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Fan Fiction Swaragini

BETRAYER (A RAGSAN FF) CH-03

Sally_blrBy Sally_blrFebruary 20, 201757 Comments8 Mins Read
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“Ragini… Ragini… “ screamed Sanskar from his room. Ragini who was pouring coffee in the mug jerked and the coffee spilled on her hand. She winced in pain and sucked her hand to cool it. “Ragini relax beta” said Sujatha who was watching her helplessly.

“Fine mom I will give a chance to this marriage but on one condition. You will not interfere in this” Sujatha remembered Sanskar’s words few days back when he was threatening Ragini to sign the divorce papers. It had been a month from the time they got married and Sanskar was trying everything to break Ragini. So that she herself backs off from this marriage. In order to hurt her he was even ready to forget his values. So much that Sujatha and Ram were feeling helpless and disgusted about it.

“Ji your coffee” said Ragini entering his room with a tray. She walked nervously and stood near him. “What are you waiting for? Keep the mug on the table” said he without looking at her. She looked at his table which was filled with papers. She found a little space and was about to keep the mug but her hand touched Sanskar’s hand and the coffee mug slipped and all the coffee spilled on his table. His laptop caught a short circuit and it smoked. Ragini looked at it horrified. Sanskar was shocked. He looked at her and fumed. “Can’t you do one thing properly in your life? “ he screamed standing up. She jerked and started shivering.

He neared her and held her from her elbows and pinned her to the glass of the cupboard so forcefully that the glass broke and pierced her skin and she winced in pain. “It’s hurting Sanskar” said she when he still pushed her. “So enjoying being Mrs Maheshwari ha?” asked he smirking. “I’m sorry but it wasn’t my fault” said she with closed eyes. “of course it is your fault. You entered my life it was your fault. You betrayed me that’s your fault. You sat in Swara’s place that’s your fault. And you say it’s not your fault. How can you be so shameless Mrs. Maheshwari? “ asked he and pushed her further. “please Sanskar’s leave me. Its paining” said she pleading him. Tears were continuously streaming down her cheeks. She was nodding her head which she rested back.

“Chachu…” screamed Piyu who was watching them standing at the door. Sanskar who was lost in his revenge came back to sense and looked at the door. He left Ragini when he found Piyu staring him. Ragini collapsed on the floor leaning and wincing with pain. He left the room as he could not meet Piyu’s eyes which were asking him explanation for his act which was so brutal and inhuman. Piyu’s eyes followed him till he disappeared.

She entered the room and sat near Ragini who was still wincing in pain. “Maasi” said she as she wiped Ragini’s tears. Ragini looked at her and hugged her and started sobbing like a small kid. Piyu touched her back which was bleeding.

“Your Ragini maasi is the smallest kid in the world. She won’t even resist if someone is hurting her. Innocent like a small kid. But she never does anything wrong” Piyu remembered Pari’s words. She dragged Ragini out of the hug and wiped her tears. she helped Ragini to stand and walk to the bed. she brought the ointment for the first aid box and started applying on her wounds. Luckily glass piece hadn’t pierced deeply. Ragini winced when the ointment touched her wound. Piyu blew air to cool her pain.

“I’m sorry Ragini mausi this is all due to me na. I forced Chachu to get Swara maa so he is doing all this to send you out. I’m really bad” said she in cracking voice. Ragini wiped her tears and hugged her. “You are my Pari maa’s kid how can you be bad. You are the best kid in the world. Your Chachu is just angry on me. I spoiled his laptop na?” said she cupping her face and kissing her forehead. “I will never ask Chachu to bring Swara maa. You only stay with us. At least Chachu will not hurt you like this” said she in a cracking voice and Ragini covered her in her embrace and closed her eyes letting the tears. Ram who was passing by Sanskar’s room watched them with tears in his eyes.
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“Fish” said Sanskar’s banging his hand on the table. He looked at his fingers a bit of Ragini’s blood was there. He remembered how badly he behaved with her in the morning. “what are you making yourself Sanskar. Just for that selfish girl you are forgetting humanity. That’s what she wants and she is succeeding also. No no I will not let her win never” said he to himself.
“You are nobody to me now. And you don’t effect me. And I will prove it” said he gritting his teeth. He remembered Piyu’s scream and it made him shiver. No I can’t let Piyu’s emotion melt towards you. I will protect my family from you Ragini. They are innocent enough to believe your lies. But I’m not. I know your intentions very well and I will get rid off you now but within legal procedure” said he determined.
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“Swara” said someone standing behind Swara when she was standing in a park. She turned and hugged the person immediately and burst out crying. “why did you take so much time Rohan? You know of Ragini wasn’t there I would have died by this time….” she was stopped by Rohan who closed her mouth with his palm. (Rohan played by Aamir Ali) He nodded his head painfully. She again hugged him and burst out crying.
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“Where is she maa I had told you she will do all the work in this house?” Sanskar sitting on the dining table for dinner. “She is in Piyu’s room making her sleep. Waise she only cooked don’t worry. I’m just serving.” said Sujatha and sat on the chair. “Ragini come beta have dinner” said Ram when he spotted Ragini entering Sanskar’s room. “no uncle I’m not hungry” said she and walked inside. Sanskar observed her pale face. “you are very bad bad bro” said Adarsh. Sanskar’s looked at him confused. “You hurt Ragu again” said he pouting angry. “Adi have food. Your bro doesn’t understand human language”said Sujatha and Ram chuckled listening her. Sanskar’s glared her and had his food.

He entered his room and found her sleeping on the ground already. He lied on his bed and tried sleeping. In midnight he heard some murmuring and woke up. “what is her problem now. Can’t she let me sleep now?” he said annoyed. He observed her as she was shivering very badly. He neared her to check. “Pari maa… Pari maa…” she was murmuring. “Ragini” said he to wake her as he sensed she might be seeing a bad dream.

“Pari maa… I didn’t do anything. Sanskar hurt me… Maa it’s paining…. Very badly…..” she murmured. Sanskar felt bad for her condition which was due to his outburst. As his hand touched her skin he realized she was burning with fever.

“oh god she has high fever. Ragini… Ragini… “ he tried waking her but no use. He turned her and picked in his arms and carried her down. “maa… papa… .” he called them. Sujatha and Ram rushed out of their room. They were shocked looking at Sanskar who was carrying Ragini. “What happened?” asked Sujatha concerned.

“Maa she has high fever” said he helplessly. “How come suddenly?” asked Sujatha. She placed her palm on Ragini’s forehead and found it burning. “Hey Bhagvan ithna fever?” she said worried. They headed out with her to a nearby hospital.

“is she suffering with something? I mean kind of mental problem? “ asked the doctor after analyzing her. “ No doctor nothing like that” said Sujatha. “I have given her blood samples for testing any viral fever. Because on top it doesn’t look like normal fever” said he. “Actually doctor she got married to our son just a month back so we don’t have any idea of her medical condition. If you want I will call her parent for confirming if anything like that” said Ram. “okay better you check with them” said he and walked out. They looked at each other confused.
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A/N : Heyya missed me? Okay I know this is small chappy. I will be back soon.

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    57 Comments

    1. Fairy on February 20, 2017 7:52 pm

      “Ahhh!!!!I”ll kill u sanskaar …agar meri rags ko kuch hua..I”ll litterelyyy kill u Mr.maheshwari?????how dare u to hurt her hmmm!!!!hate u…
      Uodate ws fabulous dr so so sooooo outstandngggg!!!omggg its gttng more n more interestngggg…oh god!!!kya rags ko kuch prob. Hai…Sally jaldi se update krdo….waitng eagerly for d mysteries to get unfold…N swara ne jise hug keya vo kon hai???oh gawd!!!m gettng so muchhhh confused…plz sal uodate fast…loved dis storyyy sooo veryyy muchh…keeep rockng n stay blessssed sweeety?????lotz of love???

      • Sally on February 21, 2017 1:35 pm

        Thank you Fari Pari will update soon

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:38 pm

        Thank you Fari Pari. Will update soon

    2. Follybraverl on February 20, 2017 7:58 pm

      Hey my favourite Betrayer is here??? awesome asusual hate Sanky for the first time

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:39 pm

        Hey thank you dear

    3. baabu on February 20, 2017 8:01 pm

      u r too bad….. initially u dont come…bt whn u come… its too emotional… nd my pearls r wasting..????.. by ur indirect torture……. beyond wrds…. love u.. miss u… come soon…… muaaaahhhhhh??????????

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:40 pm

        Thank you dear. Will be back soon

    4. ARs on February 20, 2017 8:07 pm

      It’s awesome dear..??…loved it….waiting for the next part….pls….post soon….

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:41 pm

        Thank you dear

    5. crystal089 on February 20, 2017 8:29 pm

      awesome its becoming intersting update soonn……

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:44 pm

        Thank you crysti

    6. Sush on February 20, 2017 9:26 pm

      Awesome….poor ragini feeling pity on her…..waiting fa next epi

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:44 pm

        Thank you crysti thank you dear

    7. Lahari on February 20, 2017 9:33 pm

      Awesome

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:45 pm

        Thank you dear

    8. A.xx on February 20, 2017 9:36 pm

      fab and feel so bad for rags cant wait for the mystery to unfold xx

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:45 pm

        Thank you dear

    9. manya on February 20, 2017 9:41 pm

      superb, sanskar how cruel you are , but what is this new twist that rags has some health problem any ways you made me cry yaar post the next part soon.

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:46 pm

        I will thank you dear

    10. preeti on February 20, 2017 10:18 pm

      superb , sanskar how cruel you are, but what this twist what’s the problem does ragini have anyway try to update next part soon .

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:48 pm

        Thank you dear

    11. Jaanvi on February 20, 2017 10:19 pm

      Welcome back dear.. Missed your updates terribly.. Please if possible update Daily..

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:48 pm

        Thank you jaanvi

    12. Mehak on February 20, 2017 10:43 pm

      Superbbbbbb..,
      Upload the next part asap

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:49 pm

        Thank you dear

    13. Sindhura on February 20, 2017 11:10 pm

      Awesome and my god sansky

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:49 pm

        thank you sindhu

    14. Venni on February 20, 2017 11:11 pm

      Superb

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:50 pm

        Thank you venni

    15. meera on February 20, 2017 11:20 pm

      heart touching next soon plzzz

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:51 pm

        Thank you meera

    16. Asw on February 20, 2017 11:25 pm

      Nice feel bad for Ragini ? I didn’t understand swara’s behalf of Ragini keep going

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:51 pm

        Thank you dear

    17. Rasha on February 20, 2017 11:50 pm

      yeno saka machi time..nanu igga barthiya nale barthya antha wait madi madi tied ade innu full rest thagondu bandiya.. nin short r long update kodthya anodu namge matter ala kano nin title sako namge odake.. anyhow episode awesome finally kiddo turned to sweet baby..ramsuj were as always sweet.. really who is this pari & adi.. So pari,swaragini were sisters after pari death they planned to take swara hand for sanky but nam sanky adhuku munche indhalu swarana love madthidane pari death r marriage proposal btw li swara piyu na mom thara nodkondidale.. swara true love ragu matra gothide great but ragu ge nijavada mom feel kotidu pari ne..so rag yak adi na isto care thagobeku antha artha.. finally sanky today nodidamele swalpa baikolthini avana sanky monkey pakky.. how rude he was with her, females na harassing is too much.. but always endly ok avana consider madbodhu innu avanu human antha think mado age made.. this all comment for only today episode kano..rohan is swara lover New twist idhu chanage idhe.. seriously hera biri miss madkonde kano.. Casanova update madidre innu double happy agthini r illa nan aramagi rest thagolthini andru no problem nanu cool age wait madthini but seriously missing Casanova very much..

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:54 pm

        Innu saakagilla Kano machi. Yen madli post madtini andidnalla adike bande. Casanova ivath try madtini Kano love you

      • Rasha on February 21, 2017 2:31 pm

        happy age rest thagolo adre mado sako but avathu helda age yaro yeno andru antha bejar madkondu baride idre antha thappa kelsa madbeda please bariyo.. illa only i need rest andre enjoy the time..

    18. Naz on February 21, 2017 7:03 am

      Missed u so much sally….amazing chappy…

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:54 pm

        Nazu missed you all thank you

    19. j on February 21, 2017 7:51 am

      awesome. sanky pls don’t do this dr poor ragini suffering a lot

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:55 pm

        Thank you j

    20. zelena81196 on February 21, 2017 9:16 am

      amazing…..update soon….hope ragini is fine and she has nothing life threatening….

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:55 pm

        Thank u dear

    21. Aswathy on February 21, 2017 9:50 am

      superb….poor ragu always gets hurt bcoz of ths stupid sanky…

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 1:56 pm

        Thank you dear

    22. Ammy on February 21, 2017 12:04 pm

      Awesome

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 2:19 pm

        Thank you ammy

    23. sia on February 21, 2017 1:03 pm

      Superb..

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 2:19 pm

        Thank you sia

    24. keerthu on February 21, 2017 1:38 pm

      Feeling bad for rags dr.,……. Y he did not understand her feeling…………. Suji and ram character r always nice dr……… Keep rocking dr……….

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 2:20 pm

        Thank you keerthu

      • keerthu on February 21, 2017 2:22 pm

        Miss u dr…………..

    25. asra on February 21, 2017 2:01 pm

      awesome Sally dear…..missed u soooo much dear…..omg Sanky i want to kill u…y u hurt my ragu sooo much….u r going to pay for thz….pari u r going to join in ragu team….love u dear…..
      Ohhh if swara love rohan….so that for only our ragu married Sanky…Ohhh what happen to ragu…..eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

      • Sally_blr on February 21, 2017 3:15 pm

        Thank you Asru

    26. neina on February 21, 2017 3:21 pm

      it was amazing yar..feeling bad for ragu..sanskar lost his sense because of his revenge..but who is this rohan?

    27. jazzy on February 21, 2017 7:04 pm

      amazingg and pehli baar bacchi ne kuch sahi kaha

    28. Rehna on February 21, 2017 10:43 pm

      Awesome, hate sanky for his brutal behavior towards ragini. How is this rohan new twist. Eagerly waiting, update soon pls

    29. Ragz_teju on February 22, 2017 6:21 pm

      superb chappy….sanskar is behaving like beast hope he can see ragini’s innocence soon…

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