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my better half (Episode 11)

MarsBy MarsMay 31, 201772 Comments7 Mins Read
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My betterhalf(swasan ff)
Epi 11
Maheshwari industries:
After talking to sweta, Swara was going to Sanskar’s cabin.But when she was about to step on stairs her right foot got twisted and she shouted
Swara: ouch!!(she sits on stairs).
Sweta saw her and other employees also come near her.Even ragini came but didn’t reacted.
Sweta: what happened swara?
Swara(eyes filled with tears): my foot got twisted.
Sweta:let me see
Swara: no no its paining.
Swara was biting her lower lips to bear pain.
Sweta saw ragini and said
Sweta: ragini plz go and call sir.
Ragini didn’t moved.sweta give her disgusting look.swara has closed her eyes and tears were flowing from her eyes.
Sweta went to sanskar’ s cabin which is on first floor.
Sweta: sir swara mam had got injury on foot.
Sanskar who was reading some file stopped and immediately got up
Sanskar: how?.

He ran down and saw swara sitting on on stairs.He went to her quickly and sits beside her.
Sanskar(held her hand): swara
Swara opened her eyes and looked at him.
Swara:sanskar
Sanskar(wipe her tears): why r u crying show me where is injury.
Swara slightly moved her foot towards him.
Sanskar: let me see.
Sanskar was about to touch her foot when swara shouted
Swara: no Sanskar plz don’t touch.
Sanskar:swara let me do it will be fine.
Swara(complaining like baby): its paining.
Sanskar: awww come here.

He took her in his embrace and kissed her forehead.
All were admiring their love except one who else ragini.Ragini was burning in jealousy.she just can’t tolerate swasan closeness.
Sanskar slowly touched her foot while she was lying on his chest.Sanskar closed his eyes and quickly twisted her foot while feeling pain she shouted
Swara(shouted): sanskar
Sanskar: shhhh its ok see now its fine.
Swara looked at him and her pain had reduced.
Sanskar: how u r feeling now
Swara: little fine.
Sanskar: come let’s go to cabin
Swara nodded.

Sanskar picked her in his arms and moved towards his cabin and lay down her on couch and made her drink water.
Sanskar:(put his arm around her shoulder):now you go home with driver.
Swara nodded no.
Sanskar: what no swara go and take rest.I have meeting within half an hour otherwise I would have dropped u.
Swara: I will be here I m fine(hugged him).
Sanskar: don’t be stubborn u can come later now go.
Swara pouts.Sanskar peck her pout.
Sanskar: come I will leave u till car
Sanskar was about to pick her but she stopped
Swara: I will walk Sanskar
Sanskar: sure
Swara: hmm.
Sanskar supported swara by holding from her shoulder and moved down.
Ragini saw them and thought
Ragini: does he really love swara alot?
He brushed her thoughts and started working.
Swasan came near car and sanskar kissed her forehead
Sanskar: just take rest no need to run here and there at home also.
Swara nodded and kissed his cheeks.
Sanskar (to driver): kaka leave her safely.
Driver nodded and swara left.

Maheshwari office
Meeting room
Sanskar had already reached and is waiting for his client.Then only he came inside and that client is shekar gododia.
Sanskar:(got up and shake hand): welcome Mr.gododia.Have seat.
Shekar: thank you.
Sanskar: so let’s start with deal only.Mr gododia.I m not understanding why r u not signing the deal when I had already invested the money.
Shekar: don’t worry mr . maheshwari today I has come to talk about the final deal only.
[Shekar is school principal and he is going to extend his building so he had given contract to Sanskar ]
Sanskar:that’s good then we can finally start the work.
Shekar: yes but if u get the deal.
Sanskar: what u mean by it I had already invested the money.
Shekar: no doubt deal is yours but I have a condition.
Sanskar (irritated): but we had already accepted the conditions of your school.
Shekar : yes but its my personal condition.
Sanskar: come to the point Mr.gododia.
Shekar: my daughter proposed u and u rejected.that was not good.u know how much hurt she is?
Now sanskar understood the whole matter.
Sanskar: get out(said sternly).
Shekar:(shocked): what?
Sanskar(got up from chair): I don’t need your stupid deal just leave.
Shekar: don’t forget that u have invested lakhs of rupees for this deal.(smirks).
Sanskar(chuckles): huh! U really need to learn some business mr gododia.
Shekar: what u mean?
Sanskar: the lakhs of money I invested in this deal take it as a donation from my side bcoz all that money I can earn in single day.
Shekar (stammer): but my daughter loves you.
Sanskar: just shut up.I m married man.Don’t u feel shame saying this to me.u r spoiling your daughter by supporting her in wrong.I m giving u warning just stop all this stupidity and make your daughter understand bcoz if once I crossed my limits then it won’t be good for u.
Sanskar said dangerously and shekar got scared.
Shekar was about to leave when sanskar said
Sanskar: and listen I love my wife a lot.she is my everything. So its better if u and your daughter stop thinking these disgusting things.
Shekar left the room.
Sanskar punch on wooden table
Sanskar:dam it! how dare he to ask me like this.
He also angrily left to his cabin.

Maheshwari house:
At 3 pm
Sujata is in kitchen doing some work when Swara came
Swara: let me help u mom.
Sujata(looked at her): no swara u take rest u r not fine.
Swara: no I’m ok its not paining also now.
Sujata: really that’s good.BTW may I ask u something?
Swara: Ofcouse mom why r u asking permission?
Sujata: the reason u told that why sanskar went to Mumbai Is lie right?
Swara looked at her.
Sujata:I got to know it means it’s husband wife secret.(laughs)
Swara smiles.
Sujata:I m glad to see u happy.
Swara: u r angry that I didn’t told u truth.
Sujata; not at all even I m happy that u both have such a good understanding.
Swara nodded.
Sujata: when u r going to Mumbai back?
Swara(serious): I m not going.
Sujata: means??
Swara: I quited mom I had done my all pending work and didn’t took any other offers bcoz I want to live here with my family now.
Sujata(shocked): what! Have u told sanskar?
Swara: (take deep breathe):no not yet but will soon tell.
Sujata: u know na now he is going to react?
Swara: I know mom I will make him understand don’t worry.
Sujata: I trust u.
Swara smiles.
Then swara remembered about sanskar
Swara: mom let me ask him whether he had lunch or not.
Sujata: ok

Swara went to hall to call him.On the other hand sanskar’s mood was not at all good.He was working frustratefly.
Then only swara’s call came.He looked at id and picked
Sanskar: yes swara
Swara: what r u doing ?
Sanskar(bit rudely): in office I do work only.
Swara get to know he is upset for some reason that’s why he is rude.
Swara: hmm had your lunch?
Sanskar: no
Swara: what its going to be evening.
Sanskar: swara I m busy yrr and leave this tell me how is your foot.
Swara: better
Sanskar: okay then bye will talk at home.
Swara(felt strange); ok bye come soon
Sanskar: hmm
He cutted call and again started working .
To be continued..

Precap: swara went to gododia house.

Kindly give your views through comments
Sorry if something is wrong in Sanskar and shekar’s conversation as I don’t have any knowledge about business its just my imagination.
Thank you
Bye
Take care.

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    72 Comments

    1. mahavir on May 31, 2017 9:07 pm

      awesome dr post soon plzzzzz

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:01 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon

    2. Tamil on May 31, 2017 9:10 pm

      Amazing dear…..hate tat shekar ragini

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:10 am

        Thank you dear

    3. Sus on May 31, 2017 9:13 pm

      ohhh wow sanskar love is not materialistic one its eternal so lovely and what a answer he gave to sekhar

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:11 am

        Thank you dear

    4. Rosey on May 31, 2017 9:25 pm

      wow just superbbbbbbbbbb
      i loved it….post next sooner i cant wait to read more

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:12 am

        Thank you dear

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:14 am

        I will post next part soon dear

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:15 am

        And will post next part soon dear

    5. Seebu_s on May 31, 2017 9:37 pm

      loved it…loved sanskar giving back to shekar…continue soon

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:17 am

        Thank you dear and will post soon

    6. phoniex on May 31, 2017 9:38 pm

      nice

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:18 am

        Thank you dear

    7. Ira on May 31, 2017 9:58 pm

      Awesome
      Update asap

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:19 am

        Thank you dear and will post soon

    8. Romaisa on May 31, 2017 10:09 pm

      Wow loved it

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:20 am

        Thank you dear

    9. Mannu on May 31, 2017 10:15 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:21 am

        Thank you dear

    10. Priya on May 31, 2017 10:20 pm

      Awesome dear I loved it

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:22 am

        Thank you dear

    11. sneha on May 31, 2017 10:29 pm

      Nice.

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:23 am

        Thank you dear

    12. Febi on May 31, 2017 10:36 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:25 am

        Thank you dear

    13. Rachna on May 31, 2017 10:40 pm

      Awsm Dr… Update soon next part

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:26 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon

    14. Neptune on May 31, 2017 11:03 pm

      Hey dear it’s awesome I loved it let’s see what happens next btw why did you not read my story? I hope you will give it a try once… it’s not as good as yours but I still hope that you will like it….

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:07 am

        Thank you dear and I m extremely sorry that still I had not read your story.Dear I will read it actually now I m indulged in my ffs that’s why the stories which I read are still pending but don’t worry I will go through it and don’t u dare to say its not good bcoz its very good.I will surely read it.

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 9:14 am

        Hey Neptune dear plzz can u give me the full names of your stories bcoz I searched alot but didn’t find on page so plz give names I can directly search on Google.
        Thank you

    15. Neptune on May 31, 2017 11:03 pm

      Hey dear it’s awesome I loved it let’s see what happens next btw why did you not read my story? I hope you will give it a try once… it’s not as good as yours but I still hope that you will like it…. and please post the next part soon

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:09 am

        I will post next part soon

    16. sethidisha002 on May 31, 2017 11:06 pm

      Nice

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:27 am

        Thank you dear

    17. kumu on May 31, 2017 11:10 pm

      loved it..

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:28 am

        Thank you dear

    18. mahisha on May 31, 2017 11:11 pm

      awesome dr
      continue soon

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:29 am

        Thank you dear and will post soon

    19. Jannatul.Nayma09 on May 31, 2017 11:59 pm

      Awesome

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:31 am

        Thank you dear

    20. Swasan on June 1, 2017 12:03 am

      Amazing…… sanskar give good lesson to shekar…. awesome

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:32 am

        thank you dear

    21. Sonia on June 1, 2017 2:25 am

      Swara should give a tight slap to shekhar.

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 7:47 am

        Thank you dear and let’s see what swara will do.

    22. neha_01 on June 1, 2017 4:02 am

      Awesome..Loved the way Sanskar gave spoke to Shekar

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 7:48 am

        thank you dear

    23. Mars on June 1, 2017 4:34 am

      Hey! This is mars. Actually I m having problem in making links so plzz if anyone can tell how to make links of all episodes together.
      Thank you

    24. nayar on June 1, 2017 5:13 am

      Amazing dear….update next soon

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 7:51 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon.

    25. Nagamanasa on June 1, 2017 6:09 am

      Awesome dear…loved Sanskar’s answer to Sekhar…post next one soon dear

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 7:52 am

        Thank you dear and will post next part soon

    26. gayathri.visu on June 1, 2017 7:48 am

      Wow! Awesome dear…. Eagerly waiting for next part.

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 8:49 am

        Thank you dear and will post soon

    27. anu on June 1, 2017 10:03 am

      awesome upodate next part soon loved it when sanskaar gave back to swara.. but why swara quitted waiting for sanskaar reaction what will happen when he come sto know abt it.. precap swara gng to gadodia mansion..

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 10:26 am

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    28. Milestone on June 1, 2017 11:38 am

      Nice……..

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 12:50 pm

        Thank you dear

    29. Ishanvi on June 1, 2017 3:50 pm

      awesome!! Loved it!! Post next part soon!!

      • Mars on June 1, 2017 4:00 pm

        Thank you dear and I will post next part soon

    30. veena on June 1, 2017 11:00 pm

      nice dear

      • Mars on June 2, 2017 3:41 am

        Thank you dear

    31. neha on June 2, 2017 4:33 am

      awesome…loved this sanky

      • Mars on June 2, 2017 8:33 am

        Thank you dear

    32. Arshaanya on June 2, 2017 2:27 pm

      Loved it

      • Mars on June 2, 2017 2:50 pm

        Thank you dear

    33. Simi on June 2, 2017 5:13 pm

      Awesome dear.. Shekhar is principle of a school,, then also he is supporting Ragini ??

      • Mars on June 2, 2017 6:04 pm

        Thank you dear and shekar is blind in her daughter’s love

    34. meera_s on June 3, 2017 2:34 pm

      shekar is totally gone case…loved swasan scenes

      • Mars on June 3, 2017 3:15 pm

        Thank you dear

    35. vyshu10 on June 4, 2017 4:32 pm

      Awesome…loved it. Nice answer he gave to shekhar

      • Mars on June 6, 2017 6:37 pm

        Thank you dear

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