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Home»Fan Fiction»My better half( swasan ff)episode 33 by Marsuu
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My better half( swasan ff)episode 33 by Marsuu

MarsBy MarsSeptember 24, 2017Updated:September 24, 201758 Comments10 Mins Read
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Hello guys!!! I m back with next epii. Before starting let me clear one thing
There is NO SWASAN SEPARATION.
I m taking leap to show grown sahas and sanvi. So don’t worry about swasan.
Let’s begin:

My better half (swasan ff)
Epi 33:
Recap: sanskar got to know about laksh and he is angry with swara.

Next morning:
SwaSan Room:
Swara came inside and saw sanskar sitting and playing with sahas and sanvi. When she woke up they trio were sleeping so she went downstairs to make breakfast.She came near to them and said
Swara: good morning Sanskar
Sanskar: hmm
He didn’t reacted much as he was still upset. Babies jumped happily seeing swara. Its natural whenever mother is near there is different happiness in heart.
Swara smile at them and picked sahas.
Swara: Sanskar I will give him bath u be with sanvi.
Sanskar just nodded. Swara signed sadly seeing his cold behaviour.
Swara went to washroom and sanskar picked sanvi and both father daughter got busy with each other.

After giving bath to both babies swara is setting their hairs and Sanskar is sitting on couch working on laptop. She looked at him and said
Swara: u know babies your papa is not talking to me.
She said making pout. As soon as babies listened papa word they looked at sanskar as till now they are able to understand who is papa and mamma.
Sanskar didn’t said anything and picked his laptop bag and came near them.
He kissed sahas and sanvi’s cheeks and said loudly
Sanskar: babies tell your mamma that I m going to office.
Now babies looked at swara, poor babies not understanding what is happening between their parents.
Sanskar was about to leave when swara held his hand
Swara:Sanskar I m sorry.
Sanskar: no need
Swara: then talk to me plzz
Sanskar: what u want to talk??
Swara: why can’t we behave normally.
Sanskar: no I can’t behave normally bcoz I didn’t expected this from you.
Swara’s eyes got wet as he almost shouted.
Babies widen their button like eyes seeing their sweet polite papa in angry young man mood. Sahas and Sanvi look at each other then instantly closed their eyes as if escaping from their parents fight.(#smart babies??)
Sanskar left from there. Swara took deep breathe and looked at sahas sanvi who had tightly closed their eyes.
Swara(mumble): they again slept??
She started picking the things which were scattered.

Evening:
Sahas Sanvi are with ramta in the hall.
Swara is in kitchen preparing for the dinner. Bua and laksh left in the morning only as sanskar said them to leave.
Swara is looking at her mobile for time as sanskar is late today. She went out near sujata and asked
Swara: ma today sanskar is late??
Sujata: no he came half an hour back.
Swara: where is he??
Sujata: in study.
Swara: okay.
Everyday after coming from office he meet swara but today he didn’t came.
Swara went to study.

Study :
Swara knock at the door when sanskar said
Sanskar: its open only.
Swara slightly push the door and it got open. She enter inside and went near Sanskar. He once look at her then again shift his gaze to laptop.
Swara: u r busy?
Sanskar: yes
Swara sit closely beside him on couch. He shift little back. Swara move more closer
Sanskar: what???
Swara: u r still angry?
Sanskar didn’t said anything.
Swara: I m really sorry. I will never hide anything from you promise.
She said keeping her hand on her throat.
Swara: plzzz
Sanskar: swara u know why relations break??
Swara(confused): no
Sanskar: bcoz of these things when we start hiding from our life partner which leads to misunderstanding.
Swara: but this was very small thing.
Sanskar:everything starts with small things only
Swara(teary eyes): okay next time will never do this
She hugged his waist tightly.
Swara: plzz talk to me I m not feeling good like this.
Sanskar felt her crying as her voice got heavy.
Sanskar: swara
She is still sniffing and had buried her face in his chest.
Sanskar: okay I will talk to you stop crying.
She looked at him. He wipe her tears.
Sanskar: I was hurt that’s why I thought u need lesson not to repeat it.
Swara: sorry for hurting you.
Sanskar: it’s okay.
He kissed her forehead lovingly.
Sanskar: I don’t want any problems between us. You are my everything and now the two gifts u had given me.
Swara smiles and kiss her cheek.
Swara: I love you.
Sanskar: love you too.
They had confessed infinite times but every time it create the same magic in them.
Sanskar pull her closer and kissed her softly.
They only they listened babies shouting in the hall.
Sanskar: they must be finding you.
Swara: let’s go.

Swasan came out and went to babies.
Sanvi is crying.
Swara: what happened to her mom.
She asked picking her.
Sujata: sahas pulled her hairs.
Swara glare at sahas and in turn he smile brightly.
Swara was calming sanvi.
Sanskar: u r very naughty sahas.
Sanskar said taking him in his lap. He shouted loudly.
Sanskar: shh keep quite your sister is crying.
Sahas stare Sanskar and then start playing with his shirt buttons.
Later, they made both of them sleep.

AFTER THREE YEARS:
Maheshwari House:
SwaSan Room:
Sahas and Sanvi are standing on the bed wearing blue colour dress. Its their first day of school. Swara is packing their bags which contain one notebook and pencil box. She sharp the pencils and keep inside.
Sanskar is putting school belt and tie on their dress.
Sanvi is all ready but sahas is again and again turning and sanskar was not able to put the belt.
Sanskar: sahas stand still otherwise now u will get slap.
Sanvi giggles as her dear brother is getting scolding.
Sahas(angrily): u don’t laugh too much little foot.
Sanvi(shouts):papa he is adain(again) caling(calling) me that.
Sahas(laughs): it’s again not adain.
Sanvi(pout): papaaa
Sanvi is not that perfect in speaking till but sahas speak perfectly so he always tease her and sanvi is little small in height so sahas call her little foot.
Sanskar:sahas now if u will say her anything then I will see you.
Swara: so kiddos your bags are ready.
Sahas’s bag is of pokemon and sanvi’s is of Barbie. Swara mistakenly give Barbie bag to sahas when he shouted
Sahas: mom do u think I m girl to take this bag.
Sanvi: eben(even) I will not gibe(give)
Swara: okay okay don’t fight
Swara put their bags on back.
When they came down sujata is waiting with their lunch box and water bottles.
Sujata: all the best for your first day.
Sahas:thanks dadi
Sanvi: thang(thank) you.
They both kiss sujata’s cheeks.
Ram: sahas we should not get any complain of yours and u have to take care of sanvi also.
Sahas(showing off): don’t worry dadu sanvi’s elder brother is there.
Sanvi make faces.
Sanskar: he is behaving like don’t know how much elder he is.
Sahas: papa elder is elder whether it is by 2 mins only
All laughs looking at him.
Sahas is 2 mins elder to sanvi.
Swara: its getting late let’s go.
Sahas held sanvi’s hand and they went to door. Swasan and ramta smiles seeing them. No doubt how much sahas tease sanvi or they fight but sahas is very possessive for her and they love each other alot.

Sanskar open the back door of car and sahas and sanvi sit inside. Swara sit on passenger seat and Sanskar on driver seat. Soon they left to school.

St. Joseph Convent School:
Sanskar stop the car outside the big building. After parking the car swasan came out followed by sahas and sanvi.
Sahas: wow our school is superb.
Sanvi is nervous and swara noticed
Swara: sanvi what happened baby?
Sanvi hug swara’s legs and whisper
Sanvi: I do’t(don’t) want to go.
Sanskar picked her in his arms.
Sanskar: why??
Sanvi: I m scaded(scared)
Sanskar: aww u will get so many toys there and sahas is there with you.
Sahas: yes cutie I m there with you.
Sanvi blink her teary eyes.
Sanskar(kiss her cheeks): u be with sahas only okay and I mamma will come very soon to take you.
Swara: yes u r brave girl.
Sanvi nodded.
Sanskar: that’s like my angel.
Swara held sahas’s hand they went to nursery section of the building.

Sahvi(Sahas and Sanvi) Class:
Sanvi is still in Sanskar arms. Four of them enter inside. There are many kids some are playing and some are crying. Swasan went to their teacher who is young lady of about swara’s age.
Swara: hello Miss Parul.
Parul: ohh hi Mrs maheshwari.
They already knew each other as they met when they came for sahvi’s admission.
Swara: so these are our babies sahas and sanvi.
Swara said pointing to sahas and sanvi.
Parul: both are so cute so sahas and sanvi I m your mam now.
Sahvi: hello mam
They said in unison.
Swara: plzz make both of them sit together. Sanvi is little scared and if sahas will be there with her then she will feel better.
Parul: don’t worry they can sit on same bench.
Sanskar made sanvi on the first bench as it was empty and sahas beside her.
Swara: sahas no naughtiness here and sanvi we will come soon.
Sanvi:okay.
Sahas: chill mom when sahas is there.
Swara sign and Sanskar laughs.
Swasan kissed their cheeks and went after bidding them bye. Sahas and sanvi started playing with each other.

SwaSan came outside and Swara said nervously
Swara: I hope they get adjusted soon.
Sanskar: they will don’t worry.
Swara smiles and went to their car.

Afternoon:
After four hours swasan came back to take them. As it’s their starting so they have few hours of school only. They just want to make students adjustable.
Many parents are waiting outside when kids came out in line. Sahas shouted from line
Sahas: mamma we are here.
All students look at him when sanvi said slowly
Sanvi: keap(keep) qute(quite).
Sahas smiles sheepishly at his teacher.
Sanskar: he won’t change.
Swara (laughs): never
As they came near, sahvi came running to swasan. Sahas hugged Swara and sanvi jumped in sanskar’s arms.
Sanskar(pick her): so how was your first day.
Sahas: super se upar papa.
Swara: good and your sanvi!?
Sanvi(smiles): very nice mom
They went near their car and sit inside.

In the car:
Sahas and sanvi are standing in between swasan seat from back and telling what all they did in school.
Sanvi: mom my luncj(lunch) box was nod(not) opding(opening)
Swara: haww then??
Sanvi: sanas opded(opened)
Sahas: offo its sahas not sanas.
Sanvi(shout): I will say sanas only.
Swasan smile at them.
To be continued…..

Precap: don’t know???

So how’s it. I tried to make it long hope so u liked it.
Share your views about epi and swasan’s little devils.
Thank you
Bye
Take care

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    58 Comments

    1. Anamika on September 24, 2017 5:43 pm

      You gave earlier a teaser about swasan divorce is it true or any other track is running in your mind. I also want to say sorry because previously I talk rudely with you.

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 5:51 pm

        No actually I had dropped the idea of that teaser bcoz no one wants it. Yeah there will be another story but not divorce.
        And no need of sorry dear. Its alright sometimes I get late to reply back but I always do?????
        Just ignore that teaser????
        Take care???

    2. Anamika on September 24, 2017 5:43 pm

      It is nice.

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 5:52 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    3. AbrahamEzra on September 24, 2017 5:50 pm

      It was really very very cute dear. Loved sahas s maturity and care and sanvis innocence and talks.

      • Mars on September 24, 2017 5:54 pm

        Thank you so much dear glad u liked tc??????

    4. harneet on September 24, 2017 6:02 pm

      omg omg … it was cute and too adorable di …..

      • harneet on September 24, 2017 6:03 pm

        please post sufferings … season 2 ep 3

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 8:14 am

        Sufferings also I will post soon
        ??

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 8:12 am

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    5. Halima on September 24, 2017 6:05 pm

      So nice marsu pls update daily yaar.

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 8:16 am

        Thank you so much dear will try to give regular updates??? take care??

    6. NDSG on September 24, 2017 6:30 pm

      Awww soooooooooooo cute… ??????????????? .

      Finally Sanskaar forgave shona???
      Babies soo cute???? uuummmahhh??????? . so many kiss for them. They reminded me my childhood????. U know I was like sanvi. Scared kitten. ????

      When my mom left me school I used to cry, saying mom to stay with me… ? I hold her saree not letting her go… ??? clever me.
      But I used to speak too much, so much query,

      Why raining? Y sun is round? Y moon comes in night? Y we eat food? Soo many questions, even teacher becomes fed up of my queries…????????

      Superbbbbb mars u reminded me my childhood?

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 8:21 am

        Hawww clever depuuu even I used to run after my mother????? and u were seriously a question bank so many queries but I was very silent type like sanvi??????
        And thank you so much depuuu dear aur babies cute tho hoge hi after all swasan par gaye hai???????
        Take care??????????

      • NDSG on September 25, 2017 1:12 pm

        ??????? I want to pull savi’s cheeks☺☺☺☺she is cutie pie ????

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 1:28 pm

        ???? me toooo?????

    7. Vidhi on September 24, 2017 6:56 pm

      This brought all the memories back.. When I was a child…. Totally loved this… This is amazing… ❤❤❤❤
      The bonding.. Sahas from now only full on attitude mode.. Just like sanskar ??? …n sanvi is so cute just like our swara ????
      Loved their bonding… N swara n sanskar ka kya kehna.. They are gem u knw…
      Update soon dear ???

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 8:35 am

        Awwww thank you so much vidhi dear and yupp sahas is copy of Sanskar and sanvi of swara ??????
        Like mamma papa babies are also cutie pies??????
        Thanks dear glad u liked
        Will post soon????
        Take care??????

    8. Nisha on September 24, 2017 7:01 pm

      OMG… This was such a sweeetttttt update ya.. ???.. One of the best episodes ever.. ??????.. the initial scenes of Swara manaoing Sanskaar were so damn cute.. ❤️❤️.. Finally Swara was able to pacify Sanskaar.. Their love and care for each other is the bestest part of ur story.. ??.. Just too good.. :).. And then their sweetest and cutest children were a treat.. Both of them were soooo adorable.. Hehehee.. Sahas was just soooo naughty and sanvi was extremely cute.. Enjoyed the entire update to the fullest.. ???.. Thank you so much for this awesome and stupendous update.. Loveddddd it.. ???

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 8:39 am

        Yuppp finally swasan patch up with each other and babies are supposed to be cute after all they are swasan kids?????
        Thank you so much dear I m glad u liked it take care?????????

    9. nabamita on September 24, 2017 7:17 pm

      Awesome…

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:31 am

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    10. Neptune on September 24, 2017 7:32 pm

      Marsuuuuuuuuu….. oh god what should I say…am not getting words to describe it…

      It was cuteness overloaded and even more then that…..
      Sahas and sanvi are soooooooooooo cute their moments were too cute…
      Loved it totally… and give some SWASAN moments too please… waiting eagerly for the next part…

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:34 am

        Awww thank you so much nepuuuu I m Happy that u liked it swasan moments are coming ahead so wait for it???
        I Will post next part soon tc?????????

    11. Bush1122 on September 24, 2017 8:18 pm

      Ohhh… wow awesome..
      Finally Sanskar forgave Swara…
      And thz kids r not less than little cute devils..
      So cute…
      Sahas a caring and protective brothr…
      Ofc this part remembered me my childhood …
      Luvd it more than words could say…
      Seriously…. fabulous n mind blowing…
      Luvd it..

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:36 am

        Awww thank you so much dear I m glad u liked it???? swasan babies are cute like swasan tc?????????

    12. AnuAnn on September 24, 2017 8:27 pm

      Lovely dear.. I always wished for our swasan with babies ??????

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:39 am

        Me tooo wanted swasan babies but they didn’t gave us??????? so now fulfilling our wish by writing????
        Thank you so much anuu dear tc????????????

    13. Rekha on September 24, 2017 8:28 pm

      Awwww….. So Cuteeeeee.. …….. Family……????

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:41 am

        Awww thank you so much dear tc??????

    14. Stg on September 24, 2017 8:34 pm

      Awesome ???

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:42 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    15. Kumu on September 24, 2017 8:36 pm

      Beautiful epi..sahas and sanvi r 2 cute??
      Tc..

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:44 am

        Awww thank you so much dear tc???????

    16. anu on September 24, 2017 8:41 pm

      awesome loved it

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:46 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    17. Parul on September 24, 2017 8:58 pm

      So sweet chappy dr awesome n thank u 4 ur epi

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:47 am

        Awww thank you so much dear tc??????

    18. Priya on September 24, 2017 9:12 pm

      Awesome dear cute babies

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:49 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    19. Tamil on September 24, 2017 9:46 pm

      Wow dear it’s so amazing loved it…..sanvi sahas are so cute loved their moments….Beautiful lovely

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:50 am

        Awww thank you so much dear glad u liked it tc???????

    20. rini on September 24, 2017 10:16 pm

      so cute…

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 9:51 am

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    21. Milestone on September 25, 2017 9:09 am

      Cute n adorable…..

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 10:18 am

        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    22. Soujanya on September 25, 2017 9:58 am

      Awesome….so cute kid..

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 10:02 am

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    23. Anu Rathore on September 25, 2017 11:32 am

      Its awesome part both babies are too cute…

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 12:41 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc??????

    24. Anjali on September 25, 2017 3:27 pm

      Superb loved it

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 4:26 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc?????

    25. Rp on September 25, 2017 4:29 pm

      Super dearrr

      • Mars on September 25, 2017 5:22 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc????

    26. vyshu10 on September 26, 2017 11:16 pm

      cute n sweet

      • Mars on September 27, 2017 12:46 pm

        Thank you so much dear tc???

    27. gayathri.visu on September 30, 2017 5:47 pm

      Oh My Maata Marsu…it’s khidkitod adorable! Sooooooooooo cute……I want to SahVi’s cheeks….both r cutiepies like our Swasan. And Swasan part….amazing dear. Superb! Btw ur coverpic….OMG! That’s so cute….both babies n their hats are really cute dear.

      • Mars on October 1, 2017 4:13 pm

        Awww thank you so much gayuuu dear glad you liked it???? sahvi are cuties????? thanks for cover pic???? tc???

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