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Home»Fan Fiction»My better half (swasan ff) Episode 20
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My better half (swasan ff) Episode 20

MarsBy MarsJune 29, 2017Updated:June 29, 201794 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hloooo guys!! This is Mars wo tho pta chal hi gaya hoga hihi.Thank you sooo much for your wonderful response. Sorry guys I had mentioned earlier about inauguration of swara’s music academy but then forgot to show.Yesterday i was thinking about story then it stuck my mind.So now I will give it. Once again sorry.
Let’s begin:

My better half (swasan ff)
Epi 20:
Early Morning:
Maheshwari house:
Swasan room:
Swara entered inside the room and got annoyed to see sanskar still sleeping. She went to her and tap her shoulder but no effect.
Swara(angry): Sanskar get up now it’s fifth time I m waking u up.
Sanskar open his eyes and turn as he was lying on his stomach and give his cutest smile to swara.
Swara: tell me when I was in Mumbai then how u get up?
Sanskar pull her by holding her hand and as the result she falls on his chest. Sanskar: u know I m very smart.I get up at my regular time but then again sleep to wait when my gorgeous wife will come and wake me with love.
Swara(blushes):asha.
Sanskar nodded.
Swara:now get up we have to prepare for the function also.(got up)
Sanskar(sits): swara we will do inauguration tomorrow but plzz u will not go there every day.u have to take rest.
Swara(taking his clothes from cupboard): okay now go and fresh up.
Sanskar took his clothes and went to washroom while swara start setting blanket on bed.
Whole day swasan prepare for inauguration ceremony but sanskar took proper care that Swara should not harm herself and baby.

Next day:
Evening
Swasan are getting ready for the ceremony. Sanskar came from washroom just wearing pant and saw swara wearing light pink saree with sliver border looking beautiful. She is standing in front of mirror wearing other accessories.
Sanskar wrap his arms around her waist.Swara looked at him through mirror and raise her eyebrow.Sanskar nuzzles his face in her neck and whispers
Sanskar: why are u wearing this much heavy saree?
Swara: why its not looking good?
Sanskar: good??? Only I know how I m controlling myself.
Swara’s cheeks turn pink complementing her saree.
Swara(looking down): then?
Sanskar: I m saying in this condition u could have wore something simple so that u should feel comfortable.
Swara: I will manage Sanskar its just the matter of few hours.
Sanskar: sure
Swara:yes.
Sanskar: btw I will be there only if u can’t walk just say me once I will pick u in my arms.
Swara(turn): thank you so much for your offer Mr maheshwari will surely think about it.Now get ready.
Sanskar: as u say
Sanskar also got ready wearing white suit and light pink tie matching with swara’s saree.Both left to the academy.Sujata and ram had already gone.

Swara music academy:
Swasan reached their and media is already present. Sanskar held Swara’s hand and both came forward.Reporters started asking questions
Reporter: congrats mam sir for new music academy.
Swasan: thank you.
Reporter: Swara mam.why u quited music industry?
Swara: I want to give time to my family.
Reporter: we have heard that soon u r going to become parents. Is it true?
Sanskar: yes it’s true. Now thanks.
Swasan went towards the entrance where all were present .After meeting guest swasan ask to bring the things needed for inauguration and ask ram and sujata to cut the ribbon.
Ram and sujata came forward and cut the ribbon.All clapped.
Inside the party hall:
All came inside. Sanskar went to some businessman and got busy there.
Swara is busy with sweta and then went to rajiv and shomi.
Party was in full swing when the host ask that anyone interested for couple dance can come forward.
Swara looked at sanskar and gestures him to come for dance but he nodded in no becoming over possessive for her conditions.
Swara pleads him but he was not ready to listen.Already few couples has started dancing in the centre.
Swara is standing with pout.Sanskar is staring her but she was looking down.
He smiles at her then went near her.
Sanskar(extend his hand): come
Swara(grin): thanks
She keep her plam on his and went in the centre.Even media got alert and started clicking their pics.
Sanskar pull her gently from her waist and she keep her hands on his chest.They were very close to each other.(Dahleezz song plays)
Sanskar was dancing very slowly.
Sanskar roll her and back hugged with his hands on her belly.
Sanskar whispers in her ear
Sanskar : are u sure u are going to be mother.
Swara look at him and said
Swara: why?
Sanskar: bcoz u still act like kids but I love your antics.(he kisses her earlobe)
Swara was caresses his hands on her belly and was lost in his sensuous touch.They danced slowly but closely.
Soon the song ended and everyone clapped.Sanskar peck her lips shocking her.
After party, they came back it was night now.They had their dinner at party so directly went to their room.
As soon as swasan entered inside Sanskar closed the door and pin swara to wall and kissed her lips.All this happened so fast that she didn’t get to know what happened. Sanskar was busy in tasting her lips.Swara didn’t open her mouth.Sanskar gently bite her lower lips she morn and taking it as chance he entered inside her mouth.
Felling his warm tongue entangling with her, she closed her eyes. Her hands were in his hairs pulling him closer.
After long passionate kiss they broke to breathe.
Swara looked at him with ” what was that” look.
Sanskar started giving wet kisses on her cheeks and said slowly
Sanskar: don’t u dare to pout again. Be thankful that I didn’t did anything in party
Swara: then u also don’t deny to me.
Sanskar look in her eyes which were tired bcoz of party and all things.
He kissed her eyes and said
Sanskar: go and change.
She looked at him and smiles.
Before leaving she kissed his cheeks.

After half hour:
Sanskar is sitting with the support of the bed and swara’s head is on her shoulder. Swara said
Swara: Sanskar may I ask you one thing?
Sanskar: Ofcouse
Swara: u want baby boy or girl?.
Sanskar caress her belly and said
Sanskar: swara it Doesn’t matter to me whether our child will be girl or boy but I want someone who will call me papa.
Swara(smiles): okay.
Sanskar: why u asked?
Swara: just like that.even I also want child who will call be mamma.
Sanskar: soo excited.
Swara: tooo much.
Sanskar: u know I m excited for something else also.
Swara(confused): what?
Sanskar: your mood swings.
Swara: why?
Sanskar: I m waiting when u will wake me in mid night and will ask me to bring this that.And I will fulfil your wishes.
Swara: but usually husbands got irritate with it.
Sanskar: they are stupid. How can I miss such precious things.
Swara(laughs): u r crazy.
Sanskar: crazy hu but only yours.
Swara(peck his lips): I know.
After talking for sometimes, swara said
Swara: I m sleepy sanskar.
Sanskar: ok come now sleep.
Sanskar made her lie on pillow then cover comforter on her.After switching off the light he took her in his embrace and slept.

Next day:
Afternoon:
Hospital
Swasan entered inside the hospital as today is swara’s appointment. They asked from receptionist that doctor is present or not.They get to know that dr kiran, swara’s gynecologist is her cabin only.
Cabin:
Swasan came inside
Kiran: hi mr and mrs maheshwari kindly take your seats?
Swasan(sits): hello
Kiran: how is your health swara?
Swara: good
Sanskar: doctor u tell me about all the precautions, what she should eat where to go and what all to do I will take proper care.
Swara: Sanskar I m taking care of myself its ok.
Sanskar: u keep quite.Dr u tell me plzz.
Kiran(smiles): don’t worry I will tell u but first let me check her.
Swara went to checking room and even Sanskar went with her.
Kiran: today u can listen your baby’s heartbeat.
She checked her and everything was normal.
Later, Dr connected the instruments and listened heartbeat but got confused that she was able to hear two beats.
Swasan look at her worriedly.
After sonograpy, kiran told
Kiran: double congratulations u are going to be parents of twins.
Swasan got surprised and hugged each other.Their happiness has no bound.
Then they heard the heart beat of babies and was overjoyed.
Later, they came out grinning all the time
Kiran: do u want to know the genders of the babies?
Swasan looked at each other.
Swara: no actually we want to keep it secret and want to get surprise.
Sanskar nodded in agreement.
Kiran(smiles): okay.
Then later she prescribe medicines and took some other tests of swara whose reports will come later.
Getting advice what to do or not they left happily.
To be continued…

Precap: swara’s mood swings.

Hope so u like it as it was full of swasan.
Plzzz leave your comments.
Silent readers it’s request try to leave your feedback.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    94 Comments

    1. kojagorimalik on June 29, 2017 5:51 pm

      Awesome mars

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 6:05 pm

        Thank you dear

    2. Febi on June 29, 2017 6:08 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thank you dear

    3. Nagamanasa on June 29, 2017 6:11 pm

      Awesome mars

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 7:58 pm

        Thank you dear

    4. anu on June 29, 2017 6:11 pm

      awesome update naughty billo

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:02 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post naughty billo soon.

    5. ani on June 29, 2017 6:22 pm

      amazing part

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:04 pm

        Thank you dear

    6. Kakali on June 29, 2017 6:26 pm

      Awesome!! Loved it! Sooooo cute of SwaSan! Continue soon dear! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:06 pm

        Thank you dear and will post soon

    7. Suma on June 29, 2017 6:45 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:08 pm

        Thank you dear

    8. Kanha on June 29, 2017 6:54 pm

      Bahut acha episode tha siso. Waiting to see Swara’s mood swings. Don’t know how will Sanskar manage everything 😉 You are too good sisoo. Love you soooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:10 pm

        Thank you siss. Lovee youuu tooo

    9. Neptune on June 29, 2017 6:56 pm

      marsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu it was awesome oh god this sanku is so besharam…..
      waiting eagerly for the next part…
      and please try to make it longer if you can….

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:14 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon and will give long pakka

    10. Tamil on June 29, 2017 7:07 pm

      Amazing dear

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:19 pm

        Thank you dear

    11. Vidhi on June 29, 2017 7:10 pm

      Amazing dear… Waiting for her mood swings…
      Update soon dear ❤❤❤❤
      N eagerly waiting for naughty billo..

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:22 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon and naughty billo too.

    12. Rosey on June 29, 2017 7:13 pm

      its awesom mars yaar too sweet gental ad romantic
      and yes mars dont mind but in this early stage of pregnancy how doctor can tell gendar is it true????

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:24 pm

        Thank you dear and I won’t mind btw thanks for informing actually doctor just asked if they want to know gender or not.

    13. Priya on June 29, 2017 7:39 pm

      Awesome dear twins babies

      • Mars on June 29, 2017 8:27 pm

        Thank you dear

    14. AbrahamEzra on June 29, 2017 7:57 pm

      Awww Cho cute. They are getting double happiness. Ooo I’m so excited. Plss post next one soon. Plssss

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:27 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    15. Kumu on June 29, 2017 8:01 pm

      Loved it..this epi was full of swasan??
      Tc..

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:29 am

        Thank you dear

    16. Chaitu on June 29, 2017 8:03 pm

      Awesome part … Waiting for swara’s mood swings

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:30 am

        Thank you dear

    17. Mannu on June 29, 2017 8:09 pm

      Firstly I thought????? but now my thought will become ?‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍??‍?‍?‍?now I’m double happy

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:31 am

        Thank you dear and keep thinking…

    18. rabia0032 on June 29, 2017 8:17 pm

      Awesome like always dear but just one request if is possible please can full full it…I want to see swasan love story how it begun with their unconditional love please…if is possible only

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:34 am

        Thank you dear and even I was thinking if u all are interested in seeing swasan love story before marriage. I will ask from all readers in next epi then will give if u all want.

      • rabia0032 on July 1, 2017 7:33 pm

        Thanks dear I am sure everyone want to read how their love story begun

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 4:02 am

        Always welcome dear

    19. Stg on June 29, 2017 8:21 pm

      Awesome ??

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:34 am

        Thank you dear

    20. Romaisa on June 29, 2017 8:21 pm

      Wow loved it

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:35 am

        Thank you dear

    21. AnuAnn on June 29, 2017 8:22 pm

      Loved it dear

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:36 am

        Thank you dear

    22. sneha on June 29, 2017 8:26 pm

      Loved it

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:37 am

        Thank you dear

    23. anniya on June 29, 2017 8:39 pm

      Awsm one luvd it soon much u are an adorable writer dear n post naughty billo soon as u get time not forcing u

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:38 am

        Thank you dear and will post naughty billo very soon

    24. Harshita on June 29, 2017 9:23 pm

      Awsm marsuu…..but dear as finding the gender of the baby before its birth is illegal…….. Plz be careful next time……but epi was amazing……

      Update naughty billo soon

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:40 am

        Thank you harshu and I know it’s illegal to find gender but some people wanted to know that’s way doctor asked but swasan denied.

    25. independent on June 29, 2017 9:25 pm

      Awesome dear lovely

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:42 am

        Thank you dear

    26. SHAN on June 29, 2017 11:49 pm

      Wow awesome dr….

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:42 am

        Thank you shan di

    27. vyshu10 on June 30, 2017 12:09 am

      awesome…..cute

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:43 am

        Thank you dear

    28. yamee on June 30, 2017 12:20 am

      Awesome…loved it.

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:44 am

        Thank you dear

    29. Piyu on June 30, 2017 1:13 am

      It was as always Super Awesome part!! I really luv it!!! I would like know if u r posting it on wattpad also? If yes I would like to follow u…and may get all links of this story pls?

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:46 am

        Thank you dear and sorry still I m not posting on wattpad but when I will post I will surely inform thanks

    30. neha_01 on June 30, 2017 1:37 am

      Awesome & cute update

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 3:47 am

        Thank you dear

    31. Naila on June 30, 2017 2:51 am

      awesome

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 7:43 am

        Thank you dear

    32. neeti on June 30, 2017 4:11 am

      HI MArs

      Your story are super awesome,,always loving and I appreciate your grammatical skills as well

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 7:45 am

        Thank you dear

    33. swasan on June 30, 2017 7:16 am

      well awesome dear

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 8:32 am

        Thank you dear

    34. SNY on June 30, 2017 8:10 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 8:32 am

        Thank you dear

    35. Jessica on June 30, 2017 9:55 am

      Beautifully written

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 11:00 am

        Thank you dear

    36. Soujanya on June 30, 2017 9:58 am

      Awesome…

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 11:02 am

        Thank you dear

    37. Jannatul.Nayma09 on June 30, 2017 10:09 am

      Awesome ???

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 11:03 am

        Thank you dear

    38. Anjali on June 30, 2017 10:10 am

      superb

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 11:04 am

        Thank you dear

    39. Pramudi on June 30, 2017 11:07 am

      Superb. So they are going to have twins. ??

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 11:21 am

        Thank you dear

    40. Arshaanya on June 30, 2017 12:16 pm

      Loved it

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 12:49 pm

        Thank you dear

    41. Simi on June 30, 2017 12:55 pm

      Amazing dear.. Omg twins????

      • Mars on June 30, 2017 1:11 pm

        Thank you dear

    42. Milestone on July 1, 2017 5:07 am

      Nice…..

      • Mars on July 1, 2017 7:45 am

        Thank you dear

    43. ritu on July 1, 2017 8:10 am

      loved it

      • Mars on July 1, 2017 9:02 am

        Thank you dear

    44. raina on July 1, 2017 1:59 pm

      read all the episodes together..
      god.. i just love you a lot..
      i became a very big big biggggggggg fan of you…
      how can you write like this????
      so so so soooooooooo good stories on our heavenly couple..
      thanks a lot for giving such wonderful stories

      • Mars on July 1, 2017 3:00 pm

        Thankk youuuu soooo muchhh it really means alot and these stories are worth reading bcoz they are on our heavenly couple swasan. Loveee u too

    45. scooby on July 1, 2017 3:57 pm

      Awesomeeee ripan ? r u ok if i call u with ur name??

      • Mars on July 1, 2017 5:07 pm

        Thank you dear and I m super ok if u call me by my real name and that looks more better.

    46. Rockleon on July 2, 2017 1:39 am

      Sooo amazing. Yaar
      How you write them
      Read it in one goo
      Keep it up!

      • Mars on July 2, 2017 4:03 am

        Thank you so much dear

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