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Home»Fan Fiction»My better half (swasan ff) Episode 22 by Mars
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My better half (swasan ff) Episode 22 by Mars

MarsBy MarsJuly 10, 201772 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hloooo guys!! I m back.Thank you so much for your super se upar vala response. And as usual sorry for being late.
Let’s begin:

My better half(swasan ff)
Epi 22:
Maheshwari house:
Swasan room:
Sanskar entered with the bowl in his hand and saw swara sitting on bed all lost in thoughts. He sit beside her. Sensing his presence swara looked at him.
Sanskar: come on swara have your soup.Mom made for you.
Swara made weird face.
Sanskar: don’t make such faces u have to eat it.
He feed her one spoon.
Swara: it’s not that bad.
Then he keep on feeding her and asked
Sanskar: what were u thinking?
Swara: I m feeling well Sanskar.
Sanskar(instantly): its paining again.
Swara: no no I mean I m feeling restless as something is not good.
Sanskar: don’t worry it happens in pregnancy and u r absolutely fine now.
Swara smiles.
Sanskar: and babies are also fine.
He said putting hand on her belly and she nodded.

Evening:
Sanskar was going to take Swara’s reports but thought first to confirm about them.So he called doctor.
Sanskar: hello Dr.kiran, Swara’s reports came?
Kiran: sorry Mr maheshwari bcoz of some technical problem it didn’t came plzz collect in the morning.
Sanskar: okay fine.
He cut the call.Swara is also sitting near him and asked
Swara: what doctor said?
Sanskar: due to some problem reports will come in the morning so don’t worry.
Swara:hmmm

Night:
Swasan room:
After dinner, swara came after changing and sleep beside Sanskar.He took her in his embrace.
After half an hour:
Swara was not able to sleep. She looked at sanskar who was closely sleeping to her.She said
Swara:sanskar
Sanskar was not in deep sleep so responded
Sanskar:hmm
Swara: u r sleepy.
Sanskar:why??
Swara(puppy face): I want to go out.
Sanskar(look at her): where ??
Swara:to the lake where we used to meet before marriage.
Sanskar: now?? But it’s far.
Swara:so what with that only we will enjoy long drive also.
Sanskar: okay.
Swara: then I will change the dress.
She is wearing loose night suit.
Sanskar:no need this will be comfortable and moreover no one will be there at this time.
Swasan left downstairs and then went to lake.

Lake:
After the journey of about one hour, swasan reached at the edge of the lake.
Swara asked sanskar to sit on grass.
He smiles and sit as he knew she will ask as always.Then she made her comfortable in front of him.Her back was joining his chest.Sanskar’s hands are protectively wrapped on her belly.
And swara’s hands are busy in playing with his fingers. There was silence all around. Only the water flowing voice can be heard which is very soothing. Sanskar removed swara’s hairs from back and nuzzles his face in her neck.
Nothing can be blissful then this for them. Breaking the silence, Swara said
Swara: Sanskar I got call from mumbai.
Listening this, Sanskar lips apart from her skin in neck and his grip got loosened on her belly.
Swara was shocked that only with the name of mumbai how much he is effected then how he must have adjusted in last two years.
Swara’s eyes got filled with tears just reminiscing how much they used to crave for each other.
Sanskar seeing her silent, asked trying to be normal
Sanskar: for what?
Swara looked back.Her teary eyes met his eyes which were also wet.
Swara: they called to congratulate us that we are going to be parents.
Sanskar signed in relief hearing her. He was reacting normally but swara was noticing his each gesture.
Swara(rest her head on his chest): u always lied to me Sanskar.
Sanskar(confused): for what?
Swara: that u were fine without me alone here.
Sanskar: what’s lie in this?
Swara turn and looked at him.
Swara:seriously Sanskar, just listening about mumbai your eyes got teary. U were not scared that I will go back?
Few tears fell from sanskar’s eyes.
How much he try but can never control his emotions from his Swara.
He hugged her tightly and said
Sanskar(crying): truth is this swara I always missed you. I used to talk alone with your photo.I always wanted you beside me forever.
Swara’s neck got wet bcoz of his tears.
Swara was also crying but asked him
Swara(sternly): then why u never stopped me.
Sanskar:I m not that selfish to snatch your dreams.
Swara(cups his face):u need not to say me Sanskar u could have ordered. Its your right and I m all yours. how could I have not listened.
Sanskar:(sniffs):okay leave it. Now u r with me. I don’t want to remember it.
Swara wipe his tears and raised little and kissed his eyes. He just close his eyes to feel her.
Swara: I will never leave you.
Sanskar:don’t u dare also.
Sanskar looked in her eyes for permission to capture her beautiful lips. She closed her eyes in anticipation.
Soon there lips met. It’s numerous times they had kissed each other but everytime its new feeling for each other.
They kissed each other gently. Their was no hunger just bliss of being with each other.
Sanskar break the kiss soon.Swara give him irritated look.
Sanskar (kiss her nose): it’s not good for you to breathe heavily.
Swara smiles seeing that at each step how much caring he is.
Both spend time there and then went to car.
(I got tears in my eyes writing this lake part.
### missing swasan sooooo much)

Next morning:
Sanskar was getting ready to take reports from hospital.
Swara(giving his wallet): plzz inform me when u will get the reports.
Sanskar saw her tensed and said
Sanskar: hey swara don’t worry these are just normal reports.
Swara: hmm. Sanskar today me and mom are going for little shopping.
Sanskar: no way. Just take rest.
Swara: sanskar plzzz I will be okay. Mom is there to take care plzzz.
Sanskar: okay but no stress.
Swara nodded like obedient child.
Sanskar kissed her forehead and left.

Hospital:
Sanskar went to doctor’s cabin.
Sanskar: doctor swara’s reports?
Kiran:ohh yes plzz sit. I was waiting for you only.
Sanskar sit in front of her.
Sanskar: swara and babies are fine na?
Kiran: see Mr maheshwari I will say it straight forwardedly bcoz I know u can understand and will make swara also understand.
Sanskar (restless): means?
Koran: honestly saying Swara’s reports are not that good.There are little complications in her pregnancy.
Sanskar: I m not understanding anything.
His heart was beating at jet speed.
Koran: actually swara is not strong enough to conceive two babies. She can’t nourish both at the same time.
Sanskar was breathing heavily and almost sweating.
Kiran saw his condition and said
Kiran: but its not big problem. If proper care of mother and babies is taken then its possible.
Sanskar felt little relief.
Sanskar: then what we should do?
Kiran: I personally suggest u to abort one baby. Otherwise it will be risky for swara and other baby also. And one baby is really very weak.
Sanskar’s vision got burred bcoz of tears. He never thought of this.
Sanskar: no we can’t do this.
Kiran: I know Mr maheshwari its not easy but try to talk to Swara and soon tell me about your decision whether u want to abort or not bcoz we will start her medication otherwise.
Sanskar just nodded. He was not in the condition to say anything.
He took the reports and left.

Outside:
Sanskar was all lost.Tears were not ready to stop. Doctor’s words were ringing in his mind. How much he and Swara were happy when they come to know about twins.How can he kill his own blood.
His thoughts were broken with the phone call. After seeing the caller id he closed his eyes. Its Ofcouse swara.
But if he will ignore then she will be worried.So he received. Before he could say anything swara asked
Swara: sanskar u got the reports. Everything is fine?
Sanskar(trying to be normal): yes swara all good will talk when I will come home.
Swara(relief): thank god its okay. Asha sanskar I have a surprise for you so come soon today(excited)
Few fresh tears fell from his eyes seeing her excitement.
Sanskar:hmm
Swara:okay bye.
She cut the call.
Sanskar left to his office and whole day he was thinking how to tell swara about her complications and abortion. He knew it will be difficult for him to handle her as she will never agree for it.(sorry if anything is wrong in this part bcoz I don’t have much knowledge so plzz correct me)
To be continued……

Precap: Sanskar tell swara about abortion. How will she react??

Okay plzzz tell me how many of u want to see swasan love story before marriage. Plzz tell me I will give it in 2-3 episodes.

Kindly leave your comments.
Silent readers also plzz try to leave your feedback.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    72 Comments

    1. Simin on July 10, 2017 8:38 pm

      Oh myyyyy thats bad
      Hope everything goes fine
      Will wait to see their story

      • Mars on July 11, 2017 7:01 am

        Thank you dear

    2. SHAN on July 10, 2017 8:56 pm

      Awesome dr!!!! I loved it a lot…. Its very emotional….

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:20 am

        Thank you shan di

    3. Darlzz002 on July 10, 2017 8:56 pm

      Nyc epi di…..
      I want their love story….
      Di… ur writing is awesome… i never loved any other ff’s like i love urs…
      Seriously… amazing skill….
      Loving all ur ff’s alooootttt

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:21 am

        Thank you so much dear

    4. Saima on July 10, 2017 9:19 pm

      Marsuu I have faith in u that u won’t let anything happen to swara andher babies so don’t let me down .plz post the next soon cozits really difficult to wait . Well this part was awesome and even I got tears remembering the lake scenes

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:23 am

        Thank you dear and thanks for having faith on me.

    5. Mannu on July 10, 2017 9:25 pm

      I toh want swasan with kids like perfect and happy family???????‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍?

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:25 am

        Thank you dear

    6. pnap on July 10, 2017 9:28 pm

      i get teary eyed on reading this part

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:26 am

        Thank you dear

    7. independent on July 10, 2017 9:32 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:29 am

        Thank you dear

    8. Bella on July 10, 2017 9:57 pm

      Amazing . I love your all stories . These are awesome except devdan story . I didn’t read that cause i don’t like devdan . Coming to this epi it was just fav like always .

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:30 am

        Thank you dear

    9. Niharika on July 10, 2017 10:07 pm

      Mars even I m missing swasan sooooooo much. And I knew nothing can happen to swasan twins. Great part. Loved it.

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:32 am

        Thank you dear and really missing swasan

    10. scooby on July 10, 2017 10:13 pm

      Superb.. Even my eyes got wet while reading that lake scene? missing swasan so muchh?
      Nxt u cant abort one baby alone mars..bcz they r twin…

      • scooby on July 10, 2017 10:30 pm

        * it has too many complications and tedious procedure to do abortion. Bcz now fetus might have grown.

      • scooby on July 10, 2017 10:31 pm

        * it has too many complications and to do abortion. Bcz now fetus might have grown.

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:38 am

        Thank you dear for explaining me. I will take care of these points. And I thought of abortion as Swara is in 2nd month and we can abort till three months.once again thanks dear

    11. Stg on July 10, 2017 10:18 pm

      awesome ?

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:40 am

        Thank you dear

    12. SNY on July 10, 2017 10:29 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:42 am

        Thank you dear

    13. Sus on July 10, 2017 11:25 pm

      lovly dear

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:43 am

        Thank you dear

    14. Ashwini on July 11, 2017 12:13 am

      Awesome episode yrr ? ? nd lake sce me real SwaSan ki yaad aa gai ????? missing them so much… Plz post next part soon

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:49 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    15. Divyarani on July 11, 2017 12:49 am

      Mars….u made me cry??????? actually I was imagining this scene in real? i sooo miss them???
      firsthalf is sooo emotional yet romantic ❤
      now what will sanskaar gonna do? post nxt asap☺
      #loveswasanforever ??

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:52 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    16. Kumu on July 11, 2017 12:55 am

      Awesome..loved it..wanna see swasan’s love story before marriage..tc..

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:53 am

        Thank you dear

    17. phoniex on July 11, 2017 6:32 am

      Amazing dear

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:56 am

        Thank you dear

    18. yamee on July 11, 2017 8:31 am

      Amazing…

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 6:57 am

        Thank you dear

    19. Simi on July 11, 2017 9:11 am

      Amazing dear…
      Lake scene was awesome.. ?
      Wanna see Swasan’s lovestory before marriage….

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:02 am

        Thank you dear

    20. Anjali on July 11, 2017 9:40 am

      superb nd yaa i want to see their love story

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:04 am

        Thank you dear

    21. Prashasti7 on July 11, 2017 10:44 am

      Nyc episode specially that lake scene loved it but this complication ufff….don’t kill their baby ik u will not do this haina

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:05 am

        Thank you dear and wait to know further.

    22. reethu on July 11, 2017 10:45 am

      awesome dear and i also want to swasan’s love storybefore marriage

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:07 am

        Thank you dear

    23. Neptune on July 11, 2017 10:53 am

      marsuuuuuuuuuuuuu….
      a big same pinch…….. even i am missing my SWASAN choooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much…….
      waiting for the precap eagerly….

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:09 am

        Thank you nepuuu will post next part soon and really missing swasan like anything.

    24. rabia0032 on July 11, 2017 1:16 pm

      Awesome dear I want swasan love story

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:11 am

        Thank you dear

    25. Jannatul.Nayma09 on July 11, 2017 2:55 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:12 am

        Thank you dear

    26. Tamil on July 11, 2017 3:05 pm

      Amazing dear…….

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:14 am

        Thank you dear

    27. Jessicauio on July 11, 2017 4:14 pm

      Awsmmmm

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:15 am

        Thank you dear

    28. anu on July 11, 2017 5:58 pm

      awesome update next part soon

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:17 am

        Thank you dear will post next part soon

    29. gayathri.visu on July 11, 2017 7:54 pm

      Awesome dear… Absolutely I want to see Swasan’s lovestory before marriage. Plz don’t do anything wrong to Swasan n their baby.
      I too missing Swasan sooooooooooo…….much! Eagerly waiting for next part dear.

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:18 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon

    30. Kanha on July 11, 2017 8:06 pm

      Sisoooo I am crying?????? It is really emotional yaar. Please don’t kill the baby????? Me too missing our Swasan????????? Love you siso. Take care???

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:20 am

        Thank you so much sister love u too

    31. vyshu10 on July 11, 2017 8:29 pm

      so emotional…awesome ep

      hmm about their lovestory…its ur call dear

      • Mars on July 12, 2017 7:23 am

        Thank you dear

    32. raina on July 12, 2017 6:42 pm

      the lake was very beautiful and was really very touchy..
      thanks a lot for giving such an emotional scene.. i loved it a lottttttt….
      and these complications.. i don’t know what to say.. and i think one baby cannot be aborted if they are twins..
      i maybe wrong too.. just said according to my knowledge..
      sorry if i hurt you…

      • raina on July 12, 2017 6:43 pm

        lake *scene*

      • Mars on July 15, 2017 5:01 am

        Thank you so much dear

      • Mars on July 15, 2017 5:09 am

        Thanks for informing me dear will surely work on it

    33. Milestone on July 12, 2017 10:27 pm

      Nice……

      • Mars on July 15, 2017 5:10 am

        Thank you so much dear

    34. Febi on July 15, 2017 6:26 pm

      Awesome dear

    35. kat on July 17, 2017 3:20 pm

      it is emotional

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