pm

    Nice

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 4:00 am

      Thank you

  2. Priyanka on May 17, 2017 10:07 pm

    Superb waiting

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 4:01 am

      Thank you

  3. Sus on May 17, 2017 10:07 pm

    nyc dear

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 4:02 am

      Thank you

  4. phoniex on May 17, 2017 10:13 pm

    Loved it dear

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 4:02 am

      Thank you

  5. a on May 17, 2017 10:34 pm

    nice

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 4:03 am

      Thank you

  6. Neptune on May 17, 2017 11:01 pm

    oh swara is soon coming to kolkata waiting for swasan meet but please update longer dear

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 4:04 am

      Thank you and i will try to update longer parts.

  7. Priya on May 17, 2017 11:47 pm

    Nice dear

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 6:10 am

      Thank you

  8. kojagorimalik on May 18, 2017 4:42 am

    Nice loved it

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 8:19 am

      Thanks dear

  9. mahavir on May 18, 2017 6:17 am

    oh god intresting..!! but ragu i think she is going to hadi in kabab..!! anyways i think sanskar is waiting for swara’s reply may be but i m not sure..!! nd swara is coming to kolkata wooooooo waiting dear post soon..!! loved it yaar..!!

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 8:18 am

      Thank you dear just wait for next epi everything will be clear

  10. anu on May 18, 2017 10:05 am

    awesome update soon

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 12:50 pm

      Thank you dear

  11. Alex Taylor on May 18, 2017 10:07 am

    great episode…jst want to kno if da pair is swasan or ragsan!!!plz post da nxt epi soon…eagerly waiting

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 12:51 pm

      Thank you dear and pair is swasan. Just have a look at character sketch which I had already posted .

  12. @nky on May 18, 2017 10:59 am

    Awesome….loved it…Pls update soon..And season as pair..

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 12:52 pm

      Thank you dear and pair is swasan only.

  13. gayathri.visu on May 18, 2017 2:21 pm

    Interesting… But its very short dear.

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 3:02 pm

      Thanks I will post longer part next time.

  14. Aasthu on May 18, 2017 2:38 pm

    Interesting….was S trying to reach Swara??? is it swasan and raglak ff ??? or swasan ff??

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 3:03 pm

      Its swasan ff and your doubts will be cleared in next chapter.

  15. Mars on May 18, 2017 3:09 pm

    Hey! This is mars I want your help plz.
    i had recently joined telly updates and I don’t know much about posting ff. Yesterday i submitted episode and they posted but now next chapter is not getting submitted. Can anybody tell me where I should write and then submit. And m using only mobile to write the epi. Already I had written epi 2 twice and it got cleared. Plz tell if anyone know.

    • Kakali on May 18, 2017 4:34 pm

      Hi dear, Welcome to TU..!!
      Loved your 1st part..!! Continue soon..!!,

      And coming to how to post.! Oki, it does happen as I also faced the same in starting days.
      So you write on Wordpad or Notpad. Than simply copy paste your story in TU(Submit Article) option.!
      Hmm also use chrome or any other browser to post as it’s very helpful..!!Moreover you can post being a registered member though,..
      Thnk u.. ;-*

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 5:30 pm

      Thank you soo much dear for your support.

  16. kumu on May 18, 2017 6:18 pm

    nice

    • Mars on May 18, 2017 7:54 pm

      Thank you

  17. Arshaanya on May 19, 2017 1:05 am

    Nyc

  18. Rachna on May 19, 2017 8:50 am

    Awsm… Update soon next part

  19. Seebu_s on May 19, 2017 9:46 am

    nice mars?

  20. neha on May 19, 2017 1:04 pm

    loved it…

  21. Simi on May 21, 2017 10:13 am

    Nice.. ?

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