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Fan Fiction Swaragini

my better half (Episode 8)

MarsBy MarsMay 26, 2017Updated:May 26, 201759 Comments7 Mins Read
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Helloo guys! I m back with next epi.
Thank you for comments.I know many are upset with swasan separation and also with dream sequence even I also regretted after posting but don’t worry this will be my first and last mistake hopefully and swasan will be soon together. Thanks for telling me your views that really helps me to improve. Ok let’s begin.

My better half(swasan ff)
Epi 8
Swara was in Mumbai and sanskar in Kolkata.Both miss each other but talk daily on phone twice or thrice.swara was busy in recording and sanskar in office but out of their busy schedule also they take out time for eachother though only on call.
Whereas ragini was pretending that she had moved on but no still she keep eye on sanskar oops swara’s sanskar.And the most important thing shekar also want that Sanskar should marry ragini(mental family).Like this two months passed let’s see what will happen now.

AFTER TWO MONTHS
Morning
Maheshwari house.
Sanskar was getting ready for office then only his phone rang.He took the call without seeing id as he was busy wearing socks sitting on bed.After listening to the opposite person he closed his eyes tightly.Ofcouse who else it could be except his dear wife.
Swara(shouted at peak): sanskaaaaaarrrrr.
Sanskar (closed his eyes): swara I will become deaf.
Swara: shut up listen to me u know I had completed all my contracts and guess what..
Sanskar(got up in excitement): u r coming.
Swara(super excited): yes I m coming next week.
Sanskar(little disappointed): why after week when contracts are done.
Swara: actually I Need to complete some paper work and I m coming for long holiday of 1 month than I should set everything here.
Sanskar: ok it means I have to wait for another week.
Swara: yes have patience Mr maheshwari.
Sanskar: no in this case I don’t have patience.
Swara(laughs): ok Mr desperate .asha inform mom dad ma papa bcoz may be I won’t get time to call.
Sanskar:sure as u say my sweetheart
Swara: nautanki ok bye will talk later I m going to studio.
Sanskar: bye.

Hall:
Sanskar came downstairs and informed sujata and ram that swara is coming next week.
Sujata(shouted at peak): reallyyyyy.
Sanskar putted his fingers in his ears
Sanskar:uff i don’t know why this dil mil shout when happy.This saas bahu jodi will definitely make me deaf someday(mumble).
Sanskar: yes mom but why are u shouting.
Ram: her way of showing excitement.
Sanskar make faces and left to office happily after having breakfast.

Gododia house:
Ragini was getting ready beautifully. She seems to be very happy.Shekar came to her room and saw her.
Shekar:my daughter is looking very happy.
Ragini(smiled): yes papa.
Shekar:all the best and I know no one can reject my daughter.
Ragini:thank you papa.
Ragini left her house happily.
Ragini(monologue): I m very happy today bcoz today I m going to confess my love .I m hell afraid that how he will react but now I can’t suppress my feelings anymore.I know to some extend this is wrong as he is married but it is said that everything is fair in love.I had tried a lot to forget him but I can’t. I know I will be better wife for him.I will give my all time to him and won’t leave him and go. I know he must not be happy with his wife as she hardly lives with him.
Thinking all this he reached the park near her office.
Ragini: now I should call him.

Maheshwari office:
Sanskar parked his car and was about to enter inside when he got call from unknown number.he picked the call.
Sanskar: yes whose this?
Other person: I m ragini sir.
Sanskar(confused): ragini why u called me.
Ragini: sir plz come to park near our office.
Sanskar: what but why?
Ragini: sir I will tell u everything plz come.
Sanskar don’t know whether to go or not.
Ragini(not getting answer): sir plzzzzz its request(pleads).
After thinking
Sanskar: ok(still confused).
Then he left for park.

Park.
Ragini is nervously moving here and there then only sanskar came and went to her.
Sanskar (formally): yes ragini what u want?
Ragini(don’t know how to start): sir actually I want to tell you something important.
Sanskar: yes speak up.
Ragini(closed her eyes tightly): I love you Sir.
Sanskar (shouted): whatttt?
Sanskar don’t know what to say as he never expected such situation in his life.
Ragini: yes sir I really love u and will keep you happy. I know u r married but I don’t have any problem and you are not happy with your wife as she is selfish….
Ragini’s words left incomplete when she felt tight slap on her face yes sanskar slapped her.
Sanskar(hell angry): just shut up your mouth other wise I don’t know what I will do and how dare u to say wrong about my swara.u don’t know how much she loves me and understand me u are not even comparabe to her.Even why I m telling u all this u won’t understand.
Ragini(angry): then why she leave you and go and why don’t she live with u.I really love you.
Sanskar: ragini stop it before I kill u and I m married dam it and love my wife to the core.how can u even think like this.
Ragini doesn’t said anything.
Sanskar was about to leave but turned and said
Sanskar: and listen u r just my employee I m not firing you becoz I had signed the contract and This sanskar maheshwari only belongs to swara sanskar maheshwari it will be better for u if u keep it in your little mind soon.
He angrily left.
Ragini was crying over there and ran to her house .

Maheshwari industries:
Sanskar angrily entered inside his cabin and immediately called swara.
He called many times but swara doesn’t received the call.He was dam frustrated.He rested his head on chair back.
After about half hour his phone rang and he immediately picked it but does not said anything
Swara: Sanskar u r there what happened why u called so many times.
As soon as he listened her voice, tears fell from his eyes.
Swara: sanskar u r listening?
Sanskar(wiped his tears): I love u swara.
Swara got confused.
Swara:(worried): u r fine na sanskar ?
Sanskar(recovered himself): yea where were u ha, u know how many times I called you.
Swara: wo I was in studio and my phone was in bag but tell me what happened that u called.
Sanskar(thinks): I can’t tell her this now.
Swara: sanskar where u are getting lost again and again.
Sanskar: hmm nothing I was missing you and want to listen to your voice.
Swara: u r impossible sanskar, and for listening my voice u could have listened my songs.
Sanskar: no I wants to listen my wife’s voice not singer Swara.
Swara felt that something is wrong .
Swara: sanskar u r really ok na I m feeling restless.
Sanskar smiled listening this that how closely they know each other though sitting miles away.
Sanskar:yes swara don’t worry.
Someone called swara from back.
Swara: ok sanskar I will talk later I have some work bye
Sanskar: bye.
No doubt sanskar was bit calmed after talking to Swara but not satisfied.He badly wants her beside him.
He thought something and booked his ticket for Mumbai in next flight.

Mumbai
Night(9pm)
Swara’s Apartment:
Swara had prepared her dinner and was setting on table when door bell rang she thought who can be at this time and went to open the door.
She opened the door and was shocked to see sanskar standing with small bag.
Swara(shocked): sanskar.
Sanskar left the bag on ground and hugged swara very tightly and she also hugged him with same intensity.
To be continued.

Precap:swasan moments and their romance and sanskar told swara about ragini’s proposal.
How will she react?

Soooooorrrrrryyyyyy for less swasan scenes but but I will compensate in next episode. Pakkaaa.
Give your views through comments
Thank you
Bye tale care.

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    59 Comments

    1. Nagamanasa on May 26, 2017 5:09 pm

      Awesome dear…read 2 parts in a go…loving this ff to the core…can’t wait to read next one…post soon dear

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 5:26 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

    2. sindhura on May 26, 2017 5:11 pm

      Awsm dear..sanskar give good teply to ragini.why ragini cant move on??dnt make her stoop soo low.and whats the problem with shekar???narrow minded man.
      And coming to swasan,soo sanky reached mumbai to see his love..Soo nxt epi we wll got to see some romance na??hehe..
      Btw the chappy was nyc

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 5:47 pm

        Thank you dear and yes I will give swasan romance in next epi and will post soon.

    3. Sus on May 26, 2017 5:12 pm

      its awesome but i think sanskar should not slapped ragini, he can make her understand and if she doesn’t get then he can talk to swara or their parents as after that they can make her understand. i think this is best thing.
      But Sanskar is angry bird and who can’t listen anythin wrong about his betterhalf instantly reacted.
      But more than Ragini i am confused about her parents.
      But i feel drama could have been more effective if suji ram and swara would have talked to ragini and her parents

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 5:50 pm

        Thank you dear And regarding slap even I thought whether he should slap or not but when it comes to swara sanskar won’t see anything.
        Move over the drama had just started dear.swara won’t leave her that easily.

    4. moon on May 26, 2017 5:15 pm

      awesome yaar sanskar gave a good answer to ragini .
      how can she proposed a married man?
      episode was amazing but less swasan scenes chalo will wait for it

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 5:52 pm

        Thank you dear and in next pat will give more swasan scenes

    5. phoniex on May 26, 2017 5:17 pm

      loved it dear.

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 5:53 pm

        Thank you dear

    6. independent on May 26, 2017 5:38 pm

      i guess she already have a doubt, and she will support sanskar for sure. the chappy was awesome dear

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 5:55 pm

        Thank you dear

    7. gayathri.visu on May 26, 2017 5:44 pm

      Awesome!! Ragini get perfect reply from Sanskaar! Really Gadodia family is mental family. Less Swasan scenes. But its ok. We can get more Swasan scenes in next part na! Eagerly waiting for next part. Update asap dear…..

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 5:59 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon.

    8. Rosey on May 26, 2017 6:03 pm

      wow finally this drama gonna start i am loving it
      yaar please post soon cant wait for more…
      i wanna see swara slapping that Naggin hahha post soon dear please

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 8:42 pm

        Thank you dear and don’t worry Swara won’t leave ragini and will post soon.

    9. anu on May 26, 2017 6:07 pm

      awesome maza aagaya sanskar slapped ragini good… swara will understand him and support him… update next part soon cant wait for next part

      • Mars on May 26, 2017 8:45 pm

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon.

    10. Ishanvi on May 26, 2017 6:10 pm

      Awesome chapter!!, Read all the parts today and loved it!! Continue soon!!

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:12 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon

    11. Kumu on May 26, 2017 6:40 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:13 am

        Thank you dear

    12. Swasan on May 26, 2017 7:00 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:14 am

        Thank you dear

    13. Manasvi on May 26, 2017 7:03 pm

      Nyc..

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:15 am

        Thank you dear

    14. Neptune on May 26, 2017 7:17 pm

      awesome my small sis hmm sanskaar is really a big angry bird i just loved it i am excited for next episode please show some intense swasan romance omg we swasanians are so shameless just like them………

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:17 am

        Thank you big sis and about intense romance i can just try bcoz i m not at all good in writing it.

    15. Rachna on May 26, 2017 7:18 pm

      Awsm Dr… Update soon next part

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:18 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon

    16. Febi on May 26, 2017 8:01 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:18 am

        Thank you dear

    17. yamee on May 26, 2017 8:58 pm

      Wowwww it was awesome…Amazing…. and mind blowing dear… Love it so so so much.

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:19 am

        Thank you dear

    18. maryum on May 26, 2017 9:13 pm

      Awesome story dear

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:27 am

        Thank you dear

    19. Simi on May 26, 2017 9:37 pm

      Awesome dear…
      What is this Shekhar doing,, wishing his daughter to propose a married man ??? n Ragini how dare she said that Swara is selfish

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:29 am

        Thank you dear

    20. ari on May 26, 2017 10:58 pm

      Amazing

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:31 am

        Thank you dear

    21. mahisha on May 27, 2017 12:09 am

      awesome dr

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:32 am

        Thank you dear

    22. Jannatul.Nayma09 on May 27, 2017 1:35 am

      Awesome
      Eagerly waiting fr the nxt prt
      Update soon

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 4:33 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon

    23. Arshaanya on May 27, 2017 1:57 am

      Nyc

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 7:53 am

        Thank you dear

    24. kat on May 27, 2017 6:01 am

      loved it

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 7:55 am

        Thank you dear

    25. sne on May 27, 2017 7:22 am

      hai!supev ya ….awesome epi…..but ragini is right ….why swara important to her work more than sandkar…I hope there is some reason behind this separation ,….I hope so ya…update soon ya….bye&tc…

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 9:24 am

        Thank you dear and its Swara’s passion to sing so she joined industry.Her family is supporting her that’s why she went their even she thought of quiting but sanskar refused but not to worry bcoz in coming episodes swara will give more priority to sanskar. And I will post soon dear

    26. Seebu_s on May 27, 2017 9:10 am

      loved it…but make ragini understand than spoiling her character and making her negative…always ragini negative means i’m getting bored?and coming to swasan scenes??loved it even though less scenes r there but loved their scenes

      • Arshaanya on May 27, 2017 10:31 am

        Deepu i want ragini ngtbe only ???

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 11:15 am

        Thank you dear and don’t worry I will think of ragini’s characters.

    27. Shreeyu on May 27, 2017 3:22 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on May 27, 2017 6:36 pm

        Thank you dear

    28. veena on May 29, 2017 4:43 pm

      nice dear…

      • Mars on May 29, 2017 6:18 pm

        Thank you dear

    29. meera_s on May 30, 2017 5:00 pm

      finally swasan scenes from next

    30. vyshu10 on June 4, 2017 4:25 pm

      Awesome

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