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Home»Fan Fiction»My better half (swasan ff) Episode 23 by Mars
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My better half (swasan ff) Episode 23 by Mars

MarsBy MarsJuly 20, 2017Updated:July 20, 201775 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hloo guys!!!I m back and I know I m super se upar late this time. Soooo sorryyyyyy for that. As in last part I had started abortion drama but even I don’t have any surety whether we can abort one child in twins or not.So I m dropping this idea. I can’t keep it hanging also so will end that in this epi.
So sorry for my mistakes.
From next part I will show swasan past love story and then later will add another twist. Thank you for your comments on last part.
Let’s begin:

My better half(swasan ff)
Epi 23:
Evening:
Maheshwari House:
Sanskar entered inside the house with pale and dull face. Swara who was sitting in the hall saw him and come near him and said
Swara:Sanskar come I will show u the surprise.
She failed to see his sad face due to excitment.
Sanskar;where to go swara.
Swara:just come with me.
Swara held his hand and took to one room.

Room:
Swasan entered inside the room. Sanskar got astonished to see whole room decorated with babies things.
Sanskar: what is this Swara?
Swara: this will be our babies room. See these two cradle for them and I had bought all soughts of toys also.u know I didn’t bought pictures to paste in their room bcoz I don’t know whether they will be boys or girls.
A lone tear escaped Sanskar’s eyes seeing her happiness. He held her hand.
Sanskar:swara
Swara:sanskar tell me u liked it or not?
Sanskar: its very nice swara…
Swara: and yes this will be our babies room but only for playing they will sleep with us only how can we leave them alone.
Sanskar: Swara I need to talk with you.
It was then when swara saw seriousness in his eyes.
Swara: what happened is every thing OK.(remembere about reports)and my reports babies are fine na.
Sanskar: calm down I will tell just come.
Sanskar took swara to their room.

Swasan room:
Sanskar made swara sit on bed and sit in front and held her hand and said
Sanskar: swara I will tell u something so u have to listen properly.
Swara: yes speak up.
Sanskar:actually bcoz of complications doctor said that if we can abort one child.
Swara(shocked): what but.. Why?
Sanskar:u are not that strong to conceive two babies.
Swara(crying): what are u saying Sanskar how can u even think of killing your own baby.
Sanskar:I will never do that so I already denied it was just I want to know your opinion. And it’s not compulsory we can take care of complications.
Swara hugged him and he tightened the hug.
Swara:we will not do this Sanskar both are our babies.
Sanskar: yes don’t cry we will tell doctor.
Then only sanskar’s phone rings.
Swara saw the caller I’d and got panicked. Sanskar held her closer to him and relaxes her.The call is of doctor kiran.He received it.
Sanskar:hello doctor
Kiran:hey sanskar if u and swara can come now actually i want to discuss something important with you both.
Sanskar;okay we will come.
He cut the call.
Swara:what doctor said?
Sanskar: she wants to meet us.
Swara(fidgeting her fingers): I m scared sanskar.
Sanskar:everything will be OK.
They left to hospital.

Hospital:
Kiran’s cabin:
Swasan are sitting in front and she is checking their reports.
Kiran:I had studied swara’s reports thoroughly and about her condition also.There are complications in her pregnancy as I said but about abortion we can’t do that now.
Swara: really.
Kiran:it will be dangerous If we go with abortion now.
Sanskar: even our answer was also no only.
Kiran:so for complications I will prescribe you medicine. U have to come for check up on time and don’t stress your body swara and no physical work just u can go for normal walk.
Then she told what swara should do for her and babies safety.
Sanskar: don’t worry doctor I will take proper care of her.
Later after taking medicine they left.

Maheshwari house:
Swasan came back and sanskar informed sujata about all what doctor said
Sujata: u don’t worry Sanskar I will take proper care of babies and swara and if they are weak then I will make them strong by giving my hand made food.
Swasan smiles to see her enthusiasm.
Sanskar: okay mom.
Sujata (cheering Swara): and swara u just relax.Babies are weak only first then later they become strong.
Swara: really?
Sujata: yes now take example of sanskar only, when he was born he was same like little chicken but see now well build man.
Swara(laughs): he was like chicken. Mom do u have any pic of him I want to see.
Sanskar was making faces and glaring at this dil mil jodi.
Sujata: yes there will be pics. I will find and show u. U know there are many pics of him when he used to wear Frock with bangles and bindi.
Swara: omg sanskar u wear flocks also.
Sanskar (annoyed): I used to wear when I was very small.
Swara: but why he used to wear flocks.
(She asked curiously).
Sanskar: leave it na Swara.
Sujata: no no let me tell. Swara he went to nursery class and there he saw one girl wearing flock.All were praising her and were saying she looks pretty. So he thought if he will wear flock then he will also look beautiful and he started crying that he want to be like girl. So finally I made him girl.
Swara is laughing loudly listening to her Hubby’s antics in childhood while Sanskar with irritated look was looking down.
Swara:tell something more mom.
Sujata:yeah sure there are many incidents.
Sanskar(mumble): huh!? They are not going to stop I should only leave.
He was about to leave when swara said
Swara: sanskar just listen about you why are u going.
Sanskar(make faces): I m not that interested u only listen.
Swara: ofcouse I will as I m damm excited.Continue mom.
Sanskar signed and went while swara and sujata again got busy with each other talking laughing and all.

After some time:
Swara went to her room.
Swasan room:
Sanskar is working on laptap sitting on couch.Swara went and sit beside him.
She look at him and started laughing remembering about his antics.
Sanskar: I think u had great fun listening about me.
Swara: yes so much I was not knowing u were this much naughty as a kid.
Sanskar (pull her closer): I m that naughty now also.
He whispers huskily kissing her earlobe. Swara shivered at his sudden touch.
Sanskar kissed her cheeks sensuously making her breathe heavily.He smirks seeing his effect on her.
Swara: Sanskar what are u doing have some shame u are going to be father.
Sanskar: huh! If I will be showing shame in front of you then how can babies come.
Swara’s cheeks turn pink listening his words.
Sanskar chuckles seeing her blushing profusely and said
Sanskar (slowly): swara I had not yet started and u are already blushing.
Swara hug him not able to face his gaze.Sanskar also hugged back and laugh as she was blushing like newly bride.
To be continued….

Precap:past love story of swasan starts.

Verrryyy sorry for this tiny part. Firstly I m late and above that this small update.
Actually this epi was just to wrap up abortion topic.From next epi will give proper part and will post soon pakka.
Plzz compromise today.
I know it is not that deserving and I seriously don’t have any expectations from this part.
But still if it was worth reading u can leave your comments.
Thank you
Lots of love
Bye
Take care.

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    75 Comments

    1. Mars on July 20, 2017 3:44 pm

      Hlo guys!!! Finally the epi is posted I m really very sorry for the inconvenience. Now u can read it and give your views.

    2. Darlzz002 on July 20, 2017 3:50 pm

      Nice update di…
      Sanskar in frock….. OMG….. ??
      Waiting 2 read their love story…

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 4:49 pm

        Thank you so much dear and will post next part soon

    3. phoniex on July 20, 2017 3:52 pm

      haha cute episode

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 4:50 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    4. Anjali on July 20, 2017 4:01 pm

      superb loved it

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 4:59 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    5. Shibil on July 20, 2017 4:02 pm

      Nice …..No obortion makes me relax …..ha ha sanskar childhood naughtiness….waiting for upcoming one

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 5:00 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    6. Sus on July 20, 2017 4:45 pm

      its nyc dear but i think the trust they showed i married life, i think this is buildup becoz of past may be gone through much that they love and trust so much

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 5:23 pm

        Thank you so dear wait for their past.

    7. AbrahamEzra on July 20, 2017 4:46 pm

      It was nice. Thank god the abortion part is over. I was hell scared of this. And sanskar was Cho cute in his childhood. Plss try to post soon.

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 5:24 pm

        Thank you so much dear and will post next part soon

    8. Tamil on July 20, 2017 4:48 pm

      Amazing……..sanskar in frock in his childhood loved it……

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 5:25 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    9. Simi on July 20, 2017 5:10 pm

      Amazing chapter dear.. No abortion ??
      Sanskar in frock ????

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 5:27 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    10. Stg on July 20, 2017 5:16 pm

      superb ??

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 5:28 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    11. Kumu on July 20, 2017 5:19 pm

      Nice..that frock story was really cute..in fact my cousin bro used to wear frocks when he was a kid as he wanted to be like me ????
      Tc..

      • Mars on July 20, 2017 5:46 pm

        Thank you so much dear and that was funny even I had listened many times when boys used to wear flocks.

    12. Sherley on July 20, 2017 6:05 pm

      Mindblowing…………… i couldn’t stop laughing………………………

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:42 am

        Thank you so much dear

    13. Rachna on July 20, 2017 6:07 pm

      Awsm Dr… Update soon

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:44 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    14. pnap on July 20, 2017 6:39 pm

      it’s really such a cute part
      loved it

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:47 am

        Thank you so much dear

    15. yamee on July 20, 2017 6:40 pm

      Lovely epi dear…loved it.And very excited for past love story.

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:48 am

        Thank you so much dear

    16. nabamita on July 20, 2017 6:56 pm

      Awesome…Loooveddd it

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:50 am

        Thank you so much dear

    17. anniya on July 20, 2017 7:35 pm

      Luvd it yaar a lot

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:51 am

        Thank you so much dear

    18. Xyz on July 20, 2017 7:36 pm

      Very good…… Waiting 4 nxt chappy ??

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:53 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    19. independent on July 20, 2017 7:37 pm

      Awesome update dear

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:54 am

        Thank you so much dear

    20. Shanaya on July 20, 2017 7:59 pm

      Lovely ? I was a silent reader but the teaser forced me to comment ….. please don’t bring in divorce due to stupid mistakes

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:56 am

        Thank you so much dear

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 9:59 am

        And dear I had dropped the idea of divorce so there will be no divorce so don’t worry.

    21. anu on July 20, 2017 8:44 pm

      awesome update next part soon

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:00 am

        Thank you so much dear will post next part soon

    22. Seebu_s on July 20, 2017 8:45 pm

      loved it dear..sanskar in frock’s??lol

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:02 am

        Thank you so much di

    23. AnuAnn on July 20, 2017 10:08 pm

      Has..haa tooo cute yaar

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:03 am

        Thank you so much dear

    24. Rekha on July 20, 2017 10:45 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:05 am

        Thank you so much dear

    25. Niharika on July 20, 2017 10:49 pm

      That was funny. Sanskar as a girl. Loved the part marks. U totally nailed it.

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:07 am

        Thank you so much dear

    26. Pramudi on July 20, 2017 11:09 pm

      Awesome dear. Loved it. Sanskaar in frocks reminded me about my younger brother. ? even he used to wear my frocks & hats to look like me & had clicked many 4tos with me? that part was so cute.

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:09 am

        Thank you so much dear and that was funny your brother also wear frock.

    27. SHAN on July 21, 2017 12:24 am

      Awesome mars

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:26 am

        Thank you so much di

    28. SNY on July 21, 2017 8:05 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:27 am

        Thank you so much dear

    29. Milestone on July 21, 2017 9:04 am

      Nice…..

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:29 am

        Thank you so much dear

    30. Soujanya on July 21, 2017 9:28 am

      Awesome ….

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:31 am

        Thank you so much dear

    31. gayathri.visu on July 21, 2017 9:33 am

      Very good part. Uff…No abortion!! Sanskaar’d childhood naughtiness….that was very funny yaar. I loved it.

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 10:32 am

        Thank you so much dear

    32. Jannatul.Nayma09 on July 21, 2017 3:18 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on July 21, 2017 5:45 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    33. Simin on July 21, 2017 10:00 pm

      Superb
      Lol sanskar in frock sooo cuteeeee??????
      Awwww i miss my babies soooo much…..

      • Mars on July 23, 2017 8:48 am

        Thank you so much dear

    34. Prashasti7 on July 22, 2017 3:38 pm

      Nyc chappy drl
      Omg!!!! Sanskars story heeheeee flocks…??????

      • Mars on July 23, 2017 8:50 am

        Thank you so much dear

    35. raina on July 22, 2017 3:45 pm

      waiting for their past love story!!!!
      beautiful update

      • Mars on July 23, 2017 8:50 am

        Thank you so much dear

    36. Kanha on July 22, 2017 3:59 pm

      Sorryyy for late siso. It’s awesome. Even though they are in tension, they just did some fun. Sanskar in frock was hilarious? It reminded me of my childhood. I and my bro actually exchanged our dresses in our childhood – me in his shirt and pant; and my bro in my frock. lol ???????? I am just laughing and laughing now??? Waiting for the next part. Loveeeeeeee youuuuuu Marsssss♥️♥️♥️♥️

      • Mars on July 23, 2017 8:53 am

        Thank you so much sister don’t be sorry. Love u took will post soon

    37. vyshu10 on July 22, 2017 5:59 pm

      superb

      • Mars on July 23, 2017 8:54 am

        Thank you so much dear

    38. rabia0032 on July 23, 2017 7:29 pm

      Awesome dear loved it…
      Sanskar childhood memory are woow??

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