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My bestie sumi’s b’day surprise OS

kanfiBy kanfiJune 2, 201722 Comments8 Mins Read
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Hii guys i m here with an OS which is surprise for my bestie sumi,,(sumitha)

ALL MENTIONED TIME ARE A/C TO IST

ONE YEAR BEFORE FROM PRESENT TIME
AUSTRALIA

I am waiting here for half an hour bt dont where has she gone…!!!!

Girl1–hey kanfi….!!

I turned back n i was surprised to see her,.,she was used to be my best buddy in school bt we haven’t talk much for so many years as she is an actor n was quite busy in her life bt we’re in contact…we used to chat once in a month or once in a 6 month…!!

Me–hiii…..after long time shrenu…!!

Yes that girl is shrenu (gauri from IB/DBO….now this show has gone offair..)

Shrenu–yaa i was too shocked to see u here…!!….(pointing towards the board at that place)…..i mean u n here…!!

Me–yaa i m too shocked….!!actually my bestie is craazzzy about dancing n she is a good dancer bt she is very shy….i requested her to not ignore her talent n learn dance….
(I was standing outside a dance coaching classes)…..but she put a condition that i also have to learn….so for her sake,,i m here…!!

Shrenu–wowww….u r still the same….haven’t u forget me n???

Me–of course not..u know i make friends for the life time..!!

Shrenu–ya madam….bt where is ur bestie…??

Me–i m also waiting for madam,,,today is frst day n she is late….!!!n yaa she is ur huge fan..!!

Here a girl shown….she was running in hurry….

Girl’s POV
Kanfi will kill me today….frst i’ve put a stupid condition before her n now i myself reached here late….

Girl2–hii kanfi….

Me–here u come…..how can be so late on the frst day sumi,..

(So girl 2 is b’day girl sumitha)

Sumi–sorry…see i m holding my ears….sorry no….

Me—ok…bt dont be late next time….come i’ll introduce u to someone…

Hey shrenu….shrenu turned back n sumi was shocked to see her…

Sumi–shrenu parekh….!!!!am i dreaming….!!

Shrenu–no u r not….u know me…??m glad to know that…

Sumi–who dont know u…!!i’ve watched ur all serials…!!

Shrenu–yaa bt it has been long time i’ve .taken break from acting career….i just want to visit all place…i came australia….i wanted to learn contemporary dance form so came here…!

Sumi–i dont know all that bt i m huge fan of urs mam…!!

Me n shrenu–mam???

Me–sumi she is my frnd n u too so u can call her by name…

Shrenu–xctly…..frnds sumi???can i call u that???

Sumi–ofcourse u can ….yaa frnds…

Me–we should go inside ,,,,,!!

ShreSu–yaa lets go,,,

We went inside the dance academy….shrenu wanted to learn contemporary,,,sumi wanted to learn jazz…..n I seriously didnt want to learn any form…bt i’ve to..so i chose free style..,.!!

We all started our practice….we,three become best friends forever..!!we spend most of the time with each other….!!
Soon our course was completed n we become very good in our respective dance forms….
Due to our splendid performance,,we get selected to perform at an international event…
There will be a fusion dance where we’ve to perform after 3 months….

We all were soo happy…
Sumi–i really cant believe i m going to perform there…!!!all this become possible just because of u….kanfi u recognise my talent….n shrenu and u motivated me alot whenever i become weak…

Me–sumi dont be senty now….all this is possible due to ur hard work…n i should be thnkful to u that u put that condition before me…

Shrenu–xctly sumi,….u well deserve all this….

Me–as we know,,our classes have finished so we should return to india,,we’ll meet after 3 months on that performance….n u both stay in touch….

Sumi–of course kanfi..,we’ll…

Shrenu–ya we’ll…..lets go…..

We all arrived India n departed to our home town….
___________________
PRESENT TIME( two days before dance performance
31 may 2017

On call

Me–hii shrenu….

Shrenu–hii kanfi ….how r u..??n where is sumi..!!i haven’t talk to her for few days..

Me–yaa i m fine…shrenu actually she is really nervous for her performance,,so busy in practices..

Shrenu–ohhkk….n u rmmbr n that day???

Me–ya ofcourse i do….!!

Shrenu–all preparation done…??

Me–yup…!!

(Then we had a muted conversation…..SURPRISE;-) 😛 😉 )

on call..

Me–hey sumi….have u packed ur stuff,.???flight is today only….

Sumi–yaa kanfi..i m done with it…i’ll be at airport in one hour…!!!when will u guys reach….??

Me–sumi srry yr….mine n shrenu’s flight is tomorrow…

Sumi–what…??it means i’ve to go alone…!!no i won’t….how can u guys do that…

Me–sry sumi…we tried our best,…bt todays all tickets was confirmed….n u’ve some work there so i booked ur ticket…sry no….!!we’ll be there before performance….dont worry…

Sumi–not fair yr…okk…u n shrenu have to come on time….!!!

Me–okk……
_________________________
1june 2017

Sumi reached australia….she finished all her work by night…she was xcted n nervous for tomorrow’s performance…n as we r not with her,,she was more worried….
She called me n shrenu on conference …

Sumi–hi…when will u both come…

Shrenu–hii sumi….yaa we’ll be there tomorrow….our flight is in few minutes…

Me–u relax..we’ll be there on time..

Sumi—okk..i’ll wait..come soon….
___________________
2 june 2017
Sumi was waiting for us since morning….

Sumi’s POV
Where r they…!!!they have to reach here at 9 pm..now it is 11:30 pm….our performamce will start in few min,…..their phone is also switched off….let me try again…

On call.
Sumi–kanfi,where r u…i have called u soo many times..!!

Me–sumi,,,sorry yr…,due to bad weather our flight get delayed,….now we’ll reach there tomorrow only…

Sumi–what..??when all did happened….??n our performance will start im few min….i won’t perform alone….

Shrenu–sumi we are also feeling bad….bt u’ve to perform…u had worked hard for this…!!n dont worry i’ve talked to the principal n told her about our problem…she said that she’ll give u a dance partner…,so please for our sake.,,u’ve to perform…

Sumi–no yr..,i cant…..

Me–plzzzz sumi…..for us

Sumi–okkkk,,,,,bt i dont want to do ,,this is only for u both….!!

Me n shrenu–all the best…
__________________
At 12:00 am/3rd june

I called sumi….

Sumi–hello…..

I n shrenu—happppyyyyy b’day sumi…….we know we aren’t there on ur most imp day…..!!bt we love u….

Sumi–awwwee…u remmbred…!!!thnk u….love u both….

Me–when is ur performamce…..

Sumi–just now…..hey they announced my name…..m going bye…

Shrenu—bye….all the best…
________________________
Sumi went on the stage….principal had told her that she’ll find her partner on stage…..

There was complete darkness on the stage,,so sumi couldnt saw the face of dancer…..

BAARISH REMIX VERSION played in the background….

Sumi n her partner starts dancing,,,,n multi colour LEDs were there……
N finally sumi sees the face of dancer n she was shocked n stand still……bt her partner manage the situation,,,,n they starts dancing again….
They did salsa,,contemporary n jazz…!!

Whole crowd was hooting,,,whistling,,,clapping….

Suddenly sumi’s eye caught something…..
She saw that i n shrenu were also there in crowd n hooting as loud as we can,..!!

Shrenu gets teary eyed….she understood that it was all our plan…..

Her partner again make her realize that we r on stage n they continued dancing….

~YE MAUSAM KI BAARISH ,,YE BAARISH KA PANI~
~YE PANI KI BOOONDEN,,TUJHE HI TO DHUNDHE~
~YE MILNE KI KHWAHISH,,YE KHWAHISH PURANI~
~HO PURI TUJH HI SE,,MERI YE KAHAANI~

n they end there dance with “RAJ KAPOOR N NARGIS POSE”

Everyone claps for them….

(U want to know the partner????move on)

Sumi n partner reach the green room,,,,i n shrenu follow them….

Sumi–u here???how..???i mean u danced with me…!!!am i dreaming…..the HRITHIK ROSHAN danced with me….

(Yaa that partner is hrithik roshan)

Hrithik–hey sumi…hold on….!!u r not dreaming…. N i must say u r a great dancer….n HAPPY B’DAY ….hope u like the surprise of ur frnds…!!

Me–hey sumi….happy b’day dear….how is ur surprise…!!

Shrenu—happy b’day sumie…..what a khidki tod performance it was…!!

Hrithik–khidki tod…??

Shrenu—beautifull-….!!

Hrithik–ohh..great..i learnt a new word here…

Sumi—thnk u sooo much kanfi n shrenu….i’ll never forget this….!!!n thnk u hrithik sir…u made my b’day more special…

Hrithik–pleasure is all mine….u’ve really ammazing frnds…..they requested me sooo much that i couldnt deny,…(this was the plan during muted conversation)..now u all carry on….i should leave now..!

Sumi–one selfie….plzzz

Hrithik–sure

We all take selfie n autograph….!!!
Then soon results were declared n sumi got frst prize….she was called on stage…

Sumi–i m really happy today….today is my b’day n i got such an ammazing surprise…!!i want to share my prize with my bff shrenu n kanfi….plzzz guys come on stage…

I n shrenu joined sumi….

The whole day we enjoyed sooo much….we visited many places of australia….we had our dinner in the famous restaurant…!!
Now we reached at our hotel n were on our bed….

Sumi–thnk u sooooo much kanfi n shrenu…..i’ll never forget my this b’day…!!!loveee uu sooo much guys…..

We hugged each other tightly n soon went into deep slumber……
___________________________

HAPPPYYYY B’DAY SUMI……
HOPE U’LL LIKE IT…..
MAY U ALWAYS SUCCEED IN UR LIFE N GET WHATEVER U DESIRE FOR…..
LOVE UU

lots of love
Kanfi

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    22 Comments

    1. sumitha on June 2, 2017 9:57 pm

      Heyyyyyy my bestieeeee when I see the title really I was shock and surprise. …..this is a really special gift drrr

      • sumitha on June 2, 2017 10:12 pm

        I’m really speechless…..through out the os I imagein everything making me in another world drrr love u so much …..this the best and great gift in my lifeeeeee love u love u soooooo muchhhhhhhhh ummmaahhhhhhh????…..os was superbbbbbb

      • kanfi on June 2, 2017 11:29 pm

        Why u read before 12…….
        Chlo thk h….happy u liked it….bt i’ll wish u at 12

    2. CrazygirlS.P on June 3, 2017 12:17 am

      Superb dear I love it and happy birthday Sumitha???

      • sumitha on June 4, 2017 9:33 am

        Love u drrr

      • kanfi on June 5, 2017 9:30 am

        Thnx sam..

    3. Sagithya on June 3, 2017 12:27 am

      Wow it was awesome yaar…. It was a wonderful gift for your friend Sumi… Happy birthday Sumi…

      • sumitha on June 4, 2017 9:37 am

        Love u drrrrrrrr

      • kanfi on June 5, 2017 9:34 am

        Thnk uuu sagi

      • kanfi on June 5, 2017 3:02 pm

        Thnk uuuu sagi

    4. Jerry_36 on June 3, 2017 11:40 am

      Awesome one. Superb.
      Again a very Happy birthday Sumi di?

      • sumitha on June 4, 2017 9:39 am

        Love u drrrrrrrr

      • kanfi on June 5, 2017 3:13 pm

        Thnk u jerry:-) 🙂

    5. Riana on June 3, 2017 1:37 pm

      Hey Kanfi dear…It was an Awsome Os…N a very happy birthday to Sumitha ??

      • sumitha on June 4, 2017 9:38 am

        Love u drrrrr

      • kanfi on June 5, 2017 3:21 pm

        Thnk uuu riana:-)

    6. Ahaana on June 4, 2017 9:52 am

      Awesome Diii….
      Happy B’day sumitha?

      • kanfi on June 5, 2017 3:22 pm

        Thnx cutie

    7. Neha-17 on June 5, 2017 4:57 am

      Amazing os…and awesome way..of bday gift..I totally loved..it and enjoyed it..!! Dear, Sumi…this gift ?..is surely related to you..I could find that ..sweet and innocent Sumi ..in it..
      #Sumi
      Love ya both.!
      Spectacular!

      • kanfi on June 5, 2017 3:25 pm

        Thnk uu nehu,…
        Lovee u tooo….
        Yaa sumi loves dancong n hrithik is her fav actor n she is shrenu’s fan.,everyone knows that….:-)

    8. Rakveen on June 6, 2017 11:06 am

      Lovedddd the way the u surprised Sumi, kanfii..!! Awesome os…i guess the best surprise from the best tu writer..!! Luv u loads dear..!! ????

    9. kanfi on June 6, 2017 12:10 pm

      Thnk uuuuuuu

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