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Fan Fiction Swaragini

My better half( swasan ff)

MarsBy MarsJune 15, 201791 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hlo guys! Thanks for your good response. Most of you have requested that there should be no swasan separation, let’s see how story moves.
Hope so u will like it.
Let’s begin:

my better half (swasan ff)
Epi 16:
Morning:
Maheshwari house:
Swasan room:
Sanskar is sleeping and Swara came out of washroom.Then only she heard Ram shouting Sanskar’s name.She got little scared as since she has come in this house ram never shouted so she went to bed and said
Swara(jerk him): Sanskar get up plzz.
Sanskar (sleepy tone): 5 mins more
Swara: oh God! Sanskar dad is calling you and I think he is angry.
Sanskar slightly opened his eyes and sit on bed
Sanskar (confused): why he is calling me early morning?
Swara: don’t know
Then again they heard ram’s shouting voice
Ram: Sanskar come down quickly.
Sanskar stand up and then swasan went down.

Hall:
Swasan came down and saw angry ram and tensed sujata.
Sanskar: what happened dad?
Ram angrily threw newspaper on Sanskar’s face.All got shocked
Ram: what the hell is this Sanskar??
Sanskar (confused): what?
Ram: read the headline.
Sanskar hold newspaper properly and read the headline and got astonished.
Sanskar: its not true dad
Swara: what is there Sanskar?
Sanskar looked at her and show her front page on which it was displayed
“BUSINESSMAN SANSKAR MAHESHWARI HAVE EXTRA MARITAL AFFAIR”.
Swara put hand on her mouth in shock.
Sanskar (held Swara’s hand): swara u know me very well. U know it’s fake.
Tell dad that its just a rumor.
Swara was just staring him.
Ram: what she will say when her husband’s such news will come.
Sujata: I trust Sanskar. He can’t do anything like this. He loves Swara a lot.
Sujata: say swara u also trust Sanskar.
Before swara could reply anything, rajiv and shomi came.
Rajiv didn’t said anything just directly went to Swara
Rajiv: swara let’s go to your house.
Swasan got shocked.
Sujata: what are you saying rajiv Ji this is her house.
Rajiv: it was her house. I can’t let live my daughter with such a man(point to Sanskar).
Swara closed her eyes listening this.
Sujata: shomi Ji u know na Sanskar he can’t do this.
Shomi: I know but we can’t deny what is written in news.
Swara is continuously looking at door as if she knows someone will come while Sanskar was looking just at sanskar.
Then came another shout of shekar.
He aggressively entered inside along with ragini and janki.
Shekar came and directly held sanskar’s collar.
Swara now can’t stand it so she went to them and jerked shekar’s hand
Swara:stay away from my husband.
Shekar: how dare he to spoil my daughter’s name(actually ragini’s name was written in the article)
Sanskar(angrily): it must be done by your daughter only.Ask her?
Shekar: don’t u dare to raise your finger at my ragini.
Swara:plz leave Mr shekar gododia.
Shekar;why u tried to spoil my daughter’s image.
Swara:we had not done anything.
Rajiv:enough swara come with us.
Sanskar:papa plzz try to understand I love swara alot.I just can’t think of anyone else.
Rajiv:swara come.
Swara was in dilemma that now to handle the situation.
Swara: papa plz listen
Rajiv: it means still you want to live with him.ok fine let’s go shomi.
Swara looked at shomi who in turn give helpless look.
In all this one person is enjoying the most and she is ragini.She is eagerly waiting when swara will leave sanskar but outside she has made innocent face.
Swara looked at her and saw rajiv and shomi going.she instantly said
Swara: I m coming with u papa
Sanskar’s eyes got filled with tears while all others got shocked.
Swara saw ragini’s changing expression after listening her.She thought that she had got successful in separating swasan.
Swara went to ram and sujata and met them. They were not able to say anything at that situation.
Swara went close to Sanskar and whisper that no one get to know
Swara(whisper): go to farmhouse.
Sanskar came back from shock and give confused look to her.
Swara: plzzz
Sanskar: hmm.
Swara left with rajiv and shomi.
Later shekar janki and ragini also left.
Now only Sanskar sujata and ram are present.
Ram give angry glare to Sanskar and left.
Sanskar was about to go to door when sujata asked
Sujata: Sanskar where are u going?
Sanskar:mom I need sometime alone so I m going to our farmhouse.
Sujata: u don’t feel bad I know swara will come back.
Sanskar: hmm
Saying this he left to his farmhouse.

Gododia house:
Ragini came inside and directly went to her room.She is very happy as her intent to separate swasan got successful but only according to her.
She called someone
Ragini: hi priya.
Priya: hello ragini how are u?
Priya is ragini’s college friend and is working in press.
Ragini: today I m super happy.Thank you so much for your help.
Priya: ohh come on ragini. U r my friend and moreover this news is very good for our newspaper also as public is very curious to know what’s happening in Sanskar and swara’s life.
Ragini: hmm. Ok I will talk later.
Ragini is so much happy that she can’t control it.

Bose house:
Swara came with shomi and rajiv.
Swara: papa I know its fake news why are behaving like this with Sanskar.
Rajiv: he did this much but still u are taking his side
Swara: papa its just rumor which are very common now a days.
Rajiv; rumors don’t come like that only there must be something.
Swara: but…
Rajiv: enough now don’t take his name.
Rajiv left to his room.
Shomi put her hand on swara’s shoulder who was lost in thoughts.
Shomi: swara u trust Sanskar?
Swara: what kind of question is this Ofcouse I do.
Shomi: then why u came with us.
Swara(took deep breathe): ma Sanskar understands me more than papa.He know I trust him but if i won’t come then papa will be very angry and I have other reason also.
Shomi: what?
Swara: soon u will got to know and also this that from where this news came.
Shomi; ok hope so everything will be fine.
Swara took the newspaper from table and went to her room.

Swara’s room
Swara entered and closed the door and called Sanskar but he is not receiving the call
Swara(mumble): he must have left his phone at home only.
Then she read the whole article twice.
She very well know who has done this but still to confirm he called Karan (sanskar’s employee.he is expert in taking out the information)
Swara explained him whole matter and asked him to tell her who has given this information to press.
After one hour:
Swara received karan’s call and he told her that the news was given by ragini gododia to their reporter priya.
He told that she made the story that Sanskar’s wife didn’t give him time so he was in relationship with me and all.
After knowing everything she cut the call.
Swara(hell angry): I warned this ragini but she didn’t understood. Now I will show her what this Swara Sanskar Maheshwari can do.
She looked at the time. It was evening so she was waiting for night.
To be continued ….

Precap: Swara went to meet Sanskar in farmhouse.

Plzz don’t kill me after reading this.I know there was high voltage drama but this was needed to end ragini’s track.
Don’t judge from this epi that there is swasan separation just wait for next chapter.
So sorry for short update and no swasan scenes.
Plzzzz give it a chance and leave your comments don’t be silent.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    91 Comments

    1. shona on June 15, 2017 9:19 am

      How cheap is this ragini …..swara should teach him a good lesson & her parents also….

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:33 am

        Thank you dear

    2. Rosey on June 15, 2017 9:28 am

      That cheap chit girl will never learn to sit quite…she just ruined my Swasan moment…ahhh…I will shoot this girl…just give me a chance…and yes mars please post next sooner Yaar please can’t wait to read next please if possible post today please….

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:35 am

        Thank you dear and I will post Veryyyyyy soon but today it will be bit difficult sooooooo sorrrrrry(holding ears)

    3. Sus on June 15, 2017 9:35 am

      loving sanskar is not wrong and by seeing situations like swara is working and not able to give time to sanskar and to give sympathy or pity is okay but after telling eventually by Swara to Ragini and still is not backing off this is wrong.
      I am just pitying ragini that after knowing how much Sanskar love Swara and she 9s pregrent with his child and they are so much in love before ragini coming still she is doing all this is completely wrong.
      I think her parents need to take strong action against her and Sanskar should ask her to leave the job.

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:36 am

        Thank you dear

    4. ani on June 15, 2017 9:35 am

      superb ep

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:37 am

        Thank you dear

    5. Soujanya on June 15, 2017 9:38 am

      Awesome

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:39 am

        Thank you dear

    6. rads on June 15, 2017 9:39 am

      I really want to kill this ragini yaar?? she is just discusting, and swara should punish her very badly. How cheap is this godidia family, just discusting. i don’t have any words about this episode. U separate swasan ? but swara believe sanskar, and that’s enough ?? and swara knows ragini’s truth now, really want to punish this nagini very much.
      She separate our swasan na, she really deserve a best punishment. And unite swasan very soon ?? love u lots for this mindblowing story.
      Plzzz plzzzz plzzz update the next part as soon as possible, love you lots and keep smiling ??

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:40 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

    7. anu on June 15, 2017 9:48 am

      nice part plz give long parts dear i found it short one . send her to jail…

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:42 am

        Thank you dear and so sorry for short update next part I will post soon and long one pakka

    8. Simin on June 15, 2017 9:51 am

      Will wait for next one
      This ragini is getting on my nerves now

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:43 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

    9. Ira on June 15, 2017 9:51 am

      This Ragini is just too much can’t she understand that sanskar is a married man and he can’t be her’s

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:45 am

        Thank you dear

    10. Crystal on June 15, 2017 9:53 am

      Amazing update…. Its also after very long… Come with another update please

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:46 am

        thank you dear and I will post next part soon andand so sorry for being late.

    11. Nagamanasa on June 15, 2017 9:57 am

      Awesome dear…I know that swara trusts sanskar so much and they won’t be seperated dear…loved it dear…can’t wait to read next one…post soon

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:48 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    12. sneha on June 15, 2017 10:04 am

      Awesome …but give good punishment to ragini

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:49 am

        Thank you dear and don’t worry ragini will be punished

    13. Priya on June 15, 2017 10:05 am

      Awesome dear I can’t wait plz update next part soon dear

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:50 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

    14. Swasan on June 15, 2017 10:17 am

      Amazing

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:51 am

        Thank you dear

    15. Simi on June 15, 2017 11:00 am

      Awesome dear…Swasan is together…
      Cheap Ragini ??? waiting for Swasan’s next move

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:36 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    16. Anjali on June 15, 2017 11:05 am

      superb waiting for next part

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:37 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    17. Swasan on June 15, 2017 11:22 am

      Can’t wait

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:38 pm

        I will post next part soon

    18. neha_01 on June 15, 2017 11:36 am

      Nice twist..waiting for next part

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:53 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    19. Chaitu on June 15, 2017 11:37 am

      Superb. That nagin should be punished nicely and that to by sanskar … Update soon

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:54 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    20. Tamil on June 15, 2017 11:37 am

      Awesome dear loved it….cheap ragini….want to kill her….

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:55 am

        Thank you dear

    21. Harshita on June 15, 2017 11:37 am

      Amazing mars…

      • Mars on June 15, 2017 11:56 am

        Thank you dear

    22. kojagorimalik on June 15, 2017 12:07 pm

      Amazing loved it

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:40 pm

        Thank you dear

    23. Kumu on June 15, 2017 12:09 pm

      Awesome..tc..

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:41 pm

        Thank you dear

    24. independent on June 15, 2017 12:50 pm

      first lesson should be taught to that shekar idiot such a spineless man

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:42 pm

        Thank you dear

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:45 pm

        Don’t worry shekar will also be punished.

    25. reethu on June 15, 2017 1:09 pm

      nice mars superb dear.teach a good lesson to ragini

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:44 pm

        Thank you dear

    26. SHAN on June 15, 2017 1:11 pm

      I read all episodes in one go!!! Its amazing…. I loved this ff a lot…. Ragini is disgusting…. Post next soon

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:47 pm

        Thank you shan di and I will post next part soon

    27. AnuAnn on June 15, 2017 2:00 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:49 pm

        Thank you dear

    28. Aashi on June 15, 2017 2:11 pm

      awesome superb
      update soon

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:51 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    29. gayathri.visu on June 15, 2017 2:36 pm

      RAGINI……HOW CHEAP N DISGUSTING! Just kill her character! And that mad gadodia family, don’t leave them easily. That naagin’s so called friend, give correct punishment to her. Plzzzzzzzz……post next part asap dear…

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:53 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    30. jnana on June 15, 2017 2:46 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:54 pm

        Thank you dear

    31. Stg on June 15, 2017 2:58 pm

      awesome ?? pls post next part soooon..

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:56 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    32. scooby on June 15, 2017 3:17 pm

      Read all d chapters in one go?? awesome loved it so much? and understanding family sujatha and ram and swara’s parents too.. Huhh hate ragini d nagini?? spoiling her own chatacter.. Waiting for swara’s fire along her betterhalf to end ragini track??
      And especially loved this line” u can come to sanskar and tie rakhi in his hand and he wil accept u as sis “??
      Awesome chapiee

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 3:58 pm

        Thank you so much dear

    33. Mannu on June 15, 2017 5:13 pm

      Don’t you dare to plan any swasan separation ok

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:00 pm

        Thank you dear

    34. Mannu on June 15, 2017 5:14 pm

      ??????????????????????warna Gabbar aa jayega

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:01 pm

        Hayeeee mai tho darrr gayi hehe

    35. Jannatul.Nayma09 on June 15, 2017 5:16 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:03 pm

        thank you dear

    36. Satya on June 15, 2017 5:52 pm

      Huh…that naagin doesnt have any work???….uski toh m ?????..
      Superb epii…dnt swasan yaar…update the next part soon baby…love u ?????

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:04 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    37. Satya on June 15, 2017 5:54 pm

      Huh…that naagin doesnt have any work???….uski toh m ?????..
      Superb epii…dnt separate swasan yaar…update the next part soon baby…love u ?????

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:06 pm

        Emoji u used for ragini are just osumm love u too

    38. a on June 15, 2017 8:23 pm

      nice

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:07 pm

        Thank you dear

    39. Febi on June 15, 2017 11:18 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:08 pm

        Thank you dear

    40. Pramudi on June 16, 2017 12:23 am

      Wow.. Another story from you. As usual this is also amazing dear. I read all episodes in one go. Loved it. Swasan loves eachother a lot. Their bonding is unbreakable. I really like the way sanskaar & his family support swara.
      And Ragini.. ?she & her father having a mental problem. Roaming around married men. Chi.. Disgusting woman. ? He is married & loves his wife a lot & now they are going to have a baby. For heavens sake leave him woman. ?
      I want her to get a punishment for bad eyeing swara’s sanskaar.
      Great work dear. Waiting for the next part.

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:10 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon

    41. Kakali on June 16, 2017 10:29 am

      Gosh, this is just too much! Even after knowing the fact that Sanskar is married who is deeply in love with his wife + going to have a baby; Ragini want him! This is cheap! Well some this kinda obsessed people does exist who gets more encouragement when their family members help them out doing the wrong!
      Disgusting Father! Yuck!
      Anyway too Good Mars! Swara needs to show what she is! Swara Sanskar Maheswari. Bang on.
      I really don’t want anything happen to their Baby! He/she shouldn’t bear any hurdles! Loved it dear! Continue soon! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:12 pm

        Thank you so much dear and I will post next part soon. And baby won’t be hurted

    42. vyshu10 on June 16, 2017 11:23 am

      superb….huhhh for that shameless woman

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:12 pm

        Thank you dear

    43. Milestone on June 16, 2017 2:50 pm

      Nice…….

      • Mars on June 16, 2017 4:13 pm

        Thank you dear

    44. Arshaanya on June 17, 2017 11:37 am

      Oh god m so angry on dis ragini ???…
      I want ragini n her parents to suffer huh… let people knw wat kind of parents dey r n sprtng dere daughter in wrong deeds…
      N to dat ragini slap frm me huh

      • Mars on June 17, 2017 6:11 pm

        Thank you dear

      • Mars on June 17, 2017 6:13 pm

        Two slaps from my side also for her.

    45. veena on June 24, 2017 1:14 am

      nice

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