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best enemy- Chapter 7

AstraBy AstraSeptember 24, 2016Updated:September 24, 201625 Comments4 Mins Read
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Previous part: chapter-6

Chapter 7:

Swara sits in a seat. Sanskar sits opposite to her.
San: swara, if you don’t love me, it’s ok. But, why I’m I enemy to you??
Swa: bcz, all this happened bcz of you.
San: how???
Swa: if you wouldn’t have taken me to that lonely place, that idiot wouldn’t have recorded the video. And all this wouldn’t have happened.
Sanskar keeps looking at her.
Swa: what…
San: you are looking cute in anger swara…
Swara stops her smile and turn away her face.

Next morning, the train stops in some station and Swara is still sleeping. Sanskar wakes up and touches her hand and realizes that she got fever.
He takes her into arms and get down the train. She is not in conscious. He wanted to take her to hospital.
San: oh no, we came like this. now, where to stay? Where to go? Swara is also not feeling well. God….help me please…

Then he suddenly hears a shout, “Hai…!”
Sanskar amazes and turns back. A girl is standing before them.

That girl: hey Sanskar, didn’t you remember me?? I’m your school friend, Kakali… (hey kakali dear, happy now?? Haha)

Sanskar: ya…
Kakali: and Swara, what happened to her?? and enemies, very close like this…

Sanskar: I will tell you everything later, can you show us any accommodation? Swara is not feeling well…

Kakali: oh…just come to my house. It’s very near here…
She takes Swasan to her home. She arranges everything to them…
(you are so kind dear…)

Sanskar makes Swara to sleep on bed, and puts a wet cloth on her forehead. He keeps changing it.

Kakali brings them breakfast.

Sanskar: thank you so much dear…

Kakali: hey… no thanks between friends… ok, I’m going out on a work now. Nobody is at home. All will come at evening, so don’t hesitate to use anything. I will inform my family members.

Sanskar smiles…she leaves.

Sanskar holds Swara’s hand. She is still sleeping. After a while, she opens her eyes and amazes to see Sanskar close to her. she jerks her hand.

Swa: don’t you have any shame. How many times should I tell you to be far from me??
Sanskar remains silent. Just then Kakali comes.

Kakali: Swara…why are you shouting like that?? He cared you a lot… you should thank him…

Swara realizes her mistakes. She tells sorry to him.

Later Swasan start going away.
Kakali: where are you going?

Swara: don’t know…

Kakali: don’t do overaction. Stay in my house.

Sanskar: no yar…that…

Kakali: okok, I can understand your pov. You both guys want to stay alone right…
She laughs.

Swasan looks at each other in confusion.

Kakali: okok… look at that beautiful hut over there….

There is a beautiful hut like house.
Kakali: that is our out house. You can stay in that. If you want anything, you can ask me….

Swasan smiles and goes into that hut.

{Hey kakali….thnq so much… u have saved our swasan…}

Swara keeps looking at that house. Sanskar closes the door.
Swara: why did you close the door??

San: why means, simply…
Swa: open it….

Sanskar opens the door.
Swa: are you going to stay in this single room with me??
San: then?? You won’t get five star hotels in this village.

Swa: you stay out, when I’m in.
San: this is not fair.
Swa: ok fine. I will go out…
Swara about to go and slips in weakness. Sanskar holds her and makes her to sleep on small bed over there.

She simply keeps staring at him.
San: swara, I will stay out. But, you don’t step out. You aren’t feeling well.
Sanskar moves out and sits on steps. Swara keeps looking at him through the door. She falls asleep.

Then Sanskar makes a phone call to his parents.

Precap: swasan village times…

guys, I know this is a shorter update. A bit busy today. I will give long update tomorrow…****

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    25 Comments

    1. dharani on September 24, 2016 4:02 pm

      very nice

    2. myna on September 24, 2016 4:05 pm

      awesome post if ap and dp know about this then why aren’t they doing anything i have a feeling there is something very wrong here full of suspense but pls do post soon bz i like suspense but i go mad thinking about it

    3. mica on September 24, 2016 4:12 pm

      omg..i got earthquake just because Kakali jumping to and fro with her excitement .. huh!
      i just hate her ! *burning in jealousy…
      Kakaliiii!!!!! please can we peeping on swasan to see their romance ???? *puppy eyes
      join me to convince kakali, Astra!…

      • Kakali on September 24, 2016 9:07 pm

        Mommmmmmm!!! what r u cooking??? i can smeel something is burning !!! but what ¿¿¿ woooowww i like this smeel ,,, i just love this smell…yummmyyyy !!!! khikhikhikhikhi

        Micaa about ur request ,,, hmmmm lettt me think … ummm hmmm ummmm hmmmm….dear u r most welcome nott…. peeping is not good specially when it becomes about romance…. but no worry 1st lett me try… *peeping*…

        Come Micaa now its ur turn…tell me what u saw….

      • Astra on September 25, 2016 6:26 pm

        Thanku so much mica and kakali…

    4. SNY on September 24, 2016 4:35 pm

      Nice

    5. tani on September 24, 2016 4:57 pm

      Awesome… Liked it

    6. s on September 24, 2016 5:00 pm

      nice..

    7. vyshu10 on September 24, 2016 5:44 pm

      superb

    8. SHAN on September 24, 2016 5:55 pm

      Awesome

    9. anu on September 24, 2016 6:03 pm

      nice……

    10. rabia on September 24, 2016 6:50 pm

      Awesome ?

    11. Shreeyu on September 24, 2016 7:28 pm

      Oh my God! Kakali Di ….. I m imagining u jumping In happiness …. So happy for you … Cute episode dr

      • Kakali on September 24, 2016 10:34 pm

        Not onlyy jumping Shreyyu,,, m flying on cloud 9… n all credit goes too Dear Astra… m chhooo happy… it was indeed a surprise for me… Thnk u once again ….
        ….

      • Shreeyu on September 24, 2016 11:23 pm

        Hehe enjoy dii … I want a treat … Party toh banti hai ….??

    12. tamanna on September 24, 2016 7:35 pm

      Awesome….

    13. Soujanya on September 24, 2016 7:58 pm

      Awesome…?

    14. Kakali on September 24, 2016 8:52 pm

      Ashtraaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!! is it trueeeeeee¿¿¿¿¿¿¿

      *pinching myself*
      ahhhhhhhhh it’s true,,, it’s truee…. SWASAN both r in my housee…. n meee Sanskar’s school friend *faint*

      10 minutes leap
      after getting conscious…. both r infront of me n i saved them.*again faint*…

      thnk u sooo much dear…awwwwwww…

      • Astra on September 25, 2016 6:26 pm

        Ur welcome dear…. ?? sorry yar.. I couldn’t write today’s part… Tomorrow i will write nxt part…

    15. AnuAnn on September 24, 2016 9:07 pm

      Superb dear

    16. bharathi aju on September 24, 2016 9:10 pm

      Awesome..eager to read more..want romance of swasan..update next soon with long story..

    17. Afra96 on September 24, 2016 9:19 pm

      Nice

    18. Heltej on September 24, 2016 11:49 pm

      Superb dear!

    19. sanjanaagrawal on September 27, 2016 6:40 pm

      Awesome … an kakali thank fir saving our swasan…. btw she is so naughty…

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